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iversonssweetie4always
Sixth Man
Joined: Jun 19, 2002
Posts: 82
Location: Chi Town
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 Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 11:22 pm Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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"The Answer"
You may come from the streets of the hard knocks,
And you may know niggas who be runnin the block,
But when you got a dream that just don't stop,
You keep going and make sure you're the one on top,
For a basketball player you may be short,
But your always "the answer" when you're on the court,
People slept on your crossover until you got MJ,
They even tried to ban your move but you still make them pay,
The zone in the defense can't even hold you down,
You're too fast they get dizzy they spinnin round and round,
They called you a thug because of your clothes and braids,
They wanted you to be a poster boy suit and a fade,
But you lived though it no matter what they'd do,
They had to understand that they couldn't mold you,
You went from questions, to I3's, and Answer 5's,
You went from just playin ball to changin people's lives,
The best thing about you is that you made mistakes,
This seperates you from the large amount of fakes,
You got rookie of the year when you first got started,
And kept it going with scorin titles keepin the lane parted,
Then you turned around and got MVP,
You'll always be MVP always to me,
Sports casters used to call you the little guy because you're kinda short,
But now they call you "the Answer" when you're on the court.
this was just a little somethin i wrote last year for my baby IVO... i like it. what you think?
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Ta'Shanda
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Joined: Jun 18, 2002
Posts: 445
Location: Chicago
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| Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 11:32 pm Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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| The poem was too tyte |
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AllensBabyGirl3
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Joined: Mar 27, 2002
Posts: 1163
Location: Philly Always
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| Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 11:37 pm Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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| YEAH GIRL YOU DID YA THING I LIKE DAT |
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FrizzyAI#3lova
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Joined: Apr 30, 2002
Posts: 259
Location: New Orleans,Louisiana
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| Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2002 12:37 am Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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| That's koo you need to mail that to AI I think he would laugh but he would luv it. |
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yungsta2G5
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Joined: Jun 7, 2002
Posts: 776
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| Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2002 1:36 pm Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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| Yea I like that...that's an excellent poem...keep cuttin' up. |
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ines
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Joined: May 29, 2002
Posts: 208
Location: Croatia
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| Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 8:16 pm Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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i like it,keep on write songs
i always wonted to write song named "The answer" but i didnt know what to write.it should be like:
he is the man
he is the answer
he can answer all of your questions
he can do whatever you ask him to
cause he is the answer
[ August 21, 2002: Message edited by: a.i girl ] |
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iversonzgurlie
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Joined: Aug 26, 2002
Posts: 1
Location: Canada
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| Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2002 1:11 am Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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whoa thatz very good! but u sorta repeated urself at the last 2 phrases...the short and the court, but overall, thatz wicked!  |
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Lil Lady Iverson
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Joined: Apr 21, 2002
Posts: 903
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| Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2002 4:00 am Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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Girl all of the above and more. I wonder how he'd react if he read it!?!?  |
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MizDiamonds
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Joined: Aug 5, 2002
Posts: 265
Location: Brooklyn,New York
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| Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2002 9:12 pm Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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That was tight gurl...I hope Allen gets to read it.You should really find a way to get it to him.
Anyway keep doin your thing
HOLLA BACK! ! !  |
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iversonssweetie4always
Sixth Man
Joined: Jun 19, 2002
Posts: 82
Location: Chi Town
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| Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2002 11:58 pm Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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| thanks for the compliments girl... i think it is pretty cool... i got a little repitition in there but that's on purpose, ya know, thanks my fellow ivo fans. |
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Lil Lady Iverson
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Joined: Apr 21, 2002
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| Posted: Sun Sep 08, 2002 3:35 am Post subject: my poem please read!!! |
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Dedicated to the haters of A.I from A.I:
(even though he might be a jackass sometimes)
A hard life at risk, still waiting on a remedy
Too positive for negativity that’s steady running into me
Done had shots flown and thrown at my home,in my vicinity
From those who envy me, the ones that want a win from me
But my divinity, in the clouds aroused with no sound
To surround my indignanty and strengthen me
Causing serenity to enemies independently
All sins from within could do them in,
if they mention me
So be friends with me, cuz ain’t no ending me
I'm number one and #3, off the top and free of misery
Coming straight out of poverty
Little isn't it?
[ September 07, 2002: Message edited by: Lil Lady Iverson ] |
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