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shegotgame32
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 Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 5:27 pm Post subject: DAcoldesthoopaeva |
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At school
Diamond
Wat's up diamond ?s***! wat up wit chu? "nothing about to go to class ight imma holla at cha" hey diamond y are u still in the hallway get to class! "im about to go hold on slow dat s*** down!"wat u say? wat u heard?
iight g im finna go to class it's wats happening anyway! get at yo girl!
In class: Diamond your late this is everyday now. How would u like it if I told your coach? umm dat wouldn't work!and y It wouldn't? cause I said so! wats up with all these questions im in yo class I aint have to come to this mothafucker (class starts laughing) diamond wat did u just say? damn y'all teachers act like y'all deaf!Wat did u hear Mrs.Edwards? diamond I think we need to talk to your coach. you know wat diamond i dont give a damn if you were in the WNBA!. you're not going to disrespect me get the hell out of my class! I will be calling yo momma! look im grown im 17 years old get serious! ( the class is saying ohh) you grown but yet u still live with yo momma! (class says damn!) yea i heard you live with yours too!!(the class is now ohhing and laughing at the same time)get out diamond! awe you aint gone leave i'll make you leave!wat! who you talking you i'll beat yo mothfucking ass bitch!(class jumps up and stands in between them)diamond swings and the teacher falls on her face(damn u gave her ass a one hitta quita) get security this bitch is crazy!a y'all im out I got a game later!" iight diamond go before thay call dem people and catch you.
At the house:where you been at diamond?At school ma! I aint got time to talk I got a game! well they called and said you didn't swipe in! I did ma, dey lying! yea alright win yo game how many points you gone scow for me? about 30! iight I love you ma bye(walking out the front door walking to the bus stop and realizes someone is following her) A girl ( a mysterious person calls out standing in all black pointing ...........) ahhh.....(screams and gunshots are sounded)
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shegotgame32
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| Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 5:29 pm Post subject: Re: wats up yall im new and wrote dis story please read resp |
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Dacoldesthoopaeva At school
Diamond
Wat's up diamond ?s***! wat up wit chu? "nothing about to go to class ight imma holla at cha" hey diamond y are u still in the hallway get to class! "im about to go hold on slow dat s*** down!"wat u say? wat u heard?
iight g im finna go to class it's wats happening anyway! get at yo girl!
In class: Diamond your late this is everyday now. How would u like it if I told your coach? umm dat wouldn't work!and y It wouldn't? cause I said so! wats up with all these questions im in yo class I aint have to come to this mothafucker (class starts laughing) diamond wat did u just say? damn y'all teachers act like y'all deaf!Wat did u hear Mrs.Edwards? diamond I think we need to talk to your coach. you know wat diamond i dont give a damn if you were in the WNBA!. you're not going to disrespect me get the hell out of my class! I will be calling yo momma! look im grown im 17 years old get serious! ( the class is saying ohh) you grown but yet u still live with yo momma! (class says damn!) yea i heard you live with yours too!!(the class is now ohhing and laughing at the same time)get out diamond! awe you aint gone leave i'll make you leave!wat! who you talking you i'll beat yo mothfucking ass bitch!(class jumps up and stands in between them)diamond swings and the teacher falls on her face(damn u gave her ass a one hitta quita) get security this bitch is crazy!a y'all im out I got a game later!" iight diamond go before thay call dem people and catch you.
At the house:where you been at diamond?At school ma! I aint got time to talk I got a game! well they called and said you didn't swipe in! I did ma, dey lying! yea alright win yo game how many points you gone scow for me? about 30! iight I love you ma bye(walking out the front door walking to the bus stop and realizes someone is following her) A girl ( a mysterious person calls out standing in all black pointing ...........) ahhh.....(screams and gunshots are sounded)[/quote] |
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shegotgame32
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precious (captain of the cheerleading team)
(the crowd is screaming) "A yall seen diamond? naw!why? cause she aint here annd her coach looking for her.precious have u talked to diamond yet? no i've been calling her phone and she's not answering coach Santana". "A precious its time to cheer"."iight here i come! "coach santana im gone look for her later" im about 2 go "alright precious thank you.(she is now running across the court) "ladies let's go! lets go rainbows lets go (Clap2x)lets go rainbows lets go (calp2x)(announcing the starting line up and the crowd is going crazy) (the tipoff) the lady rainbows have the ball #8 Tracy B is pushing the point replacing #3 diamond santiaga.(swoosh)(the basket is good) dun! half time "a ladies its our time (running to the middle of the court(music, laffy taffy) game over rainbows win by 1 point." A ya"ll im out. I gotta go find diamond." a precious can I talk 2 u?" A call me later. "Iight |
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BrooklynGurl2005
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HATE it....its stupid as hellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll....
Naw am playin..i didn't even read it...
I'll do that one day....yep...very soon though...sooooooooooooon |
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Mickey_Got_Skillz
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Location: Mississippi....Get at cha Gurl
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BUMPS TRIC
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Mickey Luvs to ball,
IF u think u got game,
Come get sum,
I'll take u all on
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Bamagrl3
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Your story is hard to read..It's prolly interesting but I'm confused with all the sentences running together like that.. I didn't get through the first 4 lines but I'll read it when I got time I'm bout to go do something now so....just some constructive criticism: Break up each line and separate the different ppl talkin to make it easier to tell which character is saying what
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shegotgame32
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the person talking is the one at the top this is now beautiful.she has company.
Beautiful
"hey baby wats up r u still coming? yeah! damn! hold da f*** on!s*** im on my way! iight!(she's watching tv) (ring ring)(calling precious) hello? yea wats up beautiful? nothing where u at? in da house waiting on company. where r u? "im lookin 4 diamond she got into it wit her teacher and now we cant find her. "she wasn't at her game? wat r u serious? somethings wrong she aint come 2 the game that's scary." A beautiful u gone help me find her? I will come get u right now! naw p I can't. y? because i can't I will call u later.bye (hangs the phone up) (door bell rings) "yea here I come baby.'hey baby. so yea is u ready to do this?
yea!(she is now kneeling on her knees unzipping his pants. she takes his head and places it in her mouth and sucks the juices out of him.( ahhh.... s*** girl im finna cum) she pulls him out of her mouth and onto her stomach. (ahhhh......) Iight im finna go! how much did u say ? $75 (he puts it in her hand and walks out the door) (ring, ring) baby where u and yo friends at? awe we at da crib r u ready?yea ! iight here we come. (she's getting back in the shower and getting prepared)(they arrive) "Wat's up ya'll make ya'll selfs at home."kool ma.(sitting and talking for about 30 minutes) "Fellas ya'll ready? yeah! let's go. " A ma y u standing der fully dressed we aint assh*** naked 4 nuthing! "iight well den put dem thangs on den!."Iight koo. at this time her eyes are rolling in the back of her head as she has 3 in her mouth,1 in her ass and one in her pussy. now they are taking turns wit her ass and pussy as she moans("umm...ahhh.... damn please dont stop oh my god im finna finna finna cum! then the next two jumped on then the last one.(last one ) "damn baby (she is holding his head moving it back and forth) "oh s*** im finna cum im finna cum imm finna cummmmmm...... (getting dressed walks out the door to go down stairs) " a ma we about to ride yo money is on the table we'll be calling u soon. "iight just let me know ahead of time. "iight we out. |
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