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Envy_me2
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 10:38 pm    Post subject: Learn to Live

this is my first story
hope you enjoy
**note allen is not portrayed as allen iverson but as a regular person

Characters
Emory(emmy) & Imani(mani):[/u]twin sisters
Tre:Emory and imani's older brother
JJ:Tre,Emory and Imani's cousin
Allen:Tre's bestfriend
Kevin:Allen's younger brother
Shawna & Tionne:emory and Imani's best friends

From the Beginning

M-it is hot as hell out here
E-i know yall wanna go swimming
T-the pool over here is closed we gonna have to go to "the hills" to go swimming
E-i'm cool wit that so meet at our house in 10 minutes adnwe'll walk ova there
T&S-aiight
(they leave and go get dressed)
---10 minutes later at the twins house
M-are yall ready
yea lets go
---walkin to the pool
T-twin where yall get those swim suits from
E-i ordered them from the Apple Bottoms website for us
S-those are real cute i like the denim and the appples on the back
T-yup i like mani's halter top
M-thanks i wanted the tank top but emmy just had to have it
E-yep
S-i hope it's not packed up in there
T-it probably is and it be madd niggas up here
---5 minutes later they arrive at the pool
M-damn it is packed
S-let's find a spot
--the girls find a spot to put their things
S-isn't that JJ ova there
T-yea thats him
S-didn't yall go out for a minute
T-longer than a minute
E-they were crazy about each other
T-no we weren't
M-yes yall were so don't even trip
---they're walking toward JJ and his crew
S-damn he be around a whole bunch of niggas
E-i know and all of them are cute too
M-i sure would like to get to know them
--they walk in the middle of the circle of boys
S-hey JJ
JJ-what's poppin shorty
S-nothin
E&M-hey JJ
JJ-my two favorite cousins
M-ain't you supposed to be on lockdown
JJ-no and how is my favorite girl doing
T-yea hey Rolling Eyes
E-you gonna get in trouble
JJ-i'm a grown ass man
M-still livin in the house with yo momma
S-she got you there
JJ-for you information i'm...(cut off)
T-hold up is that a hicky on your neck
JJ-i don't even know what your talkin about
(a dude named rico decided to say something)
R-man you need to keep your girl in check
S-rico shut up you always instigating
R-and you always talkin
S-you seemed not to have a problem with my talkin the other night did you ....no i didn't think so
JJ-man i don't know what your talking about
T-you know what i'm not even gonna trip cause we're not together so come on girls let's just have some fun
---they went to go get in the pool

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 10:41 pm    Post subject: Note from Envy_me2

to everyone that reades this i thank you i'm so happy you chose to read my story out of the others and i will take any criticism you have

CONSTUCTIVE CRITICISM
thank you,
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 11:06 pm    Post subject:

um yea.. add on soon
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 12:02 am    Post subject:

E-tt you okay
T-yea i'm cool
M-we can leave if you want to
T-no it's okay i'm fine let's just have a good time
S-i'm up for that
---they're all having a goood time when Tre walks in with a girl by his side
M-who's that girl with peanut
E-i don't know let's go find out
---Mani and Emmy jump out of the pool and walk over to Tre
M-hey peanut
Tre-hey sis what's up
M-nothin
E-us and the girls are just having fun
M-who is this broad
Tre-by nice
---they stare her up and down like she was crazy
Tre- i want you to meet Nikki
N-hi peanut has told me so much about you two
E- girl please
M-only family and close friends call him peanut to you his name is tre you got that
T-girls be nice
E-hey she was just stating the facts
N-well i already know that and he inssisted that i call him peanut
M-and i insist that you back the f**k up outta my face
T-stop it you two
--- by now tionne and shawna walked up to see what was going on
N-whatever little girls i don't have time to play these childish games
E-keep talkin all that s**t and you gonna have time for a childish ass whoopin
T-calm down why you always tryin ho with it and trust i found a ho
--they walk over to JJ and the crew
J-whud up cuz
T-nothin but these girls trippin
JJ-word
T-i want you to meet Nikki
JJ-hey
N-hi
E-anyway's JJ can you give us a ride home
S-yea cuz i'm kinda cold
T-i see why you barely got any clothes on
S-i know i saw you lookin
---he smiles
JJ-i'll take yall home but hold up for a second
M-okay
---the girls walk away
JJ-Marco i know you wasn't just lookin at my cousin
M-and if i was
T-i'ma f**k yo ugly ass up
---JJ walks up in Marco's face
JJ-you don't ever let me catch you lookin at them not one of them
M-no disrespect
T-that's what i thought
JJ-yo let me take them home ill holla at you later cuz
T-aiight
---the girls are waiting at JJ's brand new all white Escalade
S-this car is fresh when you get it
JJ-last week
E-from where
JJ-don't worry about
M-i'm ridin in the front
T-no you not i am
M-just cause you and JJ was in love and s*** don't mean you get to make decisions for him
JJ-yes it do
M-damn JJ that's cold how you gonna do family like that
JJ-get in the back or walk
E-s*** you don't have to tell me twice
JJ-stop cussin
S-she got it from you and Tre
T-yea she kinda did
JJ-oh so you talkin to me know
T-i guess so
E-JJ take us to get something to eat please
JJ-are you asking me or telling me
E-asking
JJ-thats what i thought but i gotta go do something and then i'll take yall
E-aiight
M-JJ guess who like you
JJ-who she better be fine cause i don't do ugly girls
S-she's one of our friends so you know she's not ugly
JJ-who is she
E-i'll give you a hint you know her really well
JJ-i know who it is
M-who
JJ-my girl Kia we go back to red light green light
S-nope not her
JJ-who is it then
E-i don't feel like tellin you anymore
JJ-man quite playin we not even cool no more i disown you as my cousin
M-aww you need a hug
JJ-no but i know how to find out who like me
E-how
JJ-ask Shawna
---they all look at Shawna cause they new she had a bigg mouth.But she knew when to tall and when to keep her mouth shut
JJ-Shawna who like me i know you know
S-i like you
---everybody froze and looked at her like she was crazy
S-i'm just playin
JJ-i don't even care no more
S-fine
---it got quite for like 5 minutes
JJ-so who like me
T-i do now do you have a problem with that
JJ-not at all peaches
T-don't call me that
JJ-that's what i called you when you were my girl
T-am i your girl, no
JJ-it's like that now
T-been like that since April20'th when we broke up
JJ-oh aiight
M-JJ do what you gotta do cause i'm hungry
JJ-well why didn't you ask Tre to take yall
E-cause he was with that gold diggin trick
--he pulls up into an office parking lot and they wait for 10 minutes
S-damn what is taking him so long
--just then he walks back out with a black duffel bag and opens the trunk and puts it in and then makes his way around to the driver's seat
JJ-yall wanna go now or change
All-change JJ-okay
---he drops the twins adn Shawna off and is headed to Tionne's house on Victoria Lane
T-JJ i'm not going home
JJ-where you going
T-to your house

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT KEEP READING AND POSTING TO FIND OUT
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:10 am    Post subject:

ight coo.. wat dey bout to do....
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:11 pm    Post subject:

JJ-why
T-you don't want me to come
JJ-hell yeah but why
T-boy it ain't even like that i just need to get my outfit that i wanna wearis at your house
JJ-no it's not
T-yes it is, it's in the back of your closet
JJ-okay my mom might be home
T-so you act like she don't like me Ms. Shawn loves me
JJ-you right
--they're walking into JJ's front door
T-hi Ms. Shawn
S-hey Tionne haven't seen your pretty face around here in a while
T-i know
S-JJ been in here actin a fool can you put him in check for me
S-me and JJ aren't together anymmore we're just friends and besides you know he's stubborn
S-chile you ain't never lied
T-do you mind if i get my clothes i left here
S-you know your welcome to do whatever,you do that while i talk to JJ real quick
T-thanks
---Tionne went to the back to get her things from JJ's room
S-Jarrell come here
JJ-yes ma
S-you know that's gonna be the girl you marry
JJ-ma please
S-no listen that girl will do anything for you but you don't even see it do you
JJ-but
S-no buts Jarrell you need her and you know it you're just scared
JJ-okay ma maybe i am but everything will work out in time
S-okay love you
JJ-love you too
S-i know
---JJ kisses his mom and walks back to his room
he walks in and finds Tionne reading to his 5 year old brother Chris
C-JJ my girl Tionne looks nice in that outfit huh
JJ-yo girl that's my girl stop trippin
C-that's my girl yall don't like each other no more
JJ-man yo better get outta my room and leave my girl alone
---Tionne lookin at them like they crazy
C-you right i gotta girlfriend that live up the street anyway
JJ-what's her name
C-Kayla and she fine too i think i love her and i'm gonna marry her one day
T-you don't know what love is
JJ-sure don't
---Tionne gave JJ a look that gave him a hint of what she was thinkin
C-i do know what love is JJ told me it's when you like someone a whole lot and you will do anything for them
---Tionne looks at JJ on the verge of tears
C-and i asked him if he love you and he said he do
T-he said that really
JJ-Chris go help mom in the kitchen
C-okay but one more question
JJ&T-what
C-where do babies come from
JJ-um go ask mom she'll tell you
---as Chris left Tionne went into the closet to get her clothes
JJ-Tee
T-what is it Jarrell
JJ-why are you madd
T-i'm not
JJ-yes you are because you called me Jarrell and when you said it you made that face
T-what face
JJ-the face you make when your madd your mouth frowns and you roll your eyes
T-i just have alot of things on my mind
JJ-so let's talk
T-no i don't want to
JJ-well i want to and i want to say that i love you and i want you back

?????? will she say yes ??????
keep reading to find out and let me know if it's gettin good
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 11:07 pm    Post subject:

yea its gettin good.. lol at "where do babies come from" dat jus came outta no where
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 1:21 am    Post subject:

T-i don't know if we should be back together
JJ-why
T-i just..
JJ-all that matters is that i love you and i hope you love me
T-i do love you
JJ-so can we make this work what do you think about that
T- i think we could make it work
JJ-are you serious
T-as a heartattack
---his cell phone rings and Tionne answers it
T-hello
M-hey Tionne is that you answering JJ's phone
T-yea what"s up
M-why are you at JJ's house
T-cause i had to get something
M-oh
T-guess what
M-don't tell me you and JJ are back together
T-yea how did you know
M-women's intuition
T-wow and you're barely even a women
M-ha ha very funny tell JJ to hurry up we're hungry
T-okay
M-bye
---they hang up with each other
T-mani says hurry up they're hungry
---he tosses her the keys to his truck
JJ-can you go pick them up i have to take a shower
---as he takes off his shirt and walks into his closet he turns back to see Tionne staring at him
JJ-wjat?
T-damn you got a few more muscles since the last time i saw you with your shirt off
JJ-hey i'm a workin man what can i say
T-that you will let me see more of the muscles you have
JJ-i'm sure i can do that
---just as she was about to kiss him her cell rings
T-damn
JJ-who is it
T-Emmy
J-oh
T-hello
E-um can yall come get us we're starvin like marvin
T-aiight i'm on my way bye
---tionne looks at JJ
T-sorry baby
JJ-and i was just about to hit it from the back
T-you wasn't about to do nothin in yo mamma house when she's right in the kitchen you know she would kick yo ass
JJ-ha ha funny
T-bye
JJ-i'll be ready when you get back
T-okay
JJ-you better not be talkin to no niggas
---she laughs as she walks out into the kitchen she hears giggles knowing it's Chris
T-what's so funny
S-nothin
T-well i'll be back later JJ asked me to bring him back some food
S-speaking of JJ i'm glad you two are back together
T-how did you know
---Tionne looked at Chris hiding behind his mother
T-dang Chris i thought you were supposed to be my homey and you ratted on me and i was just about to take you to the store
C-mamma made me
---Shawn starts laughing
T-that's not funny Ms. Shawn
S-yes it is but i'm happy for you two
T-thanks
C-can i still go to the store with you Tee
T-umm let me think .....no
C-please please with a cherry on top
T-okay go get your shoes on
---he ran to get his shoes on
S-here let me give you some money
T-no thats okay
S-you sure
T-yea i got it
---Chris comes running back into the kitchen
C-let's go before it closes
S-boy ain't no store about to close it's only five o'clock
T-see ya in a little bit
---they walked out to the car and Tionne buckled him up
T-ready to roll
C-yep
T-let's go
--they get to the gas station
T-go pick out what you want
C-i don't know what i want
T-how about your favorite
C-you don't know my favorite candy
T-yes i do it's M&M's
C-how did you know
T-i just do so go get it so we can leave
C-where we going
T-to see your auntie Sherri and your cousins
C-i love going there
T-get two bags of Skittles and a Snikers bar
---they walk to the cashiers counter so they can pay for their things
Cash-that will be $3.50
T-here you go
---she hands him the money
C-i'm thirsty can i get a slushy
T-which one do you want
C-the red one
T-sir can i have a small red slushy
Cash-sure that will be $1.11
---Tionne reached in her pusre for 11 cents
T-s*** i do i have 11 cents
C-you said a bad word
T-i know i shouldn't have
Cash-it's okay ma'am
T-thank you so much, Chris what do you say
C-thanks mister
Cash-you welcome ,he's a cute little fella must get his looks from his mother
T-oh he's not my son
Cash-could have fooled me you two look just alike
T-thank you
Cash-have a nice day
T-you too,come on Chris
---they get in the car
T-don't spill anything in your brother's new car he'll go crazy
C-okay i won't
---they pull up in front of the twins house and knock on the door
Sherri-who is it
C-it's me auntie Sherri
Sherri-hey Chris ,hey Tionne
T-hi
Sherri-how's my favorite nephew doing
C-fine i'm going to see the twims
Sherri-Tionne you got your own car
T-no i'm driving JJ"s
Sherri-are yall back together
T-yea
Sherri-how nice
---the girls and Chris come from in the back
T-are yall ready
All-yea
T-we'll be back we're going to get something to eat
Sherri-okay
---they leave and go back to JJ's house
C-mommy we're home
Shawn-hey girls
All-hey auntie
C-momma Tee bought me M&M's
Shawn-i see you got chocolate all over you face let's go get you cleaned up see you girls later
All-okay bye
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 3:48 am    Post subject:

keep postin!!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 9:48 pm    Post subject:

---the girls go into the living room while Tionne goes to check on JJ she goes into his room and he's sitting there watchin the basketball game
T-come on
JJ-i can't find my shoes i think Chris was playin with my stuff and did something with them
T-they're in the closet
JJ-oh thanks baby
T-don't baby me hurry up i'm hungry
C-hey JJ look what Tee bought me
JJ-let me have some M&M's
C-no ask Tee for some candy
JJ-where my candy at
T-at the store
JJ-real funny
C-JJ can i go
JJ-sorry lil man maybe next time
C-okay i'm about to go outside
JJ-did you ask ma
C-no
JJ-well go tell her and watch out for the cars
C-okay see ya
Both-bye
---he leaves
T-you ready
JJ-yea come on let's go
---they jump in the car
JJ-what yall want
M-let's go to Maxie's(which is a local hang out spot for young people during the day)
S-yea let's go
JJ-then Maxie's it is
---they get to Maxie's and are waiting to get their food when JJ's cell rings
JJ-who dis
Tre-me nigga
JJ-oh wut up cuz
Tre-nothin what you doin
JJ-bout to get my grub on down at Maxie's
Tre-word i'm bout' to roll up there i should be there in about 10 minutes
JJ-oh you still got that girl nikki with you
Tre-naw she said she don't like my sisters and that she didn't like the way Shawna looked at me. Jealous ass so you know i had to cut her loose
JJ-i hear you
Tre-tell Shawna i said whuts up
JJ-i got you
Tre-aiight bye
JJ-bye
T-who was that
JJ-Tre
T-what he want
JJ-he said he was about to come up here and told me to tell Shawna that he said whuts up
S-oh really
JJ-yea
M-oooooohhh:lol:
J-i'll be back
---JJ left
E-you like my brother don't you
S-you talkin to me
M-who else would she be talkin to
S-no, i don't like Tre
T-you know you do so stop frontin' we yo girls we know you
S-so what maybe i do
M-i been knew that
T-you ain't the only one
E-okay!
S-yea i guess i couldn't hide it anymore he is kinda finehe kinda looks like Shemar Moore but with a thuggish side like that rapper T.I.
T-yea i guess you could say that
M-you not the only one who thinks that
---JJ's phone starts to ring and Tionne picks it up
T-hello
---it's a girl
G-who is this Mad
T-who the hell are you
G-i'm Kim what why are you picking up my man's phone
T-yo man
K-you heard me
T-well this is JJ's real woman so you can stop pretending that yall are together
K-just tell JJ that he can't just drop me
---she hung up
T-who is Kim
M-some crazy ass chick JJ use to mess with
T-she need to check herseslf and calm the f***k down
S-that chick like to try people she called herself going off on me one day i had to tell that chick about herself
T-she better not get to happy and try to come at me with that foolishness
i'm am not the one to f***k with i might just have to kick her ass for disrespecting me like that
E-i might get a few good hits in
---JJ walked up and saw that the girls were heated
JJ-what wrong
T-i don't want to talk about it right now Jarrell
JJ-i'm in deep 'ish now
S-i wish they would bring our food out
---Tre walks up to the table
E-hey bro'
M-where's yo stank a** friend at
Tre-i had to get rid of her she was buggin about how my girl Shawna was lookin at me
S-oh so all of a sudden i'm your girl
Tre-yep
S-that's amazing how you didn't even ask me.And how do you know i would want to be your girl
Tre- i just know
S-really
Tre-yea really
S-we'll have to see about that
E-Shwana stop frontin everybody and they mama know you want Tre and Tre wants you
Tre-damn Emmy how you just gona put your only brother on spot like that
E-i'm just tellin it like it is
Tre-yo guess who's back
JJ-who
Tre-Allen and Kevin
JJ-wasn't they in New York for about 3 months
M-you talkin about sexy light skinned Kevin with the green eyes
JJ-yea pretty boy and his brother
S-and his brother is fine too he is the only black dude i seen with natural blue eyes
E-he is to fine
T-they not even all the way black their dad is from the island and there mom is like half black and italian or some weird stuff like that
---Tre pulled up a chair right next to Shawna
S-why are you so damn close to me
Tre-cause i got it like that
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 9:58 pm    Post subject:

oh ni... keep it comin
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 11:24 pm    Post subject:

---they finish eating and decide to get some ice sream and to the mall to pass time. they pi;; into the ice cream parlor
JJ-we need 6 peanut butter double scoops in waffle cones
Cashier-coming right up
--they got their ice cream and decided to go sit outside since it was a nice day. Tre sits right next to Shawna and mani giggles
S-Imani i don't find anything funny
M-sorry
--Shawna feels a hand on her leg and looks at Tre
S-stop playin with me Tre
T-who said i was playin
S-i think we need to take a little walk come on
T-for what
S-just do what i said
Tre-yes ma'am
---they start walking off
T-aww look at them don't they look cute
E-i really hope they hook up cause i'm tired of that nigga bringin all those stank females around here expecting us to be nice
M-me too
---meanwhile back to Shawna and Tre
Tre-look i want to tell you something
S-i'm listening
Tre-i umm...
S-come on spit it out
Tre-i'm not use to telling girls how i feel about them so be cool
S-okay
Tre-well i kinda like you
S-kinda
Tre-i meant to say that i like you i like you alot
S-i like you too
Tre- i have been liking you since you were a freshman and i was a junior i was just being stupid and not telling you
S-well i'm glad you finally told me
---it got quite
Tre-um Shawna
S-what
Tre-you got something on your face
S-stop playin! Shocked
Tre-here let me get it for you
---he gets close to her face and stops then kisses her
S-you tricked me
Tre-you fell for it
S-so that was mean to trick me
Tre-you liked it so that's all that matters
S-i guess your right
---quite again
Tre-so you gonna be my girl or what
S-yea i guess so
Tre-stop playin
S-i'm not
Tre-cool i just um..(cut off)
S-ssshhhh don't talk just kiss me
---they kiss
E-aawww look at those two
JJ-dang boy slow down
---they come back to the table
T-are the two lovebirds ready
S-yes we are
---they get ready to leave
Tre-Shawna come on your ridin with me
S-okay
---they get to the mall
M-Tre we need some new sneakers
Tre-i just bought yall new forces
E-but the new jordans are out and we want those too
Tre-if i give this money yall have to wash my car and my clothes for two weeks
M-okay
---he took out a big stack of money adn took out six hundred dollar bills
Tre-split this and don't ask me for nothin else
E-thanks
---Tre then took out and extra 300 dollars
Tre-here Shawna take this and get yourself something nice
S-no thank you i have my own money
Tre-girl take this money
S-i said no
M-girl you better take that money
Tre-im glad to know your not after me for my money
---they go get there things they need from the shoe store and decide to walk around when Tre's cell phone rings
Tre-who dis
T-damn do all the niggas answer their phone like that
JJ-pretty much
Tre-who is this
--a voice says to him
V-why you all hugged up with me girl like yall married and s**t
Tre-yo i don't know who you are callin my phone and who the hell are you
V-turn around
---he does and sees a familiar face behind him
Tre-damn allen you had me trippin for a minute
A-yea i know
JJ-damn what you doin up here
A-i had to get something real quick, damn Jj you got bigger what you been eatin
JJ-all muscle baby
Tre-where yo brother at
A-he was right behind me
T-allen you comin up on the status list i see you over there tryin to bling with them diamonds in your ear like you somebody
A-i try
T-well i like it it's cute
A-and i see somethin i like
---allen while looking at Emmy
E-and what might that be
A-come chill with me at my place to find out
Tre-ay man that's my sister you talkin to
A-maybe she want to come
E-maybe i don't
S-she told you
A-i'm sure you do
E-don't be so confident or should i say cocky
A-call it what you want to (he said while touching her arm)
E-didn't your mother ever teach you not to touch what you can't have
---he just looked at her
M-pick ya face up off the floor bruh
T-look we're about to go into this clothing store wait right here for a minute
JJ-hurry up
T-shut up
---they go into the store
A-yo do Emory have a boyfriend
Tre-naw why
A-why you think
JJ-i forgot you use to be in love with her
A-i wouldn't say all that
Tre-negro stop lyin you know you use to come over my house everyday to see her
A-yea i came to see ya mom to she is fine as hell
Tre-nigga don't talk about my mom
---kevin walks up
K-what's poppin
Tre-nothin where you been
K-i was talkin to this cute shorty over in Champs baby got ass out this world
A-yo girl here
K-what girl
Tre-oh you don't remember yo girl the one you used to try and get with back in the day
JJ-that wouldn't give you the time of day
K-naw who
A-oh you got that many huh
K-hey i can't help it
JJ-look in the store at the cashier counter and tell me who you see
---he looks
K-DAMN!!! is that mani
Tre-yea that's her
K-baby got hella ass
Tre-damn why do i have to keep tellin yall niggas to stop talkin bout my sisters like that
K-my bad but she is fine
A-yea she is but Emory look better
JJ-how is she gonna look better when they are identical twins you ass
K-watch this
---he walks into the store and goes up behind Mani
K-damn baby you fine as hell when you gonna let me hit this
---she turns around ready to swing
K-chill out girl it's just me
M-don't play like that Kevin you were really about to get a serious beatdown
K-i see
---they leave the store and are walkin to to the car
Tre-yo come over to the house and chill since i know yall niggas don't have nothin else to do
A-aiight
---back out the house JJ, Tre adn the girls get there first
Tre-ma
Sherri-what do you want boy
Tre-today some lady called for you she said it was about some uniform order( Sherri runs her own clothing boutique)
Sherri-okay
Tre-and we're having company over
Sherri-who
---the doorbellrings
Sherri-i got it
---she opens the door
Sherri-hi come on in but take off your shoes first
---they walk in
T-oh Ms. Sherri this is Allen and Kevin
JJ-you remember them don't you
Sherri- they look familiar
M-they use to come over to the house like every day
Sherri-oh the ones you two use to call hook head and chump
E-yea those two
Sherri-well you two certainly have grown up and you even have the nerve to look like twins
A-thank but he's 18 and i'm 20
Sherri-well nice seeing you two again i'm going to bed
All-goodnight
Sherri-and don't be down here makin alot of noise
K-ma can the girls stay here tonight
Sherri-i don't care as long as they call home and tell their parents
JJ-what about me auntie can i stay
Sherri-boy go home
JJ-that's cold auntie
Sherri-i'm just playin
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 11:33 pm    Post subject:

neeeeeext....
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:08 am    Post subject:

Sherri-call your mom and tell her that you are stayin here and i don't want you messin with the girls and i want you to sleep in Tre's room
JJ-aiight
Sherri-what did you say to me
JJ-i said yes ma'am
Sherri-i thought so
---Sherri goes into her room andn shuts the door
Tre-looks like we have the whole house to ourselves
K-so is it okay if we stay awhile
Tre-yea make yourself at home
---Mani goes into her room and Kevin follows her
M-why are you following me
K-cause i can
M-what do you want i'm about to put my pajamas on
K-i just want to talk
M-right Rolling Eyes
K-fa' real i do
---they sit on her bed
M-so.... talk
K-okay
M-wait let me close the door
---she got up to shut her door and the door that connected her room to Emmy's
M-so what did you want to say
K-i think you should get to know me
M-what happened to me
K-i already know you
M-no you don't
K-try me ask me anything
M-you don't know my favorite food
K-peanut butter and jelly sandwichs with extra peanut butter
M-how did you know
K-cause when we were in elementary you used to always bring you lunch and you would always eat a PB&J sandwich
M-oh, well when is my birthday
K-Feb. 15, 1986 and you older than Emmy by like one minute
M-how'd you know that
K-cause you two use to fight adn you would go "well i'm older so you have to listen to me" adn Emmy would always say" one minute doesn't make a difference"
M-you have good memory
K-yea i can't help it
M-so you know all this stuff about me but i don't know nothing about you
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:22 am    Post subject:

man the suspense is killin me.. i know u prolly alreadii typed the next part....c'mon now dis good
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 9:15 pm    Post subject:

K-well my favorite color is red adn i like basketball and my favorite food is candy
M-candy isn't a food
K-to me it is
M-i don't see how your teeth aren't roted out your head by now
K-oh and my birthday is January 11,1986
M-wow
---out of nowhere he kisses her
K-sorry i got a little carried away
M-a little but it's okay
---back in Tre's room
Tre-Shawna
S-what
Tre-you sleep
S-not if i'm sitting here talking to you
Tre-oh
---about twenty minutes pass and shawna falls asleep
Tre-i have to tell you a secret.... i love you i know it may sound crazy but i do i've loved you since we were little but i didn't want to tell you hell i didn't even tell my boy's i didn't want them to clown on me cause i liked a little girl but now i'm glad i told you even know your not really hearing me i just had to get it off my chest
---he falls asleep

the next morning
---sherri comes downstairs to get the kids up for breakfast and finds Mani,Tionne and Emmy on the floor sleep
Sherri-wake up kids
M-what time is it mommy
Sherri-10:30 go wash up for breakfast
T-i'm hungry
Sherri-breakfast is on the stove
T-okay
Sherri-where is Shawna
M-um.. she didn't feel good she had a cold so she went to sleep in my bed cause she didn't want anyone of us to catch it
Sherri-oh well go wake her she needs to eat something
M-okay
---Mani runs upstairs to Tre's room and nearly trips over JJ who was on the floor
M-Shawna get up do you know where you are
S-yea at you house
M-yea in Tre's room
---she sat up
S-oh damn does your mom know
M-no so get up
S-go get me some night clothes
M-Tre and JJ wake up
Tre-get out of my room
S-wait for me
---they both walk downstairs
Sherri-hey Shawna do you feel better
S-yes ma'am i feel alot better that medicine they gave me knocked the cold right out of me
Sherri-that's good have some breakfast
---Tre comes down the stairs into the kitchen
Tre-goodmorning mamma
Sherri-morning baby go fix a plate where is JJ
Tre-sleep
Sherri-Tionne go wake him up
---she goes into Tre's room
T-wake up big head
JJ-leave me alone
T-Ms. Sherri said get up
JJ-so
---Tionne goes back downstairs
T-he won't get up and i'm not even tryin to get into it with him he's not a morning person
Sherri Jerrell Jermaine Scott if you don't get your behind up and come down here i know something
JJ-i'm coming
Sherri-i thought so
---everyone is sitting down eating breakfast
Sherri-well i'm about to go to the boutique i'll be home late so don't wait up
M-mom can we go out tonight
Tre-nope
M-shut up Tre you always talkin mess
Tre-you shut up i donn't know who you think you are talking to me you better sit you ugly tale down
Sherri-don't talk to her like that
M-thankyou
Sherri-be quite
M- Rolling Eyes anyway like i was sayin can we go to Maxie's tonight
Sherri-okay but be home by twelve thirty
M-twelve thirty
Sherri-you heared me
M-how come Tre can come in anytime he want to
Tre-cause i pay bills and i'm grown
Sherri-boy shutup and twelve thirty is curfew
E-mom make it one thirty and me and Mani will work at the store for free
M-no we won't
E-yes we will
Sherri-you got a deal and i want this house clean before you all leave Tre take out the trash and girls wash the dishes JJ you vaccuum the t.v. room
JJ-what
Sherri-you heard me
JJ-i'm a grown man
Sherri-since you a gronw ass man how bout i knock you out like a grown man
JJ-see why do you always have to get violent with me i was just playin
Sherri-do what i say bye
All-bye
---when she left everyone did what they were supposed to and decided to just chill
S-twin are my clothes still in the closet
JJ-you know they are you basically live here
S-you know what JJ you really get on my nerves i'm gonna kick your ass one day
JJ-i love you too Shawnee
S-you really get on my nerves
JJ-i know
S-well i'm going to take a shower
Tre-yea we're going to take a shower
S-no i'm going to take a shower don't play yourself
E-she got you
T-JJ take me home so i can go get some clothes
JJ-come on let's go
---they leave and everyone else decideds to chill
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 9:49 pm    Post subject:

coo.. keep it goin
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 10:01 pm    Post subject:

---at Tionne's house
JJ-hurry up
T-don't rush me
JJ-well hurry up
T-you know what get out of my room and go wait in the car or something
---he walks out
T-why do i put up with him
---she gets the rest of her things and goes outside and sees JJ talking to Punch the local big time drug dealer
T-i'm ready to go
P-Tionne long time no see
T- Rolling Eyes yea whatever
P-still got that attitude i see
JJ-here
---he hands her the keys
P-damn JJ you still with her
JJ-yea
P-she fine ass hell but got that attitude
JJ-takes a real nigga like me to deal with it though
P-i hear you
JJ-so when we gonna do this deal
P-as soon as possible i'll stop by your place in a little bit i gotta go drop off something
JJ-aiight i got you
---JJ hops in the car
JJ-you ready
T-don't tell me your making deals and sh** with Punch you know that nigga ain't trustworthy
JJ-i got this okay
T-you can never trust a nigga as fine and high profile as Punch as fine as he is i don't see why he got to be a drug dealer he could be a model or something like that
JJ-damn do you want to be with that nigga
T-if you don't act right maybe i will be
JJ-ha ha stop playin games

---they get to JJ's house
JJ-mom you home
mom-yea i'm back here in the laundry room
T-gimme the keys i gotta go get my stuff
---she goes out to the truck and gets her things she turns around and there is Punch
P-damn Tionne you've grown since the last time i saw you
T-move out of my way
P-not until you talk to me
T-i said move
P-what you gonna do if i don't
---she starts getting loud
T-look i'm not in the mood to play so can you please move
---he grabs her arm
P-who you gettin loud with i'm not JJ i will slap the mess outta you like you was one of my bi*chs
T-i know one thing you better let me go before i have to show you what a real bi*ch is
---her pushes her up against the car
P-oh so i'm 'pose to be scared now
---she sees Chris walkin up behind Punch
C-leave her alone
P-ay lil dude mind ya business
T-it's okay Chris go inside for me
C-not until he let's you go
T-Chris go inside
---he does
P-well aren't you the motherly type
T-you got one more chance to let me go before i start swingin
P-try your luck
---she tries to hit him with her free arm but be blocks it and back handed her across her face just as JJ was comin outside. Right as she fell to the ground JJ rolled up on Punch and laid one right in his jaw and continued to hit him until he was bleeding from what seemed like every part of his body.
T-JJ stop it's enough your gonna kill him
C-JJ stop it your scaring me
---JJ's mom comes out and jumps in between JJ and Punch
Shawn-now i know you not gonna hit me
JJ-move outta my way
Shawn-stop
---they hear police sirens
Shawn-go in the house right now
---he starts to walk away but turns back toward Punch and yells
JJ-you better not snitch either or i'ma come back for your punk ass
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 10:24 pm    Post subject:

---back in the house Tionne watched as the ambulance took Punch away. Everybody in the neighborhood knew not to talk to the police, unless they wanted hell to come their way
Shawn-i am really disappointed in you. You let you anger get the best of you
JJ-ma what the hell was i suppose to do sit there and let him beat the sh** out of Tionne i don't think so any real man would do the same thing
Shawn-you didn't have to beat him nearly to death
JJ-yes i did
Shawn-what i'm more upset about is your brither sat there and watched the whole thing you know he looks up to you. i hope you know what you have to do right
JJ-yea i'll go talk to him
---in Chris's room Tionne is talking to him
JJ-hey lil' man
C-hey
JJ-um i want you to know that what happend today was not suppose to and i don't ever want you to follow those actions ever
C-i know Tee told me you just lost your temper
JJ-well she told you a smart thing
C-well can i go watch t.v. now
JJ-go ahead lil' man
---they go into JJ's room
T-aww he cut your face
JJ-i'm cool
T-you should let me clean it
JJ-i'm okay
T-no let me clean it
---she takes him into the bathroom adn cleans his cut with alcohol
JJ-ouch take it easy mama
T-sorry
JJ-you okay
T-i'll survive
JJ-i can't believe he really tried me like that
T-drop it JJ so are you still going out
JJ-yea i guess so
T-you don't have to i can go by myself
JJ-naw you not going anywhere by yourself that nigga might have his so called thugs lookin out for you and me so i don't want you to be by yourself
T-fine so i think i'm gonna go ahead and do my hair since it's gonna take so long
JJ-i'm gonna take my shower so i can be out your way
T-okay
JJ-you wanna iron my clothes
T-boy we are not married and i am not a housewife
JJ-not yet
T-sure whatever you say
---he turns the shower on and starts to get undressed
JJ-don't be lookin at my nakedness
T-oh please it's not like i haven't seen what you got before
JJ-true
---he gets in the shower and she goes and gets their clothes ready
T-that boy is so messy
---JJ calls her into the bathroom
T-what is it
JJ-give me a towel please
T-there is a towel right here on the counter you tellin me that you could walk yo skinny butt over here and get it
JJ-that's exactly what i'm telling you so hand me the towel
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 10:28 pm    Post subject:

daaaaaaaaaaaamn Punch got knocked da f*** out!
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 12:01 am    Post subject:

---while he finishes drying off Tionne is starin madd hard at him
JJ-do you like what you see
T-maybe
JJ-well what whould i have to do to make you say yes
T-maybe a kiss would do
JJ-i think i can manage that
---he backs her up against the wall and kisses her
T-JJ we can't do this
JJ-why....(kiss)
T-because one we're in your mother's house and two because i have to go get my things ready
JJ-so who cares
T-i do
JJ-you can't play these games with my hormones i don't know how much more i can take
T-i know baby i'm sorry
---they go into his room and Shawn calls Tionne
T-yes ma'am
Shawn-come in here and let me talk to you for a minute
---she sits on her bed
S-you know i love you like a daughter
T-i know
S-i just want you to know that you are welcome in this house anytime you want
T-thanks
S-i know you don't get this mother daughter interaction very often because your mother's never around i just want to let you know i'm here for you
T- Crying or Very sad thanks that's really nice of you
S-anything for you baby now gon on and get out of here before you make me shed some tears
T-okay
---she walks back into JJ's room
JJ-look i laid out your clothes
T-i already had clothes out
JJ-i didn't like that i think this one looks better on you
T-why because it's a back out shirt
JJ-that and you look fine as hell in black
T-thanks for the complement
JJ-i got you some drawls to
T-i don't wear drawls i wear panties
JJ-same difference
T-you don't have a clue what matching means if i'm wearing a black outfit i have to have black underwear and since you want me to wear that outfit i have to wear a thong because it's not attractive when a girls pantly line is showing when she's wearing a tight outfit
JJ-so your gonna put on butt floss
T-Laughing butt floss thats cute
JJ-that's basically what it is
T-yea i guess so but if a girl has something in her butt that needs to be flossed out she is straight up nasty as hell
JJ-how about we drop the subject on butt floss
T-i'm glad we're back together
JJ-aww don't get all mushy with me
---she leaves out of the room

8:00 p.m. that night they are on their to the front of the line at Maxie's
T-damn it's alot of people here waiting in line i'm glad we don't have to
---a hoodrat yells out to them
HR-yall need to take yalls *ss to the back of the line
E-and you need to take that cheap weave back to the store
---the line of people goes crazy with laughter
Tre-what's up Big Mike did Allen and Kevin get here before we did
BM-yea they in the back
M-thanks Mike
BM-man i'm not even talking to you
M-why
BM-you did my little cousin Donny wrong he told me you don't even call no more
M-aww sorry is he workin the bar tonight
BM-yea go see him
M-okay
---they get into the club where the music is bumpin adn make their way to VIP
A-damn baby you lookin good tonight
E-don't i always
---they all chillin
M-we're going to the bar for a second we'll meet yall on the dance floor
K-okay but don't let no dude slip nothin in your drink
M-i can handle this i'm a big girl
---they go to the bar while the boys make their way to the dance floor to have a good time
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 12:47 am    Post subject:

---at the bar
M-hey Donny
D-Imani it's been forever since the last time i seen you girl
M-i know so how about we talk over some drinks for me and the girls
D-no can do
All-why
D-because you're under 21
T-so are you
D-no i'm not i turned 21...
M-May 19
D-you remembered
S-how could she forget the day she caught you in bed with that ugly girl Shakia
D-oh so you gonna throw that in my face
E-hell yea
D-well i guess i can hook yall up with a couple of drinks
E-so what ever happened to Shakia
D-we're still together
S-go figures
---he serves them their drink of choice and they are sitting at the bar watching the crowd get their groove on
T-who is that string at me
S-who
T-that girl right over there with the red outfit on
M-oh that's Kim
T-the Kim that thought she was big and bad
E-yep that's the girl
T-well maybe i should go talk to her
---she gets up to go walk over where Kim is but Emmy grabs her
E-we are not starting anything tonight
T-well she need to stop staring at me i am not one of those other girls i will show her country looking behind what a real Philly beat down is about
---they all are out on the dance floor having a good time when Tionne feels someone bump into her but she didn't think anything of it since the dance floor was pretty crowded. She feels someone bump her again but a little harder.She turns around and is face to face with Kim
K-you got a problem
T-yea you bumping into me like you really gonna do something
K-i don't have time for games little girl JJ when you need a real woman come on let's go to my place
JJ-stop trippin i dont know you, look we bout to be at the bar
---JJ walked to the bar followed by Allen, Tre and Kevin who were laughing at how JJ just dogged Kim
T-You hear that she got the nerve to say she is a real woman everything on you is fake from those chipped nails to that knock-off Gucci purse
---Kim turns away and mumbles the word B**ch
T-did she just call me a b**ch
M-i think she did and.......
---before Mani could finish her sentence Tionne was all over Kim .Kim's friends tried to team up on Tionne but Mani Emmy and Shawna was not about to let that happen
---back at the bar
Kev-yo is that Tionne over there fighting
JJ-yea that's her
K-A-aren't you gonna break them up
JJ-are you crazy break them up and stop Tee from kickin her a** hell naw .if i do that i'm gonna have to put up with all that built up anger later on
Kev-oh
JJ-i'll get her if security doesn't break it up
Tre-security is right there laughing at Kim they want to see them fight
---JJ walks over there and picks Tionne up and takes her out to the parking lot. when they got out there part of the club moved with them
Tionne licked her licp and tasted blood
T-i know this heifer didn't bust my lip
Tre-i think she did
---before JJ could even say anything Tionne made a run for the club adn found Kim and stuck her right in the nose
T-that's for busting my damn lip
---Tionne walked back out to the car
T-let's go
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 1:26 am    Post subject:

One month has passed and today Shawna is going on her job interview. She calls Tre
Tre-hello
S-hey can you take me to my job interview
Tre-yo legs ain't broke
S-look i'll be ready in 10 minutes so be here
Tre-bye
---5 minutes later Tre pulled up in front of Shawna's house and walked in
Tre-come on let's go
S-come on
---riding in the car
Tre-where am i taking you
S-to JC Penny's in the mall
Tre-oh
---they get there
Tre-good luck baby girl
S-thanks
Tre-call me when you need me to come get you cause i'm gonnna be in Footlocker
S-okay
---after about 30 minutes Shawna is finished with her interview and decideds to walk around the mall adn stop by Footlocker to get Tre.
She walks into Footlocker adn see a girl give Tre her number.She walks up to him and the girl
S-come on Tre let's go
G-excuse you don't you see us talking
S-no i don't let's go Tre
Tre-look Keisha i'll talk to you later
S-Rolling Eyes don't count on it
---Keisha mumbles something under her breath
S-what was that
K-i didn't say nothin
S-that's what i thought
---in the car it was real quite
Tre-Shawna
S-........
Tre-Shawna
S-that's my name please don't where it out
Tre-i just want to tell you that me and Keisha went to school together adn we're just friends
S-............
Tre-did you hear me
S-you sittin right next to me how am i not gonna hear you
Tre-are you mad
S-just take me to see the twins
---they get to his house and Shawna heads to the twins room
S-hey twins
Both-hey
M-what's wrong with you did you get the job
S-yea i got it
E-then why you look so sad
S-today i saw this girl that work at Footlocker giving Tre her phone number
E-did she have short hair
S-yea
M-girl that's just Keisha her and Tre use to talk but they just cool now
S-really
M-yea
S-i'll be back
---she goes into Tre's room
S-Tre
Tre-......
S-Tre
Tre-what
S-i'm sorry you forgive me
Tre-i'll think about it
S-really
Tre-okay i forgive you
S-i knew you would Very Happy
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 1:59 am    Post subject:

ay come back
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 8:16 pm    Post subject:

next week:saturday

---JJ calls Tionne
T-hey
JJ-what's up
T-i need to get a job
JJ-no you don't i will take care of you
T-i can take care of myself
JJ-why won't you move in with me and mom
T-because
JJ-she already said you could
T-yea i know
JJ-so what's stopping you
T-JJ drop it okay
JJ-is you mom home
T-is she ever
JJ-i'm coming over there
T-use the key under the flower pot cause i'm going to take my shower adn get dressed
JJ-okay see you in a little bit
---Tionne went to her closet to find something to wear. Since it was kinda warm out she decided on her white shorts and red see through shirt. She ironed her clothes while jamming to the song from Lil' John. JJ walks in the front door
JJ-Chris go chill in the living room and watch cartoons
C-okay
---JJ wlaks in the bathroom and scares Tionne
T-get out of here you bastard
---JJ is laughing hysterically
JJ-i got a daddy i father i just don't know where he is
T-get out
---30 minutes later Tionne come out fully dressed
JJ-who bought you those Jordans
T-i did
JJ-with what money
T-don't worry about it
JJ-keep getting smart with me and see what happens
T-who's in the living room
JJ-Chris
---she walks in to find Chris watching cartoons
T-hey lil' man
C-hey Tee (not looking from the t.v.)
T-who ironed your clothes or should i say who didn't iron them
C-JJ
T-how come you let him come out the house with all those wrinkles
JJ-he didn't want to wait for me to iron them so i didn't
T-come upstairs so i can iron your clothes
C-why do i have to iron them
T-cause i said so
---they go upstairs to iron his clothes and then get in the car to start the day
JJ-i gotta stop by Tre house for a minute then we're going out
T-where
C-to the fair
JJ-Chris you wasn't suppose to say anything
C-my bad
---at the twins house
JJ-where Tre at
E-sleep
---JJ goes upstairs
M-so where yall going
T-the fair
M-oh
E-Chris you gonna win your favorite cousin something
C-yep and i'm gonna win a big bear for momma
M-how you just gonna forget about me
C-i didn't
---JJ comes back downstairs
JJ-aiight let's go
T-see yall later
---they get in the car and go to the fair
T-i want to ride all the rides
JJ-you not tall enough
T-ha ha just cause you like six 'three don't mean you gotta dog on my shortness
JJ-man Chris is taller than you
T-speaking of Chris i haven't heard him talk since we left
---they look in the back seat and find Chris sleeping they get out and JJ unbuckles him and picks him up
JJ-wake up lil' man
---he didn't move and JJ tries to put him down but he didn't budge
JJ-he stuck on me
T-tickle him a little bit he'll wake up
---he does and Chris wakes up
JJ-you up
C-are we here
T-yep
---they enter the park
T-i want to go on the Ferris wheel
C-that's a kiddie ride
T-no it's not
---they ride the rides and decide to take a break
C-i want a hot dog
JJ-you hungry Tee
T-i'll take a hot dog
---they sit down and Ma dude named Zane comes up
Z-whud up JJ
JJ-yo Zane i ain't seen you in a minute it's been what six or seven years
Z-yea i had to handle some business out in Cali
JJ-word makin money
Z-yea when i got back the first thing i heard was about you F**kin up that nigga Punch
T-excuse me watch your mouth don't you see there is a child sittin right here
Z-my fault how you doing
T-i'm fine
Z-i see
JJ-ay dude watch it
Z-dang man how come i wasn't invited to the wedding
JJ-man that's my little brother and my girl Tionne
Z-oh yall look like a family sittin up here
JJ-naw man
Z-look holla at me later my girl is waiting for me
JJ-aiight man
---he leaves
JJ-what yall wanna do know
C-let's go to the movies
T-to see what
C-it don't matter
T-let's go
---they get to the movies and sit down to watch it
C-i have to go to the bathroom
JJ-coem on
T-i'll take him cause i have to go to
---they are walkin to the bathroom when Tionne spots Avery with another girls whose PREGNANT!!! Shocked

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:37 pm    Post subject:

oh lawd
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:47 pm    Post subject:

T-no he didn't
C-huh
T-nothin go use the bathroom
---she calls Emory
T-hey girl what's up
E-nothin
T-i hope your sitting donw
E-why
T-guess who i'm looking at right now
E-who
T-Allen and he's with another girl
E-what !!!
T-wait there's more she's PREGANANT
E-stop lying
T-i'm not.wait they about to kiss
---she snaps a picture of them kissing
T-okay i just took a picture of them i'l e-mail it to you
E-okay
T-you gonna be okay
E-yea if he wants to play games so can i
T-talk to you later
E-don't tell JJ cause i don't want him to start trippin
T-i know this bye
---she waits on Chris to come out of the bathroom and they go back into the movie
JJ-what took so long
T-um.. there was a long line at the bathroom
---they leave the movie theatre after the movie is over.By the time they got home Chris was in the back seat sleep
JJ-you want me to take you home or are you stayin here
T-i and at home
JJ-good
---they go inside and JJ puts Chris in the bed and goes into his room to find Tionne on his computer
JJ-how did you know the password to my computer
T-cause you told me that day you were sleep on the coush
---he turns on his t.v. while Tionne e-mails the picture to Emmy
JJ-what you doing
T-nothin
JJ-you said that kinda quick what you tryin to hide
T-nothin really i just had to check up on something
---a few hours later they're sitting there watching t.v. when JJ's phone rings
JJ-hello.......who is this........ oh whud up Kevin
K-yo man guess what yo cousin over here wylin out on Allen they fightin and sh**
JJ-why what he do
K-he was at the movies with some girl adn she pregnant but we don't know if it's his baby
JJ-where Tre at
K-home i guess she came over here by herself but she drove Tre's car
JJ-i'ma be over there in a little bit
---he gets up
T-where you going
JJ-over to Kevin's Allen and Emmy fighting cause he got some girl pregnant supposedly
T-oh sh**
---his phone rings again
JJ-what
K-don't worry about comin over here she left
JJ-aiight cool
---he hangs up and turns to Tionne
JJ-man i'm really gonna hurt that nigga doin my cousin like that
T-baby you and Tre can't fight their battles all the time you have to let them defend for themselves
JJ-but..
T-no buts now go get undressed and go to sleep
---they get their pajamas on and cuddle up to watch t.v.
JJ-are those my socks
T-yep
JJ-you just can't mess with a man's socks all willy nilly
T-you are so corny
JJ-yea but you still love me
T-i know .... but you can't talk cause you use my lotion so we even
JJ-what ever Tionne
T-you want them back
JJ-not after your stinky feet been in them
T-my feet don't stink
JJ-that's what you think
T-i'm hurt
JJ-i'm just playin with you
T-you better be
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:49 pm    Post subject:

i'll post more when i get back in like 2 hours: after 7:30 my time
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:50 pm    Post subject:

it's like 5:50 here
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 1:58 am    Post subject:

dat wuz good.. come back soon
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 8:15 pm    Post subject:

---a few days have passed and Emmy and Allen still haven't talked but something in Tionne's life is about to change

---at Shawna's house
T-i've got news to tell you girls
M-what is it
T-well i have decided to move in with JJ
S-relly
T-yea Ms. Shawn has been asking me to since forever
E-i'm happy for you
T-i can't wait to tell JJ
E-i bet he's gonna be happy
T-he better be i'm gonna tell him when he get's back from Atlanta tomorrow morning
---Tionne calls his house
Shawn-hello
T-hey Ms. Shawn
S-oh hey sweetie
T-can i talk to you
S-sure what's going on
T-i've decided to take you up on the offer to move in with you
S-really
T-yea
S-when are you coming
T-i don't know
S-have you told your mom
T-yea she said she was happy i was doing something with my life, she calls it "leaving the nest"
S-that was kinda rude
T-i'm used to her remarks by now
S-but still
T-besides i was so happy cause my cousin got me a job working a assistant to William Johnson
S-well thats nice how much will you be getting paid if you don't mind me asking
T-i don't and since him and my cousin are kinda involved he's starting me out at 14.50 and hour and i can help with some of the bills
S-now you and me both know JJ has too much pride to let you do that he doesn't feel like the man of the house when someone tries to help him he'd rather do it all on his own
T-yea your right
S-and he is stubborn too
T-trust me i know that
S-wow what does JJ think about all of this
T-well see i didn't tell him yet i want it to be a suprise
S-oh well how about you come get settled in and you'll see him tonight
T-i thought he was coming home in the morning
S-no i just got off the phoe with him he'll be here late tonight
T-then i better finish packing
S-i think that's a good idea
T-okay see ya tonight
S-see ya sweetie
---Tionne hangs up
E-what did she say
T-she want me to come tonight
M-you going
T-of course what i look like stayin in the house with my mom for one more second oh no
S-you better start packing cause you know how much stuff you have
T-not alot
S-girl please you have enough clothes to not ever wear the same thing twice
T-whatever but i'm gonna go start to pack i'll talk to yall later
---she leaves to go home and pack and on her way out the door she runs into Tre
Tre-wassup Tee
T-hey Tre where you just came from
Tre-dealing with them dudes up on Valencia Lane they up there talking mess so i had to set them straight
T-you always fightin somebody gonna kick ya butt one day
Tre-naw never that where you going
T-home
Tre-you want a ride
T-naw i'm cool
Tre-aiight
T-i'm out
Tre-bye
---she starts her walk home.

later that night at JJ's house she was unpacking hr and Ms. Shawn were unpacking her things
S-goodness chile' how much stuff do you have
T-not alot
S-coulda fooled me
T-you don't have to help i got this
S-i know
T-Ms. Shawn go relax you have to get up early tomorrow for Chris's party i got this
S-you sure
T-yes
S-okay i'm going to my room and when JJ comes in tell him to call Mike
T-okay
S-night
T-goodnight
---it's like 12:30 when JJ comes in the house and after unpacking all her clothes Tionne is knocked out on JJ's bed.He walks up to his room to find Tionne sleep
(whispering)JJ-Tee wake up
T-what is it i'm sleep
JJ-what are you doing here
T-i came to ....
JJ-Tee
T-what leave me alone i'm tired
JJ-fine
---he waks into his closet to put his clothes in the hamper and finds it totally rearranged with his and Tionne's clothes
JJ-she finally said yes
--- he walks out and takes his clothes off and goes to his bathroom to brush his teeth and comes back
JJ-Tee scoot over
---she didn't budge
JJ-oh i forgot how difficult you are when your sleep
---he gets in the bed and Tionne cuddles up next to him and whispers
T-did you miss me
JJ-you know i did
T-i missed you to
JJ-i know
T-i take it back
JJ-to late
T-oh be quite and go to sleep
JJ-tomorrow's a big day so be ready for good news
T-tell me now
JJ-no wait until tomorrow
---she moves to the other side of the bed
JJ-so what you don't wanna be next to me anymore
T-no
JJ-fine be like that
T-i will
---they lay there for a while until Tiionne falls back to sleep and moves back over next to him and wraps her arms around him
JJ-i knew you couldn't keep your hands off me
---they fall asleep together


---Party Time

kids are in the back yard running around having a good time and parents and friends are talking among themselves
JJ-can i have everyone's attention lpease
---it got quite
JJ-me and my cousin Tre have something to tell everyone
Tre-i'll go first... mom , auntie me and JJ bought you two a house
Sherri-a what
JJ-a house
Shawn-how did you two do this behind our back
JJ-we wanted it to be a suprise
Sherri-i'm definately suprised
JJ-well if you don't want it we can
Shawn-no we'll take it
Tre-i thought so
JJ-and Chris will have his own room and play room and even a pool
Sherri-wow
M-dang yall coulda got us something to
E-i know
Tre-wait there's more
E-what is it
Tre-well since you two are starting college in the fall i got you two an early birthday present
M-we got cars
Tre-no not exactly
E-what is it
Ttre-i got you an apartment off campus
M-stop lyin
Tre-i'm not
E-girl we bout to have a party
Tre-no yall not
M-says who
Tre-says me i pay the bills remember
Sherri-guess yall gonna have to stay with me
M-no we not we're in college si we gotta live without adult supervision
Sherri-i'll be over there everyday to check on you
E-aww mom
Sherri-don't aww ma me
JJ-i have another annoucement to make
---it get's quite
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 10:07 pm    Post subject:

noooo come back!
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:46 pm    Post subject:

---JJ waits until everyone is quite
JJ-Tionne come here
---she does
T-what is is
---he gets on one knee and the guests go wild with applause
JJ-will you Tionne Janay Thomas give me the honor of being my wife
T-shut up this can't be real
---he opens the ring box and there sits a platinum ring with a single karot diamond
Sherri-oh my goodness look at that ring
T-of course i'll marry you i'm not crazy
---they hug and kiss
Shawn-how come you never got me anything like that JJ
JJ-mom
Shawn-i'm just joking i'm happy for you two
M-dang did you see that diamond
E-that is phat
S-imagins what te wedding band is gonna look like
Sherri-now you see Tre you need to go ahead and get married
S-no he doesn't
Tre-ma we're not ready for that
M-i'm gonna be a bridesmaid
T-you all are
Shawn- now my beautiful daughter when are you gonna give me some grandkids
T-slow down we're not even married yet
---they enjoy the rest of the evening together with family and friends
Two months later the wedding has been planned to take place on December 31'st six days after Tionne's birthday (it's now October). since the day JJ proposed to Tionne they have lived in and re-decorated JJ's house.JJ and Tre had opened up their own club called Grand City in the heart of Philly where they lived. The twins have started college at Penn State. and shawna and Tre are still hanging strong and living together in Tre's house.

---JJ gave Tionne full control over re-decorating the house.She made Chris's old room into a guest room,they re-decorated the office that was already there and since they were planning on having childern one day she made painted JJ's old room and made it into a nursery fully equipped with all the essentials for taking care of babies. She and JJ made the master bedroom black and white. They had black satin sheets on a huge four-poster bed with white throw pillows. It was a romantic type of setting.
Tionne is in here "new" home on a Saturday morning watching t.v. and eating ice cream and grapes. Lately she's been having some weird cravings maybe it's just the stress from having to plan the wedding. The phone rings
T-hello
Tre-hey Tee is JJ there
T-nope he went to the barber shop and then he said he was gonna go down to the club to take care of business
Tre-aiight thanks
T-you welcome
---she hangs up and goes back to watching her movie when she hears the front door open
T-JJ you home
M-naw girl it's just me i used my key
T-oh hey Mani what you up to
M-nothin i just came to use the computer so i can do my report
T-oh Emmy must be doing her report on the minds of children that she was telling me about
M-yea it's 10:00 in the morning and she has the radio blasting and the t.v. on so i can't hardly think
T-oh well use the other computer don't use the laptop JJ gets pissy when someone besides him uses it you hungry
M-thanks and no i already ate
T-anytime girl
---she goes into the office which was decked out in african carvings and paintings, a huge oak desk like the one in those mafia movies and had a wood floor and fireplace. JJ out did himself. Tionne went right back to her spot on the couch. She was glad she didn't have to work today.
---the front door opens and in walks JJ.
T-hey baby
JJ-how is my favorite girl doing
T-better now that your here
JJ-i'm hungry what do we have to eat in here
T-you want breakfast
JJ-that would be nice
T-you want eggs bacon, pancakes and grits
JJ-my favorite
T-well if i make your favorite can i have my favorite
JJ-and what is your favorite
T-you of course
JJ-sorry i have work to do i can't do that right now but i really want to, i really want to and you looks so damn sexy in my t-shirt i want to
T-i get the point go do your work there's always time for playing
JJ-that's why i love you your so understanding
T-oh by the way Mani is in the office doing her report
JJ-okay
---he goes into his office and Tionne starts breakfast
20 minutes later
---Tionne hears Mani and JJ arguing in the office , she walks into the office
T-what are yall arguing about
M-he thinks i'm messing with a dude named Lawrens just because he called my phone
JJ-why is that nigga calling you phone he's 25 almost 26 he's way older than me
M-you're only 23
JJ-that's two long years
M-we're just friends
JJ-yea it starts out that way
M-i'm 19 i think i can see who i wanna see
JJ-your still a little girl
T-boy come out of here and leave her alone
JJ-this is my house
T-JJ
JJ-fine i gotta go eat anyway
M-you better leave cause you was 'bout to get hit
JJ-hit me then
T-leave her alone
---they walk out of the office
T-i have never seen two people in my life that fight as much as you two
JJ-man forget her
---as he's eating his breakfast he's watching Tionne eat
JJ-baby you getting a little extra meat on your bones i like that
T-you tryin to call me fat
JJ-no more like a good thickness
T-oh
JJ-i like it
T-i want to get my hair cut
JJ-if you cut you hair i will never talk to you again i like it long
T-it's time for a change
JJ-not all change is good
T-Tre called for you
JJ-yea i talked to him
T-what did he want to talk about
JJ-business
(tionne thinks"which business the club or the drug business)
T-oh
---she had learned a long time ago not to ask for too much information she might not like what she hears. She knew what Tre and JJ were into and it was obvious to her. Even though they sold drugs they still did all other business legit they couldn't risk getting caught so they had other people doing their dirty business. They were the masterminds of the whole operation.In a few years they had established a street name and were well know throughout the Philly area. The whole family knew the Feds and cops were watching so they had to stay on the top of the game and do everything like normal people. Tre and JJ had paid for the club and its expenses legally. They got the money from life savings, and bank loans. Everything was normal

JJ-you going out today
T-maybe why?
JJ-Zane is coming over to drop something off and i need you to take it somewhere for me
T-where
JJ-he's gonna drop off a black bookbag and your gonna give him the black boookbag that i'll leave by the door. you take the bag and go into the village.
T-okay
JJ-you know the spot we used to hang out at back in the day
T-Sonny's Pizzaria
JJ-yea go in and Mr. Sonny will show you a safe and you put two envelopes out of the bag in the safe. I'll give you the combinations.
T-what's in it for me
JJ-me
T-is that all
JJ-no, you do the same thing but this time go down you Nipsy's pool hall
T-then i'm finished
JJ-yea
T-what if
JJ-no what if's and don't look suspicious
T-okay but you know i'm only doing this because i love you
JJ-i know and i love you to but i gotta run and thanks for breakfast.
T-yea
---he leaves and she cleans off the table

One week later:Halloween around 7:00 p.m.

--- The twins are going to the annual campus Halloween party, Shawna and Tre went out to a gathering some friends were giving and Tionne is getting ready for the trick or treaters:; she was dressed as fairy godmother. She had tried to get JJ to dress up but he wasn't havin it.
T-baby how come you aren't getting dressed
JJ-cause i already told you i wasn't i'm tired

---he had been at the club all day planning for the Halloween party they were throwing in a couple of hours.
T-how are you tired
JJ-i'm 23 almost 24 and running and operating a night club
sh** you would be tired to
---the doorbell rings
T-they're here
---she runs to the door and grabs the bowl of candy. She sees the local teenagers from the neighborhood
T-now yall know yall are to old to be trick o treating
---a cutie named devon speaks up
D-Ms. Tionne you know you want to come out here and get candy to
T-i'm to old for that stuff
D-you're only like 19
T-try 22 smart one
D-well can we have some candy or what
---just then JJ comes to the door
D-my man JJ
JJ-sup lil'man
D-nothin but she won't give us no candy
---he pulls out his wallet
JJ-how bout five dollars for each of you
D-word
JJ-you know i'm always gonna show my lil' homies some love
---he hands each of the five teenage boys some money
D-thanks dude even though this is pocket change i'll take it
JJ-don't tell nobody else, cause i don't wanna go boke showin a little love to the whole neighborhood
---they run off to the next house and Tionne shuts the door
T-you spoil those kids to much
JJ-i spoil you too
T-are you going to be at the party long
JJ-i don't know why
T-just wondering
JJ-you not comin
T-maybe, i really don't feel like partying
JJ-you don't have to come
T-i'm getting fat huh
JJ-no haven't we went over this
T-yea but i went from a size seven to a size eight i have this big bubble butt now
JJ-haven't you always
T-no
JJ-from what i remember you did
T-that's not funny i've never in my life been a size 8 and i'm just having trouble coping with all of this
JJ-i love you the way you are
T-you're so sweet
JJ-i know
T-and conceited
---later that night JJ had went to the club because the party had started and Tionne was debating on going to the party.She calls her mother-in-law and Chris answers the phone
C-hey Tee
T-hey Chris what you doin
C-just got home from getting candy
T-can i speak to you mom
C-hold on
---Shawn comes to the phone
S-hello
T-hey
S-hey sweetie whats going on
T-i'm so fat now i gained five ponds
S-you needed to you were nothing but bones and butt
that's it
T-but my clothes still fit they're just extra tight
S-well at least your not huge why aren't you at the party
T-i don't know
S-you better get up and go
T-you think i should
S-i wouldn't have told you if i didn't
T-okay
S-call me tomorrow
T-okay bye
---she takes a shower adn straightens her hair.She decideds to wear a black strapless dress that was knee length and fitted her new curves snugly but not to much and a pair up wrap-up black high-heels. She had to admitt to herself that she looked sexy as hell.JJ wouldn't be able to resist her tonight. She hopped in her black Lexus which was a gift from JJ for marrying him.
T-tonight i'm gonna have fun
---she pulls up into the parking space that was reserved for her and gets out to see the line wrapping all the way around the building.
T-damn they doing big things tonight
---she goes into the club and catches the eye of everyman on the dance floor. She walks up the stairs to the office and finds Shawna watching t.v.
S-hey girl look at you tryin to be sexy
T-i don't have to try
S-i see
T-where JJ at
S-him and Tre went to talk to some dudes outside, you know business
T-yea i know
---they are sitting there talking
S-you know Tre made me stop working
T-he did
S-so i started going to beauty school
T-JJ wanted me to stop but i wasn't having it at all i have to be doing something
S-i hear you
---JJ walks in the office
JJ-who yall talking about cause i know yall talking about somebody
S-shut up
JJ-i have had enough of you get out
S-boy please you ain't puttin nobody out
JJ-i know i'm just messin with you
T-you don't see me sitting right here
JJ-i see you hi how are you
T-fine
JJ-i know
T-i'm going to the bar
S-i'm right behind you
---they begin to go down the stairs and as they do gun shots start flying through the air. The whole crowd screams.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:01 pm    Post subject:

daaaaamn u cant be leavin me hangin like that..

by the way am i the only person readin this?? Confused
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:04 pm    Post subject:

no ppl just aren't posting replies
but i'm glad you like it
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:04 pm    Post subject:

i have like 258 views
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:09 pm    Post subject:

oh okay
they should post replies...i feel lonely....n-t-wayz..add on soon
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---as the crowd calms down Tionne gets up to check herself.She's okay
T-Shawnee you okay
---she looks at the ground and sees Shawna on the ground bleeding and she screams and drops to her side
T-shawna can you hear me
---they are both crying
S-Tee it burns
T-your gonna be okay
---then JJ comes down the stairs
T-JJ get help it's Shawna
JJ-what happened
T-i don't know just go get help
JJ-stay with her i'll be right back
---he leaves and Tionne tries to stop the bleeding
T-stay with me you're gonna be just fine
S-Tee it hurts
T-i know we're getting you some help you just stay with me
---she hears the ambulance outside
T-we got you some help you'll be okay
---EMC comes up to them followed by two police
P-ma'am we need you to step back and tell us what happened
T-i don't know is she gonna be okay
EMC-she'll be okay it looks like a flesh wound
P-ma'am i'm gonna have to ask you to step outside we have to evacuate the premisis
---she walks outside and sees Tre and JJ talking to the police
JJ-baby are you okay
T-yea they said Shawna is going to be okay
Tre-i'm gonna ride in the ambulance
T-well give me your car keys so i can meet you at the hospital
JJ-i have to stay here
T-okay
---Tionne kisses JJ goodbye
JJ-be safe
T-okay

---the whole family is at the hospital when Tre came out of the room from talking to the doctor
Tre-they said that it was just a flesh wound and that she'll have to stay in bed for a few days
M-i'm glad she's okay i just can't believe that something like this happened
E-i'm still in shock but i'm glad she's okay
Sherri-poor baby
Tre-mom i was so scared
Sherri-i know baby your gonna be okay
Shawn and so is she so don't get into a fuss
T-for some odd reason i feel that bullet was for me
Shawn-Tionne don't talk like that
T-i really think that
Shawn-yall are all gonna be okay

---Two days later Shawna and Tre were at home resting
Tre-you hungry
S-no
Tre-you okay
S-i'll survive i'm a soldier
Tre-since when did you become so tough
S-dealing with you i have to be
Tre-i'm not that bad
S-that's what you think
Tre-you're so mean
S-i think that medicine is kicking in cause i'm getting sleepy
Tre-well i'll be downstairs watching t.v. call me if you need me
S-thanks baby
Tre-this is what i'm here for
---he shuts the door and goes into the the family room to call JJ
T-hello
Tre-hey Tee
T-hey Tre how is Shawnee
Tre-she's sleeping
T-how are you
Tre-living so i can't complain is JJ there
T-yea hold on
---JJ picks up the phone
JJ-hey man
Tre-hey what did they say when you went down to the station
JJ-well i went with Michael(their lawyer) and they were giving me this sh** about how they can't press any charges cause they don't have any suspects and that they looked into it and they found no clues as to who could have did it so they are throwing the case out and i talked to the insurence company and got everything fixed so we don't have to worry about anything
Tre-all we have to worry about is who shot Shawna
JJ-one of the runners came to me and said that he was hearing that Punch has been on the block talking sh**
Tre-the other day when we were at the hospital Tee says how she had a feeling that the bullet was for her
JJ-i'm gonna get Midnight a call so he can find that nigga
Tre-aiight bye
---midnight was a forensics cop that was released from duty because of his envolvment in a crime scene
---later in the day JJ calls Tre back
JJ-hey Midnight found that nigga Punch
Tre-aiight cool well take care of him
JJ-i'll be over there in a few minutes

---JJ gets there with Tionne by his side
Tre-hey Tee Shawna is upstairs watching t.v.
T-okay
Tre-can you just keep an eye on her while we're gone
T-i got you
JJ-look i'll be back later to take you home
T-okay be safe
---they leave
Tre-so where are they
JJ-midnight took him out to Tipp county to that old factory
Tre-good did anybody see him
JJ-not that i know of
--- they get to the run down factory and find Punch tied to a chair and Midnight in the corner
JJ-so we meet again
P-man ain't nobody scared of you , you ain't nothing but a punk
JJ-oh i'm a punk but you the one tied to a chair
Tre-why did you shoot my girl
P-i didn't
Tre-but you know who did
P-no so can yall let me go
JJ-i heard you was talkin sh** about how you fuc*** my wife
P-i could have been she was kinda up tight if you know what i mean
---with that said JJ sent two blows to Punch's face
Tre-why did you shoot my girl
P-i didnt i'm telling you
Tre-so tell my who did
P-if i knew i would have told you
Tre-Midnight hand me your gun
P-i'm supposed to be scared cause you got a gun
Tre-no but i think you might as well tel me cause either way you're not coming out of this building alive
---it got quite
JJ-oh so you don't know how to speak now
P-.......
---JJ lights a black (black &mild)
JJ-you want one more smoke before you die you hear that Midnight he wants a smoke
M-i hear it
P-yea go ahead... like you're really gonna kill me
---JJ brings the black to his mouth but turns it around and burns Punch's face
P-ooowwwwwwww
JJ-smoke that
Tre-you shot her didn't you just tell me
P-aawww the baby's getting emotional
Tre-i'll show you emotional
---he aims the gun at Punch
P-yuo won't do it
---Tre shoots him in the shoulder and Punch screams
P-okay i did shot her but i didn't mean to i was aiming for Tionne
JJ-you what
P-you heard me the way i look at it is if i can't have her niether can you
JJ-you was trying to kill my wife
---JJ pulled out a gun from his waist and aimed for the center of his forehead.he pulls the trigger and hits his target
JJ-rest in peace motherfuc***
Tre-get rid of him for me and i'll pay you later
M-no charge
Tre-thanks and leave no traces
---they leave adn go back to Tre's house
T-hey guys
Tre-hey where is Shawna
T-she's in the bathtub
Tre-did she sleep
T-no she talked non stop
Tre-thanks for staying with her i would have asked Mani and Emmy but they were doing something
T-no problem
---Tionne looks at JJ
T-what's wrong
JJ-nothing
Tre-i'll call Vic and get him to watch over the girls
JJ-okay
T-what did you do
JJ-nothing
T-then why do you need Vic to watch the twins
JJ-don't ask questions let's go i have to go do something
T-not until you two tell me what's going on
Tre-don't worry about it Tee it's nothing
T-tell me
JJ-Tionne go get in the car now i don't feel like putting up with your 21 questions
---Tionne throws JJ a nasty look and walks out to the car
Tre-man you didn't have to yell at her like that
JJ-i know but
Tre-man just go say sorry
JJ-aiight check you later
---he gets in the car and they ride home in silence
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 1:25 am    Post subject:

well i'll be damned
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 3:41 am    Post subject:

---back at Tre's house
S-hey baby
Tre- what are you doing up i thought you would be sleep
S-no i was worrying to much
Tre-why
S-because you and JJ went to find Punch and i know it was gonna be trouble
Tre-how do you know we went to find Punch
S-Tee told me
Tre-don't worry
S-i can't help it
Tre-do you need something
S-no
Tre-i have to make a phone call adn when i come back we'll just chill okay
S-okay
---he goes downstairs to call the twins
M-hello
Tre-sup i need you and Emmy to stay on the low for a while
M-why do we always gotta be creepin and sh**
Tre-do what i say where's Emmy
M-out with some dude
Tre-who
M-i don't know call her and see
T-i'm gonna send my boy Vic over to take yall where yall ned to go
M-i don't need a babysitter
Tre-don't argue
M-fine Trevon (his real name)
Tre-aiight bye
M-be safe
Tre-i always am by sis
---he hangs up with her and calls Emory
E-hey Tre what yuo want
Tre-where are you
E-the library why
Tre-i need you to go home and lay low
E-why
Tre-cause i said so
E-what about class
Tre-i'll have someone walk you to class
E-Tre-why we always have to lay low
---he yells at her
Tre-just do what i say
E-who are you yellin at i'm not one of these punk motherfuc**** that work for you
Tre-my bad
E-you right i'm telling mommy
---she hangs up on him
Tre-i hate having sisters
---he goes back upstairs to his room
Tre-baby i think we need a vacation
S-i need a vacation from you
Tre-what
S-you heard me
---they sit there and watch t.v.

---back at JJ's house
---tionne hasn't said a word to JJ since they left Tre's house
JJ-you not talking to me
T-.........
JJ-fine be that way
---they are both in their bedroom
JJ-what did i do for you not to talk to me
S-i don't feel like taking Jarrell
JJ-fine don't talk but you know i still love you and i'm sorry for anything that i might have done wrong
T-you didn't do anything wrong it's just that i no your out there dealing with those crazy people and i'm just scared of something happening to you
JJ-baby nothings gonna happen to me
T-you don't know that
JJ-i do know that don't worry about me
T-fine Jarrell
JJ-look i gotta go get something so stay here and if anybody comes by don't answer the door unless you know them okay
T-i know the drill
---she knew the drill all to well.If someone comes to the door don't answer it unless they have and appointment and can show identification or you know that person adn worst case senario find the gun and hide
T-don't be gone to long
JJ-i won't
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 10:05 pm    Post subject:

come back here!!! I wanna know wats gon happy...hurry Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 11:43 pm    Post subject:

---back at Emmy and Mani's apartment
M-did Tre tell you to come home
E-hell yea he trippin
M-talkin bout he gonna send someone to walk us to class. I gotta be in class in like 20 minutes so whoever they are they need to haul ass
---the doorbell rings
M-whose is it
---a deep manly voice replies
V-it's Victor
M-i don't know you
V-JJ and Tre sent me to take you and your sister whereever you need to go
M-oh
---she opens to the door and sees this fins ass Morris Chestnut lookin dude
M-damn
V-what was that
M-oh nothin i'm Imani but you can call me Mani and my sister is somewhere around here
V-okay
M-let me just get my bag
---she goes and gets here bag and Emmy comes to the door
E-weren't you gonna intoduce me Imani
M-oh this is my other half Emory but everyone calls her Emmy
V-nice to meet you i'm Victor but you can call me Vic
E-Nice to meet you too
M-well we have to be going bye
E-see ya
---Vic you Mani head out to Vic's flyy ass Lexus
M-nice car
V-thaks Imani
M-please call me Mani
V-okay so where are we going
M-McDonalds i'm hungry
V-i thought you had to go to class
M-not for another 15 minutes you came kinda early
V-my bad
M-it's okay maybe we can get to know each other
V-in 15 minutes
M-you would be suprised at what you can do in 15 minutes
V-i might be
M-you wanna know something
V-what
M-your actually really cute i might even say fine as hell
---he flashes a million dollar smile
V-thank you
M-i'm suprised Tre sent you
V-why so suprised
M-they usually send ugly guys
V-why's that
M-probably because they don't have a chance in hell of getting to close to me and Emmy
V-well
M-and your miles away from being ugly
V-thank you
M-i haven't seen you before
V-that doesn't mean i haven't seen you
M-oh is that right where have you seen me
V-at the club, at Maxie's and at lil' Chris's birthday party and i saw you at the hospital
M-maybe i wasn't paying close attention
V-don't sweat it i get paid not to be seen
M-has anyone every told you that you look just like Morris Chesnut
V-actually they have and very often
M-just to let you know something i think Morris Chesnut is extremely sexy
V-i'm flatterd
M-i know
V-has anyone ever told you that you and your sister look like spitting images of Alicia Keys
M-yea but she's a little pale and we're more petite
V-we better get a move on our 15 minutes are up
M-and it was just getting interesting
V-i could pick you up Saturday
M-sounds good to me
---they exchange phone numbers and head to Mani's class
V-do you need me to pick you up
M-no but thanks for offering
V-no problem cutie
---Mani went to class and Vic went his own way. All day the only thing on Mani's mind was Vic. She couldn't erase his handsome face from her mind.She was falling head over heels and they haven't even been on a date yet

---later that night Mani calls Vic
M-hey Vic
V-oh what's up Mani
M-are you busy cause i could just call you back
V-no i'm not busy what's on your mind
M-the honest answer
V-i would like the honest answer
M-your on my mind and i don't know why. You've been on my mind all day and i hardly even know you.
V-wow i'm suprised
M-why
V-cause i've never had a chick like you interested in me
M-what's "a chick like you "suppose to mean
V-nothin bad but all the chicks i've ever talked to have been easy, not easy like i could get them in bed but easy to spit game to, You know what i mean
M-yea
V-so what did oyu want to talk about
M-oh meet me at my house Saturday at 8:00 and where your basketball clothes
V-why
M-cause i said so
V-yes ma'am
M-see ya in the morning
V-okay do you want me to bring breakfast
M-no i'm cool
V-okay see ya then

Saturday Morning
---Vic rings the doorbell and Emory answers the door
E-boy do you know what time it is, it's 8:00
V-but you told me to come at 8:00
E-oh Mani told you i'm Emmy
V-oh my bad
---Mani come to the door in basketball shorts and a tank top
M-ready
V-yea
M-see ya later Emmy
---in the car on the way to the gym
M-Vic do you have a girlfrind
V-no
M-anyone that you're involved with
V-nope
M-any childern
V-oh no i'm to young to have children i'm only 23
---they get to the gym and play a couple of games basketball

December 1'st

---Tre wasn't feeling to well so Shawna wanted him to stay in the house but he had to go do something and lucky for him Shawna wasn't home. On his way back from making a drop he didn't see Shawna's car so that meant she wasn't home from school yet
Tre-thank you Lord she isn't home
---he walks inside and sees Shawna at the table eating
S-hey baby where you been
Tre-um i was at JJ's house
S-that's funny i been at JJ's for the past hour and i didn't even see you
Tre-you was out doing something you wasn't suppose to
Tre-how you know that
S-cause i know you
Tre-i'll be fine
S-okay Trevon
J-why you home from sxhool so early
S-because my last class was cancelled
Tre-oh
S-my girl from school is coming over just to let you know
---Tre eats some of her food
S-get out of my food
Tre-you know sharing is caring
S-i don't feel like caring for you
Tre-i'm hurt
---i'm going to take a shower and don't touch my food
Tre-yea okay
---as soon as she was up the stairs he grabbed her plate and went to watch the game.
10 minutes later the doorbell rings
Tre-who is it
T-its' Tasha
---he opens up
Tre-hey how you doin
T-i'm fine
---and that she was she was almost as fine as Shawna
Tre-have a seat Shsawna will be right out
T-thanks and you must be Tre
Tre-live and in the flesh
T-i've heard some things about you
Tre-all good i hope
T-yea when Shawna said you were cute i didn't expect you to be this cute
Tre-she called me cute
T-yea are you mixed cause you look like it
Tre-yea my dad's Cuban
T-do you know Spanish
Tre-a little
---Shawna comes from upstairs and hits Tre in the back of the head
Tre-what was that for
S-why did you eat my food didn't i say don't touch it
Tre-it was just callin me though
S-ha ha keep playin
Tre-what's up with you tellin everybody i'm cute. Babies are cute i am GQ fine
S-boy please
Tre-what you tryin to say you don't think i'm fine
---Tasha is watching them go at it
S-that's exactly what i'm saying
Tre-then why you with me
S-good question i' gonna have to figure that one out, come on girl
---they go downstairs to the basement and Tre hears them whispering
T-girl he if fine
S-i know
T-girl don't mess that up
S-why
T-cause i might have to get him quick
S-girl please
---after about two hours the girls came back upstairs laughing
T-nice to meet you Tre
Tre-you too Tasha
---she leaves and Shawna plops down on the couch with Tre
Tre-damn baby she's almost as fine as you
S-she's pretty but she's nasty
Tre-what you mean
S-she has did it to everyone and she has had just about every STD you can name
Tre-eww that's nasty as hell
S-i know watch her twat is just gonna fall off one day
(meaning of twat: private part)
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 11:58 pm    Post subject:

lmao....she said its gon fall off HAHAHA
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:34 am    Post subject:

Decmber 24
---today the Christmas and Tionne's Birthday party is at the club
Vic and Mani are in playing basketball at the gym
V-damn girl i didn't know you played this good
M-most people don't they think i'm to girly girly to play ball
---they finish their game and go back to Vic's apartment
M-you have a nice place
V-thank you it's pretty plain to me
M-it's the typical bachelor pad
V-that hurt
M-how many rooms do you have
V-three
M-one must be a guest room
V-yea and the other is my office area
M-do you have a lot of geust
V-some
M-are any of them female if you don't mind me asking
V-i don't and no my boys coem crash here when they girls are you know PMSing
M-guess what
V-what
M-you're gonna be my date to Tee's party tonight any objections
V-none here
M-i thought so
---she flashes him one of her pretty smiles
V-i'm gonna go take a shower if you don't mind
M-i'm taking one too
V-you don't have any clothes
M-yes i do i brought the outfit i'm wearing tonight i'll just need one of your t-shirts if you don't mind
V-i don't and the bathroom is the first door on the right and there are towels in there
M-thanks
---he goes into his room and gets in the shower while Mani is in the Living room thinking
M-should i do it, i mean i really like him adn he's so damn sexy, what the hell what could go wrong
---she walks into his room and stops at the closed bathroom door
(thinking) M-if your gonna do it just d it
---she walks in the bathroom and pulls back the shower doors. The sight of Vic standing there was breath taking
M-want some company
V-um
M-i think you do
V-i think you're right
M-i'm always right
---as they're taking their shower Mani asks
M-do you have some shampoo and conditioner
V-right behind you
---she gets it and when she turns around he kisses her out of nowhere.Mani wraps her hands around Vic's neck
V-mani we can't do this
M-why
V-cause i don't want to take advantage of you
M-your not trust me
V-haven't you ever heard no means no , no matter what the circumstances are
M-i guess your right i know we both aren't ready for this
V-but it feels so right
M-it does but deep down ..... in out hearts we no it's to soon
---they get out of the shower and Mani wraps herself in Vic's robe.
M-i need a t-shirt
V-bottom drawer
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:46 am    Post subject:

dang that was good.. i kno they prolly gon hook up...add on soon
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 1:13 am    Post subject:

---they get dressed in pajamas and go into the living room to watch t.v.
V-you know what you're fiesty where did you learn that from
M-my mom's the same way
---when she said "mom" he haad a sad and confused look on his face
M-where's your mom
V- six feet under
M-how
V-she o.d. on heroin when i was 13
M-that's messed up
V-she never really did anything for me in the first place , my aunt raised me but she died last year
M-sorry to hear that
V-don't be it was her time to go
M-do you have any brothers or sisters
V-nope i'm the only one
M-well i'm all you need
V-is that right
M-of course
V-so whose suppose to be performing tonight
M-Cassidy him and JJ go way back
V-i bet the party is gonna be hot
M-yea it is but we have to get there kinda early
V-no peoblem cutie
M-i'm going to get my beauty rest
V-yea me to
---she walks back to the guest room and Vic follows her and she looks at him like he's crazy
M-where are you going
V-to sleep
M-your room is down the hallway
V-fine be like that
M-i will , sweet dreams
V-yea sweet dreams
---she laughs and closes the door

---!5 minutes into her nap she couldn't fall asleep because she was thinking of Vic. Was he thinking about her. She got up and tip-toed to his door which was cracked open.He was lying there in his boxers. She was thinking he looked so damn sexy.She softly tapped on his door
V-come in
M-sorry to bother you i couldn't sleep
V-me either
M-do you mind if i lay with you
V-no hop on in
---she got hopped on the bed and curled up next to Vic
M-you smell good
V-thank you
M-you smell like my papa
V-really
M-yea i like it
---they both fell asleep and at 9:00 Imani got up adn got her clothes ready for the night.
M-Vic wake up we gotta get ready we're gonna be late
V-okay i'm up
M-go wash up
V-i don't even know what i'm gonna wear
M-well since you're my date i thought we should match so i picked out your clothes for you
V-thanks
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:39 am    Post subject:

V-oh i forgot to get a gift for Tionne
M-don't worry i got you covered it's in my bag
V-thanks
---they get dressed and go to the club which is jammed packed.M-go around back and park VIP.he does and they walk in the club and go directly to the office
M-where are they
V-maybe in VIP
---they walk in the VIP room adn are greeted by everyone
M-hello everyone the princess has arrived
E-anout damn time where have you been
M-minding my own business you should try it
E-real funny
---after a wahile they decide to open gifts.she opens Vic's gift first
T-you got me a gift certificate to the spa how nice i need to relaw after dealing with this person over here
JJ-hey stop talking about me
---she finishes opening up her gifts
T-now i would like to do something non-traditional i would like to give a present to all of you but especially for JJ
S-see that's what i'm talking about
T-you ready
All-yea
T-i would like to give you all a baby
---they have a blank lok on their faces
T-i'm pregnant
E-Tee shut up you shouldn't play like that
T-i'mserious that's why i've been gaining all this weight i went to the dctor and everything i'm threee months pregnant and i'm not even showing
---JJ hugs her and kisses her
JJ-so you tellin me i'm gonna be a dad
T-that's exactly what i'm telling you
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:19 pm    Post subject:

yay
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 8:12 pm    Post subject:

T-but you can't tell anyone i want it to be a suprise at the wedding
E-i can''t keep a secret from my mom
T-you better try
JJ-time to celebrate drinks on the house for everyone
T-i want
JJ-you want nothin you can't drink while your pergnant you want my baby to come out deformed
T-oh please
JJ-i said what i had to say and i expect you to follow my advice
---he is being congratulated
T-Shawnee go get me a rum and coke
S-you sure
T-yea hurry up
---she gets up and goes to the mini bar
JJ_Shawnee what are you doin
S-i'm getting a drink
JJ-no you not i heard yall plottin and schemeing over there
T-baby it's just one drink
JJ-fine if my baby comes out messed up i'm taking you to court
T-fine you win
JJ-i knew i would baby let's go dance
---they party the night away and g home to get some rest

---they day before the wedding December
Tionne and the girls are at the nail shop getting there nails done
T-i can't believe i'm getting married
M-me either i always thought you were gonna grow old and alone , not with my knucklehead cousin
S-i can't wait to see the look on everyone's faces when you tell them your're having a baby
T-i'm scared what if i'm a bad mother and a bad wife
E-you'll be fine if you were able to put of with JJ and lil'Chris for this long you'll do fine plus you have us to help you
T-i'm glad i have you all thnaks so much
M-awww sentimental moment
S-i feel a tear coming on
T-my girls
---they hug and share their tears
E-so for that party tonight are there gonna be strippers
M-of course
T-i said i didn't want strippers
S-no always means yes

---JJ,Tre,Vic and Zane are at the barber shop getting their hair cut
V-your last night as a free man
JJ-i know man i'm nervous
Tre-man do you know your're getting married tomorrow
JJ-i really can't believe it
Z-me and marriage don't even mix
JJ-i use to say the same thing but when you meet that one you know it's the right thing to do
Tre-see she got you talkin that soft sh**
JJ-whatever man
Z-since it's your last day as a free man i got a special treat for you tonight
JJ-what is it or should i say who is it
Z-let's just say her name is Sugar
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 7:52 pm    Post subject:

"THE WEDDING DAY"

---TIONNE AND EVERYONE ARE IN THE BACK ROOM GETTING READY
Shawn-i've always wanted a daughter but i got stuck with those two knucklehead
boys
M-momma at my wedding....
Sherri-girl be quiet you not getting married anytime soon
E-you never know with her
M-what you tryin' to say
S-how about i say shut up
Shawn-all of yall shutup
S-look at our girl getting married
T-i'm so scared
M-i'm scared for you watch your not gonna want to go out with us anymore
T-yes i will
Sherri-don't be scared
Shawn-if i was marrying that boy i'd be scared to
Sherri-oh shutup Shawn that's your son
Shawn-don't start with me we're not little anymore and you're not mama so don't tell me what to do
E-now you see where we get it from
M-it's in our genes
T-i'm missing something and i don't know what it is
---there's a knock at the door and Sherri goes to the door
Sherri-who is it
---a familiar voice answers
L-it's lisa Tione's mother
T-my mother!!! let her in
---Sherri opens the door
L-i hope i'm not interrupting anything
Shawn-no come on in
L-thanks i just needed to tell Tionne something
Sherri-come on girls lets give them some privacy
L-it's okay you all can stay
M-good cause i want to hear what she has to say
Sherri-Imani
E-shut up
M-i was just speaking ny mind
T-shh both of you
---it got dead silent and shawna spaeks up
S-go ahead spotlights on you
L-well i want to say that i'm so proud of you. I really am , you are everything i'm not , your smart, funny nice and beautiful
E-you hit the jackpot on the beautiful part
T-emmy be quiet
L-i'm sorry for everything, i never put you first and i....
T-it's okay
L-no it's not
T-believe me it's okay, everybody makes mistakes. It happens , i forgive you.Today is a day for a new beginning for me and its a new beginning for you too

L-thank you so much
E-she said she forgives you not that she'll forget so don't mess this up
Sherri-you are getting out of line
L-it's okay i wanted to give you something
---she hands her a box and Tionne opens it
T-they're beautiful
LL-they were your're grandma's earrings before she passed and she wanted you to have them
S-they look like they cost a grip
Shawn-you ready
T-i think so
L-well i'm gonna go take my seat
Sherri-me too cause i want everyone to see me on the front row
Shawn-chile' please nobody gonna be lookin at you
---the three women leave
S-this is our last moment together as free females
T-shawnee i think it's time for a group hug
---they all hug
T-i'm gonna cry
M-don't mess up your make up
---the church bell rings once signaling the guest that the wedding was about to begin.There's a knock at the door
S-who is it
T-it's me tre, all you sensitive females need to hurry up i don't have all day
M-oh shutup we're coming
T-go ahead
E-you sure
T-yea
---the music starts playing and the bridesmaids are escorted by the groomsmen. Tionne is outside waiting with her grandfather on her arm for her que to come in.
Pop-are you ready
T-yea i'm ready
Pop-now if you fall i'm just gonna leave you there
T-oh be quite Pop
Pop-i'm just kiddin but you do look beautiful
T-thankyou
---the flower girl walks in followed by lil' Chris who is the ring bearer
Pop-your turn you ready
T-here i go
---as she enters the guest stand.She is escorted to her position in front of JJ. The preacher gives his speech and Tionne and JJ say their vows
P-do you Tionne take Jarrell to be you lawfly wedded huband
T-i do
P-and do you Jarrell take Tionne to be your lawfly wedded wife
JJ-i do
P-i now pronounce you man and wife you may kiss your bride
---they share a simple but loving kiss
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PostPosted: Sat May 14, 2005 6:09 pm    Post subject:

awwwz...diz storyz madd gud ...keep up da gud wrk..i wonda wuhz gna happen next..??
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