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76ergirl · Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2002 10:36 pm Post subject: my story.........

tell me if you like it this is my first so don't be mean

allen- hey t what u doing baby (tawanna yellin i'm in the shower)
allen- can i join u
Tawanna- no baby not right now i'm in a hurry
allen comes in the bathroom anyway and peaks in
allen- i see you (peaking n the shower curtain)
tawanna- stop playin boy i told you i'm in a hurry and plus i have to get the kids ready i don't have time for that
allen-please baby how come we don't do this anymore
tawanna- we still do it just not in the shower not get your fine ass in here
allen-that's what i'm talkin out' ( gettin all happy)
allen kissin all ova t and they do their thing after about a hour
they finally get out and tawanna gets the kids ready and irons clothes and all that stuff and allen comes in the room
allen- hey baby do you want to go Alicia Keys' b-day bash 2-night it's gon be tight
tawanna- i don't know chuck is it going to be alot of media there
allen- see why u always trippin about that you're beautiful why you always hiding from cameras
tawanna- see that's why we don't communicate cuz u always throwing that in my face
allen-.............
sum 1 else continue and we'll take turns but only if you guys like it

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

that was good girl. it's somewhere on the lines of realistic. anyways, im am in a hurry fa'real. so, i'll be back. yall keep it going. holla back.

76ergirl · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 2:15 am Post subject: my story.........

does anyone else like it i'll continue if somone reply's

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

you can continue girl. i'll keep on reading it. LOL. anyways, i'll be back later. i wanna read something when i get back. (j/k)

*Bubba Chick03* · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 3:26 am Post subject: my story.........

That waz tight!Keep goin.
HOOOOOLLLLAAAAA

hotgurl76 · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 4:06 am Post subject: my story.........

Fa real gurl. That was off da chain, don't stop now do da damn thang lol!!! ~Holla~

Tricina · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 5:00 am Post subject: my story.........

every body got a story we havent even finish the first 4 stories that someone made up. enough is enough... well you keep doing ya thang im not goana knock ya, but i wish someone would finish a story please.

76ergirl · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 5:59 am Post subject: my story.........

well i'll continue and finish if sum1 would help me out a little

76ergirl · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 6:10 am Post subject: my story.........

here it goes........

allen- well it's cuz i luv u when people see me i want them to see you 2 u feel me? cuz you're a part of me

tawanna- awwww you so sweet you always was good with the words

allen- so r u gon roll wit me

tawanna- yea imma go for you

allen- now give me sum luv(grabs her and kisses her)

tawanna-but what should i wear

allen- anything u still look beautiful

(tawanna grabs a versace dress with the back out kind of like J.Lo's dress but covers more)

allen- ooooooh my baby gon look good 2night

tawanna-as always

allen- i'm wearin my retro sixers jersey wit my sixers hat and my red and white jordans
(they get into their escalade 2 roll to the party) on the way there they have to drop off the kids at ann's house

at ann's house
allen- hey ma
ann-hey baby, hey teedee (tawanna's nickname)
tawanna-hey ma
ann- so u guys going to have sum fun to night
A & T- we hope so
(finally at the party)
allen and tawanna walk in and.......

i'll write more when more people reply cuz i don't procrastinate i am going to finsih this story

daysha iverson · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 6:15 am Post subject: my story.........

a: seriously though t y u dont want to shoe urself infront of cameras?
t: its my bigg ass forehead allen ... i hate it!!!! im a funny lookin hoe wit ur fine ass..........

lol lol lol lol lol sorry bout that people but yall know i dont like that female... someone finish where 76 girl let off... i was juss playin around.... lmmfao

76ergirl · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 6:23 am Post subject: my story.........

everybody stops and looks at tawanna and allen
(tawanna hits allen and says)
tawanna- damn baby we must really look good we got everybody looking at us
allen-i told you u r beautig=ful girl but don't be gettin no big head cuz everybody lookin ( even thoguh she can't help havin a big head

let me stop hatin) anyway
tawanna- wateva let's go get something to drink
allen- u go ahead i go to go to the bathroom
tawanna-okay, can i have a martini light on the alcohol (a tall dark hansom man comes up to tawanna his name is Aaron)
aaron- can i offer to pay for that(tawanna laughs shyly)
tawanna-well u could it's just that..(he stops her and leans in like he was going to kiss her)she pushes him reallyt quick
tawanna-what the hell r u doing i don't know u don't be rollin up on me like that u must not knwo who i am
aaron-damn i didn't mean to get you all hyped up but who r u
(allen is making his way back over to his wifey and sees Aaron standing there talkin to tawanna)
allen-nigga may i ask who the f*** u are talkin to my wife
aaron- oh dog i'm sorry no disrespect man allen i ain't even know trust if i knwe i would not do that dog i'm a big fan
allen-well u betta get your fan happy ass away from my wife
tawanna-baby calm down but he was all up in my face
allen-.......
ya'll please tell me if ya'll like it this part might be a little bit corny but this is my first story

Mandy · Rookie Joined: Oct 2, 2002 Posts: 13 Location: NY

Yo that iz real tight right there.
keep doing tha good work!!!!!

daysha iverson · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 6:52 am Post subject: my story.........

a: dayum... looks like i can't take ur fine ass out no where huh
t: dont even trip allen he didnt know i was with u
a: and y is that? u didnt tell dat niggah u were married t?... wut the fucc u tryin to bagg people y im n da bathroom!!!????
t: allen chill... u know i would neva cheat on u... i was about to tell him and thats when u came out
a: yeah wuteva.... lets have a good time...

juss then alicia keys walks up to allen and forhead... i mean tawanna

ak: hey allen thanx for coming ,pa
(she gives him a peck on the cheek and doesnt even acknowledge tawanna)
a: hey ms keyyyyyyysssss.... look at u!!! dayum gurl
(tawanna gets uncomfortable but doesnt say anything)
ak: thanx u lookin fine ur self... u wanna dance with the birthday girl AI?
a: of course but hol on... this my wifey tawanna
t: (mumbles) hello
ak: hey
(alicia pulls allen to the dance floor and they began to work it out... like tawanna wasn't even there... allen wasn't doing anything on purpose,...he was having a good time... but tawanna was heated at the other side of the room.. watching alicia grind all over her man)

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

Meanwhile, Tawanna is across the room looking at all this. After about 3 minutes of grinding, Allen came over to talk to her.

A-You alright?
T-(with an attitude) Yea, I'm straight.
A-Why you get a attitude every time I ask you something?
T-I don't wanna talk about it Allen.
A-Whatevea. You wanna dance?
T-It's cool with me. (thinking "finally about time you asked me to dance.")
A-Alright, well let's go and show these people how we do it from VA.
T-Well, lets go then.
**All of a sudden, "Hot In Herr Comes On. They dancing like it ain't no tomorrow. Everybody is standing around looking at them.)
Yall tell me if that was bad. I got a little bored so I tried to help out a little bit. Holla back at ya girl.

76ergirl · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 12:59 am Post subject: my story.........

that was pretty good ma i will help out later

76ergirl · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 1:12 am Post subject: my story.........

tawanna whispers
tawanna-why they standing therrre llike they ain't neva seen black people dance before
allen-don't worry about it we look good ma
(after about 3 hours of partying hard and drinks)
tawanna-baby i'm ready to go i'm tired
allen-oh 4 real, daddy wore u out huh?(grabbin her still tryna dance)
tawanna-(lookin all tired)4 real boo i'm ready
allen-aight let me wish alicia a happy b-day and thank her for inviting us
tawanna-okay but hurry up
allen runs ova to alicia pecks her on da cheek and tell her thank u ya pary was hot ma
alicia-oh thanx 4 comin
allen-ight i got to get the wifey home she's a little tired
alicia-i undastand
(allen grabs tawanna and they leave)
they get home and there is for a change nobody there)
allen-whisperin-baby we got the house 2 ourself
tawanna-point(knowin what he wants)
allen-please(he turns her around and softly caresses her body she grabs him and kisses him he kisses back allen grabs her and picks her up and takes her upstairs and puts her down on the bed he slowly takes her clothes off and she slowly takes his clothes off and.........

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

That was real good. It's gettin hot in here.

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 4:37 am Post subject: my story.........

I will continue.........

(We know what happens after that.)

The next morning...

The phone ring...

T-Hello
Tiaura-Hey mama.
T-Hey baby. What yall doing?
Tiaura-Nothing. When you coming to get us?
T-I'll be over there in a few minutes, alright.
Tiaura-Okay. Where daddy?
T-He right here, hold on.
**Hands Allen the phone.**
A-What's up with you girl?
Tiaura-Nothing. What you doing?
A-Sleep. Something that you need to be doing.
Tiaura-I ain't sleepy.
A-Put Duece on the phone.
Tiaura-Okay. (gives Deuce the phone.)
A-What's up
Deuce-Hey daddy. Why you didn't come get me last night?
A-I was sleepy son. Yo' mama on her way to come get yall so yall be ready okay.
Deuce-Okay. Tell her to get me some candy.
A-You don't need no candy this early in the morning.
Deuce-I'm gon ask her anyway.
A-Watch her say no.
(Ann walks in the room and wants to talk to Allen)
Ann-Deuce give me the phone.
Deuce-Daddy, Granny want you
Allen-Okay
Ann-Good morning.
Allen-Hey mama. What you been up to?
Ann-Nothing.
Allen-Oh for real.
Ann-............

I don't know where to go from here, help me out. I'm sorry if I got all sidetracked.

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

yall dat was tight but yall nice like ion know wha. goodness. he takin her too the room afta that?? man naw. i know allen and her ain't that nice. daysha trip me out when she was crackin on da chick 4head now dat was funny.ima write some

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 5:31 am Post subject: my story.........

Well, come on baby girl. Do ya' thizzle. It's all in fun.

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

Ann-o yea , i forgot to tell u about how disobdient them kids were, I tol u to whoop them sometimes.
allen-and i tol u i do show them discipline
ann-look u best watch yo tone.i'm bout ta go get them ready.bye
allen-aight bye.

back at his place

tawanna- bye.
allen-jus bye?
t-yea
a-see there u go wit the attitude!
t-wha about u mr. feel all on alicia keys wit yo woman i meant wife sittin right there!
a- wha?
t- don't wha me nigga!
a-ok u gone say that afta we...last night
t-well i had too much to drink
a- yea ok
t-uh!bye.
(allen shoos her off and mumbles somethin under his breath)
**she speeds over to her mother-in-law's and picks up the children.
t-thanks ann(she sayin it wit attitude)
a-u welcome sweety, wha's wrong?
t-nuttin
a-oh dat hard headed boy gettin on ya nerves again huh?
t-(laughs) yea.
a-it's gone be alright, yall gone work through it
t-yea u right,
(she slowly drives home wonderin if what ann said was true seein as she does give good advice, finally she gets there and allen is in the kitchen cooking pancakes.)
a-made yall some breakfast,
(duece and tiaura smell them burning and say no thank u leaving tawanna standing there looking at her husband.(so passionate,aaawww)

iif no

daysha iverson · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 5:38 am Post subject: my story.........

im feelin the story and wut not but i didnt want allen and tawanna to bone at the end...lol.... i really dont even wanna pictue her big ass forehead knocking him upside the head while they boning !!!!! ....lmmfao..... but please continue..............

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 5:40 am Post subject: my story.........

Daysha, you so crazy.

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

lmmfao!!!

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 6:21 pm Post subject: my story.........

Come Daysha with yo' crazy self. Continue please..........

76ergirl · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 6:27 pm Post subject: my story.........

tawanna-see u always tryin to find a way to make up for your mistakes
allen-it be owrkin don't it
tawanna-yup even if the pancakes are burnt
allen-don't hate u see eyour kids ova there tearin them up don't u u know u want some
(movin the plate around in her face)
tawanna-i don't want them things ummm Traun(tawanna's brother) is coming down here to see how things are going
allen-why that nigga always got to come check up on things like i don't know how to handle mines
tawanna-he just wants to see how his big sis (or little i'm not sure which one) is doing don't trip he'll be down in a couple of days............
sum1 pick up form here sorry if i messed up!!!!!!!!!

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 6:58 pm Post subject: my story.........

A-His big sista been telling him s***.
T-Whatevea. No I haven't. What you dont want him to come?
A-It ain't like that. That's my dawg. He can come on.
T-That's what I thought. (Laughing)
A-(laughing with her). That's okay. We going out and we gon hit every spot in Philly.
T-You ain't finna go corrupt my baby's mind.
Deuce-(Eating pancakes). I thought I was yo' baby mama.
T-You are. I'm talking about my otha baby.
Deuce-Oh
A-What day he supposed to be here?
T-He didn't say for sure. He supposed to call me back and let me know.
A-Oh
T-Why you ask?
A-I wanted to know so I wouldn't have nothing to do....is that a problem?
T-Sort of cause if his Shay (his finace) come, then you gon have the kids cause we going out. Playa.
A-Okay, we'll see.
T-Yea, we'll see.
A-Tiaura, yall, when yall get finished, yall need to go run yall some bath-water.
Tiaura-Okay
(They go upstairs and Tiaura runs her water)
A-Tawanna, find them some clothes and find you some too.
T-Okay. Where we going?
A-To a birthday party.
T-Where at. Who party is it?
A-At Chuck-E-Cheese. EJ having his birthday party.
T-Oh.
(Tiaura comes downstairs and tells that Deuce isn't running his water.)
T-Let me go up her before I have to whoop me some ass (yelling when she says the last part)
A-Im about to clean up the kitchen.
T-(Surprised) What?!?!
A-Whatever........
Yall help me out

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 10:09 pm Post subject: my story.........

Is someone going to pick up??? Don't leave me hanging. LOL

MizDiamonds · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 10:22 pm Post subject: my story.........

I'll help you out in a minute ma...

*~MizD~*

76ergirl · Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 10:57 pm Post subject: my story.........

that was cute imma help out too in a minute

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

In everyone of these stories sumbody has to have drama in it. But itz all different drama, like sumtimes itz w/ women and others itz w/ Ann. And daysha you crazy gurl. I like this story, itz cool.

76ergirl · Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 2:55 am Post subject: my story.........

tawanna-goes upstairs to help tiaura
(deuce finds a condom on the floor from last night)
deuce-mommy look i found a busted balloon
tawanna-boy what u doing with that give it here(she grabs it throws it in the trash)
deuce-but ma it was just a balloon
tawanna-whateva boy get ya ass in the tub
phone rings.....
tawanna-baby could u get that it
allen-got it
allen on the phone it's Traun
allen-hello(in his sexy voice)
traun-wassup chuck can i speak to tawanna
allen-wassup who is this callin hre for my wife
traun-it's traun man where tawanna at
allen-oh my baad ni**a i hear u coming down to check up on big sis when u comin
traun-in a couple of days but is tawanna around
allen-oh my bad u in a hurry she upstairs hold on
allen-TAWANNA PHONE(allen goes upstairs wit the kids)
tawanna-hello
traun-hey teedee
tawanna-wassup when u comin down
traun-look i got something really important to tell u
tawanna-what tra what's on ya mind
traun-it's ma
tawanna-what tra what?
traun-she's dead
tawawanna-scream!!!!!!!!!!!!!! stop playin tra 4 real

............
sum1 else continue.....

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 4:20 am Post subject: my story.........

Can we switch the story up just a little bit....how about her mom is sick and she has gaul stones.

Traun-Mama got gaul stones. She gotta get them removed so I won't be coming this week.
T-(Sounding worried, although she knows it's nothing).For real. I'mma have to come down there. I don't know when I'mma find time though.
Traun-Well, I'll be here so if you don't come, she'll understand.
T-Alright.
Traun-Let me talk to Chuck Teedee.
T-BABY, TELEPHONE
A-OKAY. HERE I COME
Traun-What the deal is nigga?
A-Oh, it ain't nothing dawg. Everythang okay?
Traun-Yea it's straight. Mama just sick that's all.
A-What's wrong with her?
Traun-She got gaul stones; she gotta have surgery Thursday.
A-Oh okay.
Traun-..........

I hope yall don't mind me changing the story. I just didn't like the dead part. I hate reading/talking about death

*Bubba Chick03* · Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 4:31 am Post subject: my story.........

Damn I did not see dat comin!

MAn !!!
A

Comes runnin down tha stairs)TEE WHAT'SWRONGBABYWHAT HAPPENED!
T:It's my mama.......She She....DEAD!Allen MY MAMA GONE!

A:Baby I'm so sorry.(holdin t)
(AI picks up tha phone and tells traun he'll call back lata)

Hope you like it(my first time writtin)OHH and I hope I didn't mess it up for u guys.Peace out~*

*Bubba Chick03* · Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 4:34 am Post subject: my story.........

OHHHHHHHHHHHH my bad jus ignore my part.

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

I'll finish readin the rest tommorrow cause I'm tired but ya'll had me crackin up though!
Keep goin cause ya'll are doin a good job!

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

thanks aigirl i try. ha ha ....j/k

Ivy'sSk8terChik · Starter Joined: Sep 28, 2002 Posts: 159 Location: My Crib

This story is crazy. Y'all got me rollin about Deuce finding stuff.LOL

hotgurl76 · Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2002 12:49 am Post subject: my story.........

I ain't get the condom part. Y would AI and Tawanna use a condom if they married? Is it becuz he been fuckin otha women and she scared he got somethin lol. I mean break it down fa me cuz imma lil slow.

~HOLLA~

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2002 4:07 am Post subject: my story.........

well u can still get disesases marries or not and plus married people used condoms they don't want to get pregnant everytime they use a condom

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2002 4:09 am Post subject: my story.........

sorry i meant they don't want to get pregnant everytime they have sex

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

quote:
Originally posted by 76ergirl:
well u can still get disesases marries or not and plus married people used condoms they don't want to get pregnant everytime they use a condom

HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!! Yea, I dont want to get pregnant ever time I use a condom. LOL LOL. I'm sorry but that s*** was mad funny to me. And that other chick was still talkin bout her moma bein dead after they switched the story, LOL LOl. LMAO! Sorry (LOL) please continue.

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2002 4:16 am Post subject: my story.........

Traun-tell T imma holla at ha lata
allen-aight 1
traun-1
allen-why you look so worried she gone be ok
tawanna- i know but momma neva benn sick before
allen-holding her: don't worry ma she gon be aight
tawanna-oh s*** the bath water
(tawanna runs upstiars to cut off the water) to find Deuce and Tiaura all covered in bubbles all over tha floor)
tawanna-Tiaura why u ain't turn off the water
tiaura-sorry ma my cartoons was on
deuce- so girl u could have turned the ater off for mommy(hits tiaura and runs)
tawanna- i know one thing ya'll betta get this water and bubbles off my floor or ya'll aint' going to no chuckee cheese
tiaura and deuce together-OKAY
I really don't know where to go from here sum1 help out

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2002 6:06 am Post subject: my story.........

After 5 minutes, they still don't get them up. Tawanna is running her some bath water and she tells Allen to go and check on the kids. They still haven't got the water and bubbles up, so Allen does. Take it from there.

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

I'm about to try because this looks fun but imma tell ya'll now that I'm wack at writing stories

t-Baby get these kids before I hurt them
a-aight I got em
t-thanks
a-(in the bathroom) hey ya'll finna pick this stuff up
duece-okay daddy
tiaura-are we still goin to chucky e cheeses?
a-not if you don't pick this up
duece-shutup with nosy tail
a-duece watch yo mouth
t-allen baby I need yo help
a-ya'll pick up this mess before I get back
duece and tiaura=okay
a-huh t?
t-can you rub my back because it's sore
a-(laughing)you must want a replay of last night
t-(laughing)yeah
a-too bad
a-I'm jus playin but the kids are here
t-lock the door
a-you triflin but wait a minute
a-Tiaura and Duece ya'll clothes are in the room
Allen locks the door and goes into the bathroom to get undressed
t-(laughing)
a-what's so funny?
t-your ashy little legs
a-(crackin up)
t-what's so funny to you?
a- how big yo forehead is!! I'm jus playin wit you girl
t-o but you want this big forehead don't u?
a-yup
t-hurry up for the water gets cold
a-i'm comin
t-i know you will be
a-shutup
Somebody can take it from here!

tbrown24 · Sixth Man Joined: Jul 8, 2002 Posts: 58 Location: work

AI: Oh yall don't want none of daddy's food, that's alright!
T: Baby I'm eating, they ate at your mom's house (saying that so she wouldn't hurt his feelings)
AI: Ok, more for us!
T: So baby what are you doing today?
AI: Nothing much, the homies wanted to go shoot some hoops and hang out
T: How long is that gonna take:
AI: I don't know why, you wanted to do something today?
T: No, I like sitting at home
AI: You say that like we don't do anything together
T: I know but....

Just a little something, might be corny somebody help me out!

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2002 2:11 am Post subject: my story.........

I got lost after AIGurl3(sp?) part. Can yall please help me!!!!!!

76ergirl · Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2002 2:19 am Post subject: my story.........

i'm kind of lost to and this is my story someone please help!!!!!

yungsta2G5 · All-Star Joined: Jun 7, 2002 Posts: 776

I think TBrown24 started at the part where he was fixin those pancakes.

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2002 3:24 am Post subject: my story.........

They do they thang or whatever.

*After that.........**

A-Tiaura, are yall ready?
Ti-Yea deaddy. But hold on.
A-For what?
Ti-Cause Scooby Doo is on and I don't wanna miss it.
Deuce-Me either
A-Well, me and ya mama will go to Chuck E Cheese by our self and we gon leave yall here.
Ti and Duece (together)-No daddy!!
Deuce-I'm finna tell mama on you.
A-I don't care. I'm grown. She can't do nothing to me.
Deuce-Yea she can.
A-Like what?
Deuce-I don't know.
**He runs in the room where Tawanna is putting on her shoes.**
Deuce-Mama, daddy won't let me watch cartoons.
T-Well, baby, we gotta go though.
Deuce-But, I don't wanna leave yet.
T-Why not?
Deuce-I wanna finish watching cartoons.
T-Well, come on let's go to Chuck E Cheese and we will watch it when we get home. OKay?
Deuce-Alright (mad, pouting.)
T-Excuse me. Are you pouting?
(Deuce just looks at her.)
T-Ummm, I don't hear you. I said are you pouting?
Deuce-No.
T-That's what I thought. Now go put on ya shoes and ya jacket so we can go.
(He leaves)
Meanwhile, Allen goes back in the room with Tawanna and they talking.....pick it up

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

quote:
Originally posted by tbrown24:
AI: Oh yall don't want none of daddy's food, that's alright!
T: Baby I'm eating, they ate at your mom's house (saying that so she wouldn't hurt his feelings)
AI: Ok, more for us!
T: So baby what are you doing today?
AI: Nothing much, the homies wanted to go shoot some hoops and hang out
T: How long is that gonna take:
AI: I don't know why, you wanted to do something today?
T: No, I like sitting at home
AI: You say that like we don't do anything together
T: I know but....

Just a little something, might be corny somebody help me out!

Do yall know that there are so really really slow people in this world. Didn't yall pass this part where he/she picked up ages ago. I burst out laughin, Sorry again, please proceed. HaHa!

*Bubba Chick03* · Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2002 5:44 am Post subject: my story.........

LMMFAO!!But I can't talk but at least I realized my mistake.

gurl u is wild!

answer_ai · Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2002 1:58 am Post subject: my story.........

you all have done very well with the stories..i liked all of them...keep up the good work..take care and much luv ang god bless you all...all the stories were off the hook..peace, answer_ai

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2002 3:06 am Post subject: my story.........

quote:
Originally posted by prettypuertorican:
Do yall know that there are so really really slow people in this world. Didn't yall pass this part where he/she picked up ages ago. I burst out laughin, Sorry again, please proceed. HaHa!

Girl you is too crazy. LMBAO!!!!!

76ergirl · Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2002 3:37 am Post subject: my story.........

can sum1 start where it left off at cuz i don't know where to go from there HELP!!!!!!!!!

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 1:14 am Post subject: my story.........

I guess I'll start from there....

*they in the room talking.**

a-baby, after all what happened this summer, where do we go from here?
t-what you mean where we go from here?
a-i mean, are you willing to work ya problems out with me or you gon leave? i need to know.
t-baby, what you think? what's my name. i am gon be with you cause you my man and i'm gon be willing to work out whatever problems we have. you feel me?
a-i got you.
t-okay then. don't ask me nothing like that agian. you already know how i feel. (they hug and kiss)
a-well, come on. we gotta go take these kids to this party.
t-you right. i don't wanna hear they mouth.
(they roll out.)
**meanwhile at the party.........allen is talking to eric and the other players. tawanna and eric's wife are talking....
somebody else take it.

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 1:16 am Post subject: my story.........

**they are gossiping like all women do. you know the deal.**

Ta'Shanda · Starter Joined: Jun 18, 2002 Posts: 445 Location: Chicago

(Tawanna and Eric wife move to a different table to sit and talk)
ew- Girl let me tell you what I heard?
t- Girl what?
(they lookin serious and whispering)
ew- You know Shay suppose to be pregnant right.
t- which Shey
ew- the one that go with al friend.
t- you lyin
ew- no I'm not
t- how you find out?
ew- her sister told me.
t- Why she aint tell nobody?
ew- cause she dont know if its his baby cause you know she been fuckin A.J.
t- Girl who is A.J.
ew- Some boy that live in they buiding Al and dem know him.
t- she aint been fuckin nobody in the same buildin she live in has she.
ew- put my right hand up to God. Dont tell nobody though.
t- I ain't
ew- Dont tell allen!
t- I'm not! But guess what?
ew- what girl?
t- You know when Shey had that accident in Maine car. She was with some light skinned dude.
ew- he light-skinned wit a afro.
t- yea he be in that green store all the time.
ew- Thats A.J!
t- girl sh. damn he fine as hell. almost look betta than my baby. now I see why she was fuckin him.
(they start laughin)
ew- and her sister also told me that she been comin over her house all the time while she be at work and you know her hubby be at home.
t- they prolly be doin somethin.
ew- thats what I told her.
t- I know I better keep my eye on allen at all times when she comes around.
ew- girl you crazy.
t- I think I'm go call her when I get home.
ew- enough about her. Let's talk about you and my boy al.
(they continue to talk)
My bad if I messed the story up but I was just typin anyway you can ignore me if you dont like it.

[ October 25, 2002: Message edited by: Ta'Shanda ]

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

lmfao!!!!^^^^^i like i like

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 10:37 pm Post subject: my story.........

t-it's all good.
d-(eric's wife name is deshawn)that's good. yall ain't having no problems or nothign like that are you?
t-no. why?
d-cause trina (let's say that's one of allen's teammates' girlfriend) told me that she saw you in express and you was talking to one of your homegirls and you was bitching about him. that's all
t-whatever. when she say she saw me?
d-she told me that she saw you on thursday
t-she lying cause i didn't go nowhere thursday cause deuce had an ear infection.
d-well, that's what she told me. then, she asked me why you always cutting your eyes at her and looking at her funny.
t-(laughing)what you tell her?
d-hell, i told i didn't know s***. i told her to ask you.
t-oh.
d-then, she asked me was you pregnant and i told her not that i know of.
t-damn, this hoe wanna know every damn thang about me don't she?
d-yea she do. so, are you?
t-not that i know of. i dont think i am though. put it like this, there is a good chance that i'm not.
d-don't be like me and have two and be on ya third.
t-oh, trust me, i won't be like you
(they laugh)
d-anyways.

Allen and Eric come over there to see what they talking about

chan · Visitor Joined: Oct 26, 2002 Posts: 4

Eric: what yall talkin about.
allen: talkin about other people.
tawanna:shut up allen.
e:so yall ready to sing happy birthday
a:come on lets do it.
(they get all the children and go around the table)
ew:lets get this party started
(every body begings to sing happy birthday then he blow out the candles and went to the gift he had got)
t:open mine first
(Ej open the gift it was an outfit and some socks)........ then
deuce: open mine.
(ej open it it was a motorcontrol car the p.t curser on but it was blue)
(after he open the rest they had b-day cake and ice cream)
then every on begin to leave
allen: man thinks for inviting us to the party
tawanna:girl I am going to call her whe I get home to.
ew:all right girl by t and d
T-n-D:BYE
THEY GET IN THE CAR IN START TO DRIVE OFF....
:) :D

chan · Visitor Joined: Oct 26, 2002 Posts: 4

tawanna:so did yall have fun
t-n-d:yes
(the rest of the way home it was very quite,Deuce had done faild to sleep and t was on her way out
so when they got home........
I need com help... :confused: :) :o ;) :D :D :D

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Allen-Gossiping I suppose?
Tawanna-Naw not really just want to find a couple of things out.
Allen-Well I don't want to know them.Females,yall trip me out.
T-How?
A-Yall smile up in each others face but when one leave you talkin bout her.
T-Whateva
A-And yall always hatin on each other
T-I'm alot of things but one thing I'm not is a hater. I'm 100% hater proof.
A- Stop liein cuz what did you say when that J.Lo video came on?
T- Nothing
A- Whateva you said I wish I had a body like hers, thatz what oyu said.
T-And thatz not hating, thatz complimenting
A-Man,whateva
T-I aint a man
A-(sayin under his breath) Could'va fooled me
(T gets offended and walks in the bedroom)
A-Why you always gettin mad all the time?
(T aint say nothing)
A-Mane,I don't feel like going through this s*** tonight T
(T still aint saying nothing)
A-Aight then, f*** it.
(Allen watches T.V. till he falls asleep)

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 6:07 am Post subject: my story.........

(T downstairs watching TV. Allen wakes up and goes downstairs to see where she at.)

A-baby, what you still doing up?
T-(she ain't say nothing. she just looked at him crazy)
A-you gotta stop acting like that.
T-actin like what allen?
A-not answering me when i talk to you. that's acting read childish.
T-Childish?

Whatevea.
A-See, there you go again.
T-Look baby, I'm sorry for acting like that. But you acting the same way by replying to whatever I say. You feel me?
A-Yea, I feel ya. So, you gon come to bed or not?
T-In a few minutes. Let me finish watching this movie (she watching Waiting To Exhale)
A-Why do you watch this s***?
T-Cause I like it. Is that a problem?
A-Hell yea.
T-Why?
A-Cause it give you ideas and you already crazy as hell.
T-You made me that way. What kind of ideas?
A-How I make you that way? That buring up clothes and cars and s***. That's what ideas.
T-Cause, you say little s*** to me that I don't like and I hold it all in and then, when I had enough, it explodes. Well, don't cross my line and I won't have to test it.
A-Whatevea.
(He sit down on the couch and watch it with her and she is smoking a black and mild and they are both drinking some Hennessy and Coke)
T-(Yawning) Baby, I'm getting sleepy. Let's go to bed.
A-I thought you'd never ask.
**They go to bed.**

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 8:13 am Post subject: my story.........

they get home and they take the kids in the house and put them to bed. tawanna calls shay.

s-hello
t-hey girl, you busy?
s-nah, why?
t-i just wanted to know.
s-what made you call me? you ain't called in forever.
t-i don't know. i just decided to call and see how my girl was doing. you okay?
s-oh. yea i'm straight, what about you?
t-i'm doing fine. tryna make it. you know how i do.
s-yea, with your bad ass kids of yours.
t-don't be calling my kids bad. (they both laugh)
s-so, how you and allen doing?
t-we doing good. still hanging in there.
s-that's good. that's good.
t-how you and yo man doing?
s-girl, if i had one.
t-

uh huh. don't lie to me.
s-what you talking about?
t-i know you better than that. i know i will never see you without a man, that's what i'm talking about.
s-whatever. well, since you broke it down like that....(the other line beeps) girl hold on.
t-okay.
(she answers it and it is aj and tells her he is coming over.)
s-im back. anyways, me and this dude aj is talking and i'm pregnant.
t-what?!? (sounding surprised even though she knew the deal)
s-yep. but, there's one problem....(she gets cut off by tawanna)
t-what's the problem girl?
s-i don't know whose it is.
t-OMG

! well, wait until it gets here and then you'll find out.
s-aj think he the only one i'm talking to so i dont wanna loose him after i have the baby.
t-well, i don't know what to tell you.

s-well, i'm scared.
t-well, count back the days. if the days when you slept with lil buddy match then it ain't aj's. you know.
s-yea. i think i might do that.
(allen comes in the room.)
a-baby, who you talking to this late?
t-shay.
a-oh.
s-tell ai i said what's up.
t-okay. (tells allen what she said. he says to tell her he said "what the deal is")
s-he so dumb. (they laugh)
t-girl, i'll call you tomorrow. i forgot i gotta get these kids up in the morning and i'm tired.
s-okay. holla.
t-do the do girl.
(they hang up(
a-.............

I need some help

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 1:26 am Post subject: my story.........

haha she smokin black and mild u real funny!!!!
ne way-
they wake up the next morning and.....
tawanna-feels a little sick she goes to the bathroom and throws up
allen- u alright baby
tawanna-(rubbin her stomach) i guess so
allen-u sure u dont' look all that good
tawanna-a hang over that's all
allen- u sure u didnt drink that much last night
tawanna-what r u gettin at
allen-baby r u pregnant
tawanna-(runs to the bathroom and throws up again)why would u say somethin like that............

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 2:53 am Post subject: my story.........

a-cause you throwing up and s***. and, you my wife and we got two kids. i should know how to tell this stuff by now.
t-well, i coulda had too much last night.
a-don't fake the funk baby. lay down, i'll take the kids to school. you need some rest.
t-i'll do it. and, don't you have to leave in about an hour? (allen has to leave for a game in LA)
a-yea. i'll be back. you need to lay down though.
(tiaura comes in the room so that tawanna can do her hair)
ti-mama what's wrong?
t-nothing. my stomach hurting. but, give me the comb and the brush so i can comb your hair.
ti-okay. who gon take us to school?
t-ya daddy.
ti-oh
a-well, yall need to hurry up so i can be back and be on time to this gym.
ti-okay.
(allen leaves and takes them to school, meanwhile tawanna is at home sick as a dog...........)

chan · Visitor Joined: Oct 26, 2002 Posts: 4

she clept throwing up and every thing so when allen got back he went in the room to find her in the bathroom throwing up.he asked her
Allen:Are you O.k.
tawanna yea i'm fine as she wipe her mouth
a:i'm fin to call ma so she come and watch you
ta:no i'll be all right as she be gians to throw up a gian
allen ran to the phone and call Mrs.Ann
Ann:hello
allen: ma can you come over and watch tawanna she got in hing over and I got to getready to go

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 6:14 am Post subject: my story.........

ann-what all yall have to drink last night?
a-some hen-dawg and some coke why?
ann-she ain't got no hang over. she can take way harder s*** than that.
a-how you know?
ann-i'm ya mama. i been to yall house when she was there and you be gone and she'll wan't something to drink and she'll come downstairs and get the hard s***.
a-oh. it's like that, huh?
ann-yea. you know yo' wife. you know how she do. now don't you? you know she a straight up G when it comes to drinking and hanging with the big dawgs.
a-that, she is. well ma, i'll holla at you lata. i gotta go and i'm in a hurry now.
ann-okay. love you. call me later on.
a-okay. love you too.
**they hang up**

**ann goes over to they house and tawanna is laying down on the couch watching tv**

ann-hey girlfriend. what's up?
t-(sounding sick) hey. nothing much. doing me. you know.
ann-..........

answer_ai · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 9:08 pm Post subject: my story.........

IM FEELIN THE STORY..YALL ARE DOING GOOD..KEEP IT COMIN..MUCH LUV, ANSWER_AI

AI_LL · Posted: Wed Oct 30, 2002 1:22 am Post subject: my story.........

ooooo I like yall story I wanna add my piece tell me if you don't like it I can take rejection.

Ann: Chuck told me you was sick
T: Yea I think I had to much to drink.
Ann: How much did you drink.
T: I didn't drink a lot but I was smoking dat black wit it
Ann: T you sure it's a hang over.
(Allen's dog Gemini outside barking at something)
T: Wish that damn dog would shut the hell up what you say
Ann: Are you sure it's a hang over
T: Yea I didn't eat anything out of the ordinary
Ann: Drinking and eating not the only things that make you throw up T
T: So you think I'm pregnant too
Ann: Well...
T: Hold that thought
Running to the bathroom.
Ann followed her into the bathroom and rubbed her back as she threw up.
Ann: T you need to go to the doctor all right
T: Yes ma'am
Ann: I'll see if I can get you an appointment for one day this week.
T: All right

After the kids got back home. Ann didn't feel like cooking so she went out to get them something to eat. The phone rang and Deuce answered it.
Deuce: Hello
Allen: Wuz up Lil Man what yall doing
Deuce: Yo wife trippin
Allen giggled at his son
Allen: What she do
Deuce: She yelling at everybody I was goin tell her she aint my moma but she is.
Allen: Why she yell at you
Deuce: Cause I wanted to go swimming
Allen: It was raining wasn't it
Deuce: It still is but I'm goin be wet anyway.
Allen:......

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Wed Oct 30, 2002 7:01 am Post subject: my story.........

I like that......anyways, I'll continue...

A-Well, she don't want you to be sick. So, you just gon have to wait okay?
D-I don't want to.
A-Son, you ain't got a choice.
D-Man, she trippin.
A-Don't say that. (laughing). Where ya sista at?
D-Laying down with mama.
A-Oh. Let me holla at her.
D-Okay. (hands tiaura the phone)
Ti-Hey daddy.
A-What's up. I heard ya mama been yelling at everybody.
Ti-She have. She said she didn't feel good though. And plus, Deuce been being bad.
A-Oh fa'real.
Ti-Yea.
A-Well, yall be good and she won't yell.
Ti-I ain't did nothing though.
A-Well, help ya mama take care of ya brother cause she don't feel good.
Ti-Okay.
A-Let me holla at ya mama before I go to sleep.
(Tiaura hands Tawanna the phone)
T-Hello. (sounding sick)
A-Hey baby. What you been up too?
T-Hey. I ain't been up to nothing. Dealing with these bad as kids and you barking ass dog.
A-Damn! You feeling better?
T-Not really. I need to go to the doctor sometime this week Allen.
A-I told you more than once but you ain't listen.
T-We'll talk about it when you get home.
A-Where my mama?
T-She went to get something to eat. Why?
A-I just wanted to know. Oh yea.....I heard ya son wanted to go swimming.
T-Yea, with his crazy ass.
A-(Laughing).
T-I'm for real. He so silly, and on top of all that, it was raining.
A-He told me.
T-He was mad at me for about 30 minutes.
A-Well, he is my son you know.
T-Yea, I can see that.....
A-Baby, I'm sleepy. I just called to see what yall was up to. We going to the mall tomorrow morning after practice. I'll get yall something.
T-Okay.
A-Love you. Hope you feel better.
T-Love you too. I hope I do too.
A-Ay, let me holla at my kids.
T-Okay. (hands Deuce the phone first)
A-I'm about to go, but you act right. If you don't, I'm gon put something on yo ass when I get home.
D-Okay.
A-I love you. Let me speak to Tiaura
D-I love you daddy. (hands tiaura the phone)
A-I'm about to go to sleep, so I'mma tell you like I told ya brother, be good. If you don't, when I get home, I'mma put something on yo ass. Okay?
Ti-Okay.
A-Love you.
Ti-I love you too daddy.
**After that, they hang up, and Tawanna gets a phone call from her brother while she is trying to rest. She is very mad

daysha iverson · Posted: Wed Oct 30, 2002 7:36 am Post subject: my story.........

tawanna gets back from the doctor with tears flowing down her cheeks. she tries to wipe them away before she drives in the drive way of her big ass house. she walks in and is glad no one is home... she needed time to collect her thoughts before the kids and allen came back home, but the still silence of quiet made her uneasy so she called shay up.

t : i just came from the doctor
s : dayum it must be bad. you dont sound to happy about it. wuts wrong gurl
t : u know how everybody has been thinking im pregnant?
s : yeah
t : well im not
tawanna said sniffing. she had began to cry all over again with the thought of wut she was about to tell her friend.
s : im sorry t... did u want another child? u can always have more sweetie
t : its not about having a kid shay
tawanna paused before she hit her friend with the bomb
t : im dieing shay... the doctor says im dieing

[ October 29, 2002: Message edited by: daysha iverson ]

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2002 1:50 am Post subject: my story.........

Daysha, I got a question ma. Why she gotta be dieing? I mean, that's taking it a little too far with the little make-believe thing. That's basically taking away from the story. JMO!! But anyways........

She calls Shay and tells Shay she is pregnant which is the reason why she is crying.

S-Do you not want another child?
T-No. Not really. I don't feel right having some more kids after what happened this summer and all that.
S-Look, don't worry about that. What happened was between you and your husband--nobody else.
T-You right.
S-So, talk to your husband. You should be happy. Now Tiaura and Deuce can have a little brother or sister to play with now.
T-(cheering up). You right. I should be happy. This is another life I'm bringing in this world. I know Allen will be happy.
S-See, I told you.
T-Ooh, here they go now. I'll call you back later on. HOlla.
S-Alright. Bye
(They hang up)
A-What's up baby!
T-Hey.
A-How long you been home?
T-I just got here like 15 minutes ago. Where the kids?
A-They didn't wanna come home. I told them I would pick them up later on tonight, why?
T-I got something VERY important to tell yall.
A-Tell me right now.
T-I can't. I want everybody to know, so I'll tell you when we go over there. Okay.
A-Okay.
T-...............

76ergirl · Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2002 4:26 am Post subject: my story.........

they get to ann's house to get the kids
and tawanna a little nervous and allen can sense her tension so ( standing at ann's door)
allen-you sure u don't want to just tell me first tee
tawanna-yup i want everybody to know
they walk in deuce and tiaura are playing in their playroom ( ann looks all suspicous cuz she know tawanna got something to say..................

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2002 3:35 am Post subject: my story.........

i like that......is anybody going to continue?? holla back

daysha iverson · Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2002 7:22 am Post subject: my story.........

i wrote the story like that cause i thought that it made it a little more interesting ... than her just being pregnant... that was predictable.... it didnt take away from the fun of the make beleive story... because the story is just that... MAKE BELEIVE... however if there is a problem with my post and im making people uncomfortable with these stories than i wont partcipate in them.........
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BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2002 4:13 pm Post subject: my story.........

I understand that, but don't you think her dieing is to the extreme? Anyways, I understand that it is all in make believe (trust me). Continue to post because you add some good stuff. I just thought that part could've been dropped. You are a very good "make believe writer," so do ya thizzle. JMO. Holla back

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

I was thinkin that maybe if she was about to die maybe they would say that the doctors had made a mistake or maybe she was pregnant and went to the bathroom and had a baby in the toilet cause it was a miscarriage or somethin. But ya'll are doin a great job and Daysha you should keep on postin cause your stories be hot too.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Yall done lost me, miscarriages in the toliet, pregant and dying? Uhmm,,,, ughhh,,,

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2002 2:22 am Post subject: my story.........

Okay, I was really lost on the baby in the toilet/miscarriage part. It got all off of what I was talking about. Anyways, I'll continue where 76ergirl left off.....

**tawanna tells everyone the news**

ann-(happy). i told you so.
t-i know. i guess i didn't want to believe it.
ann-well, you gotta face the facts sometimes. (gives tawanna a hug)
a-well, we got another one on the way. that means imma have anotha balla. (laughing)
t-whatevea. (laughing

**after a while, they leave ann's house and get back to their house. while tawanna is cooking, allen is downstairs talking to her and.....**
yall help me out.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

A-I guess we gonna have to start all ova again
T-What you mean?
A- With this baby
T-Oh
A-Stayin up late at night,changin diapers and fillng bottles
T-I know
A-We can do it
T-I know we can we're raisin 2, and they aint that bad
A-Crazy as hell but not bad
(They laugh)
T-I know Deuce gon want to go swimmin in the rain
A-Tiaura wanted pancakes at 9:30pm
T-Deuce waking me up at 2:00 in the morning to ask me to play with him
A-Tiaura throwing up on me in the car
T-Tiaura in the bathroom playing with my make up
A-Deuce lettin the dog drink out the toliet,are you sure we really want to go through that all ova again?
T-We aint really got no choice do we
A-Naw, I guess we don't
t-..........

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

Sorry that I'm late respondin but from what I've heard when women have miscarriages they still have the the babies. I've also heard that when you're in labor it feels like you have to dookie so maybe she thought that she had to use the bathroom or somethin so she just tryed to go to the toilet and the miscarried baby fell in there. I don't know!?

yungsta2G5 · All-Star Joined: Jun 7, 2002 Posts: 776

When a woman has a miscarraige I think she has the baby taken out cuz the baby is already dead. That's what a miscarriage is...when the baby dies inside the woman's stomach before he/she is born.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

It don't really matter itz just a made up story. Don't nuthing have to be scientificly correct. Can someone post sumthing to keep the story moving.

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2002 5:49 am Post subject: my story.........

t-we can deal with it though. i know we can.
a-you right.
t-tell them kids to come eat.
(allen goes up there to tell them to come eat.)

a-so, how do yall feel about having a brother or sister?
ti-i don't know.
t-deuce, what about you?
d-(pouting). mama, i thought i was your baby
t-you are. don't you want another one though?
d-no.
t-why not?
d-cause i don't know.
ti-shut up!
d-you shut up, stupid.
a-yall quit.
d-she told me to shut up first!
ti-well quit saying stupid stuff then.
t-tiaura, what did yo daddy just tell you?
a-don't tell them nothing. i'm about to beat they ass.
t-i guess yall heard that.

i got writer's block......can you help me out. oh, and can we just forget about the whole miscarriage thing cause i'm pretty sure we are all adults and we know about waht can happen in those types of situations. it's just make believe...

holla back

Ta'Shanda · Starter Joined: Jun 18, 2002 Posts: 445 Location: Chicago

a- back to the question. how yall feel about havin another brother or sister?
(tiaura and deuce silent)
a- aint nobody go talk!
(tiaura smacks her lips)
a- I tell you what both yall go up to yo damn rooms and dont come out till yall feel like talkin.
(they both walkin to their rooms mumbling. tawanna sits down beside allen.)
a- wut yall sayin!
t- allen leave em alone.
a- wuz wrong wit them?
t- maybe they dont want anotha brother or sister.
a- You talkin crazy. Shut up. (sayin it wit aa attitude) Yea they want anotha brother or sister
t-(tawanna looks suprised and mad and stands up) Boy I dont know wuz wrong wit you. But I'm a grown ass woman and I'm your wife at that. Do not get me confused with them HOES that you be fuckin. Cause dont no man tell me to shut up, that aint old enough to be my daddy!

And I dont know what else to write. So you all can take it from there.

AI_LL · Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2002 7:53 pm Post subject: my story.........

AI: Mood swings starting already
T: It aint no damn mood swings it's the fucking truth you the one with the mood swings tell my kids to come down here and eat trying to starve them cause they don't wanna talk about a damn baby.
She walked over to the stove
AI looked at her with an attitude
T: Don't look at me like that I'm not the one to be played with tonight I will burn yo ass with this grease.
AI: Do it then.
Walking out of the kitchen.

I'm stuck

azia_brown · Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2002 9:56 pm Post subject: my story.........

T:NO
(ALL OF A SUDDEN HE HEARS NIGGA BRING YO ASS ON I AIN'T GON BE OUT HERE ALL NIGHT)
A:MUMBLES SHE GON KEEP ON
T: WHAT?
ALLEN LEAVES SLAMMING THE FRONT DOOR
AF: ITS ABOUT TIME
(AI GETS IN THE CAR SLAMMING AF'S DOOR)
AF: DON'T SLAM MY DOOR
A: WHAT? HOW LONG YOU BEEN OUT HERE
AF: 7 MINUTES AND 33 SECONDS.
A: 7 MINUTES!
AF: I BLEW THE HORN THEN TOLD TAWANNA TO TELL YOU I WAS OUT HERE .
A: SHE SAID SHE DIN'T HEAR A HORN
AF: MAN DEAL WIT DAT WHEN U GET HOME CUZ YA'LL AIN'T FINNA RUIN MY NIGHT.
(THEY ARRIVE AT THE PARTY AND GET CHECKED BY SECURITY)

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

My bad about the miscarriage thing but ya'll are doin a good job. I don't think that I can make up nothin good enough right now so I'll let somebody else keep it goin.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

(They walk in and before Allen can say anything all these women come running up to him)
W#1-Oh my Goodness,Damn you look even better in person.
W#2-Allen Iverson, I love you
W#3-If that thang you with ain't treatin you right you can always come to me
(Just then security comes and makes Allen and his friend go to VIP)**EVERY CLUB I GO TO AND ALLEN BE THERE SECURITY ALWAYS EXCORTS HIM TO VIP*** (Sorry bout that but on with the story)
AF-Damn nigga them woman was all up on you
A-I seem to have that affect on women
AF-Is it you or your money
A-Good question
(Charli walks up to them)
CB-Hey, I'm glad yall made it
AF-Now you know I wouldn't miss this
CB-What up Allen
A-Nuthing much
CB-Wanna dance?
A-Fo sho
( So they dancing or whateva, Allen ain't know that some of Tawanna's friends was at the party also and you know the deal)
TF1-Is that Allen ova there?
TF2-Allen who?
TF1-T's Allen
TF2-Where he at
TF1-Ova there
(She points at them and they see him and Charli all up on each other)
TF2-Yes it is girl
TF1-I know he all up on Charli like he ain't married
TF2- Ohhh look Allen whispering something in Charli's ear
TF1-Hold up where thay going?
TF2- I don't know, but I do know that Tawanna is going to find out about this
TF1-You think we should really tell her
TF2- Hell yeah,if you were Tawanna wouldn't you wanna know?
TF1- Yea
TF2-Aight then lets go tell her
TF1- You can't just call her
TF2-Hell naw, I want to see what her face is gonig to look like when we tell her
( So they leave, and meanwhile Allen is talkin to Charli in the back)
A-.........

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Mon Nov 04, 2002 2:40 am Post subject: my story.........

a-so, what's been up with you ma?
cb-oh, nothign much. tryna get this album thing off. you know me.
a-fa'real
cb-yep. what's been up with you?
a-nothing much. going out here and busting my ass.
cb-but you doing a good job at it.
(they laugh)
cb-how is everything with the wifey?
a-it's good i guess you can say. we a little rocky right now, but nothing big.
cb-well, i hope yall work out yall problems.
a-i do too.
cb-how about yo bad ass kids?
a-ay.......my kids ain't bad.......they doing real good.
cb-oh fa'real.
cb-well, look, i gotta go and entertain these people. i'll holla at you lata.
a-aiight.
just then, his friends come up to him and allen tells them that he is ready to go.

af1-aiight...i'm about to take this lil shawty home wiht me. you know how i do.
a-you a hoe dawg.
af2-what you think you are?
a-screw both of yall.
(they walk out in the parking lot and as they get in the car, tawanna calls him)

t-hey. what you doing?
a-getting ready to come home why?
t-cause i want you to bring me some chicken.
a-some chicken? t, it's 2 in the morning, where am i gon get some chicken from?
t-i don't know.....somewehre.
a-if it's something open, i stop.
t-okay. well, cya when you get home.
a-aiight. love you.
t-love you too.

they hang up.....
in the car........

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

A-That woman gon make me smack the s*** out of her one day.
(Allen walks up to get the kids and tell them to go eat, he stays in his bedroom)
***PHONE RINGS***
A-Hello
Allen'sFriend-sup nigga
A-Hey dog what you doing?
AF-Nothing,what you doing?
A-Laying on the bed trying to keep myself from smackin T
AF-Oh Boy what done happen?
A-She pregnant
AF-Again?
A-You ain't have to say it like that
AF-Sorry dog, I hope stuff will work out
A-Thanzx
AF-Yo, guess whatz poppin tonight in Philly
A-What
AF-Charli Balitmore having a party at the Gallery
A-And?
AF-And I wanna know do you want to come
A-Nigga I won't invited
AF-She invited me today I bumped into her and she was like come to my party tonight, then she said bring some of your friends
A-Oh
AF-So are you coming or not nigga
A-Yea, but wait I gotta tell T, I know she gon fuss
AF-Damn,I forgot you married
A-It aint like I'm not going, I am its just that I don't feel like hearin her mouth about it
AF-You know Tawanna gone bust you in ya mouth
A-Who gon do what
AF-Nuthing man, I'll come get you at 7 aight
A-What time is it now
AF-6:15
A-Aight then Holla back
AF-Aight
(Allen goes and takes a shower and get all cleaned up and smelling good and lookin all sexy and s***)

Allen-(Walkingg downstairs)Did you hear a car horn?
T-..........

Somebody help me out

answer_ai · Posted: Tue Nov 05, 2002 3:35 am Post subject: my story.........

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

A- Ay, ya'll stop right here
AF1- Why nigga, you hungry?
A- Naw T want somethin
AF1- She must got you on a leash or somethin dog
A-Ain't no woman got me nowhere
AF1-T got you goin up in Chicken Coop though don't nigga?
A-Shutup

(Allen gets home with T's food and he smells kinda like perfume, Allen and Tawanna kiss)

T- What's that smell?
A-What smell?
T-You smell like some kinda perfume
A-I don't know what you talkin about baby
T-Allen what did you do at that party
A-Nothin T, it wasn't that hype so I was gettin ready to come home and you called for some chicken
T-Whatever
(Phone rings and T's friend is on the phone with her loud mouth, Allen leaves the room to let her talk)

T-Hey girl
TF-Yeah girl how you doin?
T-Fine why?
TF- Cause you won't believe what I seen tonight at Charli's party
T-What girl?
TF- Allen was grindin all up on Charli
T-For real?
TF- Yeah girl and then they went back somewhere after he was whisperin in her ear
T-I'll call you later alright?
TF-Okay bye
T-click..............
TF-Dang, it's like that?

(Tawanna goes in the bathroom where Allen is taking a shower)
T-Allen?
A-Yeah?
T-I heard that you was grindin all up on Charli at her party tonight
A-Who told you that?
T-It shouldn't matter who told me,but you need to tell me whether it's true or not.
A-Now what do you think T?
T-I don't know Allen we been really distant for these past couple of days
A-That's because of your attitude and if you wouldn't have fu**ed my cousin we wouldn't have even been mad at each other
T-Allen why you always gotta bring somethin dumb like that up?
A-That ain't dumb T, now you think if I did it with yo cousin, how would you feel?
T-........
A-Huh? I can't hear you T, I can't hear you.
T-Allen I'm goin to bed
A-Any other time you want to cop an attitude but now you don't got nothin to say huh?
T-No Allen I really don't
A-Whatever

(Allen comes in the bedroom after his shower,butt nakid)
Somebody can take it from here but I had to put a little action into the end of this dramatic night.

Rena Iverson · Posted: Tue Nov 05, 2002 6:25 am Post subject: my story.........

you could of left that fuckin cousin out cause she did not do that they was arguin and tawanna had his gay cousin pick her up and allen went lookin for her

Black Honey · Starter Joined: Aug 9, 2002 Posts: 182

Rena, we all don't know what happened that night so you nor anyone else on this messageboard can say without a shadow of a doubt that she wasn't doing anything with his cousin. Plus, I heard his cousin is bisexual.Personally, I don't think they were just arguing but something else happened to set him off.Also, if you read the articles on philly.com , they said the windows of her escalade were smashed. Hence, I doubt after she was arguing with Allen, she was waiting outside for the cousin because Allen probably would have followed her and continued whatever they were arguing about for the neighbors to hear.JMO

MizDiamonds · Posted: Tue Nov 05, 2002 9:18 pm Post subject: my story.........

~*~I’m a continue ya’ll~*~

Tawanna:You know...you really need to put some clothes on.
Allen

looks at her with an blank expression)Why the f*** are you jockin me?Can a nigga live?
Tawanna:How the hell am I stoppin from livin?
Allen:because you keep fuckin ridin me and you've got your damn friends stalkin me and s***..what are you keepin taps on me now.
Tawanna:I'm not keepin a damn thing on you..
You know Allen..its really fuckin funny to me..you claim that I'm the one with the problems and the serious mothafuckin attitude,but you in here right now treatin me like I'm one of those birds that you meet on the damn strrets and on top of that you just actin like a straight bitch right now..
Allen:did you just call me a bitch?
Tawanna:::well Allen,you know what they say..If the damn condom fits..wear it.
Allen:hold up...what the f*** condoms gotta do with this..I thought it was supposed to be if the fuckin shoe fits wear it "B"!
Tawanna:That statement that I just made was designed to be directed to hoes only..That describes what you are!
Allen:Oh so now I'm the hoe...what about you...don't think I don't know any of your dirty ass secrets..
Tawanna:what secrets are you talking about?all I did was ask you if you at the party tonight gringin on some broad and you wanted to cop an attitude...
(Allen pauses)
Allen:Look Tawanna..I don't even want to fight with you..I'm real tired and I just want to go to sleep.
Tawanna.....

******Sorry if I messed it up ya'll******

*~MizD~*

Ta'Shanda · Starter Joined: Jun 18, 2002 Posts: 445 Location: Chicago

T- Care yo ass to sleep then. Talkin bout I fucked yo cousin. Bitch please. You prolly fucked one of my damn cousins.
A- You aint got no damn cousins that I wanna f***. But yo god sister Tammy. I wouldnt mind fuckin her.
T- Oh okay thats cool wit me. I'll call her over here so you can f*** her cause you know she good for fuckin her friends men anway. Matter a fact. I should just call Shay. I heard she like to f*** every body else man too.
A- Who said I aint already fucked her?
T- Boy. Dont say s*** else to me. (Tawanna turnin red and walks out the room)

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

That was hot and Rena this is a story that we're all makin up, so I don't know what happened but that's what I believe happened so I didn't think that it was that serious to get mad about.

I3Balla4Life · Sixth Man Joined: Jul 28, 2002 Posts: 98 Location: TN

Why you y'all gotta make him seem like a hoe, and why he gotta always be at these parties in y'all's stories? He don't got time for that, he practices more than he parties most likely-- this is November, the NBA season.

Anyhoo, that was madd entertaining though, so keep it up.

peace

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Looka here, damn it how many times do people got to say this so some of yall dummies can understand. THIS IS A FUCKIN MADE UP STORY. NO OF THE EVENTS IN THIS STORY HAVE HAPPENED. IT DOESN'T MATTER WHAT THE f*** WE WRITE CUZ, ITZ OUR DAMN STORY AND IF WE SAY TAWANNA IS PREGANT THEN DAMN IT SHE'S PREGNANT, IF WE WANT ALLEN TO GO TO A DAMN PARTY THEN HE'S GOING TO THE DAMN PARTY. I'M GETTING SICK AND TIRED OF PEOPLE ON HERE TALKIN BOUT WHY YALL DO THIS AND WHY YALL DO THAT, BUT YOU STEADY READIN IT. THIS MADE UP STORY DOES NOT HAVE TO GO HOW ALLEN'S REAL LIFE GOES. AS LONG AS THE PEOPLE WRITING THIS ARE HAVING FUN THATZ ALL THAT FUCKING MATTERS. CUZ YOU TALKIN BOUT IT BUT YOU AINT WILLIN TO POST SUMTHING TO CHANGE THE DAMN STORY.

THANK YOU
GOOD NIGHT.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

AND ANOTHER THING, I DON'T GIVE A DAMN IF ITS DECEMBER AND IN THE STORY HE GOT ON A WIFEBEATER AND SNOW BOOTS, ITZ OUR STORY. DAMN, IF YOU DON'T LIKE SUMTHING POST A PART OF THE STORY TO CHANGE IT, DON'T COMPLAIN ABOUT IT. AIGHT?

OKAY YALL I'M THROUGH, YOU CAN CONTINUE WITH THE STORY.

Rena Iverson · Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2002 3:29 am Post subject: my story.........

I wasnt gettin mad i was just sayin lets not disrespect her cause i dont think she fucked his cousin

daysha iverson · Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2002 4:20 am Post subject: my story.........

I AGREE WITH HER ITS A STORY... WHO CARES IF SHE REALLY BONED HIS COUSIN ITS A STORY WE NOT DISRESPECTING HER ANY MORE THAN WE DISRESPECT KOBE N SHAQ OR THE LAKERS WHEN SOME ONE COMES ON HERE TALKING TRASH ABOUT THE LAKERS BEING THE BEST.... IT SHOULDNT BE THIS SERIOUS IF ERRRBODY KNOW WE HAVING FUN... LIKE SHE SAID IF YALL DONT LIKE SOMETHING MAKE A POST THAT CHANGES IT UP A LIL BIT

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2002 4:38 am Post subject: my story.........

after she walks out the room, she goes in one of the guest rooms and lays down. she took her cell phone with her. allen wakes up and sees that she hasn't layed down. then, he goes in the room and tells her to come to bed.

a-(shaking her) get up and get in the bed.
t-(sounding sleepy). don't touch me. i'm fine right here where i am.
a-why you wanna do this to me?
t-(raising up). do you like what chuck.
a-sitting up here having fucking mood swings with me, acting like we still dating and s***,
t-me, having mood swings? first off, you are the one having mood swings like you pmsing. then, you stay in the fucking streets so much, i do feel like we still dating.
a-okay....let's put it this way......we both have mood swings. and i know why you having, but im sorry. you gotta start trusting me.
t-how can i trust you when people are constantly coming up to me, my homegirls calling me telling me you all at parties, grindin all on other females, so what you expect chuck?
a-t, i don't mean no harm by it. you know that. and them same friends that come up to you and tell you all this s***, is the same ones that wanna f*** me.
t-don't try and flip the script.
a-flip the script? you know what im talking about. you know im telling the truth. now who you gon trust: me or them single ass friends of yours?
t-i'mma trust you. you my husband. im supposed to trust you first and believe what you say.
a-okay then. so, why you can't act like it?
t-i don't know....its just that i hear it so much, i can't help but believe it.
a-well, stay away from them then.
t-what?!? them my girls. the ones i been with since school.
a-i ain't saying get rid of all of em. i know that all of em don't run they mouth, but that damn shay and that damn angie run they mouth too much. i bet they the ones who been tellin you this ain' they?
t-how you guess? you are right about them having a big mouth. but hey, i deal with it.
a-well, you dealing with it is allowing them to mess up what we got.
t-i'll tell them keep they asses out my business then.
a-aiight. that's what i like to hear.
t-okay, but what about all ya boys then? what you gon do about them?
a-what's wrong with em?
t-they just as damn bad as shay and angie. they be over here so much.....
a-well, i'll tell them too.
t-aiight then.
a-look, i'm sorry for saying you fucked my cousin cause i think i know you better than that. i know you ain't like that.
t-appology accepted. but, why would you say something like that then if you know that it didn't even go down?
a-cause i was mad.
t-okay. i'm sorry for calling you all them hoes and s*** like that.
a-i knew you didn't mean it. it ain't like you.
t-.....................

Rena Iverson · Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2002 5:26 am Post subject: my story.........

This is really good guys keep it up and pretty puerto rican you need to get me ai phone number ma (naw just kidding)

answer_ai · Posted: Thu Nov 07, 2002 6:47 am Post subject: my story.........

WAY TO GO..YOU ALL ARE DOING GOOD..KEEP IT COMIN..MUCH PROPS AND GOD BLESS..

azia_brown · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 12:39 am Post subject: my story.........

SOMEBODY TAKE IT FROMT HERE CUZ I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE BUT I WANNA WRITE

YA'LL ARE DOIN GOOD AIGHT

[ November 07, 2002: Message edited by: allen_iverson's_mistress ]

Ta'Shanda · Starter Joined: Jun 18, 2002 Posts: 445 Location: Chicago

t-yea, yea, But for real. You didnt f*** Shay right.
a- Why would I wanna f*** that hoe?
t- my guess is because she's a hoe.
a- and fa real thats one hoe I dont want you hangin round cause she go get you hurt
(t starts laughin the telephone rings, t picks it up)
a- I aint playin.
t- Hello
d- Hey girl. Wuz up?
t- nothin. Why?
d- Girl. Well Tommorrow. Us girls were plannin on goin out to a club or somethin. I'm tired of lettin Eric have all the damn fun. So he go take the kids or whatever.
(allen kisses t and tells her to come to bed when she finish talkin on the phone)
t-when you say us girls who you talkin bout.
d- the usual. Shey, me, you, Tammy, and Angie. Who you think.
t- Shey?
d- Yea Shey. We BEEN kickin it wit her.
t- I know. I was just. Nothin. So what yall plan on wearing.
d- Girl, it aint been that long since you been to a club. Somethin that will have all eyes on us. And dont be tryna act shy when a guy come up to ya and dont wear ya weddin ring please.
t- what?
d- Yea What? You heard me. But um What you go tell allen?
t- First off I'm go tell him. I'm goin to catch a movie wit my girls. You go come pick me up around 9 after you pick up Shey and Angie. We go go by Tammy house. I'm go change over there and we are going to be on our way.
d- Girl. I forgot you are the queen when it comes to hidin stuff from ya man.
t- yea well I know. But let me take my ass to sleep fa real.
d- Okay Bye girl. Cause it is kinda late.
t- yea bye.
(they hang up the phone. T goes in the room wit allen, lays down and goes to sleep he kisses her on her forehead)
(the next morning everybody up except T Allen in the room)
a- wake up girl. It's 1 somethin.
t-...............

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 8:54 am Post subject: my story.........

that was good......

t-(still half sleep)..i don't feel good allen. give me ten minutes; i'll get up.
a-well, if you dont feel good, then lay here.
t-uh huh.
(the phone rings...it's deshawna)
d-what's up allen....t there?
a-yea she hear but she still sleep.
d-what she doing still sleep?
a-she said that she didn't feel good....why?
yall had something planned?
d-yea..sort of, but if she starts feeling better, tell her to give me a call.
a-aiight.
d-well, imma let you go. don't forget to tell her what i said okay.
a-i wont. i'll holla at yall
d-aiight. bye.
(they hang up. later, tawanna gets up and still doesn't feel better.)
a-good afternoon........it's good to see you finally up.
t-whatevea nigga. i'm hungry.
a-you a greedy ass
t-shut up.
a-ay, deshawna called you.
t-oh fa'real. what she say?
a-she said call her when you get up.
t-okay.
a-where yall supposed to be going?
t-nowhere that i konw of why?
a-i don't know.....you ask me all the time.
t-

answer_ai · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 11:41 pm Post subject: my story.........

I LIKE THE FLOW..YALL ARE DOING GOOD..GOD BLESS, ANSWER_AI

TOYA · Rookie Joined: Jul 8, 2002 Posts: 22 Location: CHICAGO

LOL YALL IS CRAZY BUT IM HAVING FUN .....KEEP GOING DON'T STOP NOW!!

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 10:48 am Post subject: my story.........

They go downstairs and she makes somethin to eat while he watches.

T- What the hell are you lookin at?
A- I cant look at my wifey damn
T- Whatever nigga. She walked pass him and sits down in the livin room.
They talk while she is eatin then she calls Deshawn up

D- Hello
T- Sup girl, whats the game plan we rollin out or what?
D- I thought we was goin have to cancel when he said you didnt feel good.
T- Nah im cool now so be here at 9 to get me.
D- Ok.
They hung up and her and Allen played out back with the kids. At 8 she went and took a shower. Allen comes in and sits down.
A- Yo
T- What?
A- You still aint told me where yall goin.
T- Im goin to the movies wit the girls is that ok wit you daddy?
A- What girls?
T- Me, D, Angie, Tammy and Shay
A- Shay, what I tell you bout her?
T- Allen she is still our friend dat aint right.
A- When you comin back?
T- 2, 3 at the latest.
A- What movie yall goin to gettin out at 3?
T- Look boy, she gets out wrapped in a towel, we might ride around, get somethin to eat damn when did I get curfew.
She went in the room and into her walk in closet. She picks out a black sexy dress with splits up the side and a openin down the middle like j-ho ( lol my bad) . She put it in her louis vitton bag, along with some black strap up stiletto gucci shoes,and her louis vitton pocketbook ( now yall know she cant dress but im a hook her up for the story) He comes in and she drops the bag and picks up a jean studded outfit.
T- What about this?
A- Dats cool.
She put the jean outfit on and some pointy toe versace boots wit her jewelry then hid the bag outside while Allen wasnt payin attention. She calls Deshawn on the celly to tell her to grab the bag before she blows the horn. Deshawn pulls up, grabs the bag and blows at 9 on the dot and Tawanna kissed the kids goodbye and was walkin out the door.
A- Hey girl.
T- What?
A- Come mere.
She goes to him and he kisses her.
A- Love you
T- Love you too.
He walked her to the door looked to see who was in the car. He spotted Shay and gave her a nasty look.
A- Yo D, dont be gettin my girl in trouble either.
D- Whatever allen ( T gets in the car) I'll keep her out of trouble.
A- Aight see yall.
All- Bye Bubba!
They pull off laughin and T looks in the back.
T- Did you get the bag?
D- Yeah I got it its in the trunk.
T- Good lookin out, I cant wear this s*** out.
Shay- I know.
T- Whatever bitch.
They rode to Tammys house, got dressed then hit the rode to Palmers ( the hottest s*** poppin dat night). They pulled up and parked in VIP then walked pass the line straight into the club while envious bitches hated on. They found a booth and before long niggas was sendin bottles of crissy to the tables which the girls enjoyed.
T- Aight im a lil buzzed im ready to get my party on.
Shay- Lets go.
They hit the dance floor and some was flocked by niggas. Tawanna was gettin her party on wit some light skin boy and she was workin him out

*****Meanwhile******
( back at the crib)
Allen drops the kids off wit his mom and him and his boys meet up to hit none other than the infamous Palmers. The whole time he was plannin to go out so he played it off like he was stayin in the crib. He rolls up in the club and goes to the VIP room. The girls in the club went wild when they seen him but Tawanna and them was so buzzed they wasnt even payin attention. He chilled for a minute, sipped some henny and crissy then got up to see what was poppin. He looked down and seen none other than his wifey shakin her ass all up on some nigga ( he was cute too,lol). At first he was mad then he was like f*** it im a play along.
He watched her as she went back to the table and he made his way down there. She was fixin her makeup when he sat down next to her.
A- Sup girl
She looked stunned
T- Hey ( stutterin) bbbabby, what u doin here?
A- Didnt expect me to see you shakin ya ass wit dat clown ass nigga over there did you?
T- Allen please dont make a scene, it wasnt even like dat.
A- Calm down, im not mad have ya fun wit ya girls and I will see you when you get home ( he kissed her and got up)

She watched him walk away and was wonderin what the hell just happen. They both had fun with there peoples and when she got home he was in the bed wit tiaura and duece next to him. She covered them up and kissed there foreheads then went and slept in the guestroom. That next mornin she awoke to the smell of food cookin and looked at her watch. It was 11:30 and her head was slightly knockin. She got up, brushed her teeth, washed her face and put her hair into a ponytail. She went downstairs and ...................................keep it goin --------------> Holla

Ta'Shanda · Starter Joined: Jun 18, 2002 Posts: 445 Location: Chicago

DAMN ABG3. That was toooooooooo good. I was finna type somthin after that but I'm go let somebody else go. That was too tight. Then the j-ho part. I was like all naw. She snappin. That was great. I love this story. Everbody give yourself a pat on the back.

yungsta2G5 · All-Star Joined: Jun 7, 2002 Posts: 776

Yep...keep it up peeps!

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Yo abg3 that was tight as hell. I was laughin out loud, my sister had to come in my room and check on me. She thought I was goin crazy. That was soo good. Major props go to you.

azia_brown · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 10:34 pm Post subject: my story.........

That was tite and I had to laugh when u said that tawanna couldn't dress, but everybody is doin a good job on these stories.

*Bubba Chick03* · Posted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 12:04 am Post subject: my story.........

this story had me rollin! Keep upp tha good work!

Holla

chan · Visitor Joined: Oct 26, 2002 Posts: 4

and say allen fixen the children something to eat.
deuce:good morning ma
t:good morning baby
(looken all sick)
a: baby are you all right
t: yea my head just heart a lil bite
a:oh, you want something to eat
t:yea just a li'bit she sit down at the table ;)

daysha iverson · Posted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 7:07 am Post subject: my story.........

abg3 that was funny as hell!!!! u had me dieing!!!!

answer_ai · Posted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 8:01 am Post subject: my story.........

im feelin the story..keep it flowing..god bless..answer_ai

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 1:37 am Post subject: my story.........

Yall are doing good. Daysha, when you gon start back posting ma? But, it's good. Holla back and.....please continue! LOL

76ergirl · Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 4:10 am Post subject: my story.........

ABG3,that was real good girl u got skills u should look into journalism or something that was hott!!!!!!!!!

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 4:30 am Post subject: my story.........

Thanks yall, Im a come on wit somethin later on.

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 7:38 am Post subject: my story.........

quote:
Originally posted by I3Balla4Life:
Why you y'all gotta make him seem like a hoe, and why he gotta always be at these parties in y'all's stories? He don't got time for that, he practices more than he parties most likely-- this is November, the NBA season.

Anyhoo, that was madd entertaining though, so keep it up.

peace

If you dont like how we fuckin write our s*** then dont read it. Plain and simple, so what we write about him partyin and all dat did ya dumb ass forget this is a story? Take dat dumb s*** somewhere else and let us do us, dont worry about how we write our s*** ya dig.

22cute · Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 9:03 pm Post subject: my story.........

Gurl taht was too tight work I would post something but I just got writers block. All yall are doin' such a good job I'ma write sumethin when I get some ideas. One!

TOYA · Rookie Joined: Jul 8, 2002 Posts: 22 Location: CHICAGO

why allen gotta cheat on his wifey i don't think that was caused for but if it makes you happy oh well.....

Rena Iverson · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 12:08 am Post subject: my story.........

oh yall need to chill out its a damn story and yall know allen be creepin out sometimes but its a make belive story if you dont like it dont read it

Rena Iverson · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 12:10 am Post subject: my story.........

oh yall need to chill out its a damn story and yall know allen be creepin out sometimes but its a make belive story if you dont like it dont read it

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 1:36 am Post subject: my story.........

He meets up wit Courtney at the Radisson at there usual room 121. SHe lays on the bed and looks at him.
C- so what we gonna do?
A- what you think?
She got up and started a strippin for him, he layed back and watched her. She undressed and climbed on him. They kissed and she unzipped his jeans.
C- i just wanna make you happy boo.
He was in another world while she got her slob on, he didnt even hear his phone ringin off the hook. When he finally heard it he was gettin up but she pulled him back.
C- come on let it ring I need you.
He looked at it and it said wifey.
A- s***
He got up, got hisself together and answered.
A- Whats up ma?
T (cryin) Bubba please come home somethin wrong, im bleedin oh my god bubba please come home I dont know whats wrong.
A- T baby calm down im on my way!
He hung up and zipped his jeans up
A-s***.
He got his stuff together and was walkin out.
C- Allen!
A- Look my wifey need me, I gotta go.
C- What about me?
A- What about you, he left and was flyin home. He pulled in the driveway and left the car runnin. He ran in the house and upstairs to find Tawanna layin in the bed in pain.
A- Come on, im a take you to the hospital.
He picked her up and wrapped her in a blanket. Her clothes and the sheets had blood on them which scared him even more. He got her in the car and took her to Taylor hospital, The admitted her and took her into the emergency room. He was walkin back in fourth in the waitin room, scared to death and feelin bad for alomst creepin on his baby. He was there for two hours before the doctor came in. By then Ann and the rest of his family was there.
Doctor- Im sorry to inform you dat she did indeed have a miscarriage, shes fine alil upset but she will be alright.
A- Can I see her?
D- Sure but only for a minute.
A- Ok
The doctor lead him to her room and he went in. She was balled up in a curl facin the wall. He sat next to her and took her hand.
A- T im so sorry.
T (softly) Why?
A- I should have been home, if I was home this might not have happen.
She started to cry to herself and he wiped her tears.
A- I should have been hom, tee dee (what a ugly nickname, sorry i ruined the moment movin on) im so sorry.
He held her while tellin her he was sorry over and over. He felt really guilty about everything that happen, including losin his seed. He stayed wit her all night and when she was released he took her home. She stayed in the bed for a week, she wouldnt eat, she cried and he hated seein her like dat. He stayed home from practice, and took care of her and the kids until everything got back to normal.

After a week of mopin Tawanna got herself together. She took a shower and got dressed then went downstairs. Allen was playin playstation 2 wit the kids. He looked up and seen her comin downstairs.
A- Yo yall go upstairs and play for a minute.
They ran up and Tawanna sat down.
T- We need to talk
A- I know
.............................keep it goin

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Oh My ABG3, why do you write so good? I like that. Giving you madddd props again!

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

A- T baby I gotta tell you something
T-(softly like her voice giving out) What?
A-Uhmm, T you know I love you
T-And I love you too
A-And we been through our ups and downs
T-I know, Allen what are you getting around too?
A-Baby that night that you lost the baby
(T lookin like she bout to cry)
A- Ay don't cry, uhmm I...
T-Just say it
A-I was up a the Radisson with some broad
( T sits there and just looks at him)
A- I aint..
(Before he can say anything else T smacks him hard as hell)
T-I'm up there in the bedroom bleeding and crying and in pain, and you up in a room with a bitch?
A-I'm sorry
T-Yea I know your sorry
A-Look T can we talk about this?
T- Allen I'm sick and tired of your s***, I've been with you for 11yrs. of my life. I have heard all these damn stories about you and other women, and I didn't want to believe it. I mean not my Allen not my Bubba he wouldn't do that to me, he love me. But you know what, you don't love me cuz if you did you wouldn't do the s*** that you do.
(Allen couldn't say nuthing)
T- Allen, If didn't call you that night would you have slept with her?
A-Probly
( T walkin round the room)
A- I love you T
T-Allen I really don't want to hear that, I gotta get out of here.
( She walks upstairs and gets her keys kisses the kids and tells them she'll be back in a little while)
(Allen grabs her arm, she jerks back lookin like she gon bust him in the mouth)
A-I know I make mistakes and the only thing that I got that night was some head and yea I wanted more. But that hoe don't mean a damn thing to me. You the one I love. Yea I sleep with other women but who do I come home to every night?
T- That don't work n-e more. I'm tired Allen. I'm tired of you and these little hoes you keep sleepin with. I thougt that once we said I Do that everythin will change that maybe you had waken up. I thought maybe you will calm down. You ain't 15 no more you a grown ass man still acting like a little boy. When are you going to grow up?
A-I am grown. I take care of my family I bust my ass almost everynight. I do what I gotta do. Don't tell me I'm little boy. You don't know what I go through.
T- Allen you don't know what I go through. Every morning I wake up at 5:00 cookin a breakfast and gettin Tiaura ready for school. I try to keep them 2 kids from killin each other. I clean I do everything. All you do is run a damn basketball up and down the court.
A- And that's hard work.
T- What I do is hard work. Look until you show me that you grown, i'll be living w/ a friend.
A- T don't go, I'm sorry we can work it out.
T- No, I have to go. I'll come get the kids in the morning.

Somebody keep it rollin

MizDiamonds · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 2:32 am Post subject: my story.........

yo..these posts are hot,I would write something but I cant focus and I'm scared that I might mess it up.

~*~anyway peaceout~*~

~*~MizD~*~

azia_brown · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 2:47 am Post subject: my story.........

That's good so ya'll know ima come and write somehtin as soon as I turn on my thinkin' cap.

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 3:25 am Post subject: my story.........

Thanks Prettypuertorican, yours was tight to. Im bout to write somethin in a minute

MizDiamonds · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 3:31 am Post subject: my story.........

Allen:Tawanna..just give me a chance.
Tawanna:no more..you had too many chances already and I feel like I can't trust you anymore Allen.
Allen:look..atleast give me a few minutes to explain.
Tawanna:is that all you want?
Allen:no I want you to stay but if thats all I can have..thenI'll take it
Tawanna:well good for you..all I'm giving you is 3 minutes.
Allen:6 minutes
Tawanna:4 minutes or I'm walkin out now.
(Allen immediately noticed a sternness in her voice)
Allen:fine..fours good.
(They both go back in the house and sit on one of the couches in the livingroom,then Tawanna sets her wrist stopwatch for exactly 4 minutes...)
Allen:look..(looking into her eyes..but Tawanna quickly turns away)I know that I was wrong for what I did..and we are supposed to be married..we are supposed to be able to work through anything together and we been through deeper s*** than this before...(he is cut off by Tawanna)
Tawanna:yeah..we are married and we been through this SAME s*** over and over again..do my emotions not matter to you..this is the same s*** that caused us to seperate before and you promised me that you wouldn't do it again..come on now..every day you smile and grin in my face and you know that what your doin is wrong and yet you play it off like it's nothin to you and you never once thought to confront me and just be clean about this s***.
Allen:I'm confronting you now...shouldn't I get atleast a little credit for that.
Tawanna:this is not a store and no you don't get any credit because if you had kept you dick in your pants..you wouldn't be going through any of this s*** now...
Allen:Tawanna look..I know that it was stupid and I'm really sorry but all I need is..(Tawanna's watch goes off and she interrupts him once again)
Tawanna

h well..(with a look of dissapointment)your 4 minutes are up..I really gotta go..I'll be back for the kids in the morning so just have them ready.
Allen...

~*~MizD~*~

~*~MizD~*~

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 4:03 am Post subject: my story.........

Allen- So you just goin walk out!
T- What the hell do you want from me Allen, I try to do the best I can to please you, make you happy because you make me happy but I cant take this s*** no more the constant cheatin, hearin from everybody about how you was on this person left with that person how do you think that s*** makes me feel? Huh! Answer me nigga!
He looked at her and he could see the pain and frustration in her face.
A- I know I have told you I wouldnt do dat no more but if you keep pushin me out there then what you expect.
T- Here you go wit this s*** again, I do not make you go f*** another bitch you make ya self go f*** another bitch so dont pull this s*** on me makin me look like my fault ( she poked his forehead wit her finger) its your ass who out here fuckin them sleazy ass hoes and ya dumb ass ( she pokes him again) dont realize they do dat s*** all the time they f*** and suck niggas everyday and you go out there and do lord knows what with them then wanna come home kissin on me well im not takin dis s*** no more Allen.
A- 11 years for nothin, you been wit me through everything then you just goin let us fall apart because of this, I didnt even f*** her!
She pushed the s*** out of him and he almost lost his balance and fell into the table.
T- I didnt make us fall apart, you did, and you said if I didnt call you you was gonna f*** dat nasty bitch.
A- Yo keep ya hands off me, I didnt touch you did I.
T- f*** you she threw the vase at him and he ducked.T came downstairs and they didnt even notice her. She was cryin, holdin her ears.
Tawanna picked up another vase and aimed for him again but he moved ( yall know he quick)and it barley missed Tiaura.
Tiaura screamed- Mmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyy stop it leave daddy alone!
They both turned around and she ran to her.
T- Oh baby, im sorry come on. She picked her up and took her upstairs. She comforted her until she went to sleep then went back downstairs to find Allen goin. She went outside and his bentley was gone.
She went back in the house and just sat for hours cryin in the dark wonderin what she was gonna do. ...................Keep it goin

daysha iverson · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 4:35 am Post subject: my story.........

ABG3 OF COURSE GURL U DID THE DAYUM THANG!!! GO GURL ... AND TO THOSE WHO KEEP TALKING SHYT BOUT THE STORY REMEMBER THAT ITS A DAYUM STORY IF HE CHEAT ON THE BIGG FOREHEAD CHICK THEN OH WELL AND IF SOME ONE WRITES THAT SHE CHEATS WITH HIS COUSIN OH WELL ITS A STORY PEOPLE A STORY ! HOW MANY TIMES MUST WE SAY IT.... DAYUM

TOYA · Rookie Joined: Jul 8, 2002 Posts: 22 Location: CHICAGO

yall need to go publish this s***!!! it's almost like the real thang keep it coming

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 5:02 am Post subject: my story.........

I KNOW, THIS WOULD MAKE A TIGHT ASS BOOK

answer_ai · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 5:26 am Post subject: my story.........

IM FEELIN THE WHOLE STORY..KEEP IT ROLLIN..MUCH LUV AND GOD BLESS,ANSWER_AI..

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 5:32 am Post subject: my story.........

allen-in his bentley thinking"dang u need to get it together you can't keep doin this you have to get it right wit ya wifey you are a grown ass man get it togetha man allen turns around to go back home to find tawanna on the couch cryin
allen-i know this has happened time and time again but i swear on our marriage that this was the last time baby i told u i love u woman i have told u once before u are the one i luv i just f*** other women i don't know why i just do but this is my last time and i didn't even f*** that broad at the motel i will not let it happen again
tawanna-no allen (punches him in the chest)no no no(still sobbing)
allen-(grabs her) baby i know(tawanna is still hittin him while he is tryin to hold her)i know i was wrong but i swear imma be a grown man and handle this it will not happen again i promis on our marriage the next time it happens i wont even explain myself u can just leave
tawanna-...............

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 5:32 am Post subject: my story.........

yall are doing really good. i see she a ghetto mami throwing vases and s***. lol

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 5:34 am Post subject: my story.........

is it me or does this story kind of remind you of baby boy when they was arguin and stuff holla bac at me on this one!!!!!!!!!!!

tawanna3 · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 5:43 am Post subject: my story.........

tawanna-what do you mean if it happens next time?
allen-put it this way it'll never happen again
tawanna-this is your last chance its either me and the kids or all those hoes.
allen-i can't belive you would ask me that question, i would never pick those hoes over my family.
tawanna- i have one question baby, why?
allen-i don't know
tawanna-it just shocks me that you'll mess around with girls who don't even know what your favorite food is but all they know is how much you make
allen-i know i should really think about that
tawanna-we still have a lot to fix
allen-yeah i know
tawanna-you know your still sleepin on the couch
allen-what?
tawanna-don't play
allen-i guess i deserve it

As tawanna gets up allen tries to kiss her but she puts her hand in the way. I didn't really do that well it is my first time. Someone keep it going!

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 6:03 am Post subject: my story.........

that was good. keep on doing ya thizzle. and it does kinda remind you of baby boy and a whole bunch of other movies.

Mz.Iverson3 · Sixth Man Joined: Aug 21, 2002 Posts: 56

that fucking story was tight gurl it had me about to cry.man it touch me.

Mrs. Iverson4eva · Rookie Joined: Oct 14, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: California

A:deuce and ti,go up 2 ur room and play wit ur toys, me and ur mother have 2 talk..
D&Ti

k daddy
(D&T runnin up 2 their room)
A:baby r u all right??im worried about u...almost every morning u wake up and u not fellin well wuts goin on??
T:baby im fine its juss this pregnancy ill be fine..
A:r u sure??
T:im possitive
A: ok (he kisses her on her forehead)
A: u wanna go shoppin 2day??
T: no im juss gonna sit in the house 2day...u can take the kids tho they need sum clothes cuz u knoe its winter..
A:iight
T:Baby....um r u mad about wut happend at the club last night??
A: y would i be??
T:because i lied and said that i was goin 2 the movies and i wasn't..
A:aww gyrl i aint trippin bout that..
T:r u sure??
A:yea
T

k

(the phone ring its sum gyrl name courtney allen picks it up)
A:Hello
C:wassup baby
A:a i told u not 2 call me on this line
C: im sorry baby...so when we gonna hook up??
A: ill meet u at the radisson at 10:30 2night and ill pay 4 the room
C:iight ill c u then..u want me 2 bring n e thing specific???
A:yea ur imagination
C:damn i like the sound of that...
A: yea...il c u 2night
C: iight bye
A:1ne

~at the table~

T:who was that??
A

h that was eric we goin 2 play ball 2night
T:wut tyme??
A:10:30
T:damn thats a little 2 late 2 be playin sum ball dont u think??
A:there u go again
T:wut??
A:accusin me of s***..
T: i didnt say nuthin but thats a little 2 late 2 be palyin ball cuz i dont want u 2 get sick or n e thing..
A: well im not illl be iight..u juss worry about my boy in yo stomach..
T: here we go again..

im sorry if thats bad i juss haven't had that much experience in this..if yall want 2 change it the feel free 2 i wont trip..

76ergirl · Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2002 2:49 am Post subject: my story.........

they wake up the next morning and allen is in the shower gettin ready to leave to go to practice just when tiaura came and knocked on the bathroom door and said
tiaura-daddy how come the people at school make fun of me for you being my daddy(allen steps out of the shower wit his towel around his waist)
allen-oh for real baby girl what they be sayin
tiaura-they always say your daddy's a punk and your daddy is always late to practice and all these other mean things why do they do that daddy i didn't do anything to them
allen-because they are haters their mad because their daddy is not in the NBA and they are not pretty like you that all but don't worry about them just worry about gettin good grades
tiaura-okay daddy (runs out the bathroom to go get dressed)
allen-tawanna why my baby girl talkin bout people gettin in her face about me be late to practice and s*** like that you know i'm about to take them kids out this private school it's supposed to be different but ain't no god damn difference
tawanna-baby i know but if we put them in public it will be even worse
allen-no it wont cuz if it does imma have to bring my shot gun up there...........

SORRY IF I GOT OFF TRACK I WAS BORED YOU CAN LEAVE OFF FROM THE OTHER PERSON IF YOU WANT!!!!!!!

76ergirl · Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2002 12:10 am Post subject: my story.........

okay if it's that bad then sum 1 can continue from the last part i think ABG3 should continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AI_LL · Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2002 12:23 am Post subject: my story.........

T: Boy you aint goin do nothing
A: I fight kids especially if they messing with my baby
Jumping around with his fist up.
A: I'll mess a kid up shoot know who they playing with
T: First you need to hold that towel for it fall and yo kids don't knock on doors. And if you so called goin mess somebody up cause they messing with yo daughter then you need to get yo act together and go to practice and on time and when you go do something
A:What you think I be doing I do practice.
T: You do the same thing you do around here
Allen: I do stuff when I be here
Tawanna: You don't do nothing but eat sleep and play with the damn kids.
Allen: That's what I'm supposed to do
Tawanna: I guess you don't suppose to clean up behind yourself
Allen: I do
Tawanna: How many cups do you leave around this house
Allen: I always clean up after myself
Tawanna: OK next time I see something that you had I'm goin throw it at you
Allen laughed.
She walked out of the room
Tawanna took the kids to school and when she came back he was still there.
T: And you worried about somebody messing with yo baby what time were you suppose to be there
A: Whatever time I get there
T: All right you goin learn
A:..............

BitterSweetMami_3 · Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2002 2:33 am Post subject: my story.........

yall doing real good. keep it going. when i get some time, i will post. i work all the time now, so please keep me laughing.

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

Ya'll are doin a real good job! I'm gonna try to do somethin so if it's wack let me know...

Allen goin back to one of his boy's house...
(his celly rings)
a-wassup?
t-nothin. where you at nigga?
a-at my boy's house why?
t-cause yo momma called talkin about how you needed to come over there cause she had somethin for you
a-aight. i'll holla at her
t-aight. i love you allen
a-i love ya too ma
(They both hang up the phone)
(Allen phones his momma)
ann-hello
a-hey momma
ann-yeah?
a-what did you have for me?
ann-o i had to tell you that your sister's birthday is comin up and i don't know if you remebered or not but you need to get her a present
a-you act like i ain't know that momma is that all?
ann-excuse me, have you forgotten that i'm yo momma?
a-no
ann-aight then, i'll talk to you later
a-aight bye
(They're conversation is done)
(Allen leaves)
t-allen we haven't been spendin no quality time together
a-well i thought that us meetin up at the club was enough
t-don't start with me allen i told you that..
a-you was goin to the movies
t-i was wonderin why you was there too nigga
a-don't try to change the subject, and i hope that you didn't know that nigga
t-no why?
a-that don't make it no better though
t-why we gotta go through this chuck?
a-you askin me that?
t-who else is here
a-don't start gettin smart with me cause you must think i'm a hoe cause all these girls come up on me but i don't be lovin them or nothin i just dance with them. it looked like you wanted to take that nigga home
t-shutup
a-t i'm sick of arguin with you
t-allen i'm tellin you we need to go somewhere together, alone
a-we're alone right here
t-let's go to the massage parlor downtown
a-aight
(They're at the massage parlor)
Chinese woman-you got american money?
a-yeah
cw-gooooood
t-golddiggas and stuff dang
(Pretty girl comes out and takes Alen into a private room)
t-hold up excuse me isn't he supposed to be with me?
cw-no he with her cause she know him real good
t-no she don't
(T goes and follows Allen and massage lady to the room in the back)
a-t what you doin?
t-what is she doin and how do you know her sooo well?
a-i came here before with the team what you thought?
t-well........
(Fine man comes and picks T up off her feet)
(Allen looks at T like she's crazy)

Somebody acn continue....
Hopefully I didn't mess nothin up!

azia_brown · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 5:28 am Post subject: my story.........

Ya'll doin good but I was readin a story on another website and it is very simiar to the party scene except it's eve's party.

[ November 14, 2002: Message edited by: allen_iverson's_mistress ]

FrizzyAI#3lova · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 5:38 am Post subject: my story.........

This my first time writing in this story so I'ma try:

Allen:And where you know this nigga from
Tawanna: (still in his arms)Well I be bored at home when ya'll be gone and I be needin a massage so you know....you aint the only one comin down here
Allen: (lookin her up and down)And you be workin hard huh? cleaning and s***
Tawanna: (suckin her teeth)Whatever be bout your usual since you always over here
(She says as the man takes her in another room,Allen gets his massage by the girl and it feels real good,he tellin her about his usual the kids the wifey and tells her how much he loves Tawanna)
Mishi(the girl):Well how do you really feel
Allen:I love her she's my life I know I don't show it all the time but if Teedee only knew
(As Allen was sayin that Tawanna walked in there with a robe on and heard everything he was sayin so before he finished his sentence she told Mishi she could take it from here she could go take a break)
Tawanna: (started massaging his shoulders sounding like Mishi)If she only knew huh?
Allen:Yeah I mean I've loved Tawanna since I was 16 and it sure as hell won't go away(got that off LOVE & BASKETBALL lol)
Tawanna: (talking like her self massaging his neck)and she feels the same about you
Allen: (noticed the familiar voice and turned his head and laughs)You sneaky yeah
Tawanna: (smiles)I know(sitting his head back down)na let me finish a sister got skills in stored for you
Allen: (laughs)Well get to work
(She starts massaging his neck because that's one of his spots then moves down,and he moanin and groanin then she moves to his lower back and massages that real good then she moves her hands under him and in his towel and massages a certain place his eyes immediately open wide)
(Allen turns around and lifts Tawanna up on his lap and starts kissing her passionately and he feelin all on her with her robe still on)
Tawanna: (Allen kissing her neck)Allen we can't do this here
Allen: (still kissing her neck)Why? :kiss: Not :kiss:
Tawanna: Because :moan: we can't at least not here(getting off his lap)and besides I'ma a good girl
Allen: (looking at his self down there)So you just gon get lil man up and aint gon ride
Tawanna: Very romantic Allen,you so blunt yeah,but don't worry I'ma finish but I'ma make you wait and fein for it
Allen: (smirk and suckin his teeth)Well don't make me wait long because I'm agressive (cheering)be aggressive,be be aggressive
Tawanna: (laughin)You play to much basketball
baby(walking out the door to get dressed)
Allen: (following her to get dressed)Yeah and makin them dollas
(They get dressed and get in the car)
Allen: Teedee what you want to eat
Tawanna: I'm cravin Burger King yeah? for some reason
Allen.........
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Ya'll finish it up

[ November 14, 2002: Message edited by: FrizzyAI#3lova ]

[ November 14, 2002: Message edited by: FrizzyAI#3lova ]

76ergirl · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 11:25 pm Post subject: my story.........

that was real good u and should work together with ABG3 cuz ya'll some good writers ya'll got skills!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

quote:
Originally posted by allen_iverson's_mistress:
Ya'll doin good but I was readin a story on another website and it is very simiar to the party scene except it's eve's party.

[ November 14, 2002: Message edited by: allen_iverson's_mistress ]

I know its on AI Garage, but that message board aint poppin at all. It's basically dead.Oh well, keep goin wit the story I would but my creative jucies aren't flowin right now.

tawanna3 · Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 2:40 am Post subject: my story.........

hey that story was mad good we should finish this one up and start a new one. I'll help on the new one so someone wrap this story up. We should have a story every week.

[ November 15, 2002: Message edited by: tawanna3 ]

76ergirl · Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 4:18 am Post subject: my story.........

fine i will finish it up!!!!!
so they get their food or whatever and they have this conversation on the way home
(finally after the trouble and all the mess they had been through over that couple of weeks tawanna finally just realized how gooda man allen was and they ahd this little discussion and it ended like this)
allen- who can love you like me?
Tawanna-Nobody
allen-Who can sex you like me?
tawanna-Nobody
allen-Who can treat you like me now?, baby
tawanna-Nobody
Nobody, baby Nobody
allen-And who can do it like me?
tawanna-Nobody
allen-And who can give you what you need?
tawanna-nobody
allen-Who can do you all night long?
tawanna-Nobody, baby Nobody I love you allen
allen-i love you too!!!!!

FrizzyAI#3lova · Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 4:21 am Post subject: my story.........

lol,that Keith Sweat joint

[ November 15, 2002: Message edited by: FrizzyAI#3lova ]

azia_brown · Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 4:23 am Post subject: my story.........

FOR REAL! SHE MAKE ME WANNA GO LISTEN TO DAT SONG.

Phila76ers · Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 6:25 am Post subject: my story.........

A mad props 2all yall writers~yall got me trippin ova here~keep it up yall doin tha dang thang ! Holla at cha' boi fa' real~Fa real!

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ms_ksw · Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 6:32 am Post subject: my story.........

I liked that story! That was da bomb! I'm in here ready to listen and sing dat joint!

iversonluver333 · Rookie Joined: Nov 14, 2002 Posts: 18 Location: Dallas Pa

quote:
Originally posted by daysha iverson:
tawanna gets back from the doctor with tears flowing down her cheeks. she tries to wipe them away before she drives in the drive way of her big ass house. she walks in and is glad no one is home... she needed time to collect her thoughts before the kids and allen came back home, but the still silence of quiet made her uneasy so she called shay up.

t : i just came from the doctor
s : dayum it must be bad. you dont sound to happy about it. wuts wrong gurl
t : u know how everybody has been thinking im pregnant?
s : yeah
t : well im not
tawanna said sniffing. she had began to cry all over again with the thought of wut she was about to tell her friend.
s : im sorry t... did u want another child? u can always have more sweetie
t : its not about having a kid shay
tawanna paused before she hit her friend with the bomb
t : im dieing shay... the doctor says im dieing

[ October 29, 2002: Message edited by: daysha iverson ]

yo man that wasnt even funny!

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Awww, that story was cute and sweetand dramatic. Mad props for everyone that took time out of their busy schedules to right sumthing on this story, cuz yall kept it gangsta.

nieceye_n_iverson · Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 2:32 am Post subject: my story.........

This is one of my favorite stories on this site and i really enjoy reading it. I would apprieciate it alot if yall culd help me out with my story cuz this one is so damn hott!!! my story is under READ MY NEW STORY PLEEZ and it is hott with alot of drama and i think yall culd have some fun with it. feel free to add on. Well keep up the good work on this story and peace cuz i am outie!

tameka foster · Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 11:11 pm Post subject: my story.........

OMG OMG this story is off the HOOK please please finish it is like the best one on this board dont get me wrong the other stories are good too by all means but this one is once again OFF THE HOOK

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actually quit hating for actually haters are quiters

76ergirl · Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 1:33 am Post subject: my story.........

this story is finished!

tameka foster · Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 10:42 pm Post subject: my story.........

76ERGIRL: i was giving you your fucking props on a good story so i hope it wasnt no attitude behind your post cause by all means do not let my retarded ass or as some people like to refer to me as stop any thing you all do or say on this message board

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actually qiut hating for actually haters are quiters

Rena Iverson · Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 12:25 am Post subject: my story.........

TAMEKA YOU ALWAYS ARGUIN WITH SOMEBODY DO U HAVE SOCIAL ISSUES OR SOMETHIN CUZ THATS NOT COOL TO BE ARGUIN WITH EVERYONE
AND P.S IF MORE THAN 3 PEOPLE DONT LIKE YOU ON SOMETHING YOU NEED TO LOOK AT THE WOMAN IN THE MIRROR YOU NEED TO ASK HER TO CHANGE HER WAYS

tameka foster · Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 12:59 am Post subject: my story.........

RENA IVERSON: listen do you really think i give a f*** who on this message board or in life like me bitch please i live my life for me not to please others except my men and myself and if they dont like me and them two dikes i really really dont want to like me cause i suck dick not lick clits then why do they keep ANSWERING ME!!!!!!!!! RENA RENA RENA please dont try to be a head shrink and i hate micheal jackson so next time come with another song thank you

Rena Iverson · Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 1:18 am Post subject: my story.........

OH SO I SEE U HATE ON EVERYONE NOT JUST PEOPLE ON THIS SITE AND IF YOU DONT LIKE PEOPLE AND LIKE TO TALK s*** WHY THE f*** DO YOU JOIN SITES LIKE THIS I MEAN REALLY JUST BE A ANTI SOCIAL BITCH

*Bubba Chick03* · Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 3:59 am Post subject: my story.........

yes indeed

tameka foster · Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 11:03 pm Post subject: my story.........

RENA IVERSON: i can jion any fucking site i want to just like you and any body else bitch yes i talk s*** and so what i say what the f*** i feel just like you and every one else her get it no i dont hate on every one i say what i have to say and thats that i aint no punk bitch you come at me i will come back at you like it or not dont get mad dike bitch anti social if i acted anti social i would not give the name s of the people i am talking too bitch

Rena Iverson · Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 11:34 pm Post subject: my story.........

SHUT YOUR RETARDED DUMB PHYSCO ASS UP AND I WILL COME AT YOU ANY WAY I WANT BITCH AND IT SEEM LIKE YOU HATE ON EVERYONE U START s*** WITH JUST ABOUT EVERYBODY s*** SO SHUT THE f*** UP BITCH

76ergirl · Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 2:25 am Post subject: my story.........

hey tameka........ first of all i appreciate the props i was just letttin your "retarted ass" know the story was over and what are you gonna do if i do have an attitude YOU'RE ON A DAMN COMPUTER!!!!!!!!!

and thank you Rena Iverson for tellin her about herself!!!!! i'm not usually the type of person who gets into arguements with people but you not gone just walk all over me MS. TAMEKA cuz if you think that you can do that you know what YOU GOT THE GAME ALL FUCKED UP!!!!!!!!

tameka foster · Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 4:02 am Post subject: my story.........

76ERGIRL: no dike dont fucking thank me cause next thing i know you will be trying to eat my pussy and i like dicks not dikes okay attitude it seems to me that you are the one with the attitude know how i know cause that is how you dikes get down and YOU ARE RESPONDING oh and by the way quit choking on SARENA DIKE JACKSON pussy hairs that is all you dike bitches do around here damn looks like you are in a arguemant to me now what you should have said was that you are not usually the type that dont get into it with people who are not dikes like you and your dike bitch ass friends on this board did you say you dont let people walk all over you or did you say you dont let people lick all over you which one is it cause number one i am not one of your dike bitch ass friends here and i like dicks what game if i was a dike i would say bring the game on but i like dick so what game are you talking about you dumb dike ass bitch i see why you all got along on this board cause you all are dikes

tameka foster · Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 4:04 am Post subject: my story.........

76ERGIRL: you should be called DIKER GIRL

tameka foster · Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 4:04 am Post subject: my story.........

you know what for a retarded ass that s*** was real funny

Mrs. Iverson4eva · Rookie Joined: Oct 14, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: California

yo can we juss continue the story cuz yall can take all this arguing 2 anotha room..i aint tryin 2 start no conflict im juss sayin peeps really wanna finish the story like me

76ergirl · Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 5:01 am Post subject: my story.........

i ain't even gon waste my time fussin wit u cuz it's not worth it WE ARE ON A COMPUTER SO IMMA BE MATURE BOUT THIS AND LET IT GO CUZ IM JUST WASTIN MY TIME IF I SIT HERE AND GO BACK AND FORTH WITH YOU ABOUT ABSOLUTELY NOTHIN THEN I JUST GON BE THE ONE TO LOOK STUPID SO I PUTTIN THIS ARGUEMENT TO REST!!!!!!!

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

Pickin up from the Keith Sweat part:

(Both goin home and gettin out the car)
t-where did we leave the kids this time?
a-at my mommas
t-alright then they should be straight for a while, or at least until we're done
a-ohhhhhh, it's on and poppin
(He picks her up and shuts the door and runs to the stairs and up to their room)
t-dang you wanna slow down, andretti?
a-actually no
t-shutup nigga
(they do their thing then get ready to go pick the kids up... in the car)
a-(rappin to himself)
t-can you be quiet?
a-dang, i jus did you a favor, quit wit that attitude, actin all hosidity (spell check)jus cause you got this
t-if you don't be quiet
a-what?
t-i will drop you while you drivin
a-bring it on lil nigga
t-don't make me start
a-(laughin)

Tell me how I did please and remember this conversation was intended for them to just be playing...
But ya'll can take it anywhere anyways!

tameka foster · Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:20 pm Post subject: my story.........

that was good but why when i asked was the story finished i got dogged out but anyways keep adding cause it was interesting and dont waste your time arguing with a retarded person cause it makes you seem retarded yourself thank you

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 4:04 am Post subject: my story.........

no prob tameka but i was just sayin that the story was finshed and thank for my props

76ergirl · Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 4:08 am Post subject: my story.........

oh my bad aigirl3 u can continue from there if u want........

tameka foster · Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 7:33 pm Post subject: my story.........

actually this is the best story on here and 76er girl i accept your apology

tameka foster · Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 7:34 pm Post subject: my story.........

actually this is the best story on here and 76er girl i accept your apology

76ergirl · Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 11:27 pm Post subject: my story.........

what about my apology........ i mean u did call me every curse word in the book...... jus sayin i think i deserve an apology also!

tameka foster · Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 11:58 pm Post subject: my story.........

76ERGIRL: you are absolutely right i am very sorry and yes i should have said that in my last post so once again i am very sorry

AllensBabyGirl3 · Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 8:51 am Post subject: my story.........

Can we get back to the muthafuckin story damn!

76ergirl · Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 9:35 pm Post subject: my story.........

not to be rude or anything but the story was supposed to end at the keith sweat part cuz it said it ended like this in that post but i guess ya'll can continue postin if ya want

tameka foster · Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 1:55 am Post subject: my story.........

ALLENSBABYGIRL3: bitch yes you all can get back to the muthafucking story dont get jealous cause a real woman knows how to apologize and it is not to your dumb ass bitch so calm the f*** down go take a drive in your 2002 benz and then come back and finish the story and once again yuo claim to be a woman bitch please

tameka foster · Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 1:57 am Post subject: my story.........

76ERGIRL: i apologized to you and i just wanted to know if you accepted it since you apologized first and that doesnt matter as long as i did on my part but it still would be nice to know if you accepted it cause i accepted yours

76ergirl · Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 3:57 am Post subject: my story.........

oh my bad ......i do accept!!!!

76ergirl · Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 4:09 am Post subject: my story.........

not to be rude or anything but the story was supposed to end at the keith sweat part cuz it said it ended like this in that post but i guess ya'll can continue postin if ya want

nieceye_n_iverson · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 6:42 am Post subject: my story.........

OMG I LOVED THIS 1!!!!

**let me quit "reviving" topics.***ok everybody this is my last 1.

aries · Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2003 5:16 am Post subject: my story.........

continue.... allen and his wifey is in the kitchen, tawanna ate one of his pancakes and told him it was good which she had st8 up lie 2 him in his face having him 2 belivin it.the phone iz ring off the damn hook like crazy!! it was ann allen mom tell allen let there kid stay the whole weekend @ my mom. so they drop the kids off and roll back 2 their house. allen told his wife 2 meet me up in the bed room . allen kiss her from her head 2 breast 2 her belly and her back and was rubbing her with oil all over her body parts.