Joined: Aug 12, 2006
|Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 1:35 pm Post subject: TRU LOVE:::: COMING SOON
|i][size=18] Tru Love Coming Soon By: MickeyMouse Lover03
Lashay: Main Character; 17 years old.... Chris Little Sista..... Dre's Girlfriend..... Brittney's Best friend...... And Mike's and Allen"s Crush
Allen: 17 years old... Mike's big brother....
Dre: 18 years old.... Lashay boyfriend...
Brittney: 17 years old..... Lashay best friend.....
Mike: 16 years old... Allen's little brother
and many more
Meaning Of the story::: THIS STORY IS MOSTLY ABOUT LASHAY AND DRE FALLING IN LOVE BUT THROUGH THEIR RELATIONSHIP THEY HAVE A LITTLE TROUBLE OUT OF THE FAMILY, FRIENDS, AND ENEMIES.... STRUGGLES, HEARTBREAKS... LOSING PEOPLE THEY CARE ABOUT ALSO HAPPENS... SO LET ME GIVE YOU A PREVIEW OF THE STORY
LASHAY CALLIN DRE ON HIS CELL PHONE ( 7 A.M IN THE MORNING)
LASHAY THINKING TO HERSELF: ANSWER YO DAMN PHONE
DRE ( SOUNDING SLEEPY): WHO THE HELL IS THIS CALLIN ME
LASHAY: WHERE THE HELL WAS YOU AT LAST NIGHT I BEEN CALLIN YOU ALL DAY.
DRE: DONT START I WAS OUT WITH MY BROTHE
LASHAY: YOU A DAMN LAY... YO BROTHER WAS OVER HERE YOU WAS WITH THAT BITCH WASN'T IT..
DRE; SHAY DONT START ITS TO EARLY IN THE MORNING FOR THAT..
LASHAY: I DONT GIVE A DAMN NOW ANSWER THE QUESTION.
DRE: NO!!! I WAS NOT WIT NOBODY
DRE: WATEVA BUT I WILL TALK TO YOU WHEN I GET UP CUZ I DONT FEEL LIKE ARGUING .
LASHAY: WATEVA AND TELL YO BITCH I SAID HEY ......
DRE HUNG UP THE PHONE IN LASHAY FACE
LASHAY: (LAUGHING TO HERSELF) THAT TRICK JUST HUNG UP ON ME...
LATER ON THAT DAY..... LASHAY CALLED BRITTNEY AND THEY DISCUSSED THEIR PLANS FOR TODAY AND SHAY TOLD BRITTNEY SHE WAS ABOUT TO GET IN THE SHOWER AND THEN COME PICK HER UP SO SHAY GOT OUT THE SHOWER AND WENT TO GO PICK UP BRITTNEY
LASHAY CALLIN BRITTNEY: COME OUT SIDE BITCH
BRITTNEY: HOE DONT RUSH ME
LASHAY: U BETTA BRING YO AZZ ON B 4 U GET LEFT
BRITTNEY: WAT EVA U KNOW U AING GOING TO LEAVE ME
LASHAY: THATS WHAT U THINK
THEY SOON ARRIVED AT THE MALL WHERE THEY SHOPPED UNTIL THEY RAN OUT OF MONEY.... ( LASHAY GET MONEY FROM DRE CUZ HE IS A HUSTLER).... SOON THESE FINES DUDES WAS WALKING BEHIND THEM ..
1ST DUDE: AY LIL MAMA WITH THE PINK ON WHATS YOUR NAME ( TALKIN TO LASHAY
LASHAY DIDNT EVEN TURN HER HEAD TO SEE WHO IT WAS SHE JUST SAID: I GOT A MAN.
1ST DUDE: I KNOW AND THATS WHAT YOU BETTA SAY TO EVERY NIGGA THAT TRY TO COME UP TO YOU.
LASHAY LOOKED BACK AND SEEN THAT IT WAS DRE.
LASHAY: YOU NEED TO STOP PLAYIN
DRE: LOL I AINT PLAYIN ....
DRE: HOLD UP I KNOW YOU DONT THINK I AM MADE OF MONEY
LASHAY: WHAT YOU TALKIN ABOUT
DRE: GURL YOU GOT ABOUT 10 BAGS WITH YOU IT AINT THAT SERIOUS
LASHAY: YES IT IS YOU KNO I GOT TO MATCH
DRE: HOW MUCH IT COST
DRE: HUH MY AZZ HOW MUCH IT COST
DRE JUSTED WALKED AWAY .....
SHAY START LAUGHING
THEY LEFT THE MALL AND SHAY AND BRITTNEY WAS IN THE CAR TALKIN
BRITTNEY: WHATS UP WITH YOU AND DRE
SHAY: WHAT YOU MEAN
BRITTNEY: YALL BEEN ACTING WEIRD... LIKE YALL ALWAYS GOT TO ARGUE EVERYWHERE YALL GO..
SHAY: GURL THATS HIM..
BRITTNEY: THATS YOU TOO
SHAY: WATEVA... OK HE STILL MAD AT ME BECAUSE I GOT AN ABORTION ....
BRITTNEY: 4 REAL
BRITTNEY: THATS MESSED UP... BUT SHAY YOU WAS WRONG YOU COULD HAVE TOLD HIM YOU WAS PREGNANT B 4 GOING TO KILL THE BABY.
SHAY: OK AND WHAT ABOUT MY MAMA AND DADDY
BRITTNEY: WHAT ABOUT THEM
SHAY: THEY DONT KNO
BRITTNEY: HOLD THE f*** UP YOU STILL AINT TOLD YO MAMA AND DADDY YET
SHAY: HELL NO... SO THEY CAN KILL ME
BRITTNEY: LOL YOU A GOOD ONE....
SHAY: WHAT EVA
BRITTNEY: BUT DO YOU HAVE ANY REGRETS ABOUT IT
SHAY: GIRL YEAH BUT I JUST WASNT READY TO HAVE A FAMILY RIGHT NOW.... I Got dreams just like everybody else
SO SHAY AND BRITTNEY TALKED UNTIL THEY GOT AT BRITTNEY HOUSE..
BRITTNEY: I GUESS MY MAMA GONE OUT AGAIN
SHAY CELL PHONE WAS RINGIN
DRE: WHERE YOU AT
DRE: STOP PLAYIN WITH ME
SHAY: I AM OVA BRITTNEY HOUSE WHY?
DRE: OH WHEN YOU GOING HOME
SHAY: IN A MINUTE WHY
DRE: CUZ I WANT YOU TO COME SEE ME BEFORE YOU GO HOME
SHAY: AIGHT I WILL BE OVER IN A LITTLE BIT
BRITTNEY: WHAT YALL ABOUT TO DO
SHAY: NONE OF YO DAMN BUSINESS
BRITTNEY: WHAT EVA YOU NO HE ABOUT TO GET SOME PUSSY
SHAY: WAT EVA I TOLD DRE I AM TIRED OF HAVIN SEX....
BRITTNEY: LOL YEAH RIGHT...
SHAY: I DONT KNOW WHY YOU LAUGHIN ITS TRUE
BRITTNEY: OK WHAT EVA SHAY
SO SHAY LEFT BRITTNEY HOUSE AND DROVE OVER TO DRE HOUSE. SHE PULLED UP IN FRONT OF THE DRIVE WAY AND CALLED HIM ON HIS CELL
SHAY: I AM OUTSIDE COME TO THE DOOR
SHAY: WHERE MAMA AT?
DRE: AT WORK
SHAY: OH..... SO WHAT YOU CALL ME OVER HERE FOR.
DRE: DAMN... CAN I JUST BE WITH YOU..
SHAY: YEAH BUT ..... NEVA MIND
DRE: WHAT WAS YOU ABOUT TO SAY
DRE: f*** IT SHAY.... I CANT STAND WHEN YOU DO THAT..[/i][/list][/list][/list]
Shay: what eva
Dre: any way what you been doing today
Dre: Mane i tell you,, you kno what I will talk to you later cuz i dont got time for this bye
Shay: So you going to just put me out
Shay tired to kiss him but he just closed the door in her face.
Shay was sad and mad when she was driving to the house... So she called brittney...
Lashay: Hay girl guess what
Lashay; Dre mad at me
Brittney: Dre always mad at u
So she told Brittney what happen when she went over there..
Lashay: he just mad cause i dont want to f***
Brittney: He cant get mad
Lashay: i know
Brittney: did you tell him the secret yet
Lashay: Nope so dont say nothing about it
Brittney: You need to tell him....
Lashay: I know but I cant right now cause I dont know what to say
**** What yall think the secret is****
Email me at Cartoonnet01@yahoo.com to give me so ideas about the next part of the stroy
Brittney: What you mean you dont know what to say
Lashay: I dont know
Brittney : U need help but u better hurry up before he find out own his own...
Lashay and Brittney talked on the phone for a little while and then Shay said she was going to call her back. Lashay had hopped in the shower and got out then when she got out she heard her cell phone ringing. She looked at the phone but the call was restricted so she answer it/
Unknown character: Whats up baby?
Shay: Oh hey
Unknown Character: Do you know who this is
Unknown Character: Oh what you been up to
Shay: Nothing really just got out the shower but I been with my friend must of the day...
Unknown Character: Oh where yo mama and daddy at
Lashay: They out of town for the week end
Unknown character: Oh forreal ( sounding real happy)
Unknown Character; You want some company
Lashay: Not really cause I aint feelin good
u-c: Thats messed up
u-c: never mind but whats wrong with you any way
u-c: so did you find out was you having the baby or not
u-c: well you know i will talk care of my child f*** yo weak azz boyfriend dre he aint talkin about s***....
lashay: u betta stop talkin about him like that I still love him and he still my baby
u-c: so when u going to tell him the secret.
lashay: Not right now
u-c:: what u mean not right not now u need to be trying to trll him b4 i do.
lashay: please dont do that
u-c: i know u want to be with me and I want to be with you you just be playin
lashay looking confused: I dont want to be with you it was just a one time thing what we did.... You aint even on my level like I told you i want dre and thats all...
u-c: well we will see when he finds out about us..
Then he hungs up and lashay start crying cause she felt bad about cheating on dre....
((( Let me fill yall in on the story: Lashay and Dre been together for a long time. Lashay cheated on dre 2 months ago with the unknown character but dre didnt know.... But i got a feelin that he is about to find out quick... Because shay is pregnant.... But that is not the secret in the story.. keep reading to find out whats going to happen next its alot of drama and fun.)
SO SHAY WAS CRYIN DO SHE CALLED DRE..
LASHAY SOUNDING SAD: HEY BABY WHAT YOU DOING
DRE: WHATS WRONG WHY IT SOUND LIKE YOU CRYIN
LASHAY GOT QUIET AND SAD BECAUSE I DONT FEEL GOOD.
DRE: YOU OK
DRE: YOU WANT SOME COMPANY
DRE: AIGHT I WILL BE OVER THERE IN A FEW MINUTES
SO SHAY AND DRE HUNG UP THE PHONE AND SHE CALLED BRITTNEY BACK TO TELL HER WHAT ALL HAPPEN.
BRITTNEY: SEE GIRL THATS WHY U NEED TO GONE TELL DRE WHAT HAPPEN
SHAY:I CANT HE WILL HATE WHEN HE FIND OUT
BRITTNEY: SHAY TELL HIM. WHERE HE AT NOW
SHAY: ON HIS WAY OVER HERE
BRITTNEY: OK THIS IS THE BEST TIME
SHAY: I DONT THINK I CAN
SOMEBODY KNOCKING ON THE DOOR AND SHAY LOOKED OUT THE WINDOW AND IT WAS DRE.
SHAY: I AM GOING TO CALL YOU BACK HE HERE
BRITTNEY: TELL HIM GIRL ITS BETTER TO TELL HIM THEN KEEP IT FROM HIM FOR ANOTHER MONTH
SHAY OPEN THE DOOR AND SHE LET DRE IN...
DRE: HEY BABY YOU OK (HE GAVE HER A KISS)
SHAY: NOT REALLY
DRE: WELL THATS WHY I AM HERE [/size]
THEY BOTH WENT TO SHAY ROOM AND LAYED ON THE BED AND TALKED AND THEN TEARS JUST RAN DOWN SHAY FACE
DRE: BABY WHATS WRONG
SHAY: BABY I GOT SOMETHING TO TELL YOU
DRE: WHAT IS IT
SHAY TOOK A DEEP BREATHE AND SAID
SHAY: BABY I LOVE YOU AND I WILL DO ANYTHIN FOR U AND I WILL NEVER WANT TO HURT YOU.. BUT I CHEATED ON YOU FOR 3 MONTHS AND WHEN I GOT AN ABORTION I DIDNT KNOW WAS THE BABY YOURS OR THIS DUDE I WAS CHEATIN ON YOU WITH..
DRE: LOOKED AT SHAY AND START CRYING AND HE COULDNT EVEN LOOK AT HER. HE JUST GOT UP AND START CUSSIN HER OUT AND WALKED OUT SHE WAS CRYIN TO THE POINT WHERE SHE WANTED TO DO SOMETHING STUPID.... SHE COULDNT EVEN CALL BRITTNEY AND TELL HER WHAT HAPPEN INSTEAD SHE LAYED DOWN AND CRYED HERSELF TO SLEEP.
THE NEXT DAY WAS MONDAY AND SCHOOL AND EVERYDODY WAS TALKIN ABOUT THE SITUATION.... DRE WALKING DOWN THE HALL WAY AND PEOPLE JUST LOOKIN AT HIM AND HE TRYING TO FIGURE OUT HOW EVERYBODY FIGURED OUT... bUT THE KEY THING WAS THEY WAS JUST RUMORS.
RODNEY ( DRE FRIEND): AY WHATS UP MAINE
RODNEY: AY WHATS GOING ON BETWEEN U AND SHAY
DRE: SO MUCH MAINE I DONT EVEN WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT
SO BRITTNEY WALKED UP TO DRE AND RODNEY
BRITTNEY: WHATS UP RODNEY SHE DIDNT SPEAK TO DRE
RODNEY: WHATS UP BRITTNEY
DRE: WHATS UP BRITTNEY
( BRITTNEY IGNORING DRE)
BRITTNEY: AY RODNEY U SEEN SHAY
RODNEY: NOPE WHY
BRITTNEY: SHE HAVENT BEEN PICKIN UP HER PHONE AND I WENT BY HER HOUSE AND SHE AINT THERE.
DRE: WHEN THE LAST TIME YOU TALK TO HER
BRITTNEY: DRE DONT SAY NOTHING TO ME YOU DID MY GIRL WRONG
DRE: SHE CHEATED ON ME I WAS BEEN FAITHFUL I LOVE THAT GIRL.
BRITTNEY: WHAT EVA
BRITTNEY JUST WALKED AWAY SHE LEFT THE SCHOOL BUILDING AND SHE WENT STRAIGHT TO SHAY HOUSE... SHE GOT OUT THE CAR AND KNOCK ON THE DOOR. AND SOMEBODY OPEN THE DOOR BUT IT WASNT SHAY..
ALLEN: HEY CAN I HELP U
BRITTNEY: HEY IS SHAY HERE ( THINKING DAMN HE SEXY)
ALLEN: COME IN.. U MUST BE BRITTNEY
BRITTNEY: YEAH AND U ARE....
ALLEN: OH MY BAD I AM ALLEN
SO BRITTNEY AND ALLEN WALKED INTO THE SAME ROOM AS SHAY.....
BRITTNEY: HEY LIL MAMA HOW U HOLDIN UO
LASHAY: I AM COOL ( DRE WALKED INTO THE OTHER ROOM)
BRITTNEY: WHO IZ THAT HE IZS FINE?
LASHAY: THATS.... THATS ... MY BABY DADDY
BRITTNEY: WHAT!!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS
( BRITTNEY JUST LOOKED SHOCKED AND COULDNT SAY NOTHING ELSE ABOUT THE SUBJECT SO..
BRITTNEY: SO U READY TO GO TO SCHOOL
LASHAY: NOT REALLY
BRITTNEY: WHAT U MEAN NOT REALLY
LASHAY: I DONT WANT TO SEE DRE
BRITTNEY: f*** HIM GIRL.....
LASHAY: AIGHT LET ME GO GET IN THE SHOWER.. ( SO DRE WALKED BACK IN THE ROOM AND SHAY WAS TELLING HIM THAT SHE WAS ABOUT TO GET IN THE SHOWER SO HE KEEP BRIITNEY COMPANY UNTIL SHE GOT OUT.)
ALLEN: HOW LONG YOU AND SHAY BEEN KNOWIN EACH OTHER
BRITTNEY: SINCE HEADSTART
ALLEN: DAMN THATS A LONG TIME
BRITTNEY: WHAT ABOUT YOU AND SHAY
ALLEN: ABOUT 3 MONTHS AGO
( BRITTNEY THINKING: 3 MONTHS)
ALLEN: U OK
BRITTNEY: YEAH I AM COOL
( SO BRITTNEY AND ALLEN TALKED UNTIL SHAY GOT OUT THE SHOWER AND THEY LEFT AND SO DID ALLEN)
ALLEN: YOU WANT ME TO PICK YOU UP FROM SCHOOL
LASHAY: YEAH THATS COOL.
( ALLEN GAVE HER A KISS AND HE GOT INTO THE CAR AND DROVE OFF.
THE CAR WAS SILENT AS SHAY AND BRITTNEY WAS RIDING TO SCHOOL THEY WAS ALREADY 3 HOURS LATE..)
BRITTNEY: HOW BEN FEELING
BRITTNEY: OH SO U REALLY LIKE HIM
SHAY: YHEAH HE IS COOL, SWEET, NICE AND HE KNOWS HOW TO KEEP ME HAPPY...
BRITTNEY: WHAT EVA
LASHAY: WHY U SAY THAT
LASHAY: WELL f*** IT
THEY PULLED AT SCHOOL AND GOING STRAIGHT TO THE 5TH PERIOD CLASS.... SHAY AND BRITTNEY WALKED IN AND EVERYBODY STARED AT DRE....
TEACHER: TAKE YOUR SEATS AND GET IN YOUR GROUP
( SO SHAY AND DRE ARE IN THE SAME GROUP)
DRE: MR. WHITE CAN I CHANGE GROUPS I DONT FEELIN CONFORTABLE WORKING WITH PEOPLE I CANT TRUST.
SHAY JUST STARTED TO CRY AND SHE RAN OUT OF CLASS.... RUNNING DOWN THE HALL WAY WITH BRITTNEY RUNNING BEHIND HER.
CLASSMATE: WHY U DO THAT MANE
DRE FEELING A LITTLE BAD AND HE SAID: MANE I DONT EVEN KNO
Last edited by Mickeymouse on Sat Sep 02, 2006 4:29 am; edited 4 times in total
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|Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:36 pm Post subject:
|What the Hell happens next ????
Joined: Aug 09, 2006
|Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:13 am Post subject:
|Keep up the good work! I love the story!
Joined: Aug 20, 2006
|Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:55 am Post subject:
|i wonder wat she gatta tell him?
keep it up
Joined: Mar 18, 2006
|Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:44 pm Post subject:
| mickymouse when is the rest comin' ? cuz i wanna know what happens next
Joined: Sep 06, 2006
|Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 11:47 pm Post subject:
|That was real good. Keep it going and hurry up with the ending.