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ShortyIverson · Rookie Joined: May 18, 2005 Posts: 17

This story is about a college girl who took the wrong turn in love.

(waking up to a call)
Tori-hello
Zai-girl wake up you have class in the 30 mins
Tori-oh s*** thank girl for waking me
Zai-get down here
(Tori is a 21 year old freshmen who major in Law)
Tori-james why you didin't wake me
James- i didn't know you was going to class
Tori- i have class M-T you know
James-sorry baby damn
Tori-just remember to leave the key in the mail box when you leave
James-her period must be on
(tori runs off to dr.jackson knowing that he don't play that)
Dr.Jackson-Ms.Combs your late again
Tori-i know Dr.Jackon I woke(cutting her off)
Dr.Jackson-Please Ms.Combs save me the details now kids let talk about the case brown v.s. broad of education
(tori was happy that the class let out early)
Zai-girl i heard about ths party at the brother house they welcome a new member and wants everyone to come you going
Tori-hell girl but we need to go to the MALL and rock some beyonce type s***.
Zai-hell yea but i don't have my credit cards
Tori- i got you
(they head to mall)
Zai- girl lets go to the Gucci store
Tori-bitch i ain't got that much money lets go to MACy's and act like we got money
Zai- you crazy
Tori-this outfit look like its for hoe with ass and that ain't wat i got
Zai-you got titties shake that s*** in a cut up shirt
Tori-hurry up girl i have to go pick up James
Zai-that nigga needs his car fix
(they got the hottest,cheapest,and thing in style b-cuz it was the last minute)
Sell Lady-are you ladies ready
Tori-yes this is it
Sell Lady- lovely choice
Zai-yea we gone the life of the party
Sell Lady-i'm sorry Ma'am your card was denied
Tori-wat you did it wrong
Sell Lady-okay i'll do it again
Zai-yea you do that
Sell Lady-sorry Ma'am its not working we can take cash or another card
Tori-no thank you
Zai-wats up with your card
Tori-i don't lets meet up at my house later i'm to call my bank
Zai-okay see you later luv u
Tori- luv you to bestfriend

(tori is mad as hell Mad

now she off to pick up James)
James- hey boo
Tori-hey baby guess wat
James-wat
Tori-my cards or over the limit
james- didn't you just pay the bill
Tori-yea i don't understand i have to call to bank for them to send me a statement
James-do that b-cuz they can f*** up your credit
(After going to B.K to get something to eat the go home which is 5 mins from the campus)
Tori-hi my name Tori Combs i;m calling b-cuz my card was denied when i tryed to make a purchase
Teller-yes Ms.Combs your account is over draft of 1500.00 dollars
Tori-oh! hell naw bitch you lieing how the hell
Teller-Ms.Combs i can send you a bank statement
Tori-do that
James-i know i just ain't heard wat i thought i heard
Tori-yea she said it and if the taking my money out of my account it's on
(5 days later tori receives her statement)
Tori-wat i didn't not spend 130 dollars on a dress and i didn't write a check for a down payment on a honda for 1200.00 dollars
Zai-look at the place and person who wrote the check
Tori-oh this msut be a mistake it says James Wilson
Zai-i know james ain't stealing from you and i know he don't have a car b-cuz you pick his ass up every day
Tori-something ain't right this is happening
Zai-breathe Te-Te
Tori-is this bitch stealing from me Sad

Stay tune to see if the man she been with for 5 years is cheating or stealing.

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 7:25 pm Post subject:

how many stories are u writing?

but keep it up cuz that was good.
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ShortyIverson · Rookie Joined: May 18, 2005 Posts: 17

i like to write stories is that a problem

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 10:52 pm Post subject:

Ivers0nzBabi3 · Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 10:55 pm Post subject:

luvin da story...gud wrk...ryt mor soon...plz...? Razz

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ShortyIverson · Rookie Joined: May 18, 2005 Posts: 17

tori-i can't wait till he gets home
Zai- let him have it i'll catch you b-cuz i see coming now
(as zai leaves james enter into the house)
Tori- wat is going on James who is she and why are you doing this to me
James- wait a minute how you doing would be nice to say and wat is you talking about
Tori-someone wrote a check for a fucking car nigga now wats going on
James- wat that got to do with me
Tori- it got your name on the check
(now james as nothing to say he sees he is backed up in a corner so he confess)
James- i'm sorry baby
Tori- Crying or Very sad

how could ou steal from me james i give you everthing
James- i know boo
Tori- so who is she
James- my boss wife
Tori-wat! bitch are you crazy
James- i was just doing it to get a rise
Tori- that bullshit wat type of s*** is that
James- please tori i'm sorry
Tori- yea you are a sorry notherfucker get out of my house
James- wat baby lets talk about this
Tori- oh we just did and now i don't have a way to pay credit cards off or my school bill
James- baby i ain't got no where to go
Tori- oh yes you do go to your boss house
James-please tori
Tori- get out now nigga b4 i call the police
James- i'm not going nowhere till you talk to me
(tori runs outside to get her neighbor)
Tori- TY get him out of my house
TY- lets go Jay
James- this my house to
TY- i don't give a f*** she want you out
James- boo
Tori- get out
(tori feels so hurt she calls her bestfriend to come over)
(the next day)
Zai-thats james calling you
Tori-yea he left me 20 message and called 20 times
Zai- you want me to change the number
Tori- it would cost $5 and i ain't got that much now
Zai- lets get you out of hear and find a job and i'll help you start paying off this bill
Tori- thanks bestfriend
(they try every where but no one was hiring)
Zai- girl i'm tired wat is next
Tori- no one is hiring Zai
Zai- you should be a stripper
Tori-that don't sound bad
Zai-i was playing
Tori- well i was not

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 5:47 pm Post subject:

dang she gon be a stipper...that's not good
keep goin
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ShortyIverson · Rookie Joined: May 18, 2005 Posts: 17

Oh! now you got internet mouth over there bitch i don't know you and you don't want to know me bamagirl wat ever the f*** your name is.Stop right here for this s*** gets ugly

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 2:40 am Post subject:

seximami · Visitor Joined: May 26, 2005 Posts: 8

what other site is there another site you guys go on?

seximami · Visitor Joined: May 26, 2005 Posts: 8

thanks i never heard of that but ill check it out

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 2:56 am Post subject:

yea do that....alwayz come back and support a.i. live tho....as u can see we need it lol
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seximami · Visitor Joined: May 26, 2005 Posts: 8

lol no doubt

ShortyIverson · Rookie Joined: May 18, 2005 Posts: 17

anyways back to the story
Zai-so we here are you sure this is wat you want to do
Tori-i got no money
Zai-i told i'll help you
Tori-but its not enough
Zai-HI! sir my name is Zaira Williams
Tori-Yes and i'm Tori Combs
Mr.Jones-nice to meet you so who is here for the job
Zai-job this ain't no damn job Laughing

Mr.Jones-excuse me
Tori-zai stop go outside and wait
Zai-yea Laughing

Tori-sorry about my friend
Mr.jones-yea well everyone can't be serouis so try around
(tori turns back around)
Mr.Jones-so have you did any danceing in the pass
Tori-not really
Mr.Jones-wats not really
Tori-around friend in the club
Mr.Jones-well this is a club show wat you do at a club
Tori-right here
Mr.Jones-yea were else outside its too hot for that
Tori-no i mean
Mr.Jones-lets go ms.combs i have things to do
(tori starts to dance and gets even nerves when more employees start to walk in)
Dnacer 1-damn girl you a nautral
Mr.Jones-alright fantasy go up and get ready for 2nite
Tori-anything else
Mr.Jones-no seen wat all i need to see i'll get back to you soon
Tori-please sir i heard that b-4 and they usually never call
Mr.jones-can you give me time young lady
Tori-sorry
Mr.Jones-listen since you so ready can you start 2niteone of the girls called in
Tori-2nite why so soon]
Mr.Jones-you are confuseing then my wife do you want it or not
Tori-okay wat time do i start
Mr.Jones-8 but be in the dress room at 7 i'll have one of the VETS teach you and gave you a outfit to wear
Tori-thanks MR.Jones
(tori runs outside with a unsure look on her face)
Zai-so wats up didi you get it
Tori-yea
Zai-then why you look like you just lost something
Tori-i did girl my pride
(later on that day tori return to meet one of thr girls)
Sara-hey i'm Shara but you can call me Sara
Tori-hi i'm tori
Sara-you might want to come in we don't bit
Moncia-i do
Sara-shutup b-4 Mr.Jones get you now tori this is your locker and these 2 outfits are yours to perform in
Tori-were is the rest of this outfit it look like a extra small shirt
Sara-in this business everything is small very small
Tori-okay
Sara-are you ready to go out and do your 1st show
Tori-wat girl i ain't ready you got to show me
Sara-i ain't got ot show you anything
Tori-wat am i suppose to do
Sara-look i'm gone be right there
(1st nite tori made 500 only b-cuz it was slow)
Zai-so how was it
Tori-i feel like GOD ain''t go forgive me for this
Zai-don't talk like that
Tori-i feel like dirt
Zai-you got to do wat you got to do tori wat the court say
Tori-they say he can't be hold for a long time
Zai-damn you want my brothers to go f*** himup
Tori-no i can't deal with that right now ZAI
Zai-okay i'll tell them 2morrow
Tori-ZAI!!!!!!!!!!!!

philafan11 · Starter Joined: Jan 31, 2005 Posts: 267

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philafan11 · Starter Joined: Jan 31, 2005 Posts: 267

i mean i aint even takin the time to read the story cuz of the title. diary of a miami hoe? wtf lol.

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 3:36 am Post subject:

dang phil lollll
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ShortyIverson · Rookie Joined: May 18, 2005 Posts: 17

I did't ask you to read it. maybe you are b-cuz you reply to it.THANK YOU

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:33 am Post subject:

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philafan11 · Starter Joined: Jan 31, 2005 Posts: 267

lol. i reply cuz of the title. i dont feel like wastin my time readin some diary of a fakeass miami hoe.

flawda_thicky · Starter Joined: Jan 09, 2005 Posts: 195

DAMN SOME PEEPS TAKE THESE POST TO THE EXTREME........."DIARY OF THE MIAMI HOE"....................R U TALKIN BOUT YOUR SELF........................IS THIS STORY ABOUT U? Laughing

.....................HELL IM TRYI TO FIGURE IT OUT!
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OR MY DAWGS REPRENSTING DOUBLE S
HATERS f*** YALL I DONT GIVE A f***
WHO U RUN WIT TOUT GUNS WIT
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*~* NIGGA RUN TO THE CRAKERS
YEP THEY'LL PROTECT YA
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Bamagrl3 · Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 4:45 pm Post subject:

lol
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ladeeNBA_remix · Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 9:32 pm Post subject:

wat the why the story stop i was readin it, Laughing

ladee

shegotgame32 · Rookie Joined: Apr 08, 2006 Posts: 25

do wat u do shorty its tight go read mine and reply