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MizDiamonds

Hey ya'll its me again,MizDiamonds, I was just curious........How do you think Allen met Tawana? Do you think that he did what other guys would do and used some corny ass line like "Girl your feet must be tired cause you been running through my mind all day" or do ya'll think he was real with her about his feelings?
It would be da bomb if someone wrote a story about it,I mean I would (and no disrespect) but I'm still new so I don't want to get criticized for c*** blockin or get the run around about all of the story times on the site,so anyway what do ya'll think?

*Miz D*
Holla Back

DiamondPrincessAI3

i think he used one of them pick up lines, u know,"damn gurl lookin at u gave me a tooth ake". come on now i know that ones corny but trust me they all are. i read sumthing about her best friend knowing him and stuff so maybe her best friend hooked them up.

hotgurl76

They said one of them was at the other one's school and they bumped into each other and just kept staring at each other. That's what I heard, but I don't know if it's tru. ~Holla~

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

I thinks its soo cute that they met by staring at each other. it would be a hype out idea if they had a story bout how they met and the type of relationship the developped over the years.

hotgurl76

we could make a story about it. who wants to start?

MizDiamonds

Thanks for replying ya'll (I just had to say that)
I want to start it but I don't know how to...can someone please help me out?

hotgurl76

you can just like start a lil short story about Allen's life and how he had to move to Hampton and then how he and tawanna met and then when we finish it'll be how they are today though all their drama their still together. u know? so u can start it with a bio of Allen and how Tawanna's dad died when she was young and how she lived in a two story house and she was wealthy. ~Holla~

Karla

YEA THAT WOULD BE COOL JUST LIKE START OFF LIKE HOTGURL76 SAID THAT BE PRETTY COO. SO START IT SO WE CAN WRITE IN IT TOO. MAKE IT GOOODDD. YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!!!LOL

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

When yall gon do da story? i'm so hyped up2 read hot talented y'all are!

A.I.lova

quote:
Originally posted by Kecia Mahogany:
i think he used one of them pick up lines, u know,"damn gurl lookin at u gave me a tooth ake". come on now i know that ones corny but trust me they all are. i read sumthing about her best friend knowing him and stuff so maybe her best friend hooked them up.

Speakin of corny linez"AY BABY U DROPPED SUMETHING"GIRL:WUT?"DIS CONVERSATION NOW LETZ PICK IT UP WTF????????!!!!!!!I hope he neva used dat on her(lol)

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

I dont think he used them pick up lines i think that he waz real shy 2 talk 2 her and stuff. MizDiamonds i kno dat u can do a good job on writing dis story. U Go Girl!!!

hotgurl76

They said he was real shy back in the day and that he still sorta shy now. ~Holla~

MizDiamonds

Thankyou for all of your replies(I really appreciate it)but huuuum,I dont really know that much about his childhood,all of the articles that I have read only told me the basics,you know,how he started playing basketball at the age of 10and that he hated it at first,etc. I only have info about his years in highschool.so I can start from there, I hope ya'll don't mind...
be back ya'll I'm going to get some facts about Tawana so I can make the story a little more real.

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

I was gonna say somethin but I really am with you because I don't know anything about his childhood either. Good luck findin somethin.

DiamondPrincessAI3

u got me hype, and he dont seem like he'd use a pick up line, thats dat pimp'n stuff. lets start the story, im scared cause i can not tell stories but anyway maybe we can say that they met at uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.................a party or sumthing, see i suck wit that one word party

hotgurl76

If you want me to I can start that story. ~Holla~

MizDiamonds

Thanks for your offer I would love that because I have no idea about how I'm going to start it...I really need some help,so who ever wants to start the story can,I'll just jump in.
THANKS YA'LL

*~Miz D~*

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

yo this iz gon be the baddest plz rite this letter very soon cuz i am anxious to read it i wants to be tha first one to read dat seen !!!

hotgurl76

Ok. I'll start it tomorrow.

hotgurl76

(If some of this info isn't right don't get mad I'm doing the best I can)
Allen Iverson was just a regular guy from the hood. He had to move from Bad News to Hampton when he was in highschool becuz of all the violence and his horribel living conditions. He moved in with his mentor and good friend. He went to Bethel High where in 10th grade he was on the varsity team in Basketball. In 11th grade he became the star on the basketball and football teams.

Tawanna was the upper middle class gurl who lived in the suburbs. Her father died at a young age, so her mother was raising her and her brother by herself. Tawanna was in the Honor Society and voted most attractive. She was into fashion and was very smart. Tawanna and Allen both went to rival schools in Hampton.

Allen had a basketball game against Tawanna's school at Bethel High that day. Allen was walking in the hall with his friends trying to get to the locker room for the pregame meeting. Tawanna and her friends were roaming the halls trying to find the bathroom. They accidentally bumped into eachother.

Allen: Excuse me
Tawanna: O, I'm sorry.
ALlen: What u looking for?
Allen's friend: Mane u nosey!
Allen: I just asked so maybe WE could help her.
Allen's friend: Who the hell is we?!
(ALlen gave hin that look like u betta shut the hell up)
Tawanna: (laughing) We were looking for the bathroom.
Tawanna's Friend: Who the hell is we?!
Allen: (laughing) it's ova there on your left, just keep str8.
Tawanna: (just staring in his eyes) O, thanx.
Tawanna's Friend: (bumped her hard)
Allen: u welcome. bye you'll
Tawanna: (just standing there looking like she in love)
Tawanna's Friend 2: What the hell is wrong with u? (pulling her in the bathroom)
Tawanna's friend 3: u just embarrassed yourself in front of those guys
Tawanna: I don't care. Gurl I'm in love.
Tawanna's Friend: No the hell u not.
Tawanna's friend 2: your mama gone kill u if she find out u THINK u in love.
Tawanna's friend 3: fa real
Tawanna: well how she gone find out?
Tawanna's friend 2: when u come home looking like that?!
Tawanna: Looking like what?!
Tawanna's friend 2: Like u in love.
Tawanna: Gurl did u see his eyes?!
Tawanna's friend: Yes, gurl and I don't blame u there.
Tawanna's friend 2: fa real o boy had some eyes to die for.
Tawanna: I think we need to leave before the game starts
Tawanna's friend 3: u just don't wanna miss him!!
Tawanna: and u know this, so let's go!

What's gonna happen after the game?
P.S. this story is just what I THINK happened. We don't know if this really happened. Hope you'll like it. ~Holla~

MizDiamonds

Damn,that was the bomb gurl!!!I could have never guessed that the story would be hot like that.

MizDiamonds

(Bethel highschool had won the basketball game)
Allen and his possie had left to go to the bowling alley which was their usual hangout spot after school.Mean-while,Tawana and her friends were already there sitting down at a table near the one of the bowling lanes.Allen and his friends sat at an opposite table.Tawana and Allen immediately noticed eachother and constantly glanced at one another every now ang again.One of Tawana's friends noticed her gazing at Allen and immediately said something to her..
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Tawana's Friend#1:You really like him don't you?
Tawana didnt respond,she didn't even glance in the direction of her friend.
Tawana's Friend#1:Hello,Tawana!you know I'm not speaking to my self!
Tawana:Huh..oh I'm sorry I didn't hear you.
Tawana's friend#1:I know you didn't hear me because you were somewhere floating on cloud nine and you need to bring your ass back down to reality.
Tawana:What are you talking about?
Tawana's Friend#1:Look gurl,I know you like the dude but you know that he goes to Bethel...
Tawana:So?
Tawana's Friend#2:You know that they go to Bethel and you know that we don't get along with any of them...
Tawana:We..Them..what do you mean WE..have problems with..THEM?
Tawana's Friend#2:You know what I mean..
Tawana:No I dont.
Tawana's Friend#3:Remember...Our school,their school..Rivals.
Tawana begins to laugh.
Tawana's Friend#1:Whats so funny?
Tawana:Ya'll,I mean ya'll are a trip.
Tawana pauses.
* * * * * * * * * * *
Tawana:Seriously though,I cant believe you guys.You really listen to that garbage and on top of that you believe it too.Thats sad,I thought that all of you were on my level.
Tawana's Friend#2:Its not even like that...
Tawana's Friend#3Yeah Tawana,we just don't want to see you get caught up in all of this drama thats going on.
* * * * * * * * *
Tawana's friends knew that she was in love and nothing they said would really make a difference to her.They eventually decided to stop all of the games and try to give Tawana a jump start with Allen.
* * * * * * * *
Tawana's friend(friend #1)left their table and headed over to Allen and his friends.
* * * * * * * * * * * *
Tawana's friend:Excuse me,your Allen right?
Allen:Yeah that'll be me.
Tawana's friend:That was a good game today..
Allen:Thanks.
Tawana's friend:But thats not why I wanted to speak to you.I noticed that you have a little thing for my friend,Tawana and I'm just saying,It's obvious that she wants you and you want her, so when are we going to make something happen?
There was no responce,his friends all stared at her childishly as if they didn't understand what she was saying.
* * * * * * *
Allen's friend#1:Yeah dog..
he paused and then began to mock her.
Allen's Friend#1:when are we going to make something happen?
His friends began to laugh.
Tawana's friend:I can see that ya'll are nothin but some jokers.Ya'll act like little boys.Everything about ya'll is little.Your bodies,your attitudes...hey probobaly even whats under your jeans.
The possie got quiet and stared at her in astonishment.
Allen's friend#2:Whats that supposed to mean?because you got all that mouth and you can find out if you want to just so next time you can get your facts straight!
Tawana's Friend:Look...I'm not even trying to argue with ya'll.I just want to know,Allen,Whats up?Are you interested are no cause I really have to go.

MizDiamonds

That was so corny..sorry ya'll,I know that was wack so if anyone wants to continue from there,The space is open.
Anyway,I'll holla tomorrow.
0ne
~*MizD~*

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

Naw mizdiamonds it was real goo keep it up gurl!!!!!

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

hotgurl urs was hypeout 2!!!!!

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

yalls both was tight. i'll write a lil but ion wanna mess it up.

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

ima wait to see if anyone adds somethin.

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

i doubt anyone gonna write anything until 2 morro

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

iversonsgurl give it a try imm sure itll be hype

MizDiamonds

Iversonsgurl4000 and Iverson423 aswell as all of the people that posted thanks for keepin it hot and for your encouragement,It really made a difference and ya'll helped me to stop feeling like I was corny for even posting this topic on this site.I mean,at first,the first topic I ever posted was cheesy because it was on here for like two weeks and no replied and only like two people replied to the "Chris Rock and Allen Iverson Interview".
So thanks to all of ya'll and like I said before I really appreciate it.

*~MizD~*

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

ur welcum!!!! But u did real good on the story i think its ur time to write the story i know u can do it u make it HYPE!!!!

hotgurl76

who's gonna go next?

AI_LL

Goin head pimpin yall doing yall thing keep it going I'm feelin yo flow fa sho pimpin.

hotgurl76

Allen's Friend 2: What's up wit me and u?
Tawanna's Friend: r u tryin to get fresh wit me?
ALlen's Friend 2: if that's what u rich people call it yeah.
(Tawanna's Friend walks away)
Tawanna: What's wrong?
TAwanna's friend 2: for real u look like u bout to cry.
Tawanna's friend: nothing they just said something.
Tawanna: O hell no I'm goin ova there.
Tawanna's Friend 3: She finna cuss them out.
Tawanna: What tha hell you'll say to my friend?
Allen's friend 2: we ain't say nothing to her. (laughing)
Allen's friend 3: He was trying to make her like him so he said something to her.
Tawanna: Y u talkin like that? U think I don't understand slang? See u got a problem and I ain't even gone talk to u.
Tawanna: U seem to be the quiet one who doesn't INSULT people.
Allen's friend 2: yeah he quiet and he don't insult people but he sho ain't innocent.
Allen: Yeah, I guess that's me. And we are really sorry about hurting your friend's feelings.
Tawanna: (smiling) it's okay, she'll get over it.
Allen's friend 2: I neva did apologize for hurting her friend's feelings. so how did u come up with we?
Allen: becuz u said it and u should be sorry and the rest of u were laughin. and since ya'll wasn't going to apologize I did.
Tawanna: Well thank u Allen.
Allen's friend 3: I love the way u say his name.
Allen's friend 2: What's your name?
Tawanna: My name is Tawanna.
Allen's friend 3: You don't look like a Tawanna.
Allen: y not? she act like one.
Tawanna: threw a napkin at Allen
(Allen dodging it like it was a football)
Tawanna: Well thank you all for your imput on my name. I'll be sure to tell my mom tonite how much u love it.
Allen: I really do love your name though.
Tawanna: (blushing) and I love yours.
Allen: (smiling)thanks
Allen's friend 2: I think Imma go apologize to your friend.
Tawanna: That'll be nice.
Allen: y don't you'll two go wit him.
Allen's friend: u tryin to get rid of us?
Allen: what it look like?
Allen's friend 3: he on't know he dumb.
Tawanna: (laughing)
Allen: I love your smile
Tawanna: (mumbling) I love u.
Allen: (acting like he didn't hear her)what?
Tawanna: I said I do too.
Allen: O.

MizDiamonds

Ha..Hotgurl76 that was ill.It was funny,romantic and touching all at the same time.I loved it.keep doin you ma.
Anyone else wanna reply because I know everyone up in here has talent and could write a hot story or segment to this!
The floors open..is that the way you say it?Anyway ya'll know what I mean.

*~MizD~*

A.I.lova

4 real finish dat dam story mizdiamond & hotgurl

, dat wuz tight!!!!!!makez it seem real! keep doin' ur thang i would add but don't wanna mess it up(lol)

[ September 14, 2002: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

MizDiamonds

Gurl dont worry about messin it up.This story is ill.I know you can write somethin hot,just try,Please.

*~MizD~*

MizDiamonds

Allen's friends walk over to Tawanna's friends and(Allens friend begins his apology)
Allens friend#1:Look i'm not very good at this so i'm just gonna try my best and do it the way I know how.
Tawana's friend#1:what are you talking about?
Allens friend#1:I mean I'm gonna try to apologize to you the ghetto way since we're in the hood and I never mingled with rich chicks before.
Tawana's friend#1:See there you go on that rich s*** again!I thought you said you were going to apologize to me!
Allens friend#1:I was.
Tawana's friend#1:You were or you are?Because if not you can just...

(Tawana's friend #2cuts her off)

Tawana's friend #2:you can just state it as nicely as you can.
Allens friend #1:how the hell did you get into this conversation?
Tawana's friend #2:Look we dont want any problems with ya'll,you know, we are not trying to get hurt.
Allens friend#2:Shorty please we aint gonna hurt ya'll.(looking at the watch on his wrist)We dont have the time.
Allens friend#1:And why are you so damn fresh?Look I just want to say that I know that I was acting like a...
Tawana's friend#1:camplete ass?
Allen's friend#1:I guess you can say that.But I was just gonna say an idiot.I'm sorry and I...
Tawana's friend#1:will never ever act like that towards me ever again for as long as I live.
Allens friend#1:Hell naah.you aint my moms I was just gonna sat that...
Tawana's friend#1:So what type of applolgy were you going to issue?
Allens friend#1

Aggrivated)Look shorty,can you please stop fuc...(he pauses)...can you just stop cutting me off.I was just going to say that I am sorry for acting the way I did towards you earlier.Okay.
Tawana's friend#1:Oh...so why didn't you just say that all along?
Everyone begins laughing.
* * * * * *
Mean while back at the table that Allen and Tawanna were sitting at.....

[ September 14, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

[ September 14, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

AI_LL

Good shi* you wrote MizDiamonds. But anyway I'm bored so I'm goin do what I can or but if I do a bad job tell me I'll stop cause yall doing good I'm just bored as hell but anyway here goes nothing.

*********************************************

Back at the table with Allen and Tawanna it was quiet. No one was really saying anything.

Tawanna: Why you so quiet.
Allen: I don't know you must've had something to talk about you came over here.
Tawanna: I came over to tell yo lil friend to say sorry.
Allen: Unhh that was the only reason you came over here
Tawanna smiled
Allen: Yea I thought so come over here flirting and stuff (laughin)
Tawanna: Oh like you weren't flirting back.
Allen: A lil bit so why yall on this side of town still.
Tawanna: We don't have to rush back home
Allen: Oh I thought that maybe you would get in trouble being out late or whatever.
Tawanna: No I don't have to be in when the street lights come on no more I can stay out a little later.
Allen: You goin get both of us hurt talking to me
Tawanna: Don't tell me you up on this school rrivalry stuff.
Allen: It's stupid or what not but weather it's stupid or not I still wouldn't wanna be caught up in the middle.
Tawanna: Who says somebody gotta know
Allen; Yea right Girls not meaning you or nothing but you tell one of yo girls something everybody goin know.
Tawanna: My girls don't have a big mouth.
Allen: It's always one in the group with a big mouth
Tawanna: Not in mine

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

yo, AI_LL i think it would be real tigh if u talked about how they would get 2 kno each other and how rich tawanna was and how poor allen was. I thin u will do a REAL GOD job on dat. I think u got da skills, so wat do u say u wanna write it 2nite?
P.S MizDiamonds ur story is HYPE also DO UR THING GURL!!!

A.I.lova

Allen: Wuteva u say, but u might not want 2 admit it but evry haz dat one friend who runz their mouth alot
Tawanna: I can already pick out which one haz da mouth in ur group
Allen : (chuckles) leav my boi outta dis.... it iz gettin' real late, an' i can't let u leav by urself w/ ur gurlz in dis neighboorhood
Tawanna: My car iz not parked dat far
Allen:I'll walk u 2 ur car den(tellin' hiz boiz) Y'all c'mon we're fixin' 2 roll-out, an'...
Allen Friend#2: (Interruptin Allen) WE???
(Allen givez him a look)
Allen friend #2: Fine, y'all letz go an' walk deze gurlz 2 deir car, c'mon y'all
(Tawanna's friends an'Allen's friends git up an' leav, evrybody iz walkin' in front, except 4 Allen and Tawanna who r slowly walkin in the back ,talkin)
Allen: so.....
Tawanna:so......
(Awkward silence)
Allen: ....Would it alright if i called you sometime
Tawanna : (smiles

).... yeah...u hav a piece of paper
Allen: Nah....jus write it on my hand
(Tawanna stopz writez the numba on hiz hand, as soon as she finishes writin' da numba on hiz hand, Allen won't let go of her hand)
Tawanna : (Smilez) R u gonna let go of my hand
Allen:Nah
(Dey look at each otha, den keep walkin' wit deir handz locked, deir friendz turn around an' see dis)
Allen friend#2:Uh oh, Allen handle dat playa
Allen friend#1 : Dam Aaron shut up, all up in folkz business ,act like u don't see dem
Allen friend #2: but i do
Allen friend #1: MAN, keep walking wit ur retarded azz
(Allen an' Tawanna laugh)
Tawanna: Oh, we almost passed my car
Allen: U almost passed it, i don't kno wut it lookz like
(Tawanna smilez)
(All of Tawanna's friend git in the car)
Allen friend #1: Yo Allen, we fixin'2 go inside an' git our stuff u can finish talkin' an' we'll meet back inside, ight
Allen: coo
(Hiz friendz walk back into the bowling alley)
(Allen holdin' her hand still an' caressin' it)
Allen : (lickz hiz lipz)Imma call u as soon as I git home ight
Tawanna: if u want 2
Allen: U kno i do
(Tawanna blushes)
(Meanwhile in T's car, her friendz r waitin' impatiently)
Tawanna's friend #1 : (yellin)Dam T hurry
Tawanna: (yellz back) Hold on, i'll b dere
Tawanna: ....So i'll b excpectin' ur call
Allen: Oh, fa sho, count on it
Allen: .... Bye babygurl(gives her a hug)
Tawanna : (smilez)bye
(Tawanna walkz away, Allen is watchin' her walk away, he lookz at her ,den down at da phone # on hiz handz, he lickz hiz lipz den jogz bak into da bowlin' alley.)

[ September 15, 2002: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

omg dat stuff was too tight. everybody yall keepin it so clean. ima take a shot.sorry mizdiamonds. i ain't been on, so i jus read the message. but it's cool. i like this post.

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

when allen gets back to the bowling alley he spots his friends and goes to sit wit em.
AI friend#1:so u got her digits huh?
allen :braggin::: yea yea,i got em
ai friend#3: and u really gone call?
allen: hellllllllll yea.i'd be stupid not to.
ai friend#2: look nigga u need ta get a reality check. think about yo situation. u a nigga in the projects, wit out a lotta money.that girl is a rich chick from a preppy neighborhood, and u know her ass is rich!
ai friend1: yep yep.
allen: ok ok ok , so yall got a lil jealous.
ai friend2: whateva u say.mumbles:dumbass
(allen acts like he didn't hear it.)
ai friend3: so we gone be out. it's gettin late, holla.
(allen sits alone when his friend pops back in the door.)
ai friend2: ay. u gone give us a ride?
allen: mumbling:i should let yo ass walk.
but im tired my damn self.
(back at tawanna's her and her girls are talkin)
tawanna: so yall think he cute?
t friend1: yea he aight if u like em broke.
tawanna: whateva money aint a a big thang wit me. yall should know that!
t friend2: well what about your mother. she won't go for that s***.
t friend3: and don't forget the school thang.
tawanna: u know what i got a plan o solve that.....i'll transfer,that way i can still see him at school and there won't be any problems wit differences betweebn the schools.
t friend3: yea and u think that's gonna be ok? not ta sound all preppy but im to good for that school.not to mention yo mom won't let u go.
(tawanna's friends go on and on..................and on. allen is at his place chillin in his room thinkin about tawanna and tawanna is thinkin about allen.)

j.iverson · Sixth Man Joined: Sep 13, 2002 Posts: 74

wonderin if yall gonna write something bout when both their mom find out

A.I.lova

quote:
Originally posted by iverson423:
omg dat stuff was too tight. everybody yall keepin it so clean. ima take a shot.sorry mizdiamonds. i ain't been on, so i jus read the message. but it's cool. i like this post.

thanx

im about 2 add sum in a min.

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

this story is real tight, mizdiands u were real smart startin a topic like dis Errybody KEEP DOING UR THANG!!!!

A.I.lova

(Tawanna at home pacin by da phone)
Tawanna: (thinkin)dam call already
Allen : (talkin' 2 himself) ight, mayb i should wait 5 more min. b4 i call her, so i don't seem desperate.........
(12 secondz lata)
Allen: Long enuff(pickz up da phone an' dialz T's numba)
( Tawanna, still pacin' by da phone wen it ringz, jumpz up an' down den collectz herself an' answerz calmly)
Tawanna: Hello?
(Not knowin' her mom wuz on da otha end listenin)
Allen: Hello? I tol' u i'd call
Tawanna: (Pretendin' not 2 kno who it wuz) Who iz dis
Allen: Itz me Allen
Tawanna: (still pretendin' not2 kno) Allen who?
Allen: Da one an' only dat nigga Allen Iverson aka AI
Tawanna: (laughs) I knew wh it wuz i wuz playin
Allen: Don't play like dat GURL! I thought u 4got about me so soon
Tawanna: Neva
(Awkward silence)
Allen: So wutz up wit me an' u
Tawanna: U da man, u tell me
Allen : (Hesitating) Hey T?
Tawanna: (anxiously knowin wut he wuz gonna ask but keepin' her cool) wut?
Allen: (after 5 sec of silence) U wanna b my gurl
Tawanna: (thinkin) Thought u'd neva ask
Tawanna: .....yea
Allen: But da school thang an' our neighborhoodz ....Im on da otha side of town, an' u kno about da rivalryz
Tawanna: Ur gonna let silly shyt like dat cum between us
Allen: Nah, neva, especially 4 u
Tawanna: (blushin)
Tawanna: Imma giv u my cell 2 call, bcuz my parentz r sleepin' an' i wanna talk 2 u longer
Allen: Datz coo
(Tawanna givz allen da numba)
Tawanna: Call me now
Allen: U kno i will
(allen hangz up)
(Tawanna's mom calls from her room)
Tawanna mom: Tawanna!
Tawanna: MA
Tawanna: Come here, an' bring ur cell phone
...................

[ September 15, 2002: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

MizDiamonds

Oh my God...this story is tight.I am so excited (right now) for someone to continue this story. When I posted this topic I never thought that ya'll would show me love like this.
Thanks ya'll.
I would write something, but I have writers block right now.
Keep it up ya'll its hot.
And thanks Iversongurl4000
*~MizD~*

[ September 15, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

lol, it's cool it's cool. i would reply another thingy but i don't think mine was that good. so i'll hand it ova to yall.miz diamonds u cool.we show everyone love!!!!

j.iverson · Sixth Man Joined: Sep 13, 2002 Posts: 74

yea dis is tight keep writin i can't wait to read whats next

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Can I post something on this story

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

sure!!!

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Tawanna- Why?
Mom- Cuz I said so, and don't question me.
(Tawanna walking slowly tryin to think of something to tell her mom)
Mom- Who is Allen?
Tawanna- Ma, he is just a boy I met tonight while I was at the bowling alley.
Mom-And?
Tawanna-And, we just really hit off.
Mom- T, I've heard about him,I don't like his type.
Tawanna-What you mean,just because he may not be as wealthy as us he bad?
Mom-No, I just know his type?
T-(getting a little angry) What is his type?
Mom-He the type that wants one thing and one thing only and when he gets that he's gone.And watch who you get base wit in your voice don't forget I'm still yo moma.
T-Why you always doing this?
Mom-Doing what?
T-Act like just because somebody aint got money they aint worth nothing?
Mom-I'm not acting like that look Tawanna i'm ending this here and now, I don't want you messing with him.
T-(getting loud) Who do you think you are tellin me who I can and can't mess with?
Mom-I think I'm your mother and until you move out or start paying bills around here I'll tell you what to do. And don't think you to old for a ass whoopin.
T- Sorry Ma, but I really like him
Mom-You don't know what you like
T-Yes I do, and I like him.
Mom-I don't want to here anymore Tawanna about this I said you can't talk to him and I mean it. Now get yur ass out my room.
(Tawanna walks off sucking her teeth)
Mom- And who you sucking your teeth at?
T- Nobody
Mom- Thought so. Think you grown, you don lost your baby mind.
(Tawanna walks in here room and slams the door.

Mom-(yells from here room) Don't slam that damn door no more.
(Tawanna gets on the phone and tells her friends about what happened.)
Sorry if I messed the story up. It's my first time.

MizDiamonds

That was good gurl,It makes the story seem more real and controversial.Hey it keeps it going.

I want to go next if no one minds.

A.I.lova

Naw itz not messed up u did good

Tawanna: (thinkin) Dam she alwayz mess thingz up, i don't care.imma keep dat boi
(meanwhile at Allen's house)
Allen: (Dialin cell numba but only gettin answerin machine)
(tawannaz cell phone asnwerin' machine:: Hey dis is Tawanna im not able 2 receive ur phone call right now, but i'll try an' git back at chu az soon az possible,ight::BEEP::
(Allen leavin message on machine)
Allen: Hey Tawanna itz Allen, dis is my 6 th message an' ur still not pickin' up i guess i'll holla at u lata ight
Allen: (thinkin) dam y izn't she pickin' up, wut i'd say......mayb she realized im not az rich az she iz....nah dam allen itz not u calm down nigga, itz gonna b ight..
(Allen mom walks in his room an' sees him wit da phone in his hand)
Mom: Wen did u git bak
Allen: bout an' hour ago
Mom: Did y'all win?
Allen: And u kno dis
(Dey giv each otha dap)
Mom: Still runnin thangz huh, datz my baby
Allen: Oh i've been runnin' em

Mom: So who is she dat ur callin' late at night
Allen: How'd u kno she wuz a she, it could hav been Aaron
Mom: (chucklez) boi pleaz I kno u like da back of my hand
(allen chucklez)
Mom: So whoz da gurl datz got my baby callin' at almost 2 in da mornin..., doz she go 2 ur school?
Allen: Not exactly
Mom: Meanin...
Allen: She goz 2 Montgomery
Mom: Uh huh, HELL NO!
Allen: but ma.......
Mom: Allen I said no, u kno how ppl in dat part of da town r, alwayz lookin' down on otha folkz cuz dey got money.if sumethin' were 2 happen 2 dat gurl u would b 2 blame evn if it wuz her fault, but dey would kno where u were 4rm
Allen: But ma, shez not like dat shez...
Mom: (interruptin)No iz no end of conversation.(goz ova 2 kiss him goodnight on da cheek, but Allen turnz away)
Mom: so itz like dat
Allen: (mumbling) yea
Mom: WUt?
Allen: (in a low voice)Goodnight ma
(Hiz mom leavz da room)
Allen : DAM! y iz dis happenin'
(On da otha side of town)
Tawanna: DAM! y iz dis happenin'

hotgurl76

Everybody's story is tight. I can't write where she left off cuz I ain't got nothing to write right there. ~Holla~

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Man, everybody else post are so good, I don messed up the story, sorry yall ,this weed got me buggin.

hotgurl76

The story got a little of track becuz Tawanna's mom didn't know about their relationship for a while. But it's all good though. ~Holla~

MizDiamonds

(Tawana and her friend,#1, talk over the phone..she was very cautious and did not want her mother to hear her plot so she used her cell phone)
* * * * * *
Tawana:I cant believe she is acting like this.What makes Allen so bad that I cant talk to him.
Friend#1:I told you that your momma wasn't going to go for it but no you wanted to be the hard headed chick and not care.
Tawana:I was not being hard headed,I just feel that it is time that I began making my own decisions.
Friend#1:Gurl,you ain't grown.who the hell are you trying to you emmulate Madonna?
Tawana:Yes I am grown...well almost anyway.And that whole Madonna skit was not called for.
Friend#1:I know but I just thought it would be funny if I said it.
Tawana:Well I'm not laughing and besides nothing about me or Madonna is compattable.
Friend#1

amn I'm sorry Ms.Turner...Gurl lighten up.
Tawana

Tawana begins laughing histericly)Ha ha ha ...(then she becomes serious again)are you happy now...come on this is serious.If I wanted to joke around I would have called a damn clown to speak to cause you and I both know that they are filled with a lot of shitty ass jokes.Gurl,I think I love him and...
(her friend cuts her off)
Friend#1:What do you mean you think you love him....you just met him a few hours ago...thats your whole problem Tawana.You love everybody that you date too quickly,and thats why your ass is always getting hurt and running home to cry to your mother.Whats wrong with you.You claim that your grown but your not acting like it...what the hell do you know about him? Nothing!all you know is that he lives in the ghetto and goes to Bethel High!
(Tawana begins to cry on the other end of the phone)
Friend#1:I'm sorry Tawana and I didn't want to hurt your feelings but I was just being honest.
Tawana:how could you say that?
Friend#1:I was just speaking the truth and you know it.
Tawana:Not everyone that I dated hurt me.
Friend#1:Oh yeah,name one?
Tawana:Jeremy didn't hurt me.
Friend#1:Gurl please...he was trying to talk to that chick Natasha.
Tawana:Well what about Andrew?
Friend#1:He cheated on you!
Tawana:what about...
(she is once again cut off)
Friend#1:Tawana..it really doesn't make any sense to continue..they were all dogs and they all hurt you.
Tawana:your right...but,they were all dogs that went to our highschool.
Friend#1:Soooo what!
Tawana:Allen doesn't go to our school so he's probobaly not a dog.
Friend#1:Yeah but then again he probobaly is a dog..a project dog.
Tawana:Why does that constantly come up in the conversation.Just because he comes from the hood does not publicize the fact that he might hurt me.
(There was silence)
Tawana:you know what?
Friend#1:what?
Tawana:I'm going to see him anyway no matter what anyone says.I'm going to prove that you and my mother are wrong.
Friend#1:Tawana wait..
Tawana:no you wait.I'm tired of this.I'm just going to see him.I don't care anymore.I can honestly see me spending the rest of my life with this guy..
Friend#1:are you serious?
Tawana:yes I am...I am very serious.
Friend#1:Fine Tawana. It doesnt make any sense for me to argue with you anymore..your not going to listen anyway.
Tawana:you would think that after all of these years of being my friend that you would realize that.so are you with me or not?
(her friend hesitates and then finally gives in.)
Friend#1

nervously)I'm with you.
Tawana

with a seigh of relief)Good gurl.Thats what I like to hear.
(both gurls begin laughing-They then begin to plot the situation)
* * * * * *

*~MizD~*

iversonschick · Rookie Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: Canada

i love dis story im so excited 2 read da rest!!!!!!!!!!!!i love da part wit all da b/f and her mom.

Is her dad alive in dis story? if he is yall should talk bout him and also her brotha

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

yep yep yall doin good.

AI_LL

The next day while AI was in school his friends approached him.

AIF1: So you talked to rich girl last night.
Allen: Man I don't feel like talking about it.
AIF2: What happened
Allen: What part of I don't wanna talk about it don't you understand.
Walking away.
AIF2: I told him don't mess with that girl now his heart broken in one day
AIF1: Nigga shut up
Walking away, leaving him standing alone

While back at Tawanna's school her and her girls were getting a laugh out of their plan and how it sounded like it was top secret.

TF1: So we goin go over there today before or after his practice.
Tawanna: After give us more time to talk.
TF1: All right then what you tell yo moma
Tawanna: Nothing I know what time to be in the house.
TF1: What you goin tell her if she start questioning you.
Tawanna: I'll just tell her we went to get something to eat or something hell let me lie to her on the spot.
TF1: You aren't the best liar in the world
Tawanna: I'm getting good at the lying thing for your information
TF1: Yea right you can't even keep a strait face.
Tawanna: I'm getting better at it I've been working on it.

Allen was on his way to practice his friend decides to be serious with him.
AIF1: So what's up for real dog.
Allen: Man look last night I call her we was talking for a couple of minutes or whatever I asked her to be my girl she said aiight. She tells me to call her on the cellie or whatever cause she wanted to talk longer or something so I call the damn phone and she wont answer so I'm at home thinking like she dissed me and used the cell phone s*** for a way to get off the phone with me.
AIF1: So why you didn't call the house back.
Allen: Nigga it was almost 2 in the mourning you think I'm goin let her moma curse me out.
Besides I told my moms and she flips out on me I thought she was goin be happy for me and she just told me flat out no I can't mess with her.
AIF1: But didn't you say she don't want you anyway
Allen; I think I don't know for sure why she didn't answer my calls
AIF1: Yea she probably got the talking with her girls and they was like you want his dirty ass living in the projects and running around with all them thugs.
Allen: You didn't even have to go that far.
AIF1: You know that's what them rich girls be saying.
Allen: And I aint dirty nigga I take a bath.
AIF1: They don't know that.
After practice Allen was outside clowning with his boys when one of them noticed Tawanna.
AIF3: Look who's here
Allen turned around and saw Tawanna coming his way.
Tawanna: Can we talk
Allen: About
Tawanna: What's wrong with you
Noticing his friend checking Tawanna out
Allen: Nothing come on
They started walking away from his nosey friends.
Tawanna: I'm sorry I didn't answer your call my moma was tripping last night.
Allen: Oh really
Tawanna: Yea she said she didn't want me to mess with yo type
Allen: So I guess you can't talk to me then unhhh.
Tawanna: Naw I said I still like you and I want to make the choice on if your good enough for me or not.
Allen: So am I
Tawanna: Yea
Allen: My moms think you to good for me
Tawanna: What
Allen: She said she don't want me messing with people on yo side of town.
Tawanna: Why not
Allen: She think yall look down on everybody like yo moma look down on me and she don't even know me
Tawanna: She heard about you and she said you only want one thing from me.
(It was silence)
Tawanna: So is that all you wanted from me
Allen: Girl please you act like I can't get non when I please I can have any girl I want almost but I wanted you cause I'm not for these hoes I know I'm not rich or nothing but these girls in this school don't care. You play a sport and you good at it they be like I know he going to the league. But yall girls on yo side of town all like look at the way he dressed look where he live at his car is so ragly.
Tawanna: I didn't say that
Allen: That's cause you saw through that un like some people eventually they'll talk you into it to it never fails.
Tawanna: So am I still your girl
Allen: If you still wanna be

MizDiamonds

That was hot AI_LL,so who wants to go next?

*~MizD~*
A.K.A. The Mohagony~Mommie

MizDiamonds

(Allen and Tawana continue talking)

Tawana:yeah I still want to be your gurl...but how are we going to make this work?
Allen:I don't know..I mean,both your moms and mine are buggin.
(Allen's friends begin to get impatient)
Allenfriend#1:Allen hurry up n***a!
Allen

ump you brakes yo.Cant you see that I'm speaking to my gurl.
Tawana:Your gurl...I like the sound of that.
Allen:I like the sound of it too.
Tawana:Look Allen,I really want to be with you for he rest of my life and...
Allen:Whoa..shorty slow down.I don't know about all of that now.
Tawana:What...don't you want to be with me?
Allen:I mean yeah..but I don't know about the rest of our lives.Thats a long ass time.
Tawana:so you don't love me.
Allen:Look Tawana...I never said I loved you.I like you...I like you a lot..I don't even know that much about you yet.
(Allen noticed that Tawana looked sad,so he tried to say something to cheer her up)
Allen:But in time that will happen.

hotgurl76

That was mad funny. Ya'll tight. I guess I'll go next.

hotgurl76

Tawanna: Well since u don't feel the same way I think I should leave.
Allen: No wait.
Tawanna: No u wait. I'm tired of niggas fucking up my life so I can wait on them. I need love too and I don't have time for people to be playing games with my feelings. So, I think I'll go back to my rich little neighborhood where people share the same dreams as me.
(Allen looking hurt as Tawanna walks off crying)
(Tawanna tells her friends to get in the car and they drive off)
AF1: What the hell happened to u?
Allen: (talking really soft like he bout to cry) I told her that I didn't love her and that I didn't know if I wanted to spend the rest of my life with her.
AI2: oooooh. man what have u done?
Allen: I don't know. I feel like..... I don't know a gurl has neva hurt me like that before. I on't even know y I let her get to me like that.
AI3: Mayb u do love her and u just indenial.
ALlen: no, I just like her a lot, a whole lot.
AIF2: Mayb u should call her.
AIF3: What did she say to u to get u like this man?
ALlen: She told me that she was gonna go back to her little rich neighborhood where people shared the same dreams as her.
AIF2: ooooh. o gurl cold.
Allen: that hurt so bad man. I can't even explain.
AIF2: Man I think u do love her u just don't wanna love her yet.
Allen: w/e man I know what I feel.
AIF2: And I know how u look.
AIF3: All I know is u betta str8ten up before u go home or ur mama gone start asking questions
Allen: I know so think of somethin to make me laugh.
AIF2: We got a game 2morrow against bad breath Paul Walker (making up a name)
ALlen: (laughing) I pray he on't say nothing to me
AIF3: we all do
(Allen looking depressed again)
AIF2: ok man I don't know what 2 say 2 get u 2 stop thinking about her.
Allen: I don't either. I just wanna go home and go to sleep.
AIF1: And dream about Tawanna:
AIF2: U ain't said nothing all day J was up which u?
AIF1: I got a crush on her friend Angie.
ALlen: ooooh. (laughing)
AIF1: and I got her digits and I will be calling her tonight so I need to go home.
ALlen: I think we all do.
(They roll out)

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

quote:
Originally posted by hotgurl76:
The story got a little of track becuz Tawanna's mom didn't know about their relationship for a while. But it's all good though. ~Holla~

That's the real story this is our story.

hotgurl76

U so right and our story better than the real story. ~Holla~

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

Everybody keeps talking on this and I don't wanna feel left out but I really don't know what to say because I'm not a good story maker. Anyways I'll try to think of something or just wait until a different subject is posted.

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

Hey yall. I just wanna let yall know that I like yall's story. I think it's cute. Anyways, I'll post something on it once I get in the grove. But, yall keep on doing yall's thang......yall doing good.

MizDiamonds

Oh yeah..lets just call Allens friend #1
-Omar.
* * * * * *
(That night:Allens friend and Angie were talking on the phone.During the conversation,Allen and Tawana were brought up)
* * * * * *
Omar:Angela,whats up with Allen and Tawana?
Angie:From what I hear...there is no more Allen and Tawana.
Omar:why not?
Angie:She was like he said that he don't want to be with her so whats the point of wasting time?
Omar:I know Allen didn't say that!
Angie:Oh yeah?...how do you know that cause Tawana's not a liar.
Omar:I didn't say that she was.But Allens not a liar eighter.I know that Allen really likes Tawana.He just isn't real good at expressing his feelings to females ...s***..from the way he looks and sounds when he talks about her..huh...anyone can tell that he's fienin for her.
Angie:word...thats the same way she is too.
Omar:Its obvious that they like eachother.
Angie:I know thats right...hey omar...
Omar:yeah
Angie:I know its none of my business but is Allen the type to play girls?
Omar:Naah thats not his style.Why?
Angie:I was just curious because Tawana was being very secure of her feelings and just about everyone that she has dated has ended up hurting her.
Omar

amn..its like that with shorty?I didn't even know.Thats probobaly why she walked off in a hurry today cause in my head I was trippin on the s*** like yo,she didn't even give home boy a chance to explain.I mean I ain't even gonna front...homie was hurt when she was like she was gonna go back to the rich n***az in her neighborhood.
Angie:She said thar for real?
Omar:Thats what he told me.
Angie

h is that so?...you know what I'm not even gonna blow her up for that no more.Look Omar...we have to get them back together..
Omar:I know.
Angie:Just have Allen at the bowling alley tomorrow after school.
Omar:Aaight,cool.bye.
Angie:bye baby.
(Angie and Omar hang up on eachother and then she calls Tawana)
* * * * * * *
Tawana:Hello
Angie:yo Tawana,this is Angie.Where's your mom?
Tawana:she's not home from work yet.Why?
Angie:Good now we can get down to business.Lets talk about what happened between you and Allen today.
Tawana:There's nothing to talk about,he doesn't want me so lets just let that be that.
Angie:Gurl...you got it all mixed up.Remember in the car today when I told you that I had hooked up with one of Allen's friends?
Tawana:Yeah I remember.
Angie:well I just got off of the phone with him and he told me that Allen is not very good at expressing his feelings to females.
Tawana:He probobaly just said that to cover for him.
Angie:Look...do you like Allen or not?
Tawana:yeah I like him.
Angie:And do you want him back or not?
Tawana:well I'm not trying to be with someone who...
Angie:That was not what I asked you!do you want him back or not?
Tawana:I mean yeah I want him back and...
(Tawana is cut off)
Angie:well why are you trying to argue with me then? just come get me after school and we'll talk about it on the way to the bowlig alley.
Tawana:The bowling alley?....hello...hello
(Tawana doesn't hear any responce.All she hears is the sound of the dial tone from the phone connection)
* * * * * *
(Mean while,on the other side of town,Allen is on the phone with Omar)
Allen:Hello...

*~MizD~*

[ September 17, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

AI_LL

Omar: Chuck where the hell you been
Allen: Sleep
Omar: Wake yo ass up
Allen: Wuz up
Omar: Let's roll to the bowling alley for a minute
Allen: What
Omar: Let's go to the bowling alley
Allen: What's there
Omar: You really wanna know
Allen: Yea nigga
Omar: Yo girl Tawanna
Allen: Aughhh f*** naw forget that I aint got time for the games she messing with my damn emotions sometimes I'm happy sometimes I'm hurt and it's only been a day and a half or something like that.
Omar: Man she wanna be with you she just so careful that she don't realize what she says.
Allen: What you talking about careful she snapped on me to many times now
Omar: She probably just PMSing you know and her girl said she been hurt a couple of times.
Allen: s*** she hurt me the way them dudes be hurting her.
Omar: Dude you going or not
Allen: Yea I'll meet yall up there
Omar: Leave now
Allen: OK fool
Hanging up the phone Allen sat back and thought about should he go or not. Finally after 10 minutes of thinking he decided to go.

Bowling Alley-
Tawanna and Angie is sitting there waiting for Allen to come in instead Omar arrives.

Omar: He aint here yet
Angie: Nop did he say he was coming
Omar: Yea when I hung up I told him to be on his way
Angie: Oh
Allen walked in the door speaking to some of the people in the bowling alley who called his name. He walked over to the table where they were sitting at.
Allen: Wuz up
Omar: Namh but we'll let you two chat for a while.
Taking Angies hand and leading her away. Allen was still standing up silently.
Tawanna: You not goin say nothing
Allen: Like what
Tawanna: To start with you can say you sorry
Allen: For what
Tawanna: Oh now you don't know I left crying and you don't know
Allen: About that love s***, I'm goin be real with you I don't love you I barely know what love is I don't think I've ever really loved a female out of the family.
Tawanna: So I love you but you don't love me
Allen: You don't love me you don't know me now we like each other a lot by not love that's to far.
Tawanna: How is love to far
Allen: Love girl that's a word that's only meant to be used by true people in love. You don't play with that word man.
Tawanna: Stop calling me a man
Allen: My bad. But shouldn't you be the one saying sorry you the one fucking with my head
Tawanna: How
Allen: One minute we all cool the next you snapping and then you crying man I don't know what to do.
Tawanna: I'm just like that I don't usually cry either I was embarassed after that.
Allen: I was too, People looking at me like I did something wrong.

hotgurl76

That was funnny. I actually believe he like that in real life. lol

MizDiamonds

(Allen and Tawana continue their conversation)
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Tawana:well you did...you hurt me.
Allen:How did I hurt you?
Tawana:You said that you didn't want to be with me.
Allen:Noooo I did not,You assumed that I did not want to be with you.Didn't anyone ever tell you that when you assume,you make an ass out of YOU and not ME!!!
(They both began to laugh)
Allen:And besides Tawana...(he said looking into her eyes)You didn't give me a chance to love you yet.
Tawana:But I want to be with someone who is going to take me seriously and care for me and not just think that its all about sex...
Allen:Is that what you think?
Tawana:Thats what I know.
Allen:So you are going to hold me responcible for what every guy did to you?
Tawana:I didn't say that...
Allen:It seems that thats what you were trying to say but you just said it in a different way.
Allen:so tell me something Tawana..I'm not trying to disrespect you or anything like that but have you ever had sex before?
Tawana:why do you want to know?
Allen:I was just curious because you said that with the guys that you dated it was all about sex and in order for you to be trippin like this you would have had to have sex with them and then they would have probobaly bounced on you after that.
Tawana

idn't your father ever tell you that its not polite to ask a girl if she's a virgin or not?
Allen:I didn't ask you if you were a virgin or not.
Tawana:Technically you did.
Allen:Technically speaking...no I didn't...I wasn't like oh..Tawana..are you a virgin.
Tawana:yes you did because you asked me if I ever had sex or not.
Allen:yeah...if you have ever had sex..nothing about your virginity...sex meaning you could have had oral sex or you could have just sattled up on someones dick...those are two different things.
Tawana:whatever Allen...and yes I am a virgin.
Allen

frustrated)oh my god!!
Tawana:Okay Okay...I have never had any type of sex before.
Allen:Much better...your catching on.
(both of them begin to laugh)
Tawana:You know Allen...your a pretty confusing but logical person.
Allen:yeah and I hope we can logically make this thing work between us....

*~MizD~*

[ September 18, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

[ September 18, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

Hey ladies. I'm loving it and all, but I got a request: could yall like get deeper into the relationship? I love the story though. Keep up the good work yall. Holla

A.I.lova

quote:
Originally posted by MizDiamonds:
(Allen and Tawana continue their conversation)
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Tawana:well you did...you hurt me.
Allen:How did I hurt you?
Tawana:You said that you didn't want to be with me.
Allen:Noooo I did not,You assumed that I did not want to be with you.Didn't anyone ever tell you that when you assume,you make an ass out of YOU and not ME!!!
(They both began to laugh)
Allen:And besides Tawana...(he said looking into her eyes)You didn't give me a chance to love you yet.
Tawana:But I want to be with someone who is going to take me seriously and care for me and not just think that its all about sex...
Allen:Is that what you think?
Tawana:Thats what I know.
Allen:So you are going to hold me responcible for what every guy did to you?
Tawana:I didn't say that...
Allen:It seems that thats what you were trying to say but you just said it in a different way.
Allen:so tell me something Tawana..I'm not trying to disrespect you or anything like that but have you ever had sex before?
Tawana:why do you want to know?
Allen:I was just curious because you said that with the guys that you dated it was all about sex and in order for you to be trippin like this you would have had to have sex with them and then they would have probobaly bounced on you after that.
Tawana idn't your father ever tell you that its not polite to ask a girl if she's a virgin or not?
Allen:I didn't ask you if you were a virgin or not.
Tawana:Technically you did.
Allen:Technically speaking...no I didn't...I wasn't like oh..Tawana..are you a virgin.
Tawana:yes you did because you asked me if I ever had sex or not.
Allen:yeah...if you have ever had sex..nothing about your virginity...sex meaning you could have had oral sex or you could have just sattled up on someones dick...those are two different things.
Tawana:whatever Allen...and yes I am a virgin.
Allen frustrated)oh my god!!
Tawana:Okay Okay...I have never had any type of sex before.
Allen:Much better...your catching on.
(both of them begin to laugh)
Tawana:You know Allen...your a pretty confusing but logical person.
Allen:yeah and I hope we can logically make this thing work between us....

*~MizD~*

[ September 18, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

[ September 18, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

DAM u should becom a writer cuz dat shyt wuz ill, imma write mo wen i git back 4rm school cuz im fixin' 2 rollout 2 go 2 school right now

yungsta2G5 · All-Star Joined: Jun 7, 2002 Posts: 776

You had me rollin' when u said saddled up on somebody's dick...I was like WTF! ha ha ha!

MizDiamonds

Thanks for the replies ya'll...I'm glad to know that ya'll are loving the story and to Asshana_MsThang,I'm going to try to give details and get deeper into their relationship.
So does anyone want to go next?

*~MizD~*

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

Ms_Diamonds, keep it going ma. YOu are a good story teller. Plus, all I do is sit at home all day, and yall kids (lol) keep me going and I must admit, yall kinda keep me up on my news too. Holla.

MizDiamonds

Once again to all of the people who replied (including AI_LL,AILOVE,PRETY PUERTORICAN AND EVERYONE ELSE:I cant remember all of the names but I am going to get all of them and write them in the next post)thanks again and ya'll stories were hot

Is anyone else going to reply cause I'm dying here and I really have writers block.
I cant come up with s***.
Please help me out ya'll.

*~MizD~*

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

Look, start from this:

Tawanna and Allen along with her girls and his boys are at the bowling alley or the mall (which ever yall choose), and .............I can't come up with anything else.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

quote:
Originally posted by MizDiamonds:
Once again to all of the people who replied (including AI_LL,AILOVE,PRETY PUERTORICAN AND EVERYONE ELSE:I cant remember all of the names but I am going to get all of them and write them in the next post)thanks again and ya'll stories were hot

Is anyone else going to reply cause I'm dying here and I really have writers block.
I cant come up with s***.
Please help me out ya'll.

*~MizD~*

Damn you fucked my name all to pieces. But it's all good. Thanx for givin me my props. I can't write anything anymore. My juices aren't flowing right now. I'll probly write some tonight though. Anywayz stay up.

A.I.lova

quote:
Originally posted by MizDiamonds:
(Allen and Tawana continue their conversation)
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Tawana:well you did...you hurt me.
Allen:How did I hurt you?
Tawana:You said that you didn't want to be with me.
Allen:Noooo I did not,You assumed that I did not want to be with you.Didn't anyone ever tell you that when you assume,you make an ass out of YOU and not ME!!!
(They both began to laugh)
Allen:And besides Tawana...(he said looking into her eyes)You didn't give me a chance to love you yet.
Tawana:But I want to be with someone who is going to take me seriously and care for me and not just think that its all about sex...
Allen:Is that what you think?
Tawana:Thats what I know.
Allen:So you are going to hold me responcible for what every guy did to you?
Tawana:I didn't say that...
Allen:It seems that thats what you were trying to say but you just said it in a different way.
Allen:so tell me something Tawana..I'm not trying to disrespect you or anything like that but have you ever had sex before?
Tawana:why do you want to know?
Allen:I was just curious because you said that with the guys that you dated it was all about sex and in order for you to be trippin like this you would have had to have sex with them and then they would have probobaly bounced on you after that.
Tawana idn't your father ever tell you that its not polite to ask a girl if she's a virgin or not?
Allen:I didn't ask you if you were a virgin or not.
Tawana:Technically you did.
Allen:Technically speaking...no I didn't...I wasn't like oh..Tawana..are you a virgin.
Tawana:yes you did because you asked me if I ever had sex or not.
Allen:yeah...if you have ever had sex..nothing about your virginity...sex meaning you could have had oral sex or you could have just sattled up on someones dick...those are two different things.
Tawana:whatever Allen...and yes I am a virgin.
Allen frustrated)oh my god!!
Tawana:Okay Okay...I have never had any type of sex before.
Allen:Much better...your catching on.
(both of them begin to laugh)
Tawana:You know Allen...your a pretty confusing but logical person.
Allen:yeah and I hope we can logically make this thing work between us....

*~MizD~*

[ September 18, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

[ September 18, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

Tawanna: I kno we can
(allen smilez)
Allen: SO ur really a virgin
Tawanna: Dam Ur still on dat, I kno ur not
Allen: Wutz dat supposed 2 mean
Tawanna: (hestitatin but den she sayzzz.....)Neva mind
Allen: If u really must kno, Im not, but im not gonna lie it wuz in eighth grade afta da dance, we were in da back an' she wuz kissin' me on my neck den she started kissin' all on my ear an' stuff, datz my spot, den one thang lead 2 anotha....next thang i kno we bed
(5 mins lata)
Tawanna: Thanx 4 bein honest
Allen: (lickz lipz) ur welcome
Tawanna: Ur spot iz ur earz, mine 2
Allen: (starin at her)
Tawanna: Ay snap out of it
Allen: huh....oh my bad jus thinkin
Tawanna: About?
Allen: u
(slience)
(Finally Allen couldn't resist so he leanz in an' givz a her a slow passionate kiss)
Tawanna: .......
Allen: dam i had 2 do dat
Tawanna:.........
Allen: Aren't u gonna say nething, wuz it da bad
Tawanna: Nah it wuz good
Allen: I can make it betta
(leanz in 2 kiss her, but she stopz him)
Tawanna: Not here( she winkz at him)
Allen: Oh......c'mon
(Tawanna gitz up an' dey go 2 da alley behind da bowling alley)
(Allen leanz in an' startz kissin' her ,deir kissin' an' touchin wen Tawanna stopz him)
Allen: wutz dat 4
Tawanna: I don't want 1 thing 2 lead 2 anotha

Soorry yall if dat wuz bad, but i had 2 git y'all 2 start writin

A.I.lova

quote:
Originally posted by MizDiamonds:
Once again to all of the people who replied (including AI_LL,AILOVE,PRETY PUERTORICAN AND EVERYONE ELSE:I cant remember all of the names but I am going to get all of them and write them in the next post)thanks again and ya'll stories were hot

Is anyone else going to reply cause I'm dying here and I really have writers block.
I cant come up with s***.
Please help me out ya'll.

*~MizD~*

Thanx 4 da propz, but ur really good at writin' story

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

that was cute. keep going.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Allen-What you gone get me all hot then make me stop.
Tawanna-Look we just really hooked up and I want to get to know you first before we you know
Allen-I understand shorty.
Tawanna-Plus doing it in a alley is a little hoey.
(They laugh)
Allen-Can I get one more kiss?
Tawanna-I think you got enough
Allen-Aww, it's like that?
Tawanna-Yea it's like that.
Allen-Aight then let's go see what the others are doing?
(They walk back to the alley and they chillin)
Next day Allen telling his boys about him and Tawanna)
Allen-Yea we were talkin or whateva then I told her about how i lost my virginity.
AllenFriend#1- You told her?
Allen-Why not?
AllenFriend#2-Why tell her, s*** did she tell you her story.
Allen- She a virgin
Friend#1- Virgin, damn it's gone be a year before you get into her panties.
Friend#2-A year i say about 2 yrs.
(They laugh)
Allen-Naw I don't think homegirl like that. She a freak but she wants to get to know me first.
Friensd#2-Oh she the type that wants a long term relationship.
Friend#1-Yea, might as well enjoy are time together now cuz in a few more weeks we ain't gone see you know more.
Allen-Why not?
Friend#1-Cuz you gone be under shorty's ass all day.
( They all laugh)
Friend#2- Yea he gone be the type at home takin care of the kids and cleaning the house.
Friend#1-Yea, washing dishes, hanging out cloths, cooking diner.
Allen-Yall can kiss my ass. Look I gotta bounce. My mom's expecting family over.
Friend#1-Aight playa
Friend#2-Bye Mr. Turner
( Allen walks away laughing)
Sorry if I messed it up.

[ September 22, 2002: Message edited by: prettypuertorican ]

A.I.lova

dat wuzn't messed up dat wuz coo

Meanwhile wit Tawanna friendz on dat sme day......

TF#1: So where did u an' allen go I turned around an' yall were gone
Tawanna: We were at da back of da alley
(All of her friendz stop wut deir doin' an' stare at her)
TF#2: SAY WUT?????hol up, bak up rewind.,WUT???Goodie gurl T in an' alley wit a nigga ,oh detailz PLEAZ
(tawanna chucklez)
Tawanna: U think u got jokez, but nah we kissed in dere den he took me 2 da back an' we were jus kissin' an' stuff datz it
TF#3: and........
Tawanna: and wut....
TF#1: Did dat nigga handle it
Tawanna: Letz jus say DAM!
(dey laugh)
TF#2: I take dat az a yes
Tawanna: I stopped him though
TF#1: Why?
Tawanna: Cuz i wuz afraid one thing would lead 2 anotha an' he iz fine an' I don't think I could hav stopped myself...but i wanna git 2 kno him more u kno
TF#1 : (Jokingly) Oh my lil Tawanna's growin up ( grabz a kleenx)
Tawanna: Ha ha hell
(they laugh)
Tawanna: Im supposed 2 meet him at sum address he gave me, ya'll wanna go
TF#1: Ain't nuthin else 2 do
TF#2: Me neither
TF#3: Sme hea, letz go

At Omarz house
Allen: Yo nigga clean ur house Tawanna iz supposed 2 b hea any mitune i think
Omar: Wut, u gave her my address ,nigga dis ain't motel 6 can't yall meet sumewhere else
Allen: Man shut up, jus clean
Omar: Don't git smart, u betta b lucky my parentz ain't comin bak until 2morrow night
She'z bringin her friendz right
Allen: I 'ont kno, but i jus wanna c her bad
AF#2: Nigga can we say SPRUNG!
Allen: It ain't evn like dat
Omar: Den itz like wut......
(knock on da door)
Allen: Itz time 2 git down, dere hea Omar git da door
Omar: I kno dis nigga iz not givin orderz in my dam house
AF#3: Git da dam door
(Omar at da door)
Omar: Who iz it
Voice: Open da door
(Omar openz da door, but 2 all deir surprise itz Allen's mom)
Allen: MA, wut chu doin' hea
AIMom: Omars parentz wanted me 2 chek on yall
Allen: We're straight az u can see
AImom: Itz clean 2, why y'all cleanin.ooohhh y'all got guest
Allen: Yea ma, we're coo u can go now
(Az his mom iz about 2 leav , Tawanna an' da gurlz walk in)
Allen: (under his breath) Dam here we go......

sorry y'all i had 2 add drama

[ September 22, 2002: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

AIMom-Uhmm whatz this?
Allen-Whatz what?
AiMom-Don't play dumb boy, what are they doing here?
TF#1-Damn Tawanna you aint tell me his mom going to be here to.
T-Shhhh!!
AIMom- Oh so this is Tawanna.
Allen-Ma I don't know who this is.
AIMom-Aint this the girl you wanted to hook up with?
Allen- Naw her name was Tawamma not Tawanna
AIMom-Naw I'm sure you said Tawanna.
Tawanna- Ughh,I was looking for McDonalds and we were like maybe these people knew where it is.
Omar-Yea see what you do is take a left at then end of the block and
(Ann interupts)
Ann-McDonalds girl you had to pass it when you where coming up here?
Tawanna- Did I? We must have missed it
Ann-It's hard to miss all you gotta do is look for a big ass M made out of french fries.
Tawanna-Well let me go back and try to find it.
Ann-Hold up, and why would you stop here and there's like 5 houses before this one?
Tawanna-This one looks less scary.
Ann-What?
Allen- Moma can't you see them girls are hungry and should be ON THEIR WAY to go eat.
Ann-Ugg Huh
Tawanna- Yea well let me go nice meeting you all. Bye.
( They hurry up and leave)
Tawanna-Damn that was close
TF#1-Hell yeah.
Tawanna-I wonder what she saying to Allen.

[ September 22, 2002: Message edited by: prettypuertorican ]

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Yall the juices are flowing tonight I keep coming up with ideas to write stuff, please somebody write next so I can branch off of what you write. I think a dude needs to write unless one already has? But next...

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

**Meanwhile, at the house**

Ann:So, that is Ms Tawanna, huh?
Allen: Nah mama. I told you we didn't know who she was.
Ann: So, you mean to tell me that these girls just so happened to be on this side of town and stumbled up Omar's house, and wanted to know where McDonanld's was? Right?
Allen: Yea, I guess you can say that mama.
Ann: You lying.
Allen: No I'm not!!
Ann: Yea you are. I know you.
Ann: Now look, I told you I didnt want you to talk to her didn't I?
Allen: Yea mama, but it wasn't her.
Ann: Whatever. You lying!! Anyways, call me before you come home. You hear me?
Allen: Yea mama. Holla.
**They give each other dap, then Ann leaves.**
I hope I didn't mess up yall's flow. If I did, let me know. I think I did. I like the way yall tell yalls anyway.

AI_LL

Hello How is everyone doing I'm fine but anyway I'll just start writing. Oh and yall are doing oh so well
*********************************************
Ann walking out of the house.
Ann: Them damn boys must take me for some kind of joke how old do I look to them. That's OK I'll teach him not to lie to me again.

While in Tawanna's car.
TF1: What you doing
Tawanna: I'm turning around what it look like I'm doing
TF2: It look like you about to get us cursed out.
Tawanna: We just going to see if she goin yet.
TF1: I would tell you to let me off at the corner but I'm scared.

They got back to the house and Tawanna blew the horn on the other side of the street.

Allen and Omar in the house chilling.
Omar: Yo moms a trip
Allen: Hell yea you hear that blowing
Omar: No I didn't hear nothing
Allen: I swear I heard a horn
Omar: I don't know where you heard it (pause) oh I hear it
Allen: Turn off the light

Allen looked out the window
Allen: That's Tawanna why her ass across the street.
Allen went and opened the door.
Allen: Come on
Tawanna and her friends got out the car and ran across the street.
Allen: Where the McDonalds at (laughing)
Tawanna: Oh you laughing but yo ass in here sweating bullets. What the f*** is a Tawamma
Allen: Hey she would of kicked me you and Tawamma ass.
Everyone laughing at Ann then the phone rings.
*********************************************

Sorry for the suck stuff but I'm trying to sell shoes and type and everything at the same time I'll holla at yall when I get home.

[ September 22, 2002: Message edited by: AI_LL ]

MizDiamonds

Hey ya'll,all of these stories are tight.This story is coming out great(it sounds like a book,ya'll know,one of those books from the hiphop generation like "The Coldest Winter Ever"or Flyy Girl" or something like that)
and to Prettypuertorican,sorry for messin up your name ma.
Soooo...Anyone want to go next?

*~MizD~*

Tricina

the phone rangs everyone gets quite.
ALLEN: damm i bet thats my mamma
AI FRIEND: yo moms a trip
allen friend anwser the phone
Allen friend: hello
ANN: I know dem girls came back over there. tell allen i'll deal with him later
ALLEN FREIND: you dawg that was yo mom, she said she know they over hear and she'll deal with you later.
tawanna: ohh sombodys in trouble(laughing)
ALLEN: wahtever. so whats up
Tawanna: nothing so what's up with you.
ALLEN: you know sam old thang. so you wanna talk
Tawanna: o.k
Allen: come on lets go into the room.
allen friend: hey dawg i told you before that this anit no motel hotel holiday inn ight.

hey yall i gots to go somebody help me please.

MizDiamonds

Allen:yo chill out,we just gonna talk.
AIF1:yaeh what ever.
AIF2:Why ya'll cant talk out here?
Allen:cause its personal so keep your big ass nose out of my s*** aiight playboy.
AIF3

amn Allen you seem kinda jumpy,are you okay cause I mean if the little man in your pants is about to jump out all you have to do say so.
(everyone begins to laugh)
Allen:naah it aint even like that...like I said...all we are going to do is talk so just stop all the drama.
AIF2:aaaw...Mr. and mrs.Iverson will be speaking in tongues ladies and gentlemen.
AIF3:s***...they might even go for swimming lessons,ya know,Allen's dick is going to be swimming in tawana vaginal spot cause ya'll know Allen is one bad ass mother...
(he is cut off)
AIF1:Shut yo mouth
(everyone laughs again)
AIF1:what ya'll laughing at?...but for real though,all of ya'll need to shut up cause ya'll are talking mad loud and ya'll dun know that ms.johnson nosey ass is home and as loud as ya'll are talking,I wouldnt be surprised if she heard ya'll and told my moms.
Allen:damn she home for real?
AIF1:yeah
Allen:well anyway we have a conversation to begin(he said pulling Tawanna toward the bedroom door)
AIF1:Whatever man.Just don't bust on my mothers sheet!!(he said screaming down the hall.
Allen

Screaming back)If I do its not my fault!!(Allen then slams the door)
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
(In the kitchen)
AIF2:You know he gonna bone her right?
AIF1:Yeah I know
Angie:Please...Tawana is not that type of girl okay.
Omar:Well...Allen is that type of guy.
AIF2

kay!!!
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
(In the room)
Tawana:so what are we going to talk about?
Allen

holding her hand)Nothin...I just really wanted to...

*~MizD~*

[ September 24, 2002: Message edited by: MizDiamonds ]

hotgurl76

Damn MizDiamonds u could be a writer I can't come up behind that. ~Holla~

MizDiamonds

yes you can ma,I know that you can do it.

*~MizD~*

hotgurl76

nah nah keep going. lol

MizDiamonds

Thats okay ma..
does anyone want to continue the story cause I cant think of anything else.

*~MizD~*

DiAmOnD EyEs

Girl Don't Make Us Threat you.lol

[ September 24, 2002: Message edited by: DiAmOnD EyEs ]

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

I thought Diamond eyes and MizDiamond were the same person. Oh well my bad. And MizDiamond i'm hatin on you right now, you be writin all that good s***, I'm scared to go cuz I know I'll funk the story up. But foreal though gurl keep it going. You is doing so good, I like your parts in the story.

hotgurl76

I agree wit prettypuertorican lol. ~Holla~

Tricina

ALLEN: Get to know you a little better.
TAWANNA:What you mean a little better.
ALLEN: U know
TAWANNA: no i dont know, and if youre talking about sex you can forget it.
ALLEN: See there you go jumoing to conculsion, all i wanna do is spend some time alone with my baby girl
TAWANNA: (Smiling)
ALLEN: U know i care for you. i just wanna hold u. is that alright with u?
TAWANNA: Yes
ALLEN: (he lean in to kiss her)
TAWANNA: i dont want one thing to lead to another
ALLEN: DAMM tawanna why are you always bringing that up, if i want it i'll ask. i know that youre waitng so we gonna wait together
TAWANNA: i hope that youre not mad i just dont want to get played
ALLEN: girl i already told you if i want it i'll get it.
TAWANNA: What you mean by that.
ALLEN: nothing just forget it.
TAWANNA: naw im not forgeting nothing.
ALLEN: look i dont want to argue i just wanna spend time with my baby girl. is that alright with you?
TAWANNA: yes
ALLEN: Alright then where were we?
they start to kiss and you know things got hot.
TAWANNA: Allen i cant
ALLEN: DAMM whats wrong now?
TAWANNA: I just dont feel right
ALLEN: what you mean you dont feel right?
TAWANNA: just not hear not now i dont feel right. I wanna wait untill the right time and place
ALLEN: man i cant be going through this s*** hear
TAWANNA: What you mean you cant be going throught this.
ALLEN: i mean that i cant be going through this with you leading a nigga on.
TAWANNA: im not leading you on i just want to wait a while
ALLEN: Whats the diffference. i mean if we olan to be together and s*** ther should be no difference.
TAWANNA: i just want it to be special
ALLEN: i dont know what bitch fill ya'll females heads up with this special moment. well i dont mean to bust your bubble, but it will never be special. it's just sex.
TAWANNA: i dont belevie that
ALLEN: WELL
TAWANNA: r u mad
ALLEN: hell yeah im mad you suppose to be my girl and we are going through this. you got a nigga all on hard and you sitting up here playing games
TAWANNA: well if you think that im gonna leave
ALLEN

Grabing tawanna hand) naw dont go im sorry
TAWANNA: i just want to wait
ALLEN: O.K . well can we get back to where we were
TAWANNA: i thought we was here to talk
ALLEN: O.K lets talk
allen and tawanna is talking all of aa sudden there's a knock on the door.
a.i f:yo allen wuz up man
ALLEN: DAMM my nigga leave me the f*** alone
a.i f:im just making sure that you didnt fall in.
ALLEN: Nigga shut up
ALLEN: So wuz up
TAWANNA: nothing
ALLEN: U R so pretty, you are the pretty girl i eva seen
TAWANNA: SMILING
allen gets closer to tawanna and he kisses her things starts to heat up (again) and this time tawanna not stoping him one thing lead to another and then........

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

what's up yall. i don't mean to put yall on blast, but how old are yall? lol. i ask that cause yall story is gettin a little steamy like yall terry mcmillian or something. but, for real, it's cool though. yall do yall thang cause i like reading them. oh, hotgurl, it's me million.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Ai#female you is doing so good, you got me scared to reply back too,how yall be cmoing up with this stuff, s*** yall got me all hot n bothered.

Tricina

thank you prettypuertorican. I dont know how i came up with this i just imaagine as if i was them and think about how i can relate to allen and tawanna. at first i was sacared to replay, but once i got started i couldnt stop. well i'll be back with the rest later tonight around 8.

[ September 25, 2002: Message edited by: A.I # 1 female ]

*Bubba Chick03*

Yo that story is so fiyah! Keep up tha good work!

P.s- Saddle up on someones dick was mad crazy! Holla

MizDiamonds

(Tawanna finally gave into Allen.She allowed him to do whatever he wanted to her body)
* * * * * *
Allen slowly caressed her body and then began to undress her.
After all of the clothes were off,he laid her down gently on the bed.
Soon enough,they were doing the dirty deed.This lasted about 2 hours.During the process though,Tawanna moaned loudly and felt slight pain due to the fact that it was her first time but Allen dealed with it and took his time with her.
When it was all done the two of them just layed there wrapped tightly and comfortably in eachothers arms and finally had their conversation.
* * * * * *
Tawanna

h my gosh...I cant believe I just did that.
Allen

on't stress it yo...just relax and live for the moment.
Tawanna:I'm loving the moment but I have an uneasy feeling(looking at the clock next to her)My mothers supposed to be on her way from work now.I think I should go...
Allen:yeah,your right...I should go too...my mothers going to be trippin and all in my ass anyway so might aswell leave and get it over with now.
Tawanna:yeah...your right.
The two of them kiss pasinately one last time but due to nervousness,Tawanna cut it short.
The two of them get dresses quickly and exit the room.
Meanwhile in the living room everyone is just joking around.They knew what Tawanna and Allen were doing because of the moaning that they heard from the room.
When Allen and Tawanna appeared in the living room ya'll know that their friends had a lot to say...

*~MizD~*

AI_LL

AIF1: Yall had a lot to talk about.
Allen: f*** you
AIF2: I heard more knocking than talking.
TF1: Are you ready Ms. Lady ma'am
Tawanna: Yea
TF2: You sure
Tawanna: Yea
TF1: What yall was talking about cause man we been through two movies and I took a nap.
Tawanna: He had a lot on his mind.
AIF1: That wasn't the only thing he had a lot of.
Allen: Ladies.
Trying to escort them out of the door.
AIF2: Yo moma called nigga
Allen: What you say
AIF2: I told her that you was on yo way home.
Allen: How long ago
AIF2: About 30 minutes ago

I gotta go scratch that if you don't need it pimping. Oh and good sex scene

The1andonly_Mrs.Iverson · Starter Joined: Sep 21, 2002 Posts: 162 Location: PhiLLy

damn i had seen this up and i didnt wanna read this long as s*** but i got bored today and finally read it and i gotta say i am glad i did this s*** reminds me of that book pretty mentioned the coldest winter eva cept its bettah cuz allen is in it lol keep it up yall ~1~

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

yall's story is getting a lil hot. it's cool thoough

A.I.lova

Allen: Dam nigga u could hav at least knocked on' da door, i kno my momz is straight trippin' now
AIF#1: Well u were busy, an' i can neva interupt a nigga whoz "talkin"
(Omar lookz at AI's otha friend dey both laugh)
Allen: Man shut up
Tawanna: Well we're leavin... bye Allen(pecks him on the lipz)
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

(On tha way home in Tawanna's car)
TF#1: So wut'd y'all talk about
(Tawanna doesn't respond)
Tf#1: I kno u heard me, wut'd u an' ol boi talk about
(still no response)
TF#2: (yells) T!
Tawanna: Huh, wut....
TF#1: Dam snap out of it, y u thinkin so hard
TF#3: Naw she jus got sume1 hard
(They all laugh except Tawanna)
Tawanna: Ha ha hell, Nuthin' like dat happenned, we just talked
TF#1: (Sarcastically) I moan all the time in my conversations 2
(Tawanna just shakes her head, the rest of the ride home her friends are crackin jokes on her and allens "conversation")

Tawanna drops her friendz off at home, and she makes her way back home. She realizes her mother is already home and she trys to sneak in throught the back door......

Mom: Child, who do u think I am for you to play all these gamez with
(Tawanna freezes dead in her tracks)
Tawanna: How'd u see me
Mom: Don't worry about dat, jus bring ur butt in hea
Mom: Where were u, I've been worried out of my head
Tawanna: (lying) I was over Lila'z (TF#1) house
Mom: Her mother said y'all weren't home.Wut'z wit dis t, u've been actin strange all week
Tawanna: Sorry momma, itz jus one of doz weeks i guess.....

(one week lata in the hallway school w/ one of her friendz)
TF#1: Yo T, afta school, letz hit da mall I need new sneakerz for my outfit
Tawanna: (Lookin queasy)
TF#1: Yo T, u alright
(Tawanna runs to tha bathroom an' throws up,Lila runs in afta her)
TF#1: Dam T, 6th time dis week, y u throwin up so much...
Tawanna: (No response)
TF#1: ...an' deze dam stomach crampz of yours lately...if I didn't kno any better I would think u were pregnant.........

[ September 25, 2002: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

*Bubba Chick03*

Hold up Tawanna really didn't get pregnant till she was 19

A.I.lova

she's not really, her friend jus thinks she is, sorry if dat brought confusion

AI_LL

Tawanna: Don't even play like that.
TF2: Have you come on yet
Tawanna: No damn leave me alone
Getting up angry and aggravated she walked away.
TF1: Well somethings wrong with her and if she pregnant her mother's going to kill her.
*****
While Tawanna was at home she recieved a phone call.
Tawanna: Hello
Allen: Why you didn't come to my game tonight
Tawanna: Cause I (Feeling like she's getting sick again) Hold on
Tawanna ran into her bathroom and threw up. She laid on the floor for a minute to regain her energy and she looked at her stomach.
Tawanna: Please Lord don't let me be pregnant
Allen: Hello, Hello, Tawanna
Tawanna: Hello
Allen: Yea you all right
Tawanna: Yea Allen did you wear a condom
Allen; Yea why
Tawanna: Oh I was just making sure
Allen: Why
Tawanna: It don't matter if you wore a condom.
Allen: OK what's the problem
Tawanna: Nothing I was sick and throwing up and all that and I thought I was pregnant
Allen: You came on yo period yet
Tawanna: Naw
Allen: Tawanna condoms don't always work do
Tawanna: What
Allen: I doubt if you pregnant it take a couple of weeks
Tawanna: Allen what if I am
Allen: Man s***! Look go get a pregnancy test and meet me over Omar house
Tawanna: Omar's house got me in this situation
Allen: What you goin do then
Tawanna: I'll take it here and then I'll call you and give you the results
Allen: I can't come over
Tawanna: You know you can't
Allen: Oh yea call me
Tawanna: All right
Tawanna hung up and called Lila
Lila: Hello
Tawanna: Lila what you doing
Lila: Nothing why
Tawanna: Cause I want you to go to the drug store and bring me over a pregnancy test.
Lila: For what I thought all yall was doing was talking (laughing)
Tawanna: Look act your age and not your shoe size for a minute and do me this favor
Lila: I'll bring it right over
After Tawanna took the test they were waiting.
*******************
While Allen was at home pacing the floor when his mother entered. He was startled
Ann: What's wrong with you
Allen: Nothing
Ann: Did you win
Allen: Win what
Ann: Didn't you have a game to day
Allen: Oh yea we won
Ann: Boy what's on yo mind
Allen: Nothing I was thinking about school
Ann: Oh guess what your sister did
Allen: What
Ann: She drew all over the walls
Allen: Oh
Ann: Oh do you know why she drew on the walls
Allen: Why
Ann: Because her brother drew Micheal Jordan on his wall
Allen Oh you should be proud of her
Ann: I should be proud yea I'm proud that you goin clean it up
Allen ran out the room after his mother trying to explain.
*******
While at Tawanna's crib she heard the front door slam and her mother came in her room after a few minutes.
TM: Hey ladies what are you doing
Tawanna: Nothing just chilling
TM: Oh how have you been Lila
Lila: Oh I'm fine
TM: That's good are you staying over
Lila: I don't think so
TM: Can I use your bathroom I don't think I can make it to the other bathroom.
Tawanna jumped in front of the door.
Tawanna: No
TM: Why not
Tawanna: Cause earlier I had the runs and it stink real bad in there
TM: Girl if you don't move
Tawanna: Moma no
Her mother pushed her from in front of the door and went in the bathroom Tawanna sat down.
Tawanna: Maybe she didn't see it
Lila: I hope not
Just then Tawanna's mom walked out holding the test.
TM: Who's is this
Silence
TM: Tawanna this
Lila: It's mine
TM: What
Lila: It's mine I brought it over here because I didn't want my moma to find out about it.
TM: Well baby girl I got some good news for you
Lila: I'm not pregnant
TM: No and we not goin have this problem again til somebody put that rock on that finger right.
Lila: Yes ma'am
TM: We'll talk about this later both of you
As she left the room Tawanna and Lila jumped up and down relieved.
Tawanna: I gotta call Allen

MizDiamonds

This story is da s***...ya'll are doing good and I don't understand why ya'll keep saying I should be a writer..did anyone check out their parts of the story from someone elses point of view?Ya'll are writing some really good stuff.I really want to learn to write like ya'll cause I cant think of anything at all to write next and to add to the story. Can someone help me..pretty please!!!

*~MizD~*

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Yo this is the s***, I feel like I'm actually readin a real story.Oh my! And I don't think i'ma add anymore cuz it will just funk it up. All yall are some really good writers. Keep it up!

The1andonly_Mrs.Iverson · Starter Joined: Sep 21, 2002 Posts: 162 Location: PhiLLy

i really liked that last part keep goin......

Rena Iverson

Tawanna picks up the phone and calls allen

Allen: Hello
Tawanna: Hey guess what.
Allen: What youre not pregnat are you.
Tawanna: Nope just found out.
Allen: Good I dont think ill be able to handle that s*** right now. Besides my mama would kick my ass (laughing)
Tawanna: Mine too

Rena Iverson

Tawanna: Well look I gotta go
Allen: T why you sound so distant I hope this situation dosent make you feel diffrently towards me.
Tawanna: It dosent im just scared to get close to you now cause i keep thinking about the consequences.
Allen: Look Tawanna ima tell you we aint gonna stop havin sex i like the way i feel when im makin love to you we just gonna start being real careful when we do it ill start strappin twice.
Tawanna ; I dont think ill be makin love for a while after this scare.
Allen : We aint gotta do that just be careful

Rena Iverson

Tawanna : you know what Allen sometimes you can be really selfish.
Allen:How the f*** am I being selfish.
Tawanna: cause after all this i been through with this scare you still pressurin the issue of havin sex.
Allen: Whatever Tawanna s***
Tawanna: you know what Allen I dont like your additude or your laungage.
Allen; Well too bad cause you the one callin a nigga with this drama.
Tawanna : (takes a pause) Well you know what Allen I wont be callin you for a while
Allen : Well fine with your big forehead ass
Tawanna slams the phone down and burst into tears . Meanwhile Allen sits in his room lookin hurt.

hotgurl76

OOOoh. That story tight. And she really do got a big 5head. lol. I wonder if he ever really did call her that? lol ~Holla~

j.iverson · Sixth Man Joined: Sep 13, 2002 Posts: 74

yall r so wrong bout the 5head thing
but the story still is real good keep it going i can't wait to read more

*Bubba Chick03*

This story is rollin fasho,keep up tha good work!;D
5head-noooobleed!

A.I.lova

(one day later at school)
TF#1: So how'd it go on da phone wit Allne
Tawanna: Allen who?
TF#1: (sarcastically) I see it went well
(silence)
TF#1: Wut happened?
Tawanna: It don't matta, hiz azz gitz on my nervez.....stupid nigga had da nerve 2 talk about my 4head wit hiz ashy anklez
TF#1: (laughs) dam neva heard u cuss like dat...well techinacally ur forhead iz kinda, how do i say dis.... oversized
(Tawanna laughs)
Tawanna: Lila shut up, ur not helping
TF#1: Don't worry about it gurl, thingz will be ight but don't giv up on him yet i can tell u like him so be coo and patient he'll come around
Tawanna: If u say so
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(On da otha side of town , wit Allen friendz)
Omar: SO nigga iz she pregnant
Allen: Nah
Omar: Good, cuz lord knoz ur azz iz done wit basketball if u switch 2 changin diaperz
(All AI friendz laugh except him)
AF#2: If she ain't pregnant then y u look all sad an' shyt
Allen: Im straight, we jus got into it on da phone
Omar: Why
Allen: Don't worry about it
Omar: Dam nigga itz jus a question, u act like u pms-ing an' shyt
Allen: Sorry, i sorta tol her her 4head wuz big
(all hiz friendz laugh)
Omar: Dam nigga u ain't neva lied, she could block da sun wit da mug
(Dey all crack up,except Allen)
Allen: Dam shut up i didn't mean it i jus said it outta anger, don't talk about my gurl like dat either man, ain't nobody crackin jokez
AF#3: Chill nigga, we sorry
Omar: We?
(AF#2 hitz Omar)
Omar: My bad we sorry.....we can tell u like her so jus tell her u sorry i guess
ALlen: Yea mayb
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(afta school allen rushes home an' hesitates on whether to call T or not, afta 25mins of a guilty conscience, he dials T's numba)
Allen: Hello
Tawanna: Whoz dis
Allen: Me, allen
Tawanna: I got 2 go bye
Allen: C'mon gurl don't do me like dis.I ain't neva called a gurl b4 2 apologize because i neva really cared, but ur different an' i DO care, so jus hear me out
Tawanna: Im listenin
Allen : Im sorry 4 bein disrespectful on da phone da otha day I kno I wuz wrong for sayin doz thingz but i felt evn worse wen i said them, but Tawanna Im really sorry.Wordz can't express how sorry I am
(silence)
Allen: Hello, u dere
Silence
Tawanna: Yea Im hea, im sorry 2 i wuz wrong 2, Im sorry
Allen: Itz alright baby I'd forgive u anyday, unless u did me dirty like go wit Omar or sumethin
Tawanna: Omar? dat stupid nigga pleaz, i'd rather go gay
(Allen laugh)
Allen: Dat wuz cold-blooded Imma tell him u said
Tawanna: Nah don't do dat....I'll do it myself
(Both laugh)
Tawanna: Yo Allen I got 2 go my mom will b home any mintue so I'll try an' call u lata, alright
Allen: I'll b waitin
Tawanna: Ight Allen i'll call u lata bye baby
Allen: Ay T
Tawanna: Yea
(pause)
Allen: I...I love u
..............................

The1andonly_Mrs.Iverson · Starter Joined: Sep 21, 2002 Posts: 162 Location: PhiLLy

^^^^^^^ ay that was tight yall the big forhead thang and the ashy ankles had me rollin

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

But 4real though her fo'head is kinda "oversized" itz huge but I ain't got nothing but love, but the story is doin good. I burst out laughin bout her fo'head cuz i thought i was the only one that thought it was big.

AI_LL

Hell yea her 5head big as hell. That's the only thing I saw when I first saw a pic of her. And If my damn near blind ass can see it I know the rest of the world can. Story good keep goin pimpin

Rena Iverson

so is that the end of the story

*Bubba Chick03*

Yall wild out!I hope that's not tha end.

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

I hope itz not the end, but aint you the one Rene that started another story. Anywayz I hope itz not th end

*Bubba Chick03*

Is that it?..Is it over?

The1andonly_Mrs.Iverson · Starter Joined: Sep 21, 2002 Posts: 162 Location: PhiLLy

aw man that cant be the end

Tricina

TAWANNA: i love you too.
ALLEN: Bye
as they hang up tawanna calls her girls and tells them that allen said he love her. meanwhile alle is at home thinking to himself that he let some girl get close to him like that.anways it is the next day, allen calls tawanna early in the morning

ALLEN: hey baby

Rena Iverson

Later Allen sits in his room listenin to Jodeci thinkin about Tawanna when his mama comes through the door

Ann: Hey boy whats wrong with you up in here daydreamin
Allen: Naw ma i was just chillin
Ann: boy you was not you was in here thinkin about that little red girl wasnt you
Allen : starts smilin naw
Ann: yes you was Allen
Ann: boy what I tell you about that girl
Allen : look mom I dont care any more i love her and someday im gonna marry her.
Ann: wow you really love her well you just be careful and if her parents give you any trouble let me know so I can set they rich asses straight
Allen: starts laughing
Ann: well i gotta go to work do your homework and uh call your little girlfriend the future Mrs. Iverson
Allen : ha ha mama I love you see ya
Ann : Ill see ya my cute baby
later allen calls Tawanna
phone rings
Tawanna: what Jermy
Allen : who the hell is Jeremy
Tawanna : Oh this boy who keep callin here he go to my school
Allen : telll that nigga I said not to call their no more or me and my boys will have to go pay him a little visit
Tawanna: Am i sensin a little jealousy
Allen: hell yeah you mine nobody elses
Tawanna : Ok i can deal with that
Allen : yeah well you better
Allen : um Tawanna would you like to come to my prom with me
Tawanna : Yeah Baby when is it
Allen : In a week and a half oh my God then i gotta stat plannin Allen ill call you back ok
Allen Laughing ok

Fortress · Visitor Joined: Sep 27, 2002 Posts: 6 Location: Canada

I think he was trying to make a booty call and dailed the wrong number. When some chick picked up and realized it was AI she ran right over to hit dat!!!!!

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

hey yall. i like that. that's real cute; don't stop here, keep going

AI_LL

When he have a prom he didn't make it to the prom well anyway I'll role wit it cause I'm bored.

Tawanna called her girls to see if they wanted to go shopping.
TF1: Why Omar didn't invite me to the prom naw girl I gotta call you right back this nigga done lost him mind
Tawanna: All right hurry and call me back and tell me what you goin do all right.
TF1: OK

Later Tawanna and her friends went to the mall to shop and Tawanna ran into Jeremy.

Jeremy: Tawanna why you didn't call me back
Tawanna: Boy why don't you leave me alone I told you to leave me alone I don't know how many times already.
Jeremy: What is it you gotta another man
Tawanna: Don't worry about what I got leave me the f*** alone
Jeremy: Naw I can't do that
Tawanna: You can and you will
Tawanna walked past him.
Jeremy: OK I'll call you tonight.
Tawanna: Not if yo number on call block.
That night when Tawanna called Allen.
Allen: Hello
Tawanna: Yea I gotta dress
Allen: That's good but I heard you and some dude got into it at the mall.
Tawanna: Who told you
Allen: I got my sources
Tawanna: Do you have people following me
Allen: Naw I trust you and why you trying to dodge the the conversation about you and that dude.
Tawanna: I'm not
Allen: What happened who iss he
Tawanna: You remember I told you about Jeremy
Allen: Oh Jeremy was messing with you
Tawanna: He didn't mean nothing by it he just wanna talk
Allen: Tell J boy you gotta man
Tawanna: Why so everybody can go and tell my moma and I get my ass kicked.
Allen: You still aint told yo moma I told mine
Tawanna: No you didn't yo moma just knew
Allen: Same thing
Tawanna: Well yo moma and my moma are totally different people
Allen: You must don't love me
Tawanna: What
Allen: You acting ashamed of me and s***
Tawanna: If I was ashamed of you my friends wouldn't even know
Allen: Yea right
Tawanna: What is with yo attitude tonight
Allen: Nothing
Tawanna: I'm not goin let you mess up my day I bought my dress and shoes today I'm on a role
Allen: So I mess up yo day
Tawanna: You usually make it better but tonight you startin s*** I don't know what's wrong with you.
Allen: Nothing (pause)why yo girl call my boy cursing and s***
Tawanna: Cause yo boy didn't ask her to the prom
Allen: How she know if he even going to the prom or how she know if he wasn't goin ask her.
Tawanna: She assumed he going with somebody else
Allen: I'm sure he would've if yo friend wasn't trippin
Tawanna: So since you asked me I'm the only one you was taking
Allen: One and only
Tawanna: Hold on somebody on my other line
Clicking over
Tawanna: Hello
Jeremy: Tawanna
Tawanna: I promise yo number on call block
Jeremy: I'm over my friend house
Tawanna: Jeremy leave me alone
Hanging up
Her phone rang 5 minutes later she remembered she hung up on Allen
Tawanna: Hello
Allen: Why you hang up on me
Tawanna: I didn't try to but I'll call you in a minute I'm about to try my dress on
Allen: All right
Tawanna put on her dress and she was looking in the mirror. When her mother walked in.
TM: Why the hell you dressed like a barbie for.
Tawanna: It's cute isn't it
TM: Yea I just need to know where you wearing it to.

********************************************

Have a nice Saturday night enjoy yourselves and be safe. And don't do nothing you'll regret in the future. Oh and save some money for the collection plate for church tomorrow. (LOL)

Tricina

TAWANNA: im going to a dance
TM: What dance
TAWANNA: a prom
TM: Who are you going with?
TAWANNA: A friend
TM: wHAT friend?
TAWANNA: A boy i know
TM: that thug boy you call yourself dating
TAWANNA: HE'S not a thug he's my boyfreind and i love him
TM: girl you know nothing about love , and besides didnt i tell you that i didnt want you dating that boy
TAWANNA: he's a good person you just have to give him a try
TM: well i cant stop you from dating him you gonna do it anyways
TAWANNAl: thanx mom
well tawanna is excited that her mom give her permission to date allen she calls all her freinds and tell them the good news...... THE DAY OF THE PROM it is saturday the day of the prom she's all excited she decides to get dress early meanwhile on the other side alle i chillin wating to the last min. to get ready
AF: ey dawg r u still going .........

[ October 01, 2002: Message edited by: A.I # 1 female ]

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

wonder's what happened after the prom.........

A.I.lova

Allen: And u kno dis
AF(OMAR): Ight jus makin' sure,wut u wearin
Allen: Clothez
AF: U kno wut negro, datz wuz uncalled 4, but i'll talk 2 ur azz lata my mom trippin' 4 me 2 git off da phone
Allen: Ight c u in a lil bit
AF: coo
(Allen hangz up da phone an' jumpz in da shower....he gitz out gitz dressed an' iz lookin' CLEAN!!SO FRESH SO CLEAN!

)
ALlen: Dam i look good
Allen's lil sis: Keep tellin urself dat
Allen: MAN, git out my room, let urself out
ALS: Sume1 a lil tuchy 2day
(allen throws pillow at her, she laughz an leaves)
.................
(Meanwhile at Tawannas, she'z addin da final touchez 2 her make-up(which she normally doesn't wear))
Tawanna: OOO, I look good(straightens down her dress)
(Lily walks in ready 2 go)
Lily: Like hell u do
Tawanna: Whewwwiii , u look cute girl
Lily: Yes I kno
Tawanna: Shut ur conceited azz up
Lily: Yes ma'am Mrs.Iverson sir
(Tawanna smiles

, den laughz)
Tawanna: U sure i look alright
Lily: Letz jus put it dis way, u almost look as good as me, now datz one HELL of a compliment
Tawanna: (turns her head) newayz
Lily: Letz roll
(They arrive at the prom an' their waitin at da front door of the hotel for Allen and Omar 2 arrive)
Lily: Are u sure dey said 7
Tawanna: Sumethin' like dat
(As soon as she says dat, a black car appears, Allen, Omar an' anotha boi walk out of da car, dey walk over 2 where da gurlz are standing)
ALlen: (Staring at Tawanna with hiz jaw dropped open w/out sayin' a word, after awhile of silence he sayz) DAM!
Tawanna: (SMILEZ)
Omar: Dam, lily u workin' da hell out of dat dress
Lily: Same 4 u, except ur tux
Omar: In y'allz lil rich word"Why thank u madame, dat wuz quite a ravishing compliment"
Allen: Omar, quit usin' doz big wordz b4 u choke on one NUGGA
(dey all laugh)
Allen: U look gorgeous
Tawanna: U 2
(dey both look at each other an' Allen likz hiz lipz)
Omar: So we gonna go in or not, or r we gonna stand out here talkin' about how good I look
Allen: Man jus open da dam door
Omar: Letz git dis dam party started den...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

[ October 01, 2002: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

Mandy · Rookie Joined: Oct 2, 2002 Posts: 13 Location: NY

Wassup yall that a was really good. keep going it keeps getting really good.

daysha iverson

t: i'm having alot of fun allen
a: me 2 t... did i tell u that ur lookin really good 2nite
t: (giggles)yes... thanx...
a: good enough to eat!
t: (hits him playfully) u r so bad
a: but i'm better that way
(allen says smiling an oh so sexy smile and licking those sexy lips)
t: u really tryin to turn me out huh
a: hell yeah ... is it working?.....
(they both laugh)
a: so u wanna dance,sexy?
t: of course...but hold on.......

[ October 02, 2002: Message edited by: daysha iverson ]

MizDiamonds

I'm back ya'll.
Sorry that I have not been on in a while but I was on punnishment and every time I come on I never have anything to add and my moms always asks me to do things for her so I have to log off the internet.
But don't let me block your fun,this storied really hot.Please keep it going ya'll

*~MizD~*

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

Ya'll are really good! Keep doin tha thug dizzle!

A.I.lova

Dam I hav a writers block(not dat imma real writer lol) but i can't thinko fnethin 2 write....sume1 help!!!

A.I.lova

Tawanna: Goota fix my hair
Allen: U look fine, trust me
Tawanna: (smilez) ight
(Deir dancin and havin a good time, evrything goin fine..da night iz ova an' itz time for da AFTA PARTY!!)
Allen(talkin 2 Omar): So nigga so we gonna roll out or wut
Omar: Yea but wut hotel iz it in
Allen: Itz da one by Demarcus house, right by it, remember wen we went ova dere
Omar: Oh yea, dat one, letz go den an' git da real party started

(they giv each otha dap)
Tawanna: Wut chu mean by dat
Allen: Nuthin' u kno im playin
Tawanna: Betta b
Omar: Somebody in chek
Lily: Shut up Omar
Omar: Ok
(they all laugh)
Allen: Letz go
Tawanna: But wait we didn't evn take our pictures, Allen
Allen: Oh yea, we can hurry and go git in dere an git dem
Omar: Itz not dat dam serious Allen, u can take all da picz u want at da afta party , now letz go
ALlen: But I want 2 take it proffesionally, who knows if i become famous an' dey wanna c it can't b lookin' like Reggie 4rm down da street took it
Omar: Yea right, like u gonna git famous, quut dreamin nigga
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~SKIPS*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
We all know da story how Allen got in Georgetown, dis is wen he'z already dere
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THE COLLEGE YEARS
Allen: Dam nigga I can't believ we both in Georgetown
Omar: Me 2
ALlen: I kno how i got in, off deze lookz an' diz game, but how da hell u git in Georgetown, Omar
Omar: Nigga fuk u, oh my bad datz Tawanna's job
Allen: U dam right
(Tawanna cumz up 2 Allenz dorm for a visit an' walks in on dem)
Tawanna: Hez dam right about wut?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Holla bak

76ergirl

good job keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MizDiamonds

Allen

h..he's damn right that you look good!
(Tawanna looks at Allen with stupidity)
Tawanna:whateva allen..Huh,I know that I look good,you ain't gotta have your friends recite it.
Omar:recite what..this ain't no damn opera.
Allen:Nigga shut up.
Tawanna:both of ya'll shut up.And anyway I look too damn good to be in an opera.
Omar:huh,you couldn't even be a model.Well not with that big ass forhe...
(Allen kicks him in his knee)
Omar:aah s***!(in pain)....what I meant to say is that you could be a plus sized model because your about as thick as an arm
Tawanna

o I look fat to nigga?
Omar:well...
(Allen cuts him off)
Allen:The only thing fat on you is your ass...and yes that was a compliment so can we just end this s***?
Omar:Fine...Tawanna I'm sorry for trying to say that you have a fat ass...I didn't mean to say that you have a fatty.What I should have said is that you really have a flatty.
(Omar and Allen laugh until Allen notices that Tawanna had a straight face)
Allen:Haaaaah that s*** was....(notices Tawanna and straightens up)really not funny.
Omar:If it wasn't funny why were you laughing then.
Allen:I made a mistake...I thought what you said was the other way around...
Tawanna:Allen,stop lying you know it was funny to you.
Allen:It was kind of funny...
Tawanna:I'm not even stressin it because you know that you love this flat ass.
Allen:Hell yeah(holding her)but I'll love it even more if you let me swim in it.
(Tawanna looked uneasy)
Tawanna

Nervously)um um...Baby we need to talk./
Allen:Talk about what?
Tawanna:I have something important to tell
you....

*~MizD~*

MizDiamonds

DAMN AILOVA...Allen need to be in some pictures like that.(lol)I think he would look good posin nude in a playboy magazine.

*~MizD~*

Ivy'sSk8terChik · Starter Joined: Sep 28, 2002 Posts: 159 Location: My Crib

I haven't gotta a chance to tell y'all this story is tight. Big Ups to all y'all who writin it, keep doin ya thug thizzle.

[ October 06, 2002: Message edited by: Ivy'sSk8terChik ]

A.I.lova

quote:
Originally posted by *MizDiamonds*:
DAMN AILOVA...Allen need to be in some pictures like that.(lol)I think he would look good posin nude in a playboy magazine.

*~MizD~*

U dam right gurl, he do need 2 pose, but not in playboy he has 2 much rescpect 4 himself 2 do dat....but hey...

lol nah im playin

Rena Iverson

this is not usher site so take that ugly ass usher piture to usher . com usher wish he could look like AI

A.I.lova

Ight listen up, i put da dere cuz i had my allen pic already so i changed it up evry couple of weeks, if u don't want 2 see it close ur eyes, im bein real imma not takin' it down sorry

MizDiamonds

Did anyone hear that song "lastnight" by AI?
The person on the track doesn't sound like him at all,but the gurl in the background keeps moaning out Jewelz.
No not singing ladies,she's occasionally moaning on the track.

Oh yeah,I just got an email from eviplist.com
telling me that Allen Iverson is throwing a pregame party or something like that and that they were issuing me a personal invitation.I would go but I'm not 21 or older.Damn,I want to go so bad.Any of ya'll going to go?If ya'll want to go just tell me and I'll try to hit ya'll up with the adress.

*~MizD~*

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

I heard it and personally itz the only song I like of his. The woman be like whispering Jewels. And she sayion sumthing like That's how the Jewels saved my life or sumtihng I got it on my realplayer.I wanna go to that party. You know in some way you have got to give Tawanna her props cuz AI be having alot of parties and most be outta town. And she hardly ever goes to these parties. If I was married to some dude that wanted to party outta state all the time I would've stopped that along tie ago.s*** why she need to go out state with it Philly big why he gotta leave there some hot clubs up here.

daysha iverson

u really have to ask urself one question... which is : why does he wanna get away from her? seems like there's trouble in paradise

.......he could do better

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

I don't know wassup but this is how I figure it. His mom would be more than happy to watch her grandkids if Tawanna would get up and rep for her man. I t takes more than goin to a couple of his games, you need to be pushin those hoes back when they come flyin in after your husband. But anyways I think that she's just lost or somethin cause I would have been with my man at every party all up on him lettin everybody know he was taken.

Ivy'sSk8terChik · Starter Joined: Sep 28, 2002 Posts: 159 Location: My Crib

I don't know whats wrong with Tawanna. If she only knew what she had maybe she wouldn't act like that. I mean DAMN do she realize how FINE her man is? Not to mention madd game, and beautiful kids. If I was her I'd be at EVERY game acting madd ghetto and loud, makin sho errybody knew who's he was . U know how gurls is nowadays they act like they don't have no respect, so if I was her I'd make sure they stayed in they plizace.Which is up off Tha Kid AI,but then again she gotta make sure AI in his too. Peace

Black Honey · Starter Joined: Aug 9, 2002 Posts: 182

That's why it makes me wonder if she staying with him for something else. I mean any sane woman wouldn't allow her man to party that much out of state for that matter. I mean I believe trust is vital in a relationship but when your man is partying out of state , you can't help but be suspicious. It makes me wonder does he control her or something.

AI_LL

That's true my man couldn't be away from the house that much partying all the time I would be all up on him AI is more than fine he just got something about him that's attractive to me he got to much sex appeal. Either he wouldn't need no bodyguards or the bodyguards would have to get me off of him cause der wouldn't be no way that I would just sit at home with the kids while he somewhere having a good ol time she must not be right in the head.
Not to mention these crazy hoes running here after him he would have to get my name tatooed on his fo head in order for him to go as he please out of the state. Aint no way no no Lordy

*Bubba Chick03*

Umm,that he is that he is.

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

AI LL you are too crazy! Anyways I agree with all of ya'll cause ain't no reason why she gotta stay home. I have somethin in my head that's not lettin me believe that he would be controllin her or nothin crazy like that but all I have to say is that if he beat her or his kids or anything like that, there would be evidence especially with him bein in the public eye and everything. But she is different cause her man is too fine and not sayin that Ivo would even go there but all of ya'll have seen Love and Basketball and you know that the boldest one is standin right there at your hotel room door! (lol) But everybody you have to think that there's somethin wrong with that situation. At least I do but it might not be all his fault cause she looked happier when they won that championship for Eastern Conference than when they got married. Maybe money got tied up in love or they're just not feelin that same love no more. I don't know I just hope that they get their stuff together.

MizDiamonds

Personally,I think that Tawanna is kind of retarded,I mean every guy needs space,but she is giving him too much space.
I agree with some of the things that you ladies said about her not reppin and what not.
We are all going to have our own opinions about her and from what I hear she does not like the spot light at all.Thats understandable but (like someone said before)it seems that Allen is in control of her.
Firstly,if that was my man (which will never happen)I would have to let all of them groopie chicks that be stalking him know that he is my man so stop riding his juicy dick.
PLAIN AND SIMPLE LIKE THAT! ! !

*~MizD~*

MizDiamonds

IS ANYONE GOING TO CONTINUE THE STORY?
I'M BOARD AND I CANT THINK OF ANYTHING ELSE TO WRITE.
CAN I HAVE A LITTLE GROUP PARTICIPATION PLEASEEEEEEE YA'LL?

*~MizD~*

daysha iverson

i'll continue the story miz diamonds

A: go head baby wut u gotta tell me
T: allen u know i love u and i would never try to stop u from doing wut u want to do...
u know i juss wanna see u happy
A: of course sexy so wuts on ur mind
T: omar can we be alone
O : damn i ain't even wanna b in yall bix n e way
A: niggah shut up and get out! always talkin s***
O : damn ... ok ok
omar gets up and leaves and tawanna sits next to allen and rubbs her big ass forehead
T : allen remember when we talked about us gettin married and havin kids?

A: (allen smiles) yeah sexy i remember
he motions for her to come sit on his lap and she does and he rubs her back as she speaks
T: well allen i think were starting on the family part a little early than we expected

A: do u mean......
T: yes baby
A: i'mma be a daddy?
T: yes baby
(tawanna says as tears flow slowly down her cheek... not knowing how he was gonna take it)
A: awwww BABY!!!!!!!!
(allen begins to kiss her softly and caress her stomach. and when he stopped to look her in her eyes ... he knew that this was the woman who he would love 4 eva.)

EVEN THOUGH YALL KNOW I DON'T LIKE THAT HOE I HADE TO PUT THAT LAST PART IN THERE LOL

SOME ONE CONTINUE.....

MizDiamonds

Allen:Why are you crying?
Tawanna:I'm just overwhelmed about the thought of us becomming parents and scared that you migh not love me anymore.
Allen:Why would you say that?....Tawanna,I never felt this way about anyone before...I love you gurl!....(Tawanna and Allen make eye contact)I promise that I'll always be there for you and I'm going to do whatever I have to to take care of my family.
(Tawanna begins to smile as Allen wipes the tears from her eyes)
Tawanna:But we are all the way in Washington Allen,I'm pregnant,so you know that I'm going to get kicked out of here,I'm going to have to go back to Virginia and I don't want to mess up your dreams baby.
Allen:Tawanna,your not messing up my dreams,we are in this together.
Tawanna:Yeah but how are we going to take care of a family when we are going to be seperated and you know that my mothers going to kill me.
Allen:we'll figure smething out baby...we'll something out.
Tawanna:yeah well we better think fast cause I have to leave next week...what are we going to do?

*~MizD~*

AI_LL

AI: Man I don't know but what you think our baby goin look like
Tawanna: Like my fine ass
AI: My child don't want that big ass fo head
Both of them laughing.
Tawanna: My baby don't want that flat ass nose and them big nostroles.
AI: Hold on this my Daddy nose.
Tawanna: This my moma fo head.
AI: Her's not that big
Tawanna: Shut up
They both laugh and play.
Omar then comes knocking on the door.
Omar: OK I don't know if you know it or not but I live here also and I just thought about something while I was standing in the fucking cold and it was that yall always trying to yell and curse me out.
Both of them looking at him.
Allen: And
Omar: See man yall don't care about nobody but yall selves now if I came in here always screaming at you when my gal came then you would think I did you wrong
Allen: Is that all
Omar: Hell naw that aint all what else I gotta say (Pausing and thinking) Bye now that's all I got to say trying to rush my words (mumbling while walking back out the door) you ol basketball playing mothafucka.
Allen: What nigga
Omar: Nothin

Tawanna: Call my moma and tell her
Allen: Hell naw she already act like she don't like me
Tawanna: She like you now
Allen: I wont believe that til she tell me
Tawanna: She like you now here
Picking up the phone and dialing the number
Allen: No
Tawanna: Yes
Allen: No
Tawanna: Yes
The phone rings and Tawanna throws the phone at Allen
Shelia: Hello, Hello
Allen: Yes Mrs. Turner
Shelia: Yes who's this
Allen: Oh it's me Chuck
Shelia: Oh can I help you
Allen: No ma'am I'm just calling to check on you and see how you doing
Shelia: Oh thank you I'm fine
Allen: That's good
Tawanna in the background
Tawanna: Tell her
Allen frowned at her while he held the reciever of the phone.
Allen: Leave me alone
Shelia: What you say
Allen: I said how does it feel to be at home alone
Shelia: Oh it's peaceful with Tawanna there and you know her brother got a car so he always on the go.
Allen: Oh that's good then
Shelia: You know Tawanna's coming home this weekend you coming home with her
Allen; NO ma'am I got practice
Shelia: Oh maybe another weekend
Allen: Yea speak of the devil Tawanna just walked in my room you wanna speak to her.
Shelia: Yea
Allen: Here T phone
Tawanna looking salty as she walked to the phone Allen gigled when she got to the phone she hit Allen.
Tawanna: Hey Mommy..............

[ October 10, 2002: Message edited by: AI_LL ]

A.I.lova

Dat wuz real good.

Shelia: Hey babygurl
T: Hey
Shelia: Allen was sweet for calling and checkin up on me, at least some1 doz
T: I did call, I got da answerin machine.yea Allen jus decided by himself that he was gonna call
Allen: (mumbling in da background) like hell
I did
T: (throwz a pillow at him)
Shelia: Well how's basketball going for Allen
T: Ask him ma, herez da phone Allen
Allen( mumbling) u kno u wrong 4 dat (normal voice) Hi again Ms. Turner
Sheila: Hey Allen hows basketball going
Allen: Fine, very well, coach said that things are going very well
Shelia: Datz good to know dear
(Tawanna yelling in tha background) Tell her Allen!
Sheila: Tell me what
Allen: nuthin ma'am
Tawanna: (still yelling in the background) SUMETHIN!
Allen

holdin da phone to da side) Nuthin, u tell her u da one carrying it
Sheila: (getting an idea) carrying wut, exactly, Allen....giv Tawanna da phone
Allen: Here
T: no
Allen: TAKE IT
T: NO u promised
(after about 10 mins of this)
T: Fine , dam. I'll take it
Shelia: It took u long enuff
T: Yes mom
Shelia: (voice raises a lil) Tawanna Nicole Turner, wut exactly is Allen talkin about u carryin
T:...........
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Im sorry if i messed it up, cuz dat wuz bad in my eyes, but y'all pleaz keep it goin ight

[ October 10, 2002: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

Girl that was good. I like it so far. Keep it going.
Holla at cha girl

MsThang_1 · Rookie Joined: Sep 16, 2002 Posts: 26 Location: Texas

........mama, i guess you gon be a granny.
sheila: say what? i didn't hear you. repeat yourself for me please.
tawanna: mama, i hate to tell you this but......
sheila: let me guess
tawanna: im pregnant......

I don't know what's gon happen. If that was bad, yall let me know. Bear with me. Holla

AI_LL

Shelia: Tawanna how did this happen
Tawanna; Well you know.
Shelia: I don't wanna know what happened how did you get into this situation what happened to the condoms and you on the pill.
Tawanna: Them pills was making me fat and the condom broke.
Shelia: Well you goin be fatter now with this baby coming than you were on the damn pills. T I can't afford to put you through college and help with a baby and yo brother still here living with me and he about to graduate and he wanna go to college too you know. So I guess this yo last semester.
Tawanna: But I don't wanna leave
Shelia: Did you think about this before you laid down
Tawanna: No ma'am but love do stuff like this to you
Shelia: Yea well love is the reason why you about to come home and not finish school.
Tawanna sat down with her hand on her forehead.
Tawanna: Can't we find away Moma
Shelia: No there's no way at all if you wanna keep going to school there. You can come home and go to school here that way you have someone to take care of the baby while in school but besides that there's no possible way.
Tawanna: I can get somebody around here
Shelia: No you can't you don't know them people around there like that and Allen still has to go to class in order for him to play and he there on a scholarship so he really should've thought about somethings just like you should've.
Tawanna: I can get an apartment
Shelia: Tawanna I don't know if you think that you Bill Gates or somebody but you not.
You trying to get a baby sitter an apartment still be in school and I guess you expect to eat. What are you really thinking?
Tawanna: I don't know
Shelia: You know what for you to be so responsible and so sure you can take care of your self cause you think you grown. You sure don't know nothing
Tawnna: Moma why you acting like that
Sheila: Tawanna what you want me to do say oh Tawanna I'm so proud of you, you went to college was doing good bringing me back good grades and oh you brought more than grades this time.
Tears started flowing from Tawanna's eyes...
Allen walked over and got the phone.
ALLEN............
*********************
Guys, and Girls. Don't let this happen to you. Tawanna and Allen were lucky and really blessed that their situation turned out the way it did. This happened to a friend and believe me her situation is a whole different story. Don't be afraid to protect yourself and your partner.

[ October 13, 2002: Message edited by: AI_LL ]

A.I.lova

(kisses Tawanna on her cheek and picks up da phone)
ALlen: Ms.Turner itz not all Tawanna's fault,but ma'am just giv us a chance to work it out if things start going bad den she can come bak, but Ms. Turner u hav nuthin 2 worry about, I luv ur daughter an' my child she's carryin, i can handle school an' a job 2keep my family happy
Sheila: I don't kno.....(after a while) Ight, but herz da catch by da end of da semester, we'll c how thingz are going, but u hav ur head on straight allen, i like dat
Allen: Thank u ma
Sheila: Yea im about 2 b GRANDma
(dey both laugh)
Sheila: Im trusting u allen
Allen: Ight, I got chu, bye Ms. Turner
Sheila: Bye Allen
(hangs up da phone)
Allen: (grabbing Tawanna an sittin her on hiz lap) Look at dat, i convinced ur mom, baby, c not all my skillz on da court
Tawanna: Tell me about, if it wasn't 4 ur other skill i wouldn't b pregnant
(dey both laugh)
Allen: Come here
Tawanna: WHy
Allen: I wanna a kiss
Tawanna: Wuteva
(allen lays her down an slowly kisses her)
Tawanna: I kno wut u tryin 2 do, u tryin 2 make me forget
Allen: (playin dumb) I don't kno wut ur talkin about
Tawanna: Dam guess ur skillz ain't in da classroom dumbass, cuz u kno wut im talkin' about
Allen: No we don't
(Omar comez bak in)
Omar: YEa wut we talkin' about
Allen & Tawanna: GIT OUT!
Omar: Ay man y'all ain't gonna keep kickin me out like dis, i liv here 2 dammit.and allen nigga I hope u don't think u got me in check like dat
Allen: (stands up like he's about 2 fight him) Yea nigga, i got chu in chek like dat
Omar: (Gettin scared) I wuz jus checkin.imma go now...
(Tawanna & Allen laugh)
Tawanna: I still haven't 4gotten
Allen: (still playin dumb) I still don't kno wut ur talkin' about
Tawanna: Nigga u ain't slik...........u callin yo mama
Allen:.... Dam, do we hav 2.wait hol up, I had 2 tell ur mama so u hav 2 tell mine...HA U THOUGHT I 4GOT HUH
Tawanna: Ok , she doesn't really hav 2 kno
Allen: Nope, ur azz iz callin, sorry
Tawanna: (whinin)no, i luv u baby
Allen: I luv u 2, I luv u enuff 2 hand u da phone an dial da numba 4 u
Tawanna: Fuk u allen
Allen: I already did

Tawanna: (laugh) Shut up
Allen: ight.....hea itz ringin
Tawanna: Dam.........Uh hello
Ann: Hello, whoz dis
Tawanna: Hi Ms. Iverson dis is Tawanna...
Ann:.........................................~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

Ann-Hey Tawanna,whatz up?
T-Nuthing,I was just calling to say hi
( Allen yelling Naw Tell Her)
Ann-Is that Allen,what he want you to tell me.
T- That...(long pause)
Ann-Hello,T you still there?
T- Miss Ann i'm pregnant
(another long pause)
T-Hello
Ann-What you say?
T-I'm pregnant
Ann- Your what? You trying to trap my baby aint you?
T- No, what you( Ann continues)
Ann-You know my baby doin good in school and he playing basketball and you just want to trap him because you know he gone be makin alot of money.
T- No hold on it aint even like that
Ann-Shut up let me talk to Allen.
( T crying hands the phone to Allen)
Allen-Hello
Ann- What the f*** is wrong with you?
Allen- Nuthin
Ann- Somehing is what you don't know how to keep your dick in your pants?
Allen-Huh?
Ann- You don't know how to use condoms?
Allen- They don't work all the time
Ann-Boy, you just threw yoyr whole life away you know that?
Allen- Moma slow your roll cuz I love Tawanna and she loves me and this is my baby she having and I'm going to do my best to take care of it.
Ann- Boy you don't know how to take care of yourself.She don't love you. Allen, sje sees you and sees dollar signs don't you understand? She trapped you.
Allen- Aint nobody trapped.Why you tripping
Ann- I just dont want you to waste your life away like I did. I had you at 15 and it was hard trying to take care of you.
Allen- I know
Ann- You know...
Sorry if i messed this up but I gots to throw a little drama up in this. I gotta bounce somebody finish.

Black Honey · Starter Joined: Aug 9, 2002 Posts: 182

Pretty puertorican, that was really good. I could actually see Ann reacting that way.Anyways, I heard Tawanna didn't go to university. Besides the story is cute so you guys continue.

j.iverson · Sixth Man Joined: Sep 13, 2002 Posts: 74

yo that was good somebody needs to continue

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

quote:
Originally posted by Black Honey:
Pretty puertorican, that was really good. I could actually see Ann reacting that way.Anyways, I heard Tawanna didn't go to university. Besides the story is cute so you guys continue.

Thank You, yall know a bitch got gifts.

FrizzyAI#3lova

Continuation

Ann:You know huh?(pause)Nigga you must not know much if you got some lil broad pregnant
Allen: (pissed off)Look ANN!!!!.....
Ann:What?!!!!....(cut off)
Allen:Yes I said Ann because it seems that I have to talk to you like that for you to listen
Ann:Boy I know you...(cut off)
Allen:Na I was listening to you at first but see you went and disrespected my girl and I love you ma but you aint gon be talking about her like that....Na like I said I LOVE HER and I'M GONNA LOVE HER FOR LONG and I know T really loves me and what is you talkin bout her trappin me and only seeing dolla signs...She aint worried bout that type of s*** because if she was she would have been broke up wit my poor ass and to add on to that T got her own damn money she's offered to pay for alot of s*** for me but I'm to stubborn to take it....
Ann:Allen.....
Allen:No ma let me finish......na you got my girl up in here cryin cause you hurt her feelings and I don't appreciate it....ya'll are the 2 most important women in my life and I don't want ya'll beefin like this...so ma I'm askin you can you please apologize to T.......
Ann:boy you out your mind
Allen: (yellin)Na I'm tellin you APOLOGIZE!!!!
Ann: (calm)Put her on the phone
(Allen hands Tawanna the phone)
Tawanna: (sniff)Hello
Ann:Look Tawanna I'm sorry for blowin on you like that...I didn't mean what I said it's just that I'm only lookin out for my son
Tawanna:I know how you feel
Ann:I just don't want my son to get caught up wit any no good chics out here...But I can see your not like that my son reminded me.....Allen really loves you and I have never seen him act this way about a girl you must be special
Tawanna:thank you Ms. Ann
Ann: (still talkin)maybe I'm just not used to this you probably might say I'm a slight
jealous I'm used to being around Allen all the time and I'm not the only lady in his life now...but you got a good man
Tawanna:I know
Ann:Let me speak to Allen
(Tawanna hands the phone to Allen)
Allen:Yeah
Ann:Na don't think you got me in check boy I only let you speak ya mind because I could see you really love that girl and I knew I was wrong.....but next time you talk s*** like that I will beat your lil skinny ass
Allen: (laughin)Aight ma
Ann:Na I'm ma huh?...I was Ann before
Allen:That's because you wasn't actin like my moma na you are
Ann:Ok just checkin but I gotta go to work
Allen:Wait moma what you mean you gotta go to work it's 8:00pm you got another job or something
Ann: (runnin off at the mouth)Yeah I gotta try to pay for some people to clean this sewage up
Allen:The pipes broke again
Ann:Yeah and your sister gettin sick again(Ann thinking

amn why did I just say that na this s*** gon be on his mind all the time)
Allen: (worried)She is....Moma do you need help because I can.....
Ann:No...Allen she's aight really she just a lil sick...but don't worry about that...just worry about school and me seeing my baby in the NCAA championship...Alright?
Allen: (quiet)
Ann:Alright...Allen
Allen:Alright
Ann:Bye baby
Allen:bye ma
(they hang up and Allen is lookin sad and is quiet and Tawanna gets worried)
_____________________________________________
I hope I didn't mess it up

Mrs. Iverson4eva · Rookie Joined: Oct 14, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: California

this is my first tyme so if its wack then im sorry..

T:wuts wrong baby??
A:how r we gon' handle this??
T: u juss told my momma and yo momma that we can handle this..(Tawanna get mad)
A:I knoe but..(tawanna interupts)
T:aint knoe buts..u juss sat here and lied to me my momma and yo momma,and now u gonn try 2 bacc out of this..no..we gonna make this work..even if i have 2 go bacc to virgina.
A:WUT!!
T:dont what me nigga..u heard me.
A: u not bout 2 take my baby 4rm me...
T: well thats the only way i can raise it unless u want to get an abortion.
A:did u juss hear me??u not bout 2 take my baby or allow any otha person to take my baby..
T:well wut r we gonna do??
A

Allen sighs)well im juss gonna have 2 leave georgtown and move bacc home
T: r u sure u wanna do this baby??
A:its the way to keep all of us together
T:baby...i luv u soooo much...and u r goin to be a wonderful father 2 our baby girl..
A:baby gyrl???u r carryin Allen jr.
(They both start laughin then kiss)

MizDiamonds

Naah, that wasn't wak ma.
***CONTINUATION***
Tawanna:Well in all seriousness though,I'm not sure.I want a girl and you want a boy. We will just have to see what we end up with.
Allen:Yeah, I guess your right.We'll just have to see.
Tawanna:Oh yeah,what about Omar.
Allen:I forgot all about him.
(Just as Allen is near the end of his sentence, Omar walks in)
* * * * *
Allen:well speaking of the non-ding-a-ling king himself.
Omar

serious)Look, I'm not in the mood for jokes right now. I'm cold as hell and this is like an everyday thing with you and Tawanna. I'm tired of waiting in the cold yo. We all supposed to be cool so why can't ya'll talk in front of me, its not that damn serious.I mean its not like I'm a kid,we are all the same age and Allen you supposed to be one of my closest road dogz and you treatin me like this?I understand that ya'll want to be alone so if this is the way its gonna be,I'll just try to move into dorm room.
(Allen and Tawanna begin to feel a sense of guilt and explain the situation to omar)

Allen:Yo "O" it ain't even that serious kid.I mean,your still my nigga and I guess I just lost track of the fact that a dude still got feelings too.
Tawanna: (emotionally;with tears in her eyes)Look Omar,I'm sorry about this...I'm sorry about everything.I know that the two of ya'll are boys and I didn't mean to intervein into that.I'm so sorry (crying) I think that it would be best if I just leave...
Allen:leave?...(confused)well if its that late I'll walk you back to your dorm...
Tawanna:No Allen!!!...I can walk myself back...and I mean I'm gonna leave George- Town..I'm going back to Virginia and I'll do an abortion there.
(Tawanna quickly exits the room and Allen chases after her)
* * * * * *
(In the hallway)
Allen:Tawanna stop!!Chill out yo..hold up!!
(Tawanna kept running until she got to her dorm room,Allen however,stopped and went back to his section of the campus)
* * * * * *
(Back in the room)
Omar

id you catch her?
Allen:No..
Omar:Look if this is my fault, I'm sorry man I didn't know.
Allen:Naah yo,this aint even your fault.
Omar:Whats the story for real..whats going on?
(Allen and Omar take seats and Allen begins to explain)

*~MizD~*

AI_LL

Allen: My dumb ass got Tawanna pregnant so we went through all this drama with her moma and you know my moma flipped.
Omar: Hell yea
Allen: So after all was said and done I was like how we goin handle this and s*** and I had promised everybody that I had everything under control and .
Omar (finishing AI sentence) And you don't
Allen: You know I don't my moma she know I don't either she just acting her role till I come crawling back for help.
Omar: She a mother that's her job
Allen: Man O dog I don't know what to do
Omar: Go talk to T first for she do some dumb s***.
Allen: Yea you right.
Allen ran over to Tawanna's dorm while running security stopped him.
Sec.1: Hey
Allen: Yes sir
Sec.1: Oh it's the kid Al Iverson
Sec.2: Hey son what you doing getting ready for your game
Allen: Yea just jogging a little
Sec.1: Oh just making sure. You know it's a lot of crazy people running around for no reason. And you should have on a coat it's cold out here.
Allen: I'll remember that
Sec.2: Well let you get back to your jogging son be ready for that game.
Allen: All right.
He continued to run as the car passed him he then waited til they turned at the corner before he went into Tawanna's building.
He went up stairs and knocked on her door no one answered.
Melondy Tawanna's roomate came.
Mel: Hey Allen
Allen: Wuz up Mel, Tawanna in there
Mel: I don't know I haven't been here let me check.
Allen: All right.
Mel opened the door and found Tawanna laying in her bed facing the wall.
Allen: Baby
Tawanna: Damn Mel why you let him in here.
Mel: Oh I'm sorry
Allen: No you don't have to be sorry.
Tawanna: What now
Allen: Don't go getting no abortions.
Tawanna: I'm not trying to mess up my life and your life you going to league after you leave here you aint goin care about me and you probably goin forget about yo kid
Allen: I wouldn't ever
Tawanna: Yes you would how many men say that before they go into the league boy we not goin be together forever and you know it and I know it.
Allen: No you don't
Tawanna: Yes I do
Allen: Tawanna don't have no abortion man that would be stupid
Tawnna: Well it's not your body
Allen: It's my child though
Tawanna: So
Allen: T if I was goin leave you I would've been and done it all right.
Silence
Allen: Tawanna you hear me
Tawanna: I'm listening to you although I'm not trying to hear nothing you saying.
Allen: Man where the phone
Tawanna: Don't touch no phones around here you don't pay the bill.
Allen: You don't pay my bill while you were down there just dialing numbers.
Tawanna: I hate you
Allen: SO
Dialing her mother's number.
Shelia answered the phone mad.
Shelia: Hello
Allen: Yea Ms. Sheila I'm sorry to bother you again.
Sheila: What now she having twins
Allen: No she talking about she coming home to have a abortion.
Shelia: No the hell she not she know better than that let me speak to her.
Allen: Here yo moma want you
Tawanna: You are such a snitch.
Allen: Here
Handing her the phone.
Tawanna (aggravated): Hello
Shelia...........

iverson423 · Starter Joined: Jun 1, 2002 Posts: 206

hol up. no yall not finishing this wit out me!!! ima have ta come on this weekend and tell yall somethin.

Ivy'sSk8terChik · Starter Joined: Sep 28, 2002 Posts: 159 Location: My Crib

Yea this story is madd tight,much respect to all those that are writing it.

MizDiamonds

Sheila:Who the hell are you catching that tone with child?Don't think I won't come to washington and buss yo ass!You gettin too damn grown...Do you think your too old for my damn belt?
Tawanna:No mother...
Sheila

h...I thought so....now back to the subject.Whats this I'm hearing about an abortion?
Tawanna:No mommy, Allens lying...
Allen

in the background)No I'm Not...why you lyin on me?
Tawanna:Allen shut-up...
Sheila:don't talk to that boy like that..
Tawanna:well if it weren't for him I wouldn't be in this situation.
Sheila

pauses)Tawanna...how could you say that?I thought you loved Allen...when you love someone the way that you claim that you do for him..you don't put all of the blame on him..as far as I'm concerned,both of ya'll are responcible and both of ya'll are going to take care of this baby.Now apologize to him.
Tawanna

looking in allen's direction)I'm sorry Allen.
Sheila:Now I need to talk to his mother...I'm going to call her right now...whats her number?

*~MizD~*

[ October 16, 2002: Message edited by: *MizDiamonds* ]

daysha iverson

ANN I: WUT THE HELL U CALLIN ME FOR?

SHELIA : HEIFER I JUSS WANTED TO TELL U THAT UR SON AND MY DAUSGHTER DONT HAVE EVERYTHING AS PLANNED OUT AS THEY CLAIMED.

ANN I: WUT EVA ... MY SON WILL HANDLE IT... HE'S A SURVIVOR... HE'S BEEN THROUGH THE STRUGGLE AND STILL IS.. ITS PROBALY YOUR DAUGHTER AND HER BIG ASS FOREHEAD THAT HAS A PROBLEM

SHELIA: I ASLWAYS HATED UR ASS ANN (LAUGHING)

ANN I: I KNOW (LAUGHING TOO)

ANN I: SERIOUSLY THOUGH THEY'LL WORK IT OUT... BESIDES WE CAN'T HELP THEM NO MORE ... THEY GROWN NOW... THEY HAVE TO FIGHT THEIR OWN BATTLES

SHELIA: YEAH U RIGHT ANN

ANN I: AIN'T I ALWAYS

[ October 16, 2002: Message edited by: daysha iverson ]

[ October 17, 2002: Message edited by: daysha iverson ]

MizDiamonds

yo Daysha,that was funny as hell ma!!!

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

Daysha that was crazy!!!
Sheila = s
Ann = a

a:well i'm bout to call tawanna and allen and see if they need anything right now

s:aight then i'll talk to you later ann

a: alright then bye

s:bye

They both hang up and now the phone is for Tawanna (ring, ring, ring)

t:hello?
a:yeah baby how are u doin?
t:i'm doin fine you wanna 2 talk 2 allen?
a:no, what's wrong you don't want 2 talk 2 me?
t:no i just thought that's who u called 4
a:naw but how's everything goin tawanna?
t:it's straight
a:what's straight girl?
t:we just argue sometimes but we'll be fine
a:is allen actin like he has sense
t:yeah ann he's actin like a good dad and all
a:but is he actin like a good husband?
t:yeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
a

ut him on the line right now girl

ANYBODY CAN GO FROM HERE!!!!!

A.I.lova

Tawanna: Ight I will
Ann: Well if u need nething let me know, because your practicalyy family
Tawanna: (shocked) Well thank u ann
Ann: U can call me ma
Tawanna: Ight mama
Ann: (laughin) well let me speak 2 allen
Tawanna: (yellin) ALLEN! DA PHONE
Allen: Dam i heard u, and so did people on New York, dam dat wuz loud
Tawanna: Well i try

, itz mama
Allen: Mama? wen did dis happen.... oh ight... hello
Ann: Hey baby, I jus came from speaking wit t's mama
Allen: oooooooooo:O, mama wut'd u say
Ann: I behaved myself boi, shut up
Allen: Good, so iz evrything coo
Ann: Like da otha side of da pillow
(Both laughin)
Allen: Well ma, can i call u back, me and my gurl are about 2 go out 2 eat
Ann: ( chuckles) oh, my baby sprung
Allen:

wuteva ,ma, well imma let u go ight
Ann: Bye baby
Allen: Bye mama luv u
Ann: bye
(both hang up)
Tawanna: (

mocking allen) Bye mama luv u....u a real mama's boi huh
Allen: (actin like a lil kid) SO I don't care

Tawanna: (laughin) Wuteva Allen, so where we goin 2 eat
Allen: I don't kno where do u wanna go
Tawanna: Dat one place...uh um.... its Uncle Fred's chicken.... oh boi! dey got sum good food
Allen: I guess, dey ight, but we'll go just 4 u..(pecks her on da lips)
Tawanna: Nah we not goin jus 4 me, we goin a da 3 piece combo and da cheese fries
Allen: (laughin) u gonna git fat off dat stuff
Tawanna: I am eating 4 two
Allen: Newayz, lemme ask Oamr if he wants anythin(yellin)YO OMAR, WANT SUM CHICKEN?
( Omar rushin out of hiz room)
Omar: CHICKEN!!! WHERE? DEREZ NO CHICKEN HERE, DID SUME1 SAY CHICKEN
Allen: nigga calm down, we goin 2 git sum food at UNCLE FRED'S, want any?
Omar: HELL YEA NIGGA..u aint got 2 ask me twice
(Allen and T laughin)
Allen: Let's go babe, dey close in a lil bit
Tawanna: Ight...bye O
Omar: Bye babygurl,.oh yea allen git me da 3 piece combo and dem cheese fries, u kno datz off da hingez!
Allen: (laughin) wuteva nigga
(Tawanna and Allen Leave, dey take T's car and deir driving along)
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

(IN THE CAR)
Allen: T, why u so quiet
Tawanna: Thinkin, datz all
Allen: About dat 3 piece huh (laughin)
Tawanna: (laughin) Nah stupid, about life in general...and itz da cheese fries thank u very much, u feel me
(silence)
Tawanna: Allen?...(no response)...(This time yellin)ALLEN
Allen: huh, wut......(slows down da car)
Tawanna: Why we slowin down
Allen: T, LOOK UP DERE AT DAT BILLBOARD
Tawanna: (looking, after a while)... I hope ur not gettin ideas Allen
Allen: T, dats da answer 2 all our problems right dere c doz wordz its a miracle in disguise:: NBA DRAFT COMING SOON:: GOT GAME?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

AI_GURL_03 · Rookie Joined: Aug 27, 2002 Posts: 35 Location: home

YO I THINK HE MET HER IN HIGH SCHOOL BECAUSE I HEARD HIM SAY ONCE THAT SHE WAS HIS HIGH SCHOOL SWEETHEART AND THEN AFTER HIGH SCHOOL THEY GOT MARRIED AND HAD KIDS...

MizDiamonds

Dang ya'll is this the end?

*~MizD~*

daysha iverson

that story was really cute... ithink if he was to ever read this he would be laughin his ass off... he would be proud and flattered

FrizzyAI#3lova

(Continuation)
Tawanna: Allen baby,you haven't even thought this out.........
Allen: Tawanna what is there to think about this is what I planned on doing from the start...I'm just doing it earlier
Tawanna: What about graduating?
Allen: I wanted to graduate, that's a big accomplishment but,I got to do what I got to do for me and my future family
Tawanna: But...(cut off)
Allen: Aint no buts....I'm a man and my uncles have taught me that a man has to step up to the plate and handle their responsibilities...so just let me handle mines
Tawanna: (sigh)Aight Allen
(After driving for 5 mins of silence they arrive at Uncle Fred's/They get out the car and go inside and take a seat)
Allen: (smilin)Come on Teedee I hate it when you mad at me(sad puppy face)
Tawanna: (laughin)That face always make it better cause you look oh so stupid
Allen: (smilin)So you got jokes huh?
Tawanna: (playin)Yeah nigga what you gon do about it
Allen: Ima do this (he leaned over and pinced her cheeks)
Tawanna: Owwwww(he lets go)I got cha(she leans over and grabs the back of his neck and squeezes it)
Allen: (sounding like a lil girl)Owww...ok...I'm sorry
Tawanna: Who the WO-MAN
Allen: (lil girl voice) You are
Tawanna: Who punkin Allen Iverson
Allen: You ar-........Hol up Allen Ezail Iverson don't get punked he do the punkin
Tawanna: (lettin him go/laughin)I thought so I thought you went soft on ya girl
Allen: (suckin his teeth)Neva that
(Waiter comes over wit a greasy apron on (ya'll know how we do it taste better like that lol))
Waiter: (ghetto talkin) What ya'll want....Wait hold on...aint you that dude Allen Iverson the guard for Georgetown
Allen: The one and only
Waiter: Whatsup son you played a good game on last weekend
Allen: Thanks
Waiter: Aight...but fareal what ya'll want
Allen: What all the black peeps up in here for (rappin)That 3 piece combo and them Chili cheese fries
Waiter: (laughin)Should have known...Should have known....How many orders
Allen: Three.....But one to go
Waiter: Aight...It's gon be right out
(He leaves and puts their order in)

Somebody else can continue

BitterSweetMami_3

the waiter walks off and allen and tawanna are talking.

a-what you wanna have?
t-i don't know. what you wanna have?
a-a boy.
t-that figures.
a-a girl will do too. she can just be my girl balla.
t-look nigga.....you ain't finna have my baby out here getting sweaty messing up her hair and nails. is you crazy?
a-what? (laughing) you so crazy.
t-and you crazy with me. i wish this ghetto ass waiter would hurry up and come on. i'm hungry.
a-DAMN!! (smiling). you already greedy, i hate to see you when you 6 months and on down the road.
t-what you tryna say? (she throws a balled up piece of paper at him)
a-you betta quit playing before you won't be able to walk in the morning.
t-and how you suspect you gon do that?
a-don't play no games teedee.
(they both laugh)
t-whatevea nigga. oooooh. here he comes with the food.
w-here yall go. i'm sorry it took so long.
t-that's okay.
they eat and tawanna doesn't eat all her food cause she feeling sick to her stomach.

a-baby, what's wrong with you?
t-nothing. i'm just feeling queezy. i'll be okay.
a-you betta eat yo food.
t-i'll eat later on tonight when i'm hungry agian. come on. this smell is making me sick.
a-aiight. i guess lets' roll. (they tip the waiter.)
t-that's all you leaving is a dolla? nigga you betta put more than that down.
a-leave me alone. i always tip the waiters a dolla.
t-you so damn silly. (tawanna leave him an extra couple of dollas.)
IN THE CAR......
a-................

*Bubba Chick03*

HHHEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

AIGirl3 · Starter Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 300 Location: Michigan

I think that ya'll should keep goin off of My Story cause that is hot but good job to everybody that's postin now cause ya'll are doin pretty good right now.

FrizzyAI#3lova

(Continuation)
IN THE CAR
(Tawanna is looking out the window looking depressed)
Allen:Baby what's wrong?
Tawanna:sniff:
Allen:You cryin Teedee
Tawanna: (turns around with tears in her eyes)Allen, I feel like I failed myself and my family
Allen: What?
Tawanna:sniff: It's like,(sigh) I mean I wanted my degree and I had goals Allen,na my life is going to be centered around a baby and you talkin about going into the draft what about me?
Allen: (parks the car by the dorm room and sighs)Tawanna baby I don't know what to say to tell you the truth.....
(Tawanna slams the car door and storms off in the dorm/Allen follows her)
(Tawanna walking through the door)
Omar:Ay T.........
(she just passes him up)
(Allen comin in 2 seconds later)
Omar:Ay Chuck what's wrong wit.......
(Allen passes him up)
Omar:Well damn
(Allen shuts the door behind him)
Allen: (yellin)Look T,I understand where you comin from,and I disagree too,Tawanna where did you grow up? huh?
Tawanna:What?
Allen: You grew up in the suburbs see me I grew up in the damn projects with sewage comin in my house while my ma struggling tryin to take care of her family by her damn self I have goals too yeah and one of them is to be in the NBA and this step is the best for the both of us T I want the best for you and I will see to that but don't make me feel guilty and sabatoge my plans
Tawanna:Allen I would never try to do that I want you to reach your goals, your goals are more important to me than my own Allen I wanna see you succeed your the only person I know that deserves the best you work so hard towards it and I wanna see you happy...and this is no guilt trip I just feel sad
Allen: (huggin her)Baby everything is going to be alright...I promise you that
Tawanna : (cryin with her head on Allen's shoulder)I love you
Allen: (breaking the hug and rubbin her cheeks)Baby I love you too(he kisses her softly)
Omar:Awww
Allen&Tawanna:Shut up!!!!
Omar:Forget you too...where my food at?
Allen: (gives him the plate)hea nigga
Omar: (smilin)Oooh fries
(They laugh)(That night Tawanna lays with Allen and they talk and cuddle while they discuss the plans)

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FrizzyAI#3lova · [ November 03, 2002: Message edited by: FrizzyAI#3lova ]

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FrizzyAI#3lova

1 YEAR LATER

(At Allen's aunts house his whole family is there Omar and the boys too)
Omar: (yellin)Hurry up out the kitchen ya'll it's comin on
Everybodi:We Comin

(They sit down in the living room)

TV:You are watching the 1997 NBA Draft we have some of the best basketballs players here tonight waiting to picked by a great team

Allen'sUncle:Where Chuck at?

TV:Everyone's wondering who the Sixers will pick since their the #1 Draft pickers but every team has their eye on the guard from Georgetown Mr.Allen Iverson

(The biography they be doing for the players)TV:Allen Iverson growing up in Hampton,Va is the key player everyone wants(showing highlights from high school games)his mother tells us Allen is a very determined player and that life was hard for the Iversons as Allen grew up

Ann's interview:Whatever my son gets he deserves he's determined and very kind hearted growing up in the projects he has always been a help to me and his lil sisters

(At AI's Aunts house)
Omar:Look at Ms. Ann

TV:The Hampton native tells us of his life in the projects and growing up as a lil kid
Allen's Interview:Iv'e grown in a bad neighborhood Iv'e lost alot of my friends from gang related situations...The only way to keep me busy and off the streets was basketball and my moma keeping me going all the way...I remember me wanting to quit but my moma bribing me with a pair of jordans if I kept going(he laughs)even if she didn't have the money she made sure I had them

(At the house)
AI's Aunt:Look at my nephew

TV: (highlights from college games)This Hampton player has nothing to lose here tonight
TV: (the Sixers owners come up to the stage)Now the Sixers will announce their draft pick
Billy King(I think that's him):We pick ALLEN IVERSON
(cheering)
(Allen gets up from their table in his suit smiling and hugs Ann)
Ann:You got it Chuck...I love you
Allen:I love you too ma
(Allen goes and hugs Tawanna)
Tawanna:I love you
Allen:Love you too

(At the house)
Aunt: (hugging everybody)he got it
Omar: Go Chuck...that's my dawg

TV: (Allen walks up on stage and puts on his Sixers baseball cap and is presented with his Jersey)
Allens Speech: I would like to thank God because he's blessing me everyday my moma for always being there for me,my family at home in VA I love ya'll

(At the House)
Family:Yeah!!!!

Allen on TV:My girlfriend Tawanna baby I love you and my lil baby girl Tiaura daddy loves you,to my late grandma I love you,my coaches,fans,everybody that supported me,to my boys CRU THIK fasho,and to the Sixers for givin me the chance to play for them I won't let ya'll down(he holds up his jersey while everyone cheers and balloons and confetti come down from the ceiling and everyone takes pictures)

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[ November 03, 2002: Message edited by: FrizzyAI#3lova ]

prettypuertorican · Starter Joined: Sep 7, 2002 Posts: 393 Location: Philly

quote:
Originally posted by A.I.lova:
Tawanna: Ight I will
Ann: Well if u need nething let me know, because your practicalyy family
Tawanna: (shocked) Well thank u ann
Ann: U can call me ma
Tawanna: Ight mama
Ann: (laughin) well let me speak 2 allen
Tawanna: (yellin) ALLEN! DA PHONE
Allen: Dam i heard u, and so did people on New York, dam dat wuz loud
Tawanna: Well i try , itz mama
Allen: Mama? wen did dis happen.... oh ight... hello
Ann: Hey baby, I jus came from speaking wit t's mama
Allen: oooooooooo:O, mama wut'd u say
Ann: I behaved myself boi, shut up
Allen: Good, so iz evrything coo
Ann: Like da otha side of da pillow
(Both laughin)
Allen: Well ma, can i call u back, me and my gurl are about 2 go out 2 eat
Ann: ( chuckles) oh, my baby sprung
Allen: wuteva ,ma, well imma let u go ight
Ann: Bye baby
Allen: Bye mama luv u
Ann: bye
(both hang up)
Tawanna: ( mocking allen) Bye mama luv u....u a real mama's boi huh
Allen: (actin like a lil kid) SO I don't care

Tawanna: (laughin) Wuteva Allen, so where we goin 2 eat
Allen: I don't kno where do u wanna go
Tawanna: Dat one place...uh um.... its Uncle Fred's chicken.... oh boi! dey got sum good food
Allen: I guess, dey ight, but we'll go just 4 u..(pecks her on da lips)
Tawanna: Nah we not goin jus 4 me, we goin a da 3 piece combo and da cheese fries
Allen: (laughin) u gonna git fat off dat stuff
Tawanna: I am eating 4 two
Allen: Newayz, lemme ask Oamr if he wants anythin(yellin)YO OMAR, WANT SUM CHICKEN?
( Omar rushin out of hiz room)
Omar: CHICKEN!!! WHERE? DEREZ NO CHICKEN HERE, DID SUME1 SAY CHICKEN
Allen: nigga calm down, we goin 2 git sum food at UNCLE FRED'S, want any?
Omar: HELL YEA NIGGA..u aint got 2 ask me twice
(Allen and T laughin)
Allen: Let's go babe, dey close in a lil bit
Tawanna: Ight...bye O
Omar: Bye babygurl,.oh yea allen git me da 3 piece combo and dem cheese fries, u kno datz off da hingez!
Allen: (laughin) wuteva nigga
(Tawanna and Allen Leave, dey take T's car and deir driving along)
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

(IN THE CAR)
Allen: T, why u so quiet
Tawanna: Thinkin, datz all
Allen: About dat 3 piece huh (laughin)
Tawanna: (laughin) Nah stupid, about life in general...and itz da cheese fries thank u very much, u feel me
(silence)
Tawanna: Allen?...(no response)...(This time yellin)ALLEN
Allen: huh, wut......(slows down da car)
Tawanna: Why we slowin down
Allen: T, LOOK UP DERE AT DAT BILLBOARD
Tawanna: (looking, after a while)... I hope ur not gettin ideas Allen
Allen: T, dats da answer 2 all our problems right dere c doz wordz its a miracle in disguise:: NBA DRAFT COMING SOON:: GOT GAME?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I think yal should've ended it right there, cuz we know the rest after that, I think it is a wonderful ending, if yall would've ended right there.

*Bubba Chick03*

I like that ending betta cuz it was a betta way of ending it ,now we already kno he won but I liked it.

MizDiamonds

quote:
Originally posted by FrizzyAI#3lova:
(Continuation)
IN THE CAR
(Tawanna is looking out the window looking depressed)
Allen:Baby what's wrong?
Tawanna:sniff:
Allen:You cryin Teedee
Tawanna: (turns around with tears in her eyes)Allen, I feel like I failed myself and my family
Allen: What?
Tawanna:sniff: It's like,(sigh) I mean I wanted my degree and I had goals Allen,na my life is going to be centered around a baby and you talkin about going into the draft what about me?
Allen: (parks the car by the dorm room and sighs)Tawanna baby I don't know what to say to tell you the truth.....
(Tawanna slams the car door and storms off in the dorm/Allen follows her)
(Tawanna walking through the door)
Omar:Ay T.........
(she just passes him up)
(Allen comin in 2 seconds later)
Omar:Ay Chuck what's wrong wit.......
(Allen passes him up)
Omar:Well damn
(Allen shuts the door behind him)
Allen: (yellin)Look T,I understand where you comin from,and I disagree too,Tawanna where did you grow up? huh?
Tawanna:What?
Allen: You grew up in the suburbs see me I grew up in the damn projects with sewage comin in my house while my ma struggling tryin to take care of her family by her damn self I have goals too yeah and one of them is to be in the NBA and this step is the best for the both of us T I want the best for you and I will see to that but don't make me feel guilty and sabatoge my plans
Tawanna:Allen I would never try to do that I want you to reach your goals, your goals are more important to me than my own Allen I wanna see you succeed your the only person I know that deserves the best you work so hard towards it and I wanna see you happy...and this is no guilt trip I just feel sad
Allen: (huggin her)Baby everything is going to be alright...I promise you that
Tawanna : (cryin with her head on Allen's shoulder)I love you
Allen: (breaking the hug and rubbin her cheeks)Baby I love you too(he kisses her softly)
Omar:Awww
Allen&Tawanna:Shut up!!!!
Omar:Forget you too...where my food at?
Allen: (gives him the plate)hea nigga
Omar: (smilin)Oooh fries
(They laugh)(That night Tawanna lays with Allen and they talk and cuddle while they discuss the plans)

[ November 03, 2002: Message edited by: FrizzyAI#3lova ]

Aah...that was so emotional..But I liked it though.

Once again, thanks to everyone for replying and showin me love ya'll.
~*~Peace out~*~

*~MizD~*