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waiting for the answer
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Location: China

PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 3:23 pm    Post subject: My own story

This is my first time to write stroies in English. You know I’m not a native speraker so sometimes I may make a mistake. But I hope you can understand what I wanna say. Now, let me tell you a real story about me—— A Chinese girl. The name of the story is “Waiting for the answer”.

Chapter 1 At that moment, I’ll never forgot your name

3 years ago, I was a fool of basketball. One day, I had nothing to do so dad asked me if I would like to watch a NBA game on TV with him. OK, I said. But I could never thought it would change my life.
That was my first NBA game, Finals. The yellow guys were so bright (Lakers) but I prefer black. Because a boy who was in “3” attracted me so much that I took a shine to him. His special hair style, his tattoo, especially the expression in his eyes made me pay more attention on him. He was thin and not so tall as others. I could feel he was trying his best and he put more heart to play that game than the others even though that was my first time saw him. I was moved by his spirits. Who is he ? I asked my dad. Allen, Allen Iverson. Allen…I read his name by heart silently three times. At that moment, I’ll never forgot his name. Maybe this is God’s will.
From then on, Allen got into my life. I began to collect all imformation about him. And because of him, I started loving basketball, enjoying watching basketball games. I wondered why I hadn’t noticed that basketball was so cool before I knew Allen.
Unhappily, I found out that I was only one who loved Allen in my class. Some of them liked Carter, some liked Kobe, some liked Trancy and so on. The most annoying thing was they always laughed at Allen. They said, look! How short he was! He could do noting! At first, I was so angry and had qurrel with them. Day by day, I was sick and tired of this, I thought everyone had his own idea about what they love. So I didn’t need to care them. I just do myself, loved Allen. That was enough, wasn’t it?
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lilboomer
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 5:22 pm    Post subject: My own story

I LIKE IT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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porshe
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 9:51 pm    Post subject: My own story

AAWW THIS LIL GUR GOT SOME TRUE FEELLINS 4ALLEN IVERSON IC. BUT 4 A WORD OF ADVICE A.I. IS MARRIED AND IF U PLAN ON WAITIN 4 EM THEN U GONE B WAITIN 4EVA. SO BABY DON'T WASTE UR TIME OKEY MA
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waiting for the answer
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Location: China

PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 3:42 am    Post subject: My own story

I see...But you know, sth or sb you try your best to forget and then you still can't. However, keep on reading my story, perhaps you will understand.
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waiting for the answer
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 5:27 am    Post subject: My own story

Chapter 2 I have ever been happy

Time flied. One afternoon, when I passed the basketball court of our school, there were some boys playing basketball. Hey, guy, you are like Allen Iverson! I stopped to look for who said as soon as I heard this. Then, I couldn’t believe my eyes! There was a boy played very well. His action, his expression and even his clothes and shoes made me think about AI. (Of course AI is much better than him, but … you know) Suddenly, the
ball flied out of the court and rolled toward me. I picked it up, at the same time, that boy ran over here. When I raised my head, he was looking at me. It kept for a while and I was the first to break the silent. Here you are. I gave him the ball. He just realized his purpose was the ball. Thank you. He said with a smile. Then I left the court. All had happened just now was like a movie. I couldn’t stop myselt to turn my head back to see him twice. Hey, who he is!! Forget him. I talked to myself.
Next day, on my way home, I saw him again. He saw me too. And he stopped me, let’s make friends, OK? I herad of you liked Allen, didn’t you? Me too. So…..he stoked his head. I forgot why I agrred to be friends with him then.
From then on, we often went out. We went to the cinema, have the ice cream, go to the park… Happyness was filled with our life. That year, 2002, it seemed I just paid little attion on NBA, on Allen. Perhaps he was too far for me. In other way, my real life was rich so that I didn’t make time to miss him.
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Bamagrl3
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 5:37 am    Post subject: My own story

YOU GO GIRL!! YO ENGLISH AIN'T DAT BAD! I UNDERSTAND YOU JUST AS GOOD AS SOME OF THESE FOLKS ON HERE THATS SUPPOSED TO BE AMERICAN
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tim
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 5:45 am    Post subject: My own story

AYE..BAMAGIRL..GO CHECK UR MAIL DEN..HOLLA AT ME ..AIGHT!!
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tim
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 8:20 am    Post subject: My own story

YEA...THAT STORY WAS AIGHT...AND IM GUESSIN..IT'S TRUE..I FEEL U.. U INFATUATED
WIT DA MAN..BUT 1 SUGGESTION...DONT WAIT ON
HIM..THOUGH!..CAUZ U CAN WAIT UR WHOLE LIFE
AWAY!!..AND HE STILL AINT GOIN 2 COME..SO JUS GET UR SELF A MAN...SOME POPCORN AND SOME KOOL-AID{THE AMERICAN KIND}!..AND U AND
UR MAN CAN WAIT TOGETHER..4 HIS GAME 2 COME ON!!AND ENJOY!!
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AllensBabyGirl3
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 9:19 am    Post subject: My own story

YOU GO GIRL, I LIKE IT KEEP IT GOIN.
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waiting for the answer
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Location: China

PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 11:52 am    Post subject: My own story

Thanks Bamagrl3! Thanks Tim! Thanks AllensBabyGirl3! Thanks... I feel so happy now because of your support. I've just finished my English classes. Our teacher guy is from New York city! He is really friendly and cute! I love America! I love you! I'm sure one day I'll gonna see you!
Wait for me!
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noj
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Location: somewhere... and it's not here

PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 2:18 pm    Post subject: My own story

heyyyy... nice! i also make stories but fics about certain shows whatever. Is this your life story? wow why don't you write a letter and send it to... do you have programs in china that shows your life in tv? you can send it to them! anywayz keep it up!!!
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waiting for the answer
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 5:55 pm    Post subject: My own story

Chapter 3 I’ll be waiting for you.

On the third, April, my birthday, I received a gift from that boy. It was a little purple box. Guess what? A bracelet! Well I didn’t know what it was made of. But I liked it. He hoped me to wear it everyday. So I did. Both of us were satisfied.
Nice things always come and go. One afternoon, while my friend and I were walking to the basketball court, a girl walked toward us. From the expression of her eyes, I didn’t feel she was friendly. In fact, she wasn’t. Hey, do you like Allen? Yes, I replied. Oh!! Don’t try to fool me! I don’t believe you. Look! What are you wearing ? Where is your Allen’s bracelet?? ( Allen always wears a black bracelet, I bet you’ve seen! It is sold in China ) Hahaha… You aren’t his fan. You don’t have the qualifications. Remember only I could see him one day and you couldn’t!! She laughed at me. After her words, I said nothing. I cried and ran off my home. When I got home, mom saw me crying. What’s up? She asked. Nothing. Don’t worry mum. I just felt not very well and I don’t wanna have dinner. Then I got into my own room, closed the door. (Well, mom is mom) She knocked at my door and said, hey tell me what had happened? Nothing!! Please leave me along, OK? Then I began to listen to the music. When I was cut up, I always did it. And in this way I would feel better. What’s wrong with me? I stopped loving Allen? No! No! Never!! I love him so much. How could I do that? … I took out a picture from a box. It was full of Allen’s posters, pictures and some article that on magazines. That picture was my favorite. Allen smiles so happily. I looked at it for a long time. I realized that I had never forgotten him. Perhaps he was too far for me so that I put him into the bottom of my heart. But my love has never changed. Then, what about that boy? Who is he? … Yep, he was just an image of Allen. Well, I wondered if I had liked that boy. I didn’t know. To be with him, I was really happy but when I realized who had taken away my heart. Maybe he was just my good friend. Very very very good friend, not lover. That night, I called him. Hey, me. I said. ( This is our habit, we don’t need to say this is …, we know the voice of each other) Oh, what’s up? Your voice was… Did you cry? I didn’t answer this question. Well, I have an idea to tell you. Go ahead. Uhhh… I didn’t know how to start. What? He asked. Well, do you think we are friends or lovers? Come on! What’s wrong with you? He said and laughed. Please answer my question, OK? I think we are lovers, aren’t we? I like you. What do you think? When I heard this I couldn’t believe that. What should I do…. However, I dicided to tell him my real idea. Hey, whatever we are. Now it’s over. I don’t wanna cheat on you. I just found out that I love Allen, although he is an impossible dream for me. So, do you understand? He was in silence. After a while, he broke the silence. If you did that you would lose your own happiness. I know what I’m doing. I’ve read a book and it said, a person needs just 3 things, someone to love, something to do and something to hope for. Allen is my dream, I’m sure one day my dream will be come true! Right? You’re too obstinate. Maybe… Could you answer my last question? Will you still like Allen even though you won’t like anymore? Yes. Thank you. You’re so kind. Have you just noticed this? His voice was filled with sorrow. ( I felt ) Anyway, please forgive me. We’re still friends. Good night. I finished this conversation. I cried. He was really a good boy and he looked after me carefully. But I’ve hurt him. I turned my head up and looked at the sky. It was at night but there were a few bright stars. How nice they are I talked to myself. Allen, how are you? Although you are in the other side of the Atlantic Ocean, I’ll waiting for you. I’ll waiting for the answer. I will.
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waiting for the answer
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 5:59 pm    Post subject: My own story

Tomorrow i'll go to school. So chapter 3 is so long. My story hasn't finished. I'll keep on writing and send them as soon as i'm free. Thanks for reading it.
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lilboomer
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:21 am    Post subject: My own story

quote:
Originally posted by waiting for the answer:
Thanks Bamagrl3! Thanks Tim! Thanks AllensBabyGirl3! Thanks... I feel so happy now because of your support. I love America! I love you! I'm sure one day I'll gonna see you!
Wait for me!



WHY YOU DIDN'T NAME ME. I'M THE FIRST ONE THAT GAVE YOU PROPS. I'M JUST PLAYING. I LOVE MESSING PEOPLE SOMETIMES. IN A GOOD WAY. NEVER TAKE ME SERIOUSLY. WELL SOMETIMES. YOU ARE DOING A GREAT JOB. KEEP IT UP. I REALLY LIKE IT.

[ February 03, 2004: Message edited by: lilboomer ]
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sweetcoco872
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 2:36 am    Post subject: My own story

I'M NEW AND I LIKE YOUR STORY THAT IS SO SWEET
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 4:56 am    Post subject: My own story

THIS IS A CUTE STORY. KEEP IT GOING GIRL!
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waiting for the answer
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 3:30 pm    Post subject: My own story

Thanks lilboomer!!! Hey, never forget you!
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waiting for the answer
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 6:04 pm    Post subject: My own story

Chapter 4 A game that I will never forget, Allen, you’re the best!

After that night, I haven’t seen that boy for a few days. It seemed this was God’s will. Perhaps it was good for both of us because we would feel embarrassed if we met each other. I knew I had broken his heart. However, I tried to lay it to rest with the time flying. And I put all of my heart into whatever about Allen. Everyday, I would surfed the internet to search his news as soon as I got home. And then watched the sports news. People can’t live without the air and water. Allen seemed to be my air and water. The happiest thing was to watch his games on TV. ( You know watch a game of his team is too hard in China ) But they lost all games what I had watched. Although they were just general games, I didn’t wanna see his failure.
A few days later, the Play offs was coming. From that, I realized how deeply I loved Allen. Can you remember sixers’ first game? I’ll never forget. Without showing that game on TV, I had to surf the internet to look up the result. I was so nervous. That season ( last season) wasn’t great for Allen. Trancy Mcgrady did a good job and got the score-man ( Sorry, I don’t know how do you describe that honor) Also, Kobe kept scoring over 40 points for many games. Maybe in other’s eyes, Allen sucked. But I didn’t think so, he did tried his best for his team. And each sixers fan knew that obsolutly.
When the internet-page opened, I saw both Lakers and Magic won their first game. And Kobe and Mcgrady had got the highest points in their game. God…. Allen, you could did that as well as them, couldn’t you? I talked to myself. Then, what did I see? I must be seeing things! Sixers won!! How about Allen? He got 55 points! Of course he was the most outstanding one of the 3 superstars. I was so happy. But… I cried. You must be wonder why I cried. Well, he got 55 points! Everyone would say, hey Allen, you’d done a great job! But how many people knew how tiredly he felt. 55 points! Half of his team got. What did his teammates doing? I didn’t mean his teammates did so badly. I just meant a team was a company. Allen could get 55 points once, twice. But he couldn’t always do that. If Allen just got 10 points, he would be subjected to the censure of public opinion. In fact, he had tried his best.
Perhaps I thought too much. Sixers’ victory must give each player so much energy. Allen must be proud of his excellent showing. I should be happy, shouldn’t I?
I believe that every morning there is a new rising sun, and everything can always have a new start. I hoped other players could help Allen a bit more, so that Sixers would going a bit farther. Make a wish……
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answer_ai
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 05, 2004 11:53 pm    Post subject: My own story

GREAT STORY WAITING FOR THE ANSWER.PLEASE CONTINUE,I LIKE THE STORY ALOT!
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Iverson06baby
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 4:11 am    Post subject: My own story

i like it
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iverson_theanswer
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Location: CHINA

PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 8:07 am    Post subject: My own story

Hi~"waiting for the answer":

I am so moved by your chapter!!That's real~~I think both of us have the same wish and hope!

I like Iverson very very very much!!!And,I like playing basketball too!AI is the half of my life,I celect all his books,pictures,photos,news,Games on TV,his dics~~also I have many his shoes and T-shits!

I didn't image that I would come across a girl who loved AI so much in China!!Today,I know,she is you!!

I really wanna to be one of your friends,if you don't mind~for....we have almost the same experience!!!

My e-mail:

iverson_theanswer@hotmail.com

I am waiting you~~
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waiting for the answer
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 11:16 am    Post subject: My own story

chenk your email
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babiai3
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2004 7:33 pm    Post subject: My own story

i undastand u but ai dont
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iverson_theanswer
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 29, 2004 3:52 am    Post subject: My own story

quote:
Originally posted by babiai3:
i undastand u but ai dont


HE WILL...I BELIEVE IT~~~
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Yelena
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 8:21 pm    Post subject:

I gues I'm seeing this a bitt too late. I just wanna say that I really really like your stories.(I hope you'll read this) There's a boy in my town that really looks like A.I., he's short,slim and plays basketball amazingly well. Only problem is that he's vain (but still so cute). Anyway, respect from Croatia, keep writing the stories Exclamation Exclamation Wink
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hotsauce
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2004 10:57 pm    Post subject:

thats a great story i loved it. ai is very good but to love him is a little weird. but i cant doubt you . ima g uy so i wouldnt love him that would be sick
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iverson_theanswer
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2004 7:36 am    Post subject:

why don't you touch me?????

what's the matter~~~ Mad Confused
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AI is the soul of the basketball~

And~~me too^_^
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Fishercherrlynn
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PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2004 6:33 pm    Post subject:

I know this is alittle late too,but I think you have a nice little cute story.Very original and sweet in its own way.Keep up the good work Wink
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