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Kamikaze · Visitor Joined: Jan 17, 2004 Posts: 2

I write a lil bit so I just thought I'd make a post for rhymez on here...

So once again I'm left to ride on my own
Still a yungsta, got stress and I ain't even grown
I came in the world by myself
So I guess I go out by myself
I look around and ain't got no ridaz left
My problems pushed away the few that I had
Not a welcoming soul when a nigga get mad
It's sad
That a nigga still haunted by his past
Tha past came back and got a nigga doin bad
I used to trust God but he didn't help me in my time of need
Felt like I was shot and he jus left me to bleed
Perhaps I'ma bad seed
I been a loner since the age of three
And s*** I tried to put God first
Came up wit nuthin now I'm confused tell me, what could be worse?
Am I under a curse?
Tha hard times got a nigga wishin for a hearst
Where am I to go?
Ain't got a friend but I got a foe
And s*** my death approaches so slow
I only got one reason for living
And that's giving
The one talent that I was given
I got two lil yungstaz that look up to me
That's only thing holdin me back from becoming history
Cuz things are the way they shouldn't be
And I'm not sure if this world is the place for me
Is there a heaven and a hell?
s*** is there even a God cuz I sure can't tell
But I'm ride til I die
Cuz maybe one day things will get better and I will not cry
But until that day comes I'll be awaitin my end
Contemplatin whether or not to commit that sin

[ January 17, 2004: Message edited by: Kamikaze ]

yungsta2G5 · All-Star Joined: Jun 7, 2002 Posts: 776

Damn man...that was sum deep s***...good writing!!! I can relate to that a lil bit. I write too so I may post sum stuff here too but my mind is blank lately.

[ January 17, 2004: Message edited by: yungsta2G5 ]

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 2:50 am Post subject: Rhymez

I FEEL YOU. KEEP DOIN YA THING PLAYA

iversonluva227 · Rookie Joined: Jan 12, 2004 Posts: 41 Location: Plainfield

damn i sho can relate 2 dat...ur s*** iz tight...keep postin...hoolla atcha gurl

AI3girl · All-Star Joined: Apr 3, 2002 Posts: 898 Location: Chicago

I LIKED THAT. CANT RELATE BUT ITS WAS NICE. LOL

Karamel3A.I. · Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 5:26 am Post subject: Rhymez

DAMN THAT WAS REAL DEEP. IT WAS GOOD THOUGH!!

A.I.lova · Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 7:51 am Post subject: Rhymez

LOL,haha I can't believe y'all fell for that thatz Antonio's dumbazz actin like sumeone else, and then gonna compliment himself, I was fixin to get trapped too then I realized he is tha only one (to me) that spells yungsta like that, and if u fill in the question marks in his sig it spells yungsta2g5......he aint foolin' nobody....but that was a nice lil flow there YUNGSTA

[ January 17, 2004: Message edited by: A.I.lova ]

Ice · Rookie Joined: Jan 17, 2004 Posts: 47

Thank you baby...but I'm coo now everybody...I'm overcomin my stuggle...I don't feel like that no more.

Ice · Rookie Joined: Jan 17, 2004 Posts: 47

Oh yea...and I did hint her a lil bit...but she still woula found out it was me cuz she didn't even know it was me from the hints I gave her.

A.I.lova · Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 7:57 am Post subject: Rhymez

He ain't tha only one that can rhyme, he aint nobody

Eenny meeny miney......... moe
Your mama is a ......hoe
Famous clown...........Bo-bo

(Nah just playing thatz from "Not another Teen Movie")

Karamel3A.I. · Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 8:41 am Post subject: Rhymez

quote:
Originally posted by A.I.lova:
He ain't tha only one that can rhyme, he aint nobody

Eenny meeny miney......... moe
Your mama is a ......hoe
Famous clown...........Bo-bo

(Nah just playing thatz from "Not another Teen Movie")

THAT WAS TIGHT GIRL. DO YA THANG, I AINT MAD AT YA!!LOL!

A.I.lova · Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 9:13 pm Post subject: Rhymez

quote:
Originally posted by Karamel3A.I.:

THAT WAS TIGHT GIRL. DO YA THANG, I AINT MAD AT YA!!LOL!

Thank you girl, u can be in my videos when I get signed by tha R.O.C

But see it takes time to flow like that, u gotta be in tha zone

Ice · Rookie Joined: Jan 17, 2004 Posts: 47

Yea baby that was real good!!!

Bamagrl3 · Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 11:53 pm Post subject: Rhymez

YA'LL MESSIN WIT PEOPLE MIND. DAT AINT GOOD. I'M ALREADY CRAZY.

Karamel3A.I. · Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2004 1:19 am Post subject: Rhymez

quote:
Originally posted by A.I.lova:
Thank you girl, u can be in my videos when I get signed by tha R.O.C

But see it takes time to flow like that, u gotta be in tha zone

ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT I FEEL YA. JUST LET ME KNOW WHERE THE SHOOT AT!

A.I.lova · Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2004 5:15 am Post subject: Rhymez

quote:
Originally posted by Bamagrl3:
YA'LL MESSIN WIT PEOPLE MIND. DAT AINT GOOD. I'M ALREADY CRAZY.

lol, u crazy