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tim

It all started when I(GREG)all my 2best friends..Donald(ghetto)and Aaron(Smoke) met Dwayne(BLACK).We where all gangstas not necessarily by choice, but growing up in the neighborhood(Barry Farms in S.E.Wash,DC)thats all we seen growing up and pretty much ALL we knew.I(greg)was 17..Don(Ghetto)was 18 and Aaron(Smoke)was 16 and Dwayne(Black)was 17.Now me(Greg),Don(Ghetto),and Aaron knew each other since forever.We where like brothers..matter fact thats what we called each other....brothers.I(Greg was always the "aggresive....ready 4 anthing..wild" brother. Don(Ghetto) was the biggest in stature.He always was the "calm,level headed,...but u dont want 2 get him mad" brother.Aaron he was always the"funny..make fun of everbody..but get shy around the ladies" brother.It was the summer of 97'. We decided to go to Anacostia Park( giant park on Anacostia River that everyboy in DC be at in the summer).We had two 15 packs of Red Bull(beer)some smoke(weed),and was ready to act the fool.WE had started to make our way over to a group of females that where by the basketball courts.That's when we met Dwayne(Black)! THIS MY 1ST TIME WRITIN..IM OFF TODAY WAS BORED..PLUS JUS WANTED TO GIVE AH STORY FROM AH MALE PERSPECTIVE..!

Karamel3A.I.

SEEMS INTERESTING. YOU GONE ADD TO IT!

lilboomer

PRETTY GOOD. NOW COME BACK AND WRITE SOME MORE.

DeeLiteFull

Timmy, please add on. Let me know what's up with Dwayne (BLACK). :-)

baby_ko · Starter Joined: Jan 6, 2004 Posts: 128 Location: dc

tim when i first saw that you were writing a story i was like "oh lord i'm not going to be able to understand him". you proved me wrong man. keep it going.

Bamagrl3

OKKKKKAAAAAYYYYY! TIM WRITING A STORY. NEVA THOUGHT THAT WOULD HAPPEN. YOU PROVEN TO EVERY ONE THAT YOU CAN READ!!!

(IM JUS MESSIN WIT YOU!!!)

[ February 06, 2004: Message edited by: Bamagrl3 ]

nieceye_n_iverson

quote:
Originally posted by Bamagrl3:
OKKKKKAAAAAYYYYY! TIM WRITING A STORY. NEVA THOUGHT THAT WOULD HAPPEN. YOU PROVEN TO EVERY ONE THAT YOU CAN READ!!!

(IM JUS MESSIN WIT YOU!!!)

[ February 06, 2004: Message edited by: Bamagrl3 ]

LMFAO

waiting for the answer · Rookie Joined: Feb 1, 2004 Posts: 43 Location: China

Hey tim, keep it going! Writing story is an interesting thing.

tim

THE STORY CONTINUES...
As we made our way through the crowd moving
towards the females by the basketball courts.
...Don(Ghetto)points out a Sixers throw back jersey someone was wearing.That someone was
Dwayne(black),but we didn't know that at the time.

Don:Aye..U see dat jersey cuz wearin?
Greg:What jersey?Where?Who u talkin about?
Don:right there!dude with da throwback Charles Barkley Sixers jersey on.
Aaron:What u dont see him Greg?Right over there by them females.
Greg:Oh yeah!That jount(joint) aight!
Aaron:Yeah it is!I'm about to ask cuz where did he get dat jount!

So we all walked over towards the guy we now know as Dwayne(Black).

Aaron:Whatz up Dawg!aye that's a nice jersey u wearin.Where u get it?
Dwayne:Oh! this jount!..my girl bought this 4 me.But I don't know where she got it from though.
Aaron:Damn!I wanted 2 get an Allen Iverson
jount like the Barkley jount u wearing!
Dwayne:Oh!I can ask my girl where she got it from 4 u..just put this number in ur phone..
Aaron:Oh aight! thats a bet..Whatz ur name dawg?
Dwayne:Oh..folks call me Black!
Aaron:My name Smoke!

They give each other dap(a type of handshake..greeting)as they introduce theirselves.

Dwayne:This the number..202-336-3242
Aaron:(shouting)Greg!..Ghetto!(gestures 4 us 2 come over with his hand)

We had made our way over to the females,and where now engaged in conversation with them.

Don:Man!What does this Bamma(used as a reference for a uncool person)want?!
Greg:Who knows?ButI know I aint goin over there!
Greg:NNNAAAA!U come over here!

We didn't want 2 come over there because we were still talking 2 the females.So,Aaron and Dwayne Made their way over 2 us
and the females.

Aaron:Aye..This is Black..
Don:Whatz up champ!I like that jersey!
Dwayne:Thanks..Dawg!!
Greg:(In a reluctant tone)Oh..whaz up Dawg!
Greg:Smoke this Tonya,Nita,Mia..and I don't know her name!(I say jokingly)
Girl:(smiles and giggles)Hi!I'm Egypt!
Aaron:(in a soft voice)Hi!I'm smoke..
Greg:(says sarcasticly in a soft voice)Hi!...
I'm Smoke..

The females began 2 laugh at Greg's statement except4 Egypt who stares at Aaron
suggestively.

Egypt:Smoke dont listen 2 him.I think how u said it was so sexy.
Aaron:(blushes)Thanks!

At that moment Dwayne interjects himself in the conversation.

Dwayne:Egypt..that's a pretty name..I guess everything about u pretty..huh?
Egypt:(smiles slightly)Oh that's sweet!
Greg:(interrupts)Anyway!Do U ladies want 2
do something with us 2night?
Mia:Its 4 of u..and its 4 of us..yeah! we can
definitely do something..
Greg:4 of who?..man i dont even kno..(interrupted by Don)
Don:Yeah..We'll call ya'll in a hour..and decide on something!O.K. ladies see you in a little while!

The ladies say their goodbyes and leave.Aaron and Donald give Dwayne dap as we're preparing to leave.

Don:AightBlack!Smoke has ur number right!
He'll call u later and let u know whatz up!
Dwayne:o.k. see you later Ghetto
Aaron:I'll hollar at u later..black
Dwayne:o.k. thats a bet!..(shouts AIGHT!GREG..HOLLAR AT U LATER! as I walk away.)

I continue 2 walk away as if I never heard him saying anything.I think 2 myself"Why
is his bamma ass sayin my name like he know me?".Don and Aaron drilled me about how I
treat people the whole ride home.All of their words went into 1 ear and out the other because I have never been 1 to embrace a total stranger,and Im not going to start embracing them today!Regardless of what anybody says!I'm just stubborn like that!

2 be continued..

waiting for the answer · Rookie Joined: Feb 1, 2004 Posts: 43 Location: China

Good tim! I hope see next soon.

Mrs.Stoudemire

THAT WAS GOOD TIM

KEEP IT COMIN

Bamagrl3

VERY INTERESTING. I HOPE "GREG" DONT ACT LIKE DAT 4REEL.

KEEP IT COMIN'

baby_ko · Starter Joined: Jan 6, 2004 Posts: 128 Location: dc

good job, tim.

Karamel3A.I.

THAT WAS GOOD. KEEP IT GOING!

tim

CONTINUED...
Now we all decided to meet up and go bowling
later that night.We all met at the Bowling Palace as planned.Everyone had alot of fun bowling,and laughing at the crazy antics and comments of my lil brother Aaron(Smoke).
Everything went pretty well except for the fact Dwayne(Black)kept flirting with Egypt who had made it no secret she was
diggin'(into)my lil brother Aaron.We were now in the parking lot leaving the Bowling Palace walking to the cars.

Don:Everybody follow me!We can all go chill at my house,have some drinks and watch a movie.
Don:If thats o.k. wit u ladies?!
Tonya:Yeah...u jus lead da way baby!
Aaron:(says jokingly)Egypt can i sit on ur
lap?
Egypt:(replys jokingly)Of course anything u like baby!
Dwayne:(asks sarcasticly)Ahh!u like things on ur butt Smoke?
Aaron:(laughs)Who's butt?Ur butt? get outta here dawg!
Greg:(stares at Black)Don't be makin no butt jokes about me cause I dont know u like dat!
Dwayne:(says aggressively)Man!Ain't nobody makin no jokes about u cuz!!
Greg:(approaches Black)Why u say it like dat though?!What u want 2 see me(fight me)Dawg?!!
Don:(pulls Greg back)Stop being ah bamma(uncool person)all your life!And come on...Damn!

Everyone enters their vechiles and leave.We all decided to go to the Pancake House before we went to Don's house.Don and I ate at the table with Tonya and Mia.Aaron and Dwayne ate with Egypt and Nita.Aaron comes over to our table to tell us he 's about 2 go to the restroom.

Greg:(says jokingly)Dis bamma(uncool person)goin come ova here 2 tell us he goin 2 the bathroom!
Mia:(says smiling)Shut up greg..
Don:(says jokingly)What u want us 2 hold ur dick 4 you?
Tonya:Yaw niggaz is crazy!
Aaron:(says smiling)Man..Shut ya'll bamma ass up..I was jus tellin u!

We continue 2 laugh.Aaron leaves.It's been
15 minutes since he first went 2 the restroom.We hear gunshots!Nita comes running to the table.

Nita:(yelling)THEY SHOOTING...THEY SHOOTING..SMOKE OUTSIDE..SMOKE OUTSIDE!
Greg:SMOKE OUTSIDE?!!

We all run outside!Smoke is sitting on the ground in between Egypt's legs breathing hard as she rubs his head.I didn't see Dwayne at the time!

Greg:U AIGHT SMOKE? U AIGHT?
Smoke:(breathing hard)yea i'm aight!
Greg:What happened?
Smoke:It was dem Lincoln Heights niggaz(rival gangmembers)they tried 2 jump me,
but Black must have seen dem niggaz on me..
and.. he came out wit da strap(gun)bussin(shooting)and dem niggaz dipped(left quickly).
Greg:Black?where Black now?
Smoke:(as Don pulls him up)He said he was going 2 go to the car before the police show up!
Don:Yeah!We need to do the same!Girls yaw get in yaw car and follow me to the house.

Everyone runs to their cars and leaves.We could hear the police siren's as we speeded away!I turn and looked at Black eye 2 eye.

Greg:(voice sounding a little emotional)Black good looking out!I MEAN man 4REAL!
I need my lil brova!THANKS DAWG!THANKS!
Black:No problem champ!Aye Smoke my dawg too!I got his back!BELIEVE DAT!
Smoke:(says sarcasticly)Man yaw bammaz gettin tears all on da seats..save dem Kodak moments 4 when we get in the house!(we all laugh!!)

We(males and females)all spent the rest of the night drinking ,smoking, and discussing the wild night we just experienced.That night I gained a new found respect 4 Black. Yeah! Dwayne may be alright after all. MAYBE?!!

2 BE CONTINUED...

Bamagrl3

OR MAYBE NOT!!!

COME ON..... KEEP IT COMIN!

tim

YEAH..U KNOW IMA KEEP IT COMIN 4 U..BAMAGRL..
(STOP!THINK ABOUT IT)!>..WWEEELLLL ALRIGHTY THEN...BUT NNNAAA! SERIOUSLY THOUGH..IMA TRY TA ADD MORE B4 DA SITE CLOSE..I EMPHASIZIN TRY!..CAUSE BETWEEN WORK AND BEIN SOCIAL DA ONLY TIME I BE HAVIN 2 DO IT IS OFF DA LATENIGHT..OR EARLY MORNING....BUT U NEED TA HOLLA AT ME REGARDLESS..CAUSE ITZ SOMETHIN WE NEED 2 DISCUSS!!

Bamagrl3

quote:
Originally posted by tim:
YEAH..U KNOW IMA KEEP IT COMIN 4 U..BAMAGRL..
(STOP!THINK ABOUT IT)!>..WWEEELLLL ALRIGHTY THEN...BUT NNNAAA! SERIOUSLY THOUGH..IMA TRY TA ADD MORE B4 DA SITE CLOSE..I EMPHASIZIN TRY!..CAUSE BETWEEN WORK AND BEIN SOCIAL DA ONLY TIME I BE HAVIN 2 DO IT IS OFF DA LATENIGHT..OR EARLY MORNING....BUT U NEED TA HOLLA AT ME REGARDLESS..CAUSE ITZ SOMETHIN WE NEED 2 DISCUSS!!

WHAT!!!??!??!?!??!
LAST TIME YOU SAID DAT YOU WAS LYIN!
DONT PLAY WIT MY EMOTIONS LIKE DAT!

(LOL)

tim

CONTINUED...

Its been a month now since we fist met Dwayne. Aaron and Dwayne have become very close in this time:so close it seem like I have to make an appointment to see my own lil brother nowdays. Dwayne has grew on me little over this last month.Aaron and Egypt are a couple now.With all thats been going on
in Aaron's life

on and I lucky if we see Aaron twice a week.

Don:Greg..U done seen ur lil brova dis week?
Greg:Nnaaa!last time I talked to dat nigga was last friday on da phone.
Don:Oh yea?What dat nigga was talkin bout?
Greg:Aint nuffin really..He was jus sayin him and Black posta be handlin some bussiness
dis week ..dat they supposta been handled.
Don:Some bussiness like what?Since when dis nigga got bussiness dat we dont know about?
Greg:I'ont know..what u think somethin wrong?
I'ma jus call da nigga!

I dial Aaron's house phone.Nobody answer's!
I call his cell phone.Nobody answer!:So I call his cell again!Aaron answers.I hear people in the background.

Aaron

answering phone)Whatz up wit u Greg baby?
Greg:Aint nuffin!Where u at?and who dem folkz I hear in da background?
Aaron:Im across da line in Maryland out Landover..right now!Yea..dem jus deez lil females me and Black got ova here freakin!
Greg

says laughing)Ttttaaahh..I can dig it! I can dig it!Well I aint goin 2 hold u up champ!U keep on doin what U doin,I'ma jus catch up wit u later den nigga!aight!
Don

reachin 4 da phone)Hold up let me talk 2 dis nigga real quick!Whaz up Smoke?!
Aaron:Aint nuffin..chillin!whaz up wit U?
Don: Aint nuffin!But Yea..I been askin Greg where my lil brova at!U wanna be all bunned up wit some bitches actin like u cant call ah nigga and let us know u still alive and s***!
Aaron:MMMAANN! whateva young..I aint worried about yall niggaz..Yaw aint my girl!
Don:Yea I hear u Dawg..All I know is u betta not be ova dere wit dem chickenhead bitches slippin..thinkin s*** sweet!
Aaron:Ghetto what is U talkin bout!nigga I stay strapped(with a gun)!All da time!Everyday!
Don:Yea aight..U jus make sure U got dat jount(gun)right beside U at all times!U hear me?!
Aaron:Yea..Yea..Yea Dawg!Aint nobdy slippin..but Im about 2 get back 2 deez females..I'll holla at U later.Aight!
Don:Yea Aight!and stop fakin 2..U lil ass nigga!

They hang up the phone.Its been 6 hours since we last spoke to Aaron.We were over my house playing Madden on the PS2.Then Suddenly!Aaron bust through the door bloody and breathing hard!!!

2 BE CONTINUED!!!!.....

tim

MY FAULT ..I FORGOT 2 DISABLE DA SMILEY FACE'S..DAT FIRST 1 POSTA BEEN DA LETTA D..MY FAULT

baby_ko · Starter Joined: Jan 6, 2004 Posts: 128 Location: dc

damn!

prettyeyez · Visitor Joined: Feb 16, 2004 Posts: 1 Location: orlando

i have no idea what yall talkin bout and it was too much to read lol...nevertheless, what up errbody

tim

CONTINUED..

We rushed Aaron to the hospital.He was shot once in the shoulder and he was grazed by a round in his back..It was only a flesh wound though.We were now in his hospital room.He was laying in the bed,but in a suprisingly good mood though.

Greg:Whaz up champ?..How u feelin?
Aaron:(says with smurk)Man..im chillin!im still alive aint I?!!
Don:Man What happened though?
Aaron:Man..i dont even know..1 minute im killin dis broad from da back then..(Smoke starts laughing)
Don:Man dis s*** aint funny..f*** is u laughing at?!!
Greg:(says holding his smile)Smoke crazy man..dis nigga jus got shot..and he still laughin!!
Aaron:(finishes laughing)But NNaaa though..all i know is one minute im havin sex!next minute niggaz bust through the door wit guns dumping(shooting)!
Greg:(says with mug)Where was Black doin all dis?
Smoke:He was in the bathroom..
Greg:OH..so he jus conviently went to the bathroom ..right before they kick downed da door and start dumpin ..huh?
Aaron:Man I don't kn..(interrupted by Dwayne coming in the door)

Dwayne enters the room.He is carrying some food from Eddie Lenard"s(Aaron's favorite carry out).

Dwayne:(talking to Aaron)Whatz Up Gangsta..how u feelin?I been calling every hospital in the area tryin 2 find ur ass boy!but u aight though cuz?
Aaron:Im Good! U know im chillin!
Greg:Yea..i see u chillin 2 Black..How is it dat wit all da shootin goin on u didnt get hit?Please tell me im just curious!
Black:(says defensively)Dawg..i was in da bathroom when all dat s*** happened!
Greg:(says aggressively)Yea..U jus conviently had 2 use da bathroom right b4 da shootin started !What u aint hear da gunshots
when u was in da bathroom?
Dwayne:Of course i heard it!What i look like runnin outthere while all dat shootin goin on?
Greg:(says Approaching Black)U'd look like ah friend u BITCH ASS NIGG..(interupted by Don)
Don:(pulling Greg back)Man aint nobody goin run out in no gunshots though Greg!!
Black:What u tryin say i set Smoke up?..Man i aint got time 4 dis.I'll holla at u later Smoke..aight!

Dwayne leaves the room. Im(Greg)still emotional after Dwayne leaves.

Greg:MAN..I DO NOT TRUST DAT NIGGA!
Don:Young..u dont even know if he set Smoke up or not.Why dont u ask Smoke what he think?
Greg:(says quickly)What u think Smoke?
Aaron:Shauty he aint never done me wrong b4..plus dat man saved my life b4..i trust da nigga.
Don:Well there u have it the victim just told u he dont believe he had anything to do with it!so just let it go 4 now champ!
Greg:Man..yal niggaz let it go..yal can believe what yal wanna believe..I still dont trust him..everything jus dont add up 2 me!!

We talk about it some more,say our goodbyes,and we leave Aarons room.We turn the corner and see Dwayne giving Egypt(Smokes girl)a hug.She sees us and runs towards us.

Egypt:(crying says)Hows my Baby doing?
Greg:He Aight!! But Why u was huggin dat nigga Black though?!!
Egypt:(looking confused)Huh??
Don:Girl..Dont mind him.Greg ah lil emotional right now.Aaron in room 21.He's been asking about u.Go see him!

Egypt leaves 4 Aarons room.Don gives me a lecture on constanly jumping 2 conclusions all the time.I hear him,but u know im not listening.I dont care what he or nobody else says or thinks.I know what i know.And what i know right now is that:I DONT TRUST BLACK!!
I know he a dirty dude.Im telling u!But my eyes locked on him.Yeah they are!

2 BE CONTINUED..

[ March 02, 2004: Message edited by: tim ]