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PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 10:56 pm    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

I was thinking of a story about Allen & Tawanna and how their life would be if they met when they were more younger, like Quincy and Monica from 'Love & Basketball'. Anyone can add on. I will start the beginning later cause I got homework. :-)

[ February 16, 2004: Message edited by: Misty Blue ]
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 1:16 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

dam gud Subject but things would prob n most likely b the same depending on how yung u tamkn bout
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 1:19 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

dam gud Subject but things would prob n most likely b the same depending on how yung u tamkn bout
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 2:23 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

1986
Hatherop Park
Hampton, VA

Allen and his friends, Jemar, Nathan, and Tevin, were playing ball. Allen was about to make his penultimate shot when, out of the blue, a girl strolled in the park and caught his attention. She was a redbone who had on a black Nordstrom bomber jacket, a pair of Coca Cola pants, some red plastic loop earrings, and a Knicks cap with braided pigtails.

J: Ay, whoís that Tweenie over there?
A: I donít know. You ever saw her before?
N: No, she probably moved here.
J: You think she cute?
A: Yea, if she ainít look like a boy.

Allen made his last shot and him and Jemar won the game. They started showboating when the girl went over towards them and asked them to play.

J: Play? Girls donít play no ball.

Allen noticed her Knicks cap.

A: Where you from? I never saw you around here before.
Girl: New York.
A: Figures, the Knicks suck.
G: Whatever. Just let me play.
A: You got game?
G: Yea I got game! If I didnít I wouldnít be asking to play, now would I?
A: Aight, since you got so much game and so much mouth, how about two on one? Me and Jemar against you. (shoving the ball to her)
G: Why just me?
A: Why not? If you canít do it then just take your weak tail home.
G: Hey, I ainít got no problem with it. (shoving the ball back)You just worry about how you gon get pass me and make that shot.
A: No. (shoving the ball back to her) Ladies first.
G: Fine by meÖ

Hey, this isn't my first time writing but I'm still an amateur. What do y'all think?
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 2:32 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

IF YOU WANNA NO DA TRUTH.....
IT SUCKED DON'T EVA TRY TO WRITE ANOTHER STORY......

NAW IM KIDDIN (IM CRAZY REMEMBER) BUT ITS KINDA TIGHT. VERY CREATIVE. YOU HAVE A WAY OF CATCHING THE READER'S ATTENTION.( I HEARD MY ENGLISH TEACHER SAY DAT)BUT, NICE START. KEEP DOIN YA THING MA!

(IM SURE YOU THOUGHT I WAS SERIOUS WHEN I SAID IT SUCKED BUT YOU HAVE TO LEARN THAT IM KINDA... YOU KNOW... AND WE PEOPLE TEND TO SAY AND DO THINGS THAT WE DONT NECESSARILY MEAN. LET ME GO GET MY MEDICATION....) LOL
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 2:46 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

AYE...U JOT AIGHT WIT DA PEN..BOO BOO..YEA WRITIN DATZ 1 OF UR TALENTZ..I LIKE DA CONFIGURATION OF DA STORY..(4 DA SLOW FOLKZ DAT MEAN HOW ITS PUT 2GETHER)..I LIKE HOW U ABBREVIATED DERE NAMES WHEN THEY WERE SPEAKIN...BUT U INTRODUCED DEM FIRST!..
DATS BEAUTIFUL!...DA SETTIN..STORY LINE..
DA DIALOUGE...ALL DATZ LIKE DAT!<(DC TALK MEANIN..
IT WAS..MEAN..SWEET..TIGHT)U KNOW WHATEVA YA SAY...U MEAN WIT IT!!...KEEP WRITIN..I COULD PICTURE EVERYTHING U WAS SAYIN..LIKE IT WAS A MOVIE.YEA..DA BEGINNIN OF DAT JOUNT WAS LIKE THAT!!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 2:58 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

quote:
Originally posted by tim:
AYE...U JOT AIGHT WIT DA PEN..BOO BOO..YEA WRITIN DATZ 1 OF UR TALENTZ..I LIKE DA CONFIGURATION OF DA STORY..(4 DA SLOW FOLKZ DAT MEAN HOW ITS PUT 2GETHER)..


YOU CALLIN ME SLOW?
LOL
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 3:03 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

Damn, you just boosted my ego, LOL. That first part you got me there. I was like, "Oh my God! Am I really that bad?! " But anyways, thanks a bunch. If no one adds on, I'll add more tomorrow.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 12:28 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

MISTY!..GIRL U STILL AINT WRITE NO MORE ON DIS STORY..I'M ALL CLICKIN ON DIS STORY...
THINKIN IM BOUTA FIND WHATZ BEEN GOIN ON...
AND U STILL AINT WRITE NO MORE!..HOW U GOIN GET AH NIGGA ALL INTERESTED DEN DONT WRITE NO MORE...I KNOW U SAID ITS AH ADD ON STORY..BUT I HOPE DONT NOBODY ADD ON...CAUZ DEN DA STORY MIGHT TURN WEAK..AFTER IT STARTED OUT ALL GOOD..SO MISTY COUL U PLEASE.
..FINISH DIS JOUNT..I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE IT..THANK U EVA SO MUCH..MS.LADY!!
PS..DONT MAKE ME HAFTA COME FIND YOU!!
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 12:36 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

Calm down :-), I'll write more tonight. It's just that I got homework that's bitin me in the butt. So, LOL (Lots O' Love) for now.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 12:57 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

YEA...YEA...YEA...
DONT RAP ME UP!! JUS WRITE DA STORY!!
SIKE..IM JUS MESSIN WIT U!
BUT...YEA..DATZ GOOD 2 HEAR!!
I'LL MAKE SURE..I CHECK IN 2NIGHT..2 SEE IF U DONE WROTE SOMETHIN...AND WHAT U MEAN CALM DOWN!! GIRL..IM AS COOL AS AN ESKIMO..DURING DA WINTER..IN DA NORTH POLE..SIPPIN ICE TEA!!
YEA I AM!!..SIKE!I BE LUNCHIN..BUT AIGHT..THOUGH SHAUTY!!
P.S. ..WRITE SOMETHIN!
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 6:32 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

In this game, whoever got 20 first, won. I was up by 2, 18-16. Imagine, little olí me beating a buncha boys. Can you believe it?!ÖWell, I can. I was the best balla back in Forte Green; couldnít no one tell me different. You should see the looks on these boysí faces, they look mad as heck! Ha ha, but I donít care. I ainít gon let someÖarrogantÖprepubescentÖstank ass (lol) boys run me and think they the s***! Sorry, baby, but thereís a new cowgirl in town.

At this point, people were crowding around the gates surrounding the park watching this unbelievable show. The girl got past Allen and Jemar one final time and made a lay-up, the winning shot. She started jumping around the park and gloating as the crowd went bananas. This pissed Allen off. He bounced the ball mad hard on the concrete.

A: Man, this is bullshit!! You cheated!
G: How could I cheat?!
A: I donít know, you tell me! I want a re-count!
G: Look, stop being a sore loser.

The girl gestures for a handshake.

G: Good game.

Allen pushes her hand aside.

A: Whatever, just getcha bummy ass outta here!
J: Címon, man, just let it go.

No, he didnít! I felt insulted. A part of me wanted to cry (donít ask why), but the other part remembered the infamous words one of my three older brothers told me, ďNever cry! It will only show your weakness as female.Ē I take these words to my grave cause they are so true. Itís bad enough women are accepted as second-class citizens in this world. I know youíre wondering how I analyzed that for a 10-year-old. But what can I say? Imma smart girl. And yes, I know, I talk too damn much. So anywaysÖI was just about to leave when one of the boys put their hand on my shoulder.

J: Look, my friend was rude. We all started off on the wrong foot. Iím Jemar. Over thereís Nathan and Tevin. And thatís Allen.
G: Well, do me a favor and tell Allen that he betta get used to losing as far as Iím around. But it was nice playing with yíall.
J: Hey, I didnít catch your name.
G: Thatís cause I never gave it to you.
J: Are you going to?
G: Maybe. But my initials are TNT. Remember that!
J: Whatís TNT supposed to mean?
G: It meansÖ

I took the ball and made a shot far behind the free throw line.

G: Dynamite, cause I just blew up yíall spot. Aha!

I know. Iím cocky as heck too. But, hey, thatís how I am.

The girl left and Allen went up to Jemar.

A: Did you catch her name?
J: No.
A: Man! That little chicken head think she something. She might be cute and all, but she still needs to be put in her placeÖ
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 7:30 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

AIGHT..AIGHT..
U WROTE SOMETHIN...
BUT HOW U GOINNA STOP RIGHT THERE...
ITZ LIKE 12:30 ...ONLY REASON I CAME ON DA SITE..IS 2 SEE WHAT U WROTE...
U GOTTA GIVE ME AH LIL BIT MORE 2 GO ON..NEXT TIME!!..AIGHT!!
I KNOW UR HOMEWORK PROLLY HAD U TIRED...
SO IMA GIVE U AH PASS DIS TIME...
BUT DIS DA ONLY TIME...DONT LET DIS HAPPEN
AGAIN!!..AIGHT!!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2004 2:50 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

I like it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2004 4:49 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

THAT WAS CUTE. KEEP IT GOING MISTY AND DONT 4GET ABOUT UR OTHER STORY!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 6:54 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

Okay, itís first day of school, so Ma wants me to look ďpresentableĒ. She ironed out this red, short, white-polka dotted suit. Eew, I look like Minnie Mouse! All I need is the ears. Normally, Iíd throw it in the back of the closet while it collects dust and gets a hold of some cobwebs, but Ma would burn my ass. So I put it on for her.

Ma: Aww, you look so adorable!

Ugh! And to top it off, she put a rose behind my ear. Iím taking all of this s*** off as soon as I get home. The whole outfit my look cute, I have to admit, but it just ainít my style! A tee, some baggy jeans, and some 99Ę-store flipflop sandals will make my day. AnywhooÖ

Ma: Now remember, ainít gone be no fighting this year, okay?
T: (sighs) Yea, Ma.
Ma: I mean it, Tawanna, this the final time Iím transferring your butt to another school. I figured you learned a lesson last time when you had gotten probation. If it happens again, itís boarding school for you.
T: I only got probation cause my teacher failed me, so I knocked him out!
Ma: Child, who is you getting loud with?! You ainít too big to beat now.

I donít know why she fussing. I thought sheíd be happy that I defend myself instead of acting like a punk. If thereís anyone to blame for my behavior, itís my brothers. Theyíre the ones who always pushed me around while Ma never said nothing.

Hampton Elementary School
Class 521

I get to my assigned class, and the teacher introduces me to the class. Meanwhile, that big-headed boy I beat in ball the other day gotta be the one to run his mouth.

A: There go that girl who was showing off yesterday. Whatchu doing here?
T: I go here now, duh.
A: Whatever, you make think you run the court around here now but you donít.
T: Oh yeah? Then, whatchu call what I was doing on you yesterday?
A: I told you, you cheated.
T: I did not cheat? How could I have cheated?!
A: I donít know, I just know you did.
T: Well since believe that so much, why donít we do a re-match after school?
A: Better yet, tryouts for the basketball team is today. Why donít we both try out and Iíll show you who really got game.
T: Fine by meÖ
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 6:55 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

We shook hands on it. This boy really thinks heís better than me. I guess Iím just gone haveto prove him wrong again. The day went well. Soon enough, it was 3:00 and all the boys were crowding around the gym to try out for the team. All of them were worried about their game, until I stepped in.

Boy: What that girl doing here?

Allen turns around.

A: Oh, there go that girl I told you about; think she got game.
Boy: Damn, she cute though.
A: Yea whatever, I ainít worried about that right now. Iím gon show her whoís boss, then Iíll ask her to the Back-to-School dance next Friday.
B: You think she gon say yes after you serve her?
A: She betta say yes! Nobody says no to Allen Iverson.

I stood out even more cause of the fact that I didnít know about tryouts until 1st period class, I had to try out in my dress. As I walked across the gym floors, I heard murmurings, questioning my purpose of being here and whistles, boys shooting one-liners at me so I could holla at them. Luckily, I wore some boxers today. The coach came out of his office. He introduced himself, made some boring speech, then tryouts began. He called out each player on his sheet to be assigned on tryout teams. Then he got to my name.

Coach: Tawanna Turner?
T: Thatís me.
C: Excuse me, little girl, but are you lost?
T: No! Iím here to try out for the basketball team.
C: girls donít play no basketball!
A: Itís aiight, coach, let her play. Sheíll learn when I show her what the real stuff is.
C: Okay. Letís do this.

Big-head was playing on my opposing team. I controlled the ball, then Big-head and the boy who was guarding me switched positions. He tried to block my shot, but he stumbled and I made the shot.

T: Whatís wrong? I thought you had game.
A: Man, quit talking and play.
T: Aww, you mad?

He had the ball and tried to make his shot but he missed. He started getting frustrated. I noticed that the more madder he got, the cuter he got. He got a hold of the ball again, he shooted and I blocked his shot. All the boys started making noise cause they finally got the point that a girl can actually play.

A: Man, foul!
T: What?!
A: Coach, that was a foul.
C: Ainít fouls called in a try-out game, Bubba.

I got a hold of the ball.

A: Go ahead and shoot it. Iíll show who got game; Iíll show you.
T: No, Big-head, Imma show you.

I laid the crossover on him and made the shot. All the boys started crowding around me and clowning Big-head. I went over to him just to show sportsmanship.

T: Hey, good game.
A: Yea whatever.
T: Still think I cheated?
A: Man, get outta my face!

This boy had the nerve to push me. Me! That was it. He pushed me to the ground and I got up and pushed him down. He got up and we started throwing down. The boys crowded around us and the coach came out and stopped the fight.

C: Okay, both of yíall to the principalís office, NOW!

Damn, they gon call my momma. Looks like itís gonna be boarding schoolÖ
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 7:09 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

HAHAHA! HELL NAW. I LIKE TAWANNA. SHE A LIL ROUGH NECK. KEEP IT COMING!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 7:19 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

DAMN TAWANNA ALMOST SOUNDS LIKE ME!
(BUT I LIKE 2 WEAR SKIRTS)
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 7:53 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

ALLEN SHOULDA JUS SLAMMED HER 1 GOOD TIME..INSTEAD OF RUMBLING HER..SHE AH GIRL!..
ALLEN KNOW HE WRONG..U CANT JUS GO RUMBLIN FEMALES...ALL WILLY NILLY..HAHA@ALLEN DAT NIGGA WILD!...U WRITE DAT STORY MISTY....
U GO GIRL(MARTIN)!AAAHHHHWWWW...GGIIIRRLL!!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 8:50 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

quote:
Originally posted by tim:
ALLEN SHOULDA JUS SLAMMED HER 1 GOOD TIME..INSTEAD OF RUMBLING HER..SHE AH GIRL!..
ALLEN KNOW HE WRONG..U CANT JUS GO RUMBLIN FEMALES...ALL WILLY NILLY..HAHA@ALLEN DAT NIGGA WILD!...U WRITE DAT STORY MISTY....
U GO GIRL(MARTIN)!AAAHHHHWWWW...GGIIIRRLL!!!!



tim that was funny as hell no you didnt say "all willy nilly" ahahahaahahh
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 5:46 pm    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

THAT WAS CUTE. I LIKE THIS STORY. ALLEN WHOOPIN ON GIRLS NOW. TAWANNA AIN'T GOING. KEEP IT COMING!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 17, 2004 8:45 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

A: (rubbing his black eye) Man, look at whatchu did.
T: And look at watchu did! Leaving all these scratches on my face. You got some sharp claws. Damn, I thought only girls fought like cats.
A: I ainít no girl!
T: Yea, you are.

We kept arguing until our mothers came. All hell is gonna break loose now.

Ma: Oh my God! What the hell?
T: Ma, Iím sorry-
Ma: Look atcha gotdamn face! What happened?!
T: I got into a fight!
Ma: A fight, Tawanna? Itís the first day of school and you already started trouble?! If your father was around, you know heíd turn your butt red, black, and blue. Who the hell did you fight now? And it betta not be another teacher!
T: (pointing to Big-head) Him.
Allenís mother: You fought a girl?! Boy, what the hell did I tell you about putting your hands on a female?! This child is the third girl you hit. And she tore your ass up at that?! Now, I'M gonna tear your ass up as soon as we get home!

Tawannaís mother goes to the secretary and asks to use the phone.

T: Who are you calling, Ma?
Tm: Shut up! Iím calling the Evangeline Christian Home for Girls to register you there. They have a therapist; maybe they can help your crazy ass.

I donít wanna go there! I heard you wonít come out of there the same once theyíre finished with you. Itís probably like prison. And to worsen it even more, itís a school for girls. Iíll probably ďdrop the soapĒ as they say, whatever that means. At this point, I was willing to try anything to keep her from taking me to boarding school. Even cry. So, I started giving a show like Penny on ďGood TimesĒ.

T: (tearing up) NO, MA, PLEASE! I PROMISE I WONíT BE A BAD GIRL ANYMORE, PLEASE!!

Everyone fell into my trap. I saw that Big-head started feeling sorry for me by the look on his face. So, he stepped up to my momma.

A: Excuse me, maíam, Mrs. Tawannaís mother, but please donít take Tawanna to a boarding school. Iím sorry; all of this is my fault. I hit her first. It was reasonable that she hit me back, so we got into it. If anything, I should be the one going to a boarding school. But please donít make her go.

Ma calmed down and gave in.

Tm:ÖOkay, your apologyís accepted. I wonít make her go, BUT NEXT TIME, ONCE I PICK UP THAT PHONE ITíS FINAL! You hear me, Tawanna?
T: Yes, maíam.
Tm: Letís go.
Am: Excuse me; Iím Ann Iverson. I should apologize also for my sonís actions. Trust me, he will think twice before putting his hands on a girl. His butt should be sent to a boarding school, heís just lucky we canít afford it.
Tm: Itís okay; Iím Wanda McKenzie.
Am: Nice meeting you. Are you new around here?
Tm: Why yes.
Soon enough, the principal arrived and talked to our mothers. We were suspended for two days. Afterwards, My momma and Ms. Iverson started conversing more and befriending as they walked out of school. Big-head and I slowly strolled behind them.
T: Thank you.
A: For what?
T: For defending me. It was very sweet; no one ever stood up for me before.
A: Oh, it wasnít a problem.
T: Whyíd you do it?
A: What do you mean? Why wouldnít I?
T: Well, after the fight, I figured you would never want to know me again; this was the perfect chance.
A: Youíre right about that (laughing). But you donít deserve to go to no boarding school. You seem real.
T: How so?
A: I could tell youíre not like these other girls. And I could tell by the way you threw that jab on me. (Both Allen and Tawanna started laughing) I never knew a girl who could fight like that. Man, this s*** still hurts.
T: Aww, itíll be okay.
I kissed his bruised eye and he looked at me. I could tell he was wondering. I was wondering too. What was coming over me? Did I suddenly like this boy? I COULDNíT HAVE!! Boys are such creeps. Such punks. I could never like a boy.
A: What was that for?

[ February 16, 2004: Message edited by: Misty Blue ]
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 6:28 am    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

A: What was that for?

T: Nothing.

I rushed over to where my momma wasÖ

Itís my first day of suspension. Ma grounded me, but Imma very hyper-active person, so I snuck out of the house to find something to with myself. Unfortunately, I ainít have nothing to do, so I headed over to Hatherop Park to practice my free throws. Coincidentally, Big-head was there.

A: Hey.
T: Hey.

After that little kiss I laid on him, I wanted to avoid him as much as I can just in case he tries to continue to ask me about it cause Iím still confused about it. I sat down and waited for him to finish his playing. But, instead, he comes over to me.

A: So, how much trouble are you in?
T: Huh?
A: With your moms.
T: Oh, Iím grounded for two weeks. What about you?
A: Iím grounded for three. Plus, I had a beating. My butt is still stinging from last night.
T: (giggling) Thatís what you get.
A: It ainít funny! Iím not even supposed to be out here.
T: Me neither.

We suddenly fell silent. I wanted to break the hush, but my thoughts were blank.

A: SooÖ
T: Yeah?
A: So, are you busy next Friday?
T: I donít think so, why?
A: BecauseÖ

Silence againÖ

T: What?
A: Did you know there was a Back-to-School dance?
T: No.
A: ReallyÖ

I know what he wants. Goddammit, quit stalling. Just ask!!

A: So, you wanna go?
T: I donít know.
A: Either you do or you donít.
T: I said I donít know. Besides, I donít even dance.
A: You donít have to dance at a party.
T: Well then, what do you do other than dance?
A: People eat, talk to friends. Stuff like that.
T: OhÖ
A: You havenít been to a party, have you?
T: So?!

Tawanna picks up Allenís ball and shoots.

A: You donít need to get all mad, Iím just asking. I havenít been to many parties either.
T: Well, at least you can talk to friends at a party. I donít even know anybody at school.
A: Thatís okay. You can meet up with my friends. So you wanna go now?
T: ÖI still donít know. Iíll get back to you.
A: Oh, címon!! Please?
T: I said Iíll get back to you!

Tawanna leaves the park.

Damn, why does he want me to go so bad? Is he trying to hook up with me? If so, his chances with me been flew out the door cause I already decided Iím never gonna like a boy. Does he wanna be with me because of the kiss? Because that was a mistake! Damn, Iím so stupid. What was I thinking when I kissed himÖBut no boy has ever talk to me, let alone ask me to a dance before. I usually scare them off. Maybe heís differentÖ
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 7:42 pm    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

YEA..MISTY BABY..DAT JOUNT WAS LIKE DAT...U GOT ME ALL READIN DA STORY..I POSTA BEEN BACK...LUNCH WAS OVA LIKE TEN MINUTES AGO..BUT YEA I AINT EXPECT NUFFIN LESS THAN GOOD FROM U ANYWAY THOUGH..BUT I GOTTA GO..AIGHT SHAUTY..KEEP WRITIN THOUGH!!
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Karamel3A.I.
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Joined: Nov 19, 2003
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Location: DA DUUUURTY SOUTH!!!

PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 9:29 pm    Post subject: Love & Happiness: @--->--....

IM LOVING IT MISTY! KEEP IT COMING!
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