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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 4:46 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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We going to keep doing what we been doing adding on:
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Allen arrived at the First Unoin Center that night and got ready for his game against the Lakers,he walked out of the locker room and on the court where the teams did their introduction and gave eachother dap,they stepped on the court and got ready to play.As the game went on Allen looked in the crowd and laughed at his mama yellin his #.Few minutes passed and it was halftime the Lakers were only winning by 3.When the Sixers came back Allen sat on the bench for awhile just to rest.When he looked behind him to see his mother,not only did he see Ann but he saw Tawanna there too,he couldn't remember the last time she had came to one of his games so he was suprised.So he got off the bench went played and the Sixers won by 7.He went to his locker room got dressed and headed for his press conference afterwards.Then he headed through the hall where he saw his mama and Tawanna:
Allen: (walking towards them)So how are the two most important women in my life are tonight?
Ann:Fine,now that we know ya'll won,Good game Chuck
Allen: (kissing Ann on the cheek)Thank you ma
Ann:U are oh so welcome baby,well your mama gotta get home and check on your sister,so I'm out
Allen:Aight be safe ma
(Ann leaves)(Allen turns to Tawanna and slides his hands around her waist)
Allen:So um what brings you here tonight?
Tawanna:I just wanted to come see you play
Allen:You haven't come in a while so why tonight?
Tawanna:Maybe I wanted to come see my man,is that okay?
Allen: Fasho,so where the kids?
Tawanna:By they auntie
Allen:Aight,(kissing her neck softly)So where you wanna go?
Tawanna:It don't matter let's just go grab something to eat
Allen:Cool,come on and bring your fines ass to the car
Tawanna: (laughin)Aight
(He walks her out the door with his hands around her waist)
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ya'll put some to it |
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Phila76ers Rookie
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 8:43 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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i'll add something~but it's my 1st tyme tho!here it goes....... thugondaline74@aol.com |
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Phila76ers Rookie
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 9:38 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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AI:So what u wanna eat?
T:Let's get sum uhhhh..
AI lookin at his watch)how long it take 4 u 2 make up yO mind
T laughing)shutup! i just want a burger and sum fries
AI:ight coo-(Drivin and talkin in his Escalade)
AI:im so damn tired....i'm hopin str8 in tha bed when we get to tha house
T:y u did'nt do nothin
AI:hahahaaa u funny
T:u kno i'm jus playin wit u boi
T:u played a good game 2day tho
AI:yea u kno how i do
T:How many?
AI:How many what?
T:How many points did u score?
AI:O....33 wit 4 assists and 4 steals
T:uhh o my baby don't play!
AI:laughing
AI:ya but coach iz still gettin on me 4 takin so many shots
T:but ya'll won
AI:u kno how his old ass is(Laughin)
T:He gone bench u 1 day watch
AI:Never dat
AI:u got changed 4 a 20?
T:yea hold on
He pulls up in the drive threw of McDonalds and order....sumbody takeover and please reply on how i did~cuz itwas mah 1st time
[ November 16, 2002: Message edited by: Phila76ers ]
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 5:11 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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yea dat wuz tight!Both of yall did ya thuggthizzl fashsizzl!HoLla! |
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 5:46 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Tawanna gives Allen the change and Allen gets the food and drives off.When Allen and Tawanna get home the walk in through the garage door to the kitchen:
Tawanna: (laughin)Yeah I remember that,you was playing on the court,I think it was the NCAA playoffs,and I call my self tryin to cheer you on, I did a jump and fell down the bleachers and fell on your team,All I remember is seeing you look on the side and start laughing
Allen: (laughin and putting the food down on the counter)Yeah I was taking the ball out and I looked and saw you stumbling over my team,and Ra and them were laughin to(when Allen mentioned Ra's name it suddenly became quiet)
Allen: (was lookin at his feet and he had a sad face)
Tawanna: (walking over to him and grabbing his face) Allen I know it's hard to deal with Ra's passing,but you have to stop feeling sad about it and think about this way he's in a better place baby
Allen: (looked up at Tawanna)I know
Tawanna: (grabbed his face and kissed his cheek softly)It's gon be alright(she hugged him)
(They just held eachother for about 3 mins)
Tawanna: (breaking away from the hug)You aight Chuck
Allen: Yeah,lets eat
Tawanna:Bring it in the living room,we could watch tv
Allen: (grabbing the food and plates and some drinks)Aight
(Allen brings everything in the living room and sits next to Tawanna)
Allen: (taking his food out the bag)What's on tv
Tawanna: (changing the channels)Not a damn thing let's watch a movie
Allen: (chewing)Oh put it on "Don't Be A Menace to South Central while Drinking your Juice in the Hood"
Tawanna: (laughin and getting the dvd and puttin it in)That's my joint righ there
(She sits down and starts eating.Allen's 2way goes off,he takes it off his belt buckle and reads it)
2way:Allen where the hell are you I'm waiting at the Ritz for you
Allen: (typing)I aint comin tonight Tameka I'm busy,don't send me no more messages tonight
Tawanna: (looking at him typing)Who that is?
Allen: (closing the 2way)Oh that's Omar(using it from the other story)
Tawanna: (laughin)What he want?
Allen: (chewing)he wanted to know if I was still going clubbin wit him tonight,I said no
Tawanna: Oh aight,I'm suprised you aint going
Allen:Not tonight baby,I'ma chill wit you,you aint that bad
Tawanna: (laughin and pushin him)I betta not be if your skinny ass still here
Allen: (laughin)You not
(When they finished eating they continued to watch the movie Tawanna has her feet on Allen's lap)
Allen&T: (laughin)No s***
Tawanna:Let me tell you what your kids were doing today
Allen:What
Tawanna:Them lil niggas was up in here fighting like professional boxers
Allen: (laughin)I taught them that
T:I figured Duece was jumping around shaking his head and Tiaura was practicing uppercuts
Allen: (laughin)Oh fareal
Tawanna: Yeah,then my ass almost got snuck because I was tryna break it up
Allen:My kids rough,I know
Tawanna:Yes they are
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yungsta2G5 All-Star
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 6:57 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Allen began to massage Tawanna's feet and she fell asleep. He carried her upstairs and he went to sleep. The next morning he woke up and bought her some clothes and necklace, a bracelet, a watch, and a pair of earrings. She woke up and came downstairs and found a bag with the stuff in it. She opened the stuff and went in the living room with Allen:
Tawanna she kissed him on the neck) Thank you baby.
Allen: No prob. What you want to do today?
Tawanna: I don't know.
Allen: How bout we take a trip somewhere? We don't play til next week so let's go for about 3 days.
Tawanna: Aight that's cool. The kids can stay with my momma or yours...it doesn't matter.
Allen: Yea they can go to my momma's house cuz she wanted to spend some time with them anyway.
Tawanna: Aight...well where we gonna go?
Allen: Let's go to Miami...or Cali. (He should come to Kansas City so he can get balled up by me in 1 on 1...lol)
Tawanna: Let's go to Cali.
So later that night Allen and Tawanna went and dropped the kids off at Ann's.
Ann: Hey how ya'll doing?
A&T: We doing good.
Allen: We bout to head out to Cali in a few hours.
Ann: That's good...ya'll need a relaxing trip and some time alone.
Allen: Well we bout to go momma.
Ann: Okay...ya'll have a safe trip and have fun.
A&T: We will.
Tawanna: (talking to the kids) Ya'll better be good.
Tiaura: We will momma.
Deuce: Okay.
Allen and Tawanna went back home and packed their stuff and headed to Cali.
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 7:23 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE. AND YUNGSTA YOU KNOW I WAS LAUGHIN ON DAT KANSAS CITY PART |
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 8:22 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Phila76ers you did good nice part. |
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Phila76ers Rookie
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 9:33 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Good 1 yungsta~i'll keep it rollin fa'real fa'real! |
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Phila76ers Rookie
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 10:16 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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(meanwhile on tha plane 2 L.A California)
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Allen is listening 2 Jay-Z blueprint 2 while lookin out of tha window and t is sleep on his shoulder till she woke up....
T(wakes up)what r u listening 2?
A(takes off his headphones)Huh?
T:I said what r u listening 2?
A:Jigga!
T:y?
A:what u mean y?
T:y ru listening 2 him?
A:boi got flow
T:he ugly....and his lips r 2 big
A(laughin)u ah hater
T:no i'm not i'm just keepin it real
A:ya whateva
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waitress walks by
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A:Excuse me
W:yes
A:can u get me sum cold ice water please
W:yes i'll brb
A:thanks
Tawanna falls asleep again 2 the movie they was watchin witch was Scarface.
waitress brings AI his water back
W:here u go sir.
A:thank u
A:hey u kno how long we hve till we got till we land
W:w have another 10 mins
A k thank you again
W:welcome
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Allen tryin 2 wake up T
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A:yO T wake up we bout 2 land soon
A:Wake Up!
T:I'm up(still half sleep)
A:get yo stuff together
T k
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They get off the plane-rent a benz and drive 2 there 5 star hotel~bout time they got in thier room it was 8:06-alllen went to go take a shower-get's out and u kno that T iz sleep with her clothes on-so AI threw sum boxers and shorts on andtook her jeans and shoes off.
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T:what r u doin
A:makin ufeel comfortable
T:still half sleep
A: go 2 sleep(kisses her on the forehead)we got a big day tommorrow-good night baby
T:night
Allen turns off the lights and hops in the bed wit T and Falls 2 sleep.
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Sumbody gone head and add on i'm bout 2 hop in tha bed myself so HOLLLLLLLLAAAAAAA!!!!! |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 1:20 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Tha Blueprint Man whateva.That was good youngsta.Keep doin ya thing.
And you sound like a ladies man they got some luky chicks in KC.LOL |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:04 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:06 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:07 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:08 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I put my thang down flip it and reverse it! |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:09 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Sixers Kick A** |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:13 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Can't pay my rent, cuz all my money spent,but I'm hood rich!La,La,La,LAAAAA!Can't you see dat I'm buck up and Fucked up!I'm also bored my bad yall.LOL |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:14 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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ARE YOU OKAY? ARE YOU SURE CUZ I'M STARTIN TO WORRY ABOUT YOU OVA HERE |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:18 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Yea i'll be alright as soon as I get my prozac i'll be str8*.LOL
Chicken BUtt!!HAHA how you like dem apples! |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:19 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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HOLD UP DID YOU CALL ME CHICKEN BUTT?
STEP AWAY FROM THE COMPUTER AND GO TAKE YOUR PROZAC MA
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:26 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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NAAA i'm jus jokin dawg.I'm str8* fareal i'm coo aight.And prozac don't work.(like I would kno) |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:27 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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OKAY. BUT JUST TO BE SAFE GO GET SOME REST |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:28 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I'm to wired to sleep. |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:29 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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WELL I'M NOT. IMA BOUT TO GO TO SLEEP IN A FEW |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:30 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I kno dat ain't platinum dats a silvery chain.
LiL fLiP |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:32 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Goodnite Farewell untill we meet again.I'll holla,It's been real |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:33 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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OKAY |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:39 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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bYE bYE bYE bYR Iget Bye off yo BYe Bye Bey |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:41 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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YEAH OKAY |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:44 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Man whateva,you think I'm crazy huh?! Well I'm not I'm jus bored. |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:46 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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NAWWW I KNOW YOU PLAYIN |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:51 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Fasho I think I might actually be gettin sleepy.Yep young grasshoppalolMan what was I thinkin HAhAh |
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:52 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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GOODNIGHT |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:55 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Bye bye compadro ala mocha alomond fugde.Areva derchi and a mazorelli chesss to u.Peace |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:56 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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WHAT LANGUAGE IS THAT AND WHAT DOES IT MEAN |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:58 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Well it is supposed to be spanish you from dat movie Baps (I kno it's old as dirt)any way it means bye. |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:59 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
SEE YA LATER
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
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Posted: Thu Nov 21, 2002 5:40 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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The next morning Allen woke up and put his hands behind his head then looked over and saw that Tawanna was gone.He got up and looked around the room they had got. He didn't see her and he got worried so he called her cell phone:
Tawanna:Hello
Allen:Baby where you at?
Tawanna:At Starbucks across the street,I'm on my way back righ now
Allen:Aight
(they hang up)
(About 5 mins later Tawanna comes through the door with 2 cups in her hand)
Tawanna:Here Allen I got you a cup,s*** I need it your children been runnin me weak
Allen: (laughin)I can imagine(taking the cup)
Tawanna:So what's up for today
Allen: (smilin)I thought we could hit......
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Ya'll continue I aint been able to add none because I have basketball practice like everyday and games twice a week our season just started......
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
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Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 4:19 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Write some ya'll........ |
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Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 11:08 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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the story was good can we keep out the personal stuff
please finish the story
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actually quit hating for haters are actually quiters |
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
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Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 11:11 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Hol up,what personal stuff you talkin bout......... |
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22cute Rookie
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 2:14 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I think she was talkin' the personal conversation between Bubba chuck 03 and allen-iverson's-mistress! |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 3:07 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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OHH my bad playa. |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 3:08 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Ohh and dats CHICK |
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 3:16 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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quote: Originally posted by 22cute:
I think she was talkin' the personal conversation between Bubba chuck 03 and allen-iverson's-mistress!
WHATEVA. IF SOMEBODY DON'T LIKE IT THEN THEIR IS A WORD CALLED IGNORE. YOU CAN ALWAYS IGNORE WHAT SOMEONE WRITE AND STILL GO ON WITH THA DAMN STORY
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 3:17 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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AND IT'S allen_iverson's_mistress |
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 5:27 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Fasho thug |
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 6:11 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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the story is hott |
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22cute Rookie
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 1:06 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Hold up I was just answering somebody's question so please don't try to get smart!!! |
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 1:09 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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quote: Originally posted by 22cute:
Hold up I was just answering somebody's question so please don't try to get smart!!!
whateva. i responded to yo post and whoeva else had somethin to say |
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22cute Rookie
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 3:09 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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o>k LET'S JUST STOP THIS RIGHT HERE CAUSE I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THIS s***! i DON'T HAVE BEEF WITH YOU, AND YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE BEEF WITH ME SO LETS JUST SMASH THIS ARGUMENT AND LETS GET ON WITH THE STORY. PLEASE!!!! |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 3:13 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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WE CAN SQUASH IT. |
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22cute Rookie
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 3:20 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Thank you! |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 3:21 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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WELCOME |
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
Joined: Apr 30, 2002 Posts: 259 Location: New Orleans,Louisiana
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Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2002 8:39 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Continuation.........
_____________________________________________ Allen: (smilin)I thought we could hit downtown you know shop and look around then I bought tickets to the CLIPPERS game,you know that nigga Andre hook me up(lol @ yungsta),then I want us to chill........
Tawanna:Aight that's cool with me
Allen:Well let me go take a shower
Allen goes and showers and gets dressed with his timbs and Sean John sweatsuit,lookin good as always........
Allen:You ready? I already rented a car
Tawanna:Yeah I'm ready
They leave out the hotel and get in the Escalade they rented and head downtown and go in Saks Fifth Avenue and look around.....
Allen:Teedee, you see any thing you want?
Tawanna:Na,this aint my style
Allen:You don't care,huh?
Tawanna:What you mean?
Allen:You never want anything,then you wear sweats all the damn time and t's come on now we gotta fix that,you ALLEN IVERSON'S wife
Tawanna:I likes your nerve Chuck,well I am a mama and a wife so there's no need for me to have clothes all in my ass and tight and s***,I'll dress down when I want aight,and since you wanna say s*** I'ma prove ya lil skinny ass wrong
Allen: (laughin)You are?, I wanna see this
Tawanna:Alright go bout ya buisness and shop get a throwback jersey or sumthin while I do my thing,aight
Allen:Alright boss,do what you do
Allen leaves and goes in CHAMPS and goes crazy everything he sees he seems to like so he buys it,Tawanna goes in GUCCI and buys her some threads,they meet in the parking lot........
Allen:I see you got some bags so what you got
Tawanna:You'll see,slow your role
(She puts the stuff in the back)
Tawanna:Baby I'm hungry
Allen:Aight,we gonna go have lunch at JUSTIN'S
Tawanna:Cool
(They drive off and head over there they get a table and order eat and talk then head to the movies for a while back to the hotel it's now like 6:00pm and the game starts for 7:30 so Allen changes into a 70's CLIPPERS Jersey and his jeans saggin and his G-Nikes(AF1's)and matching hat,he tells Tawanna who's in the shower
Allen: (yellin)T I'ma wait for you in the lobby
Tawanna:Aight
(Tawanna gets out the shower and changes she wears some tight light blue jeans some light brown GUCCI boots with steletto heel a tan fitted shirt that has "GUCCI CHIC" in rhinestones and a matching light blue jean blazer and a GUCCI hat and backpack purse and her hair was down.Tawanna walks to the lobby and Allen looks her way but doesn't reconize her until she says
Tawanna:Allen I'm ready
Allen: (eyes big)Teedee?
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Ya'll write
[ November 28, 2002: Message edited by: FrizzyAI#3lova ]
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deuce2 Rookie
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Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2002 8:46 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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thats good |
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deuce2 Rookie
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Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2002 9:24 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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i will continue.......
t- what?whats wrong do it look that badd?
a-eyes still big no hell no you look beautiful omg i....i...damn baby im not sure you can go wit me somebody might take you up from under me!
she jabs him in the arm playful
t-stop playin nigga
they get in the car and head down to the arena
while drivin the car the following convo is this....
t- bubba
a- yea?
t- if that wouldntve been me walkin down those steps what would you have done?
ai thinks in his head i wouldve tried to holla he laughs and says...
a- not pay her any attention jus lie i was bout to do to you y?
t- oh i was jus wonderin
they arrive and the papparazi wont leave them alone they takin pocs and askn questions and...
t- baby come on this s*** is worsesome
a- i know we gotta run you think you can run in them heels?
t- yea boy
they start runnin and then tawanna falls straight on her face
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
Joined: Apr 30, 2002 Posts: 259 Location: New Orleans,Louisiana
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:04 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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(Tawanna falls straight on her face and Allen doesn't wanna laugh but it just comes out: )
Allen: (laughin)Baby, you alright?(trying to help her up)
Tawanna: (jecking her arm from him)Leave me alone
Allen: (smilin)I aint did you s*** so don't cop additudes with me ma
Tawanna:Nigga you laughin that s*** aint funni
Allen: (serious face)Alright I'm sorry(he turns around and is cracking up laughin so hard)
Tawanna: (hitting him and laughin)Nigga you get on my nerves
Allen:I'm sorry but that s*** was funni
Tawanna: (suckin her teeth)Come on
(They walk in the arena and take a seat they right on the floor, the players are shooting around and warming up,Andre Miller walks over)
Andre:What'sup Ive
Allen: (getting up and giving him dap)Hey big pimpin,what's happenin?
Andre:Nothin much just doing my thing but I like that jersey youngin reppin for us huh?
Allen:Just tonight,because the Sixers still gon whip ya'll ass
Andre: (laughin)We gon see about that,but I doubt it
Allen: (laughin)Aight
Andre:Hey Tawanna what'sup wit you,you look good ma
Allen: (smilin)Hol up this still my wife Dre
Tawanna: (laughin)Thank you,but nothin much
Andre:You stupid yeah Allen,but um I gotta go get ready to whip on Kobe's fake ass so bye(they playin the Lakers)
Allen: (laughin)Aight
(The game starts and it's a really good game both Allen and Tawanna all into it when Tawanna says: )
Tawanna:I'm going to go get a hotdog,I'ma be right back
Allen: (looking at the game)Aight,REF I KNOW YOU SAW THAT HE CHARGING!!!!!
(Tawanna goes to the concession stand and is waiting in line when this fine brotha walks behind her he was caramel color with a low neat cut and was muscular not to big but just right)
Guy:Um excuse me but you are real pretty
Tawanna: (sarcastically)Ummm Hmmm RIGH
Guy:No I'm being honest ma,I don't bull s***
Tawanna:Well thank you
Guy:So how you think the game is going so far
Tawanna:It's aight
Guy:What's wit the small talk ma,I'm just trying to make friendly conversation since this line is so long
Tawanna:I'm sorry,i'ts aight,but I think the game is real good but the refs are blind I know they see Kobe's ass fouling poor Andre
Guy:Yeah tru,Kobe is a punk,so who's your favorite player in the league
Tawanna: (smilin)Allen Iverson
Guy:Oh me too ma that's my nigga he's crucial on the court,as a matter of fact he's here tonight
Tawanna: Yeah that he is
(Tawanna and the guy talk about basketball the whole time in the line,he was real cool.Tawanna reaches the front and orders a chili cheese hot dog,milk duds,and a drink she's just about to leave then the guy says: )
Guy:I forgot to introduce myself I'm Willie
Tawanna:Well I'll remember that(walking away but he steps in front of her)
Willie:So you think I can hit you up some time
Tawanna:I thought it was just small talk
Willie:It was but you real cool ma
Tawanna:Well I'm sorry but I'm married
Willie:Oh,but I didn't catch your name
Tawanna:It's Tawanna
Willie: (being an Iverson fan)Oh s*** you AI's wife(shaking her hand)you aint even say nothin
Tawanna:There was no need well see you when I see you
(Tawanna walks off laughin,she gets back to Allen and Allen says: )
Allen: What took you so long
Tawanna: Long line
Allen:Oh,let me get some of that hotdog
(Tawanna feeds it to him)
Allen:Oh that's the s***
Tawanna: (laughin)I know
(Willie passes in front them because he had floor seats too,he smiled and waved at Tawanna, Allen notices)
Allen:Who that nigga is
Tawanna:Some nigga I met in the line we was talkin bout basketball because the line was long he's cool,he tried to holla at me but I told him I was married then he said what was my name I told him and he said "Oh s*** you AI's wife" and he was acting like a ghetto crazed fan,but he didn't hastle me
Allen:Oh he had better not,I knew I shoudn't have brought you,I just knew niggas would be on your jock
Tawanna: (laughin)Be quiet and watch the game Chuck
Allen: (laughin)Aight
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somebody continue
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:55 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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lol@tawanna fallin on her face then gettin mad |
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deuce2 Rookie
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 3:53 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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ok i will continue
the lakers won and evrybody on the clippers side was booin but here it goes
t- damn my head feel like it is swollin (it dont need to get any bigger)
a- i know i see a knot but i didnt want to say anything
t- is it big
a- umm...can i speak my mind on this one
t- yea plz
a- well yea it is huge (ai falls out laughin)
t- shut up mann this aint funny if you wouldntve came up with us runnin in the building this wouldntve happened
a- well you told me you could run in them shoes
t- now evrybody gonna think you are a wifebeater
a- aww come on it aint that badd
somebady finish |
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Mrs. Iverson4eva Rookie
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 10:22 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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ok if i mess it up im sorry
t:yea it is imma look busted now
a:u could neva look busted
t:aww baby u so good 2 me
a:i knoe
(they both laigh while walkin bacc to the car)
a:so wut u wanna do 2morrow u knoe its our last day.
t:i knoe..but i wanna hit up sunset blvd. cuz my girl said that they got these bomb ass gucci printed pants so i gotta cop them..
a:aww man i knew i shouldnt have told u to dress more girly..now all u wanna do is shop.
t:wuteva nigga..so thatz wut i wanna do
a:well u dont wanna spend no quality tyme wit yo man??i thought thats y we came out here..
t:we can afta we go on sunset blvd.. u knoe i gotta look cute 4 my man at that same time ..so afta we go on sunset we can go 2 manhattan beach to get sumthin to eat and watch the sun set and afta that we can go 2 the hotel and u knoe have contact..if u knoe wut i mean..
a:u knoe i do..
t: but 2night im am tired and im gettin a serious headache..
a:iight u want me 2 stop and get sum tylenol 4 u baby??
t:naw im straight i juss need 2 lie down..
a:iight
So they get 2 the hotel and get on the elevator to go 2 there room...and on the door Tawanna see's a letter 2 Allen that says:
2: Bubba
4rm: Sydney
Hey baby i been tryin 2 get in contact wit u for the longest. where u been hidin?well n e way im lookin forward to seein 2morrow..oh and thanks 4 the cotton candy...
Holla at cha Gurly
Tawanna is heated but she didnt wanna say nuthin cuz she wanted 2 c how long Allen would keep this 4rm her...
if its bad im sorry i was juss waitin 2 see if sum 1ne else was gonna continue..if u dont like it ur welcome to change it |
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AllensBabyGirl3 All-Star
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Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 5:53 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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They get in the room and she cant hide her anger. He notices she actin funny but didnt say nothin. She went out on the balconey and looked out at the water. She wanted to cry cause she was sick of him cheatin on her. He came out and put his arms around her.
B- I thought you was gonna lay down
She moved his arms and went back in the room
T- Im not tired now.
B- Yo T whats up wit you? What I do?
T- You aint do nothin yet.
B- See I hate when you do dat!
T- Do what and who you think you hollerin at nigga I aint ya boys!
B- You always copin these attitudes then when I ask you whats the deal you play dumb.
T- I DONT HAVE A ATTITUDE ALLEN IM FED UP, IM FED UP OF YU AND ALL THE LIES AND ALL THE PAIN YOU PUT ME THROUGH THATS WHAT i HAVE AND YOU WANNA KNOW WHAT ELSE IM SICK OF CRYIN OVER YOU EVERYNIGHT WHEN ITS EVIDENT YOU DONT CARE ABOUT ME!
B-What you talkin bout girl, I didnt even do nothin thats what im talkin bout you always jumpin to conclusions.
T- WHO THE f*** IS SYDNEY THEN, WHY SHE LEAVIN YOU NOTES TALKIN BOUT I CANT WAIT TO SEE YOU TOMORROW AND THANKS FOR THE COTTON CANDY SO YOU MUST HAVE MET UP WIT THIS BROAD HUH?
He didnt day nothin he just ignored her and layed on the bed
T- Oh you quiet now nigga cause you busted but you know what im sick of you so you take sydney back home wit you.
She walks out and slams the door and he gets up to follow her. By the time he got out the door she was gone. She went down on the beach and sat down. She cried as she looked at the note. He looked all around then seen her sittin in the sand. He walked up to her and she seen him comin so she stumbled to get up. He stopped and she sat down.
T- Leave me alone bubba, im not in the mood for you right now, she wiped her eyes.
B- T man sydney is the girl who braided my hair, she a young girl I only let her braid my hair dats all dat happen.
T- Yeah whatever
B- See dats why I dont be tellin you cause you be swearin im lyin.
T- Bubba why cant you just be wit me, I mean I know im not the prettiest girl in the world but I thought you wanted to be wit me and only me, now you get a lil stardom and it seems like you change a lil more everyday im losin apart of you everytime you walk out dat door.
B- Tee you know I only want you, I been wit you for 11 years I only love you ma
T- Why did you marry me if it wasnt gonna mean nothin to you?
B- It do, I wouldnt have put that 10kt ring on ya finger if it didnt
She got up and took the ring off and threw it at him
It popped him right in the head and he flinched
B- Damn girl what the f*** is wrong wit you?
T- You seem to think, that ring and these clothes, that house and cars make us thats material things bubba I was there when we didnt have s*** now you think cause I got a 10 kt ring its gonna change somethin well no its not I could care less about all of this.
B- I just wanna make you happy, I thought these things is what you would want I told you when I went pro I would give you anything you want.
T- I want you can you give me that?
B- You got me.
T- No I dont, sometimes I dont even know you anymore.
She walked pass him and went to the room. She layed down on the couch and went to sleep. When he came in he seen her layin on the couch and covered her up. He thought about everything she said and just sat up thinkin bout it..........keep it goin........ |
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azia_brown All-Star
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Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 6:39 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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THAT'S NICE BUT GO WORK ON DA CELEBRITY REAL WORLD SO I'LL KNOW IF WE NEED TO RE-START |
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
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Posted: Sun Dec 01, 2002 10:18 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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somebody add |
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tameka foster Starter
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Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 10:07 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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22CUTE: i was not talking to you so do me a favor and shut the f*** up like you said i dont have beef with you and you dont have beef with me therefore dont say s*** and s*** wont be said back |
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tameka foster Starter
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Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 10:08 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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so can you all add on and finish the story it is good so far |
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tameka foster Starter
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Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 10:09 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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so like i said can you all finish adding on to the story it is interesting so far |
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Rena Iverson Sixth Man
Joined: Sep 26, 2002 Posts: 93 Location: Stone Mountain Georgia
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 1:48 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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ALLEN GRABS HER ARM
a- TAWANNA U STILL KNOW ME IM STILL THE SAME I JUST GOT ALL THESE HOES ON MY JOCK I DONT MESS WITH THEM THEY BE ALL IN MY DAMN FACE BUT LET ME ASK U A QUESTION WHO DO I COME HOME TO EVERYNIGHT
T- QUIET
A- YEAH CUZ U KNOW EVERYNIGHT IM NOT ON THE ROAD IM AT HOME WITH YOU I LOVE YOU YOURE THE ONLY ONE FOR ME.
T- LOOKS AT HIM WELL IT DOSENT SEEM LIKE IT ALL THIS STUFF IM HEARIN ABOUT YOU AND THE NAPPY HEAD BITCH FROM 106 AND ABOUT THAT BISEXUAL DABRAT ITS MAKES IT HARD
T- YOU ALREADY KNOW ME AND FREE ARE JUST FRIENDS |
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Mrs. Iverson4eva Rookie
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 2:40 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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i dont undertsatand that last part |
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22cute Rookie
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 3:29 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Excuse me tameka foster but that was between me and allen_iverson's_mistress I don't know how your ass got in our convo but please stay the f*** out of my convo. I'm not one of those other females you be starting s*** wit but you betta hold your damn tongue hoe and like I say Don't start nothin won't be nothin'
And by the way yall doing real good with the story so please keep it going.
I almost forgot allen_iverson's_mistress I like your ai pics.
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AIGirl3 Starter
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 3:37 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I haven't really read anything yet(I don't think)so when I do I'll probably be kinda late on some comments or havin to make some sense of stuff or maybe I won't but I'm jus forewarnin everybody... |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 4:16 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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So tha next morning at tha crack of dawnin..
A: Chuck orders room service
T: Bubba what ru doin?
A: allen won't let her out of tha room as she tries to leave to go get some coffee.
T:Move ALLEN! Quit playin!
A: Baby wait I got food already.
T: Yea well I want my own food!
A; Baby Ithought about what you said yesterday night, and it made me realize that it's about time I started showing how much i realy love you and appreciate you being with me through all of this.
T: Well it's about damn time!
A: Is that it!Is that all you have to say!!
T: Yea that and I love you to bABy always have and always will.(She kisses him and you kno they do tha nasty whoopdy doo)lol She screamin his name ALLEN! ALLEN! ALLEN! oh my bad kinda got carried away back to tha topic. |
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22cute Rookie
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 4:49 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Bubba Chicko3 I know this off of topic but you're from louisiana I just wanted to know what part because I got some peops up there. |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 5:46 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Actually I'm from Atlanta Georgia,but I stay in Baton Rouge,but my other peops stay in New Orleans, and La Place |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
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Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 2:10 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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UMMMMMMMMMMM,should I continue or are we at a stand still? |
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Mrs. Iverson4eva Rookie
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Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 3:18 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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ok imma continue and like I always say if u dont like it change it...
Afta the y finish fuckin, they continue their plans that they had laid out yesterday..
Their at the gucci store on sunset blvd they was there 4 about 4 hrs...
t:how u think these look baby??
a:the look good, and i like the way they huggin that phat ass 2....]
Allen says jokingly
t:wuteva nigga
a:u knoe im juss playin wit u baby,but u still got a phat ass
they both laugh
t k ill take the whole outfit wit the visor he boots and the purse..
tawanna tells the cashier
c:that will b $1,333.87
a:damn gyrl dont u think that s*** cost 2 much juss 2 go on 1ne body??
t:if i get the pants i have 2 get the boots,if i get the boots i have 2 get the purse,if i get the purse i have 2 get the visor...so really thats good fir the whole suit pluse accessories..dont trip baby ill juss charge it..
a:yeah ok and when all of that miney on thatr plastic run out then we gonna c who really gonna b trippin..
c:thank u for shoppin at Gucci's apparel mr. and mrs. iverson and have a nice day..
they walk out the store its about 5:00..
t:u knoe we have 2 go 2 the hotel right??
a:4 wut??
t:i have 2 change u knoe
a:y cant u juss wear wut u wearin now??
t:cuz im goin 2 a fancy ass resturant and i wanna look good so i can make the bitches jealous..
a:yea ok...their already jealous cuz u wit the finest nigga livin..dont sleep
t:shut yo conceited ass up
a:im not conceited im juss confident..
t:yeah ok mr. confindent..
they get 2 the hotel room to change...when they open the door they find all their stuff is raided thru..its all ova the place..
a:wut the f*** happened to our spot??
t:i dont knoe but we betta call the police..
so they call the police and then................
yall can continue...if u dont like it,feel free to change it |
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MizDiamonds Starter
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Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 3:47 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Naah Girl...continue,I'm loving the story.
~*~MizD~*~ |
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tameka foster Starter
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Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 10:12 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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ALLENIVERSONMISTRESS: yes you are right there is a word called ignore so why dont you practice using it bitch if you really know what it means prove it since i am the retarded one |
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tameka foster Starter
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Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 10:15 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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22CUTE: i will say what i want to who ever i want you dike bitch so shut the f*** up hold my toungue or what dike bitch what the f*** are you going to do over a computer you dumb uneducated bastard and your dike bitch ass girlfriends call me the retarded one i really dont think i am the retarded one but you dike bitches on here obvioulsy are |
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tameka foster Starter
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Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 10:16 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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22CUTE: dike bitch who gives a f*** about where your bitch ass family is from are we on this web site for that no i dont think so so shut the f*** up bitch |
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tameka foster Starter
Joined: Oct 7, 2002 Posts: 303 Location: everywhere
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Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 10:17 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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every one else please keep adding on to make the story interesting thank you |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Posts: 112 Location: LOUISIANA
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Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 5:32 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Mane hol up, dat was a simple question, so slow ya roll flo jo. And to be honest wit you I don't think you kno dat gurl family like dat to be callin them bitches. And you obviously know tha meaning of tha word ignore, so practice what you preach aight. And jus so you kno don't start mess wit me cuz I got frequentflyer miles.(just so you kno) N-e ways enough of tha small talk.
P.S this is a story if you got Beef with someone make a topic wit their name on it and argue there so we can stop wastin time. jus a suggestion. |
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AllensBabyGirl3 All-Star
Joined: Mar 27, 2002 Posts: 1163 Location: Philly Always
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Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 8:49 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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LOL, damn u said you got frequentflyer miles dats gangsta im laughin my ass off! |
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tameka foster Starter
Joined: Oct 7, 2002 Posts: 303 Location: everywhere
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Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 2:25 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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BUBBACHICK03: no dike bitch you got it wrong get s*** straight you and your dike bitch ass girlfriends on here dont know the meaning of the word ignore for why would you keep using a word if you wont use it i never said i was going to ignore anybody so dont be so quick to get in line to eat pussy ok what i said you dike bitch was i will continue to post and whoever dont like it then too fucking bad but all i keep hearing is i am just going to be the bigger and better person and ignore her retarded ass but yet here they are like clock work playing my game puppets on strings you wanna play too then come on lets go you fucking frequent flyer miles and my pussy hairs are so scared bring your pussy eating ass on if you want to bitch what time your flight get in what you coming by computer what i said about her family was none of your fucking buisness so shut the f*** up get it bitch cause no one was talking to your dike ass
PS: or should i say pussy sucker any way i dont have beef with no one and if i got something to say to someone i give their names when i post cant you fucking read dike bitch or heres a hint just look at the begining of this post just a suggestion |
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tameka foster Starter
Joined: Oct 7, 2002 Posts: 303 Location: everywhere
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Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 2:26 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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ALLENSBABYGIRL3: lol bitch was that gansta enough for you cause i am laughing my ass now bitch |
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FrizzyAI#3lova Starter
Joined: Apr 30, 2002 Posts: 259 Location: New Orleans,Louisiana
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Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 3:51 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Hol up ya'll I'm cool with all ya'll but ya'll gotta bring that argument on another post not mine aight? Cool,thank you.This is a positive post aight........ |
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Mrs. Iverson4eva Rookie
Joined: Oct 14, 2002 Posts: 30 Location: California
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Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 3:54 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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quote: Originally posted by FrizzyAI#3lova:
Hol up ya'll I'm cool with all ya'll but ya'll gotta bring that argument on another post not mine aight? Cool,thank you.This is a positive post aight........
4real cuz i worked real hard on that last part and im waitin 2 c if sum1ne can continue..so yall gonna have 2 take that argument 2 trash talk or sumthin cuz it no room 4 that on this 1ne |
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MizDiamonds Starter
Joined: Aug 5, 2002 Posts: 265 Location: Brooklyn,New York
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Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 4:32 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Is anyone going to continue?????
~*~MizD~*~ |
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tameka foster Starter
Joined: Oct 7, 2002 Posts: 303 Location: everywhere
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Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 4:48 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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FRIZZYAI#3LOVA: i feel you but if they dike would not have said s*** to me then i would not have said s*** to them and some of them dike bitches aint have s*** to do with the situation but they obviously felt left out and had to join the bandwagon and come at me wrong and i just had to come right back so like i said i am sorry but if they keep s*** going then by all means i have no choice but to keep s*** going so tell them dike bitches to ignore me and i will ignore them like i said the story is really good and i hope you all will continue to finish but if those dikes want to bring drama then it by all means will be brought |
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azia_brown All-Star
Joined: Oct 29, 2002 Posts: 1081 Location: why u wanna know?
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Posted: Sat Dec 07, 2002 2:19 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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the police comes(they are really fake cops and ex-fans of his)
police#1 (female): sir what seems to be the problem?
a: the problem is my s*** has been raided through.
police#2: did you lock the door?
a: what chu mean did i lock the door? hell yeah i locked the door.
p1: sir if you want us to help you, please stop cursing. now have you noticed anything missing.
t: i'm missin...
a: (the police ain't really writin none of this down) uhm i missin some of my boxers, cd's, sean jean outfits,...DON'T CHU THINK THAT YOU SHOULD BE WRITIN THIS DOWN?
p2: she is writng this down, now please continue cause it's been a long day.
t: i don't give a damn if you had a long day without eating doughnuts or not just get to the bottom of this.
a: hold the f*** up!!! where the hell are your police badges?(snatches the police report)and your big ass ain't been writin s***. what he hell is goin on?!
p#1 looks at p#2 then slaps tawanna and they both run.
ai and tawanna run after them.
p#1 slips and falls down and tawanna trips over her.
p#2 runs off and leaves p#1, while ai tells security to get them
[ December 07, 2002: Message edited by: allen_iverson's_mistress ] |
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Qutie_618 Visitor
Joined: Dec 6, 2002 Posts: 5 Location: Not important
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Posted: Sat Dec 07, 2002 3:32 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I really like yall stores. They hard keep doing yall thang cause you keep me reading. |
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76ergirl Starter
Joined: Sep 15, 2002 Posts: 137 Location: BIKINIBOTTOM(where spongebob lives)
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Posted: Sat Dec 07, 2002 6:35 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME WHERE YA'LL ARE GETTING THESE PICS OF AI AT HIS WEDDING SORRY TO BE OFF TOPIC BUT I'M REALLY DESPERATE............ SO HOLLA BACK |
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MizDiamonds Starter
Joined: Aug 5, 2002 Posts: 265 Location: Brooklyn,New York
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 2:35 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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I know that a few of them are on this site...I think that its Allen Iverson China Online...you have to go to AI Garage to get the exact link.
~*~MizD~*~ |
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76ergirl Starter
Joined: Sep 15, 2002 Posts: 137 Location: BIKINIBOTTOM(where spongebob lives)
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 4:03 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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OH THANK U....... U KNOW THAT'S A GOOD WEBSITE BUT NOT BETTER THAN.. THIS ONE.. HOLLA BACK!!!!! |
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azia_brown All-Star
Joined: Oct 29, 2002 Posts: 1081 Location: why u wanna know?
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 4:11 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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go to one of those allen iverson yahoo groups(i forgot which one. but i'll let you know shortly)that's where i get some of my pics. ai china is good, but the pics go away. i had another pic with deuce when he was a newborn but it went away. aiplayground is good too. i basically go to almost every ai site i see. i just search for em'.
[ December 07, 2002: Message edited by: allen_iverson's_mistress ] |
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76ergirl Starter
Joined: Sep 15, 2002 Posts: 137 Location: BIKINIBOTTOM(where spongebob lives)
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 6:41 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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oh okay...... THANKS! |
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azia_brown All-Star
Joined: Oct 29, 2002 Posts: 1081 Location: why u wanna know?
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 6:54 pm Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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allen iverson 4ever, is the yahoo group i got some of them. but i signed up for a lot of his yahoo groups you can find some there too.
[ December 08, 2002: Message edited by: allen_iverson's_mistress ] |
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TOYA Rookie
Joined: Jul 8, 2002 Posts: 22 Location: CHICAGO
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Posted: Mon Dec 09, 2002 6:16 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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that latino girl allens wife??if so i thought she was black.. oh well |
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Black Honey Starter
Joined: Aug 9, 2002 Posts: 182
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Posted: Mon Dec 09, 2002 6:26 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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His wife is black. I mean she may be mixed down the line but her name says it all. |
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*Bubba Chick03* Starter
Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Posts: 112 Location: LOUISIANA
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Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2002 5:46 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Tawanna grabs p#2 by tha hair and starts to beat her up
A: Baby STOP YOU GON KILL HER STOP
(Allen grabs her off of tha fake officer)
T:BITCH I'ma kill yo stupid azz
A: Baby calm down!
T: CALM DOWN MY AZZ! DID YOU SEE HER SLAP ME!
A:Yea you right, whop that hoe
T:POPs tha piss out of her but then tha real popos came(Enjoy) |
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nieceye_n_iverson All-Star
Joined: Nov 3, 2002 Posts: 814 Location: *North Carolina*
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 6:37 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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i remember this 1
it is 1 of the first 1'z i read and it made me wanna do mine
[ November 21, 2003: Message edited by: Nieceye ]
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AIsanswer Visitor
Joined: Nov 26, 2003 Posts: 4 Location: Da bean
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 7:07 am Post subject: ~*Layin It Down*~(my new story) |
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Yooooooooo i woulda fucked that gurl up too if she slapped me what the hell is wrong wit her!!!! shoot if that was me i woulda cut her ass or something lemme find out... |
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